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Posted: 18 years ago
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CHAPTER 5:
Josh: mujhe jaana ho ga…
Angad: lekin kahaa
Josh: kripa ke ghar…
Angad: dude, nice name is she hot?
Josh: shut up angad, this is serious
Angad: chill man, just messing
Josh: okay, im going for a couple of months
Angad: WHAT?!?!
Josh: meri choti behen ko meri zaroorat hai
Angad: aur mujhe…
Josh: THIS IS SERIOUS! OSIHE KUCH BHI HO SAKTA HAI..DUDE SHE'S MY LIFE, SHE TAUGHT ME HOW TO LIVE AND NOW SHE NEEDS ME! HER BROTHER!
Angad: shocked at his behavior just walks away fuming
Josh: shit...kripa, main aa rahaa hoon
Prithivi: aareh Josh, angad ko kya hua
Josh: nothing man
Prithivi: Josh, are you leaving me that too with angad?!?!
Josh: yes, ia m…she needs me…I have to go..
Prithivi: who needs you!?
Josh: KRIPA! She's killing herself…
Prithivi: you mean the Kripa…
Josh: ha…she keeps living in the past, doctors are saying she might not survive…(cries)
Prithivi: (thinks) oh no, kripa ko kuch nahin ho sakta, kuch bhi nahin…agar osihe…nahin

[(SCENE CHANGES)]

Angad: kripa...tumhari wajaa se…aaj maine aur josh ne jaghra kiya…main tumhe nahin chodoonga…

DOES ANGAD TAKE REVENGE FROM KRIPA FOR HAVING A FIGHT WITH JOSH?

I KNOW THIS IS A SHORT PART….BUT I HAD TO ADD ONLY THIS MUCH FOR THIS PART…SORRY!

Edited by tweetylicious - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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CHAPTER 6:

Josh: mam, mujhey aaj ki fight delhi kiliye chaaye
Person: sir, aaj raat…
Josh: ji, ha aaj raat ki…
Person: sir, aaj raat…okay sir, we have one empty seat
Josh: thank you (and cuts the phone)

~**** **** *** * **** **** ****~
Gayatri: hello
Person: hello mama, kaise ho aap?
Gayatri: kanan betha, main bilkul teek hoon, nishant aur payal kaise hai?
Kanan: hum sab teek hai, wahha papa….aur kripa…
Gayatri: --
Kanan: mama actually maine phone kiya that isiliye kyon ki hum sab 20th ko wapas ah rahe hai…
Gayatri: sachi bheta, okay jaldi aho mujhe aapni pothi se milna hai jald se jald..
Kanan: (smiles) ok mama…main ab rakh thi hoon, bye
Gayatri: bye

~**** **** *** * **** ********~
Gayatri: yeh khush kabri main abhi kripa ko sunha ke aathi hoon…
Gayatri goes upstairs and steps into a dark room where we see kripa…lying down with a bleeding wrist…
Gayatri: kripa! Kripa betha, tum teek toh ho…kripa! Aankhein kholo betha…suryaban…surya…jaldi karo
Suryaban: yeh gayatri ko kya hua? He then runs upstairs into kripa's room….K..R..I..P..A..!
Gayatri: surya, jaldi doctor ko phone ki jiye…
Suryaban then takes out his cellphone, and calls the doctor….
Suryaban: hello doctor…kripa…bas aap jaldi aaye…
Doctor: main abhi ponche tha hoon…

~ A COUPLE HOURS LATER ~
Doctor: dekhiya maine ineh isihe baar bachaliya lekin…
Gayatri: lekin kya doctor…lekin kya?
Suryaban: gayatri tum please shaant ho jao
Gayatri: kaise shaant ho jahoon main…yeh humari bachi ki zindigi ka sawaal hai…aur aap hai ki… (is cut off)
Suryaban: Gayatri…please…raju…raju…
Raju: jee saab
Suryaban: memsaab ko bahaar lekhe jao
Raju: jee…aaye memsaab

~ A COUPLE HOURS LATER ~
Suryaban: Gayatri..
Gayatri: jee, aap…(is cut off)
Suryaban: gayatri maine soche liye hai ki kripa..(is cut off)
Person: kahin nahin jayegi…hai na uncle..
Gayatri: josh betha tum aa gaye…
Josh: ji aunty, main krpa kiliye kuch bhi kar sakta hoon….namastey uncle
Suryaban: jeethe raho betha
Josh: uncle, aunty, kya main kripa se mil sakta hoon…
Suryaban: ha betha…
Gayatri: who upar hai…apne kamre main hai..
Josh: thank you aunty, uncle…and with that he leaves from there…he goes upstairs into her room and stands still, he sees kripa lying there unconscious, a bright, pale color, with dreadful looking eyes…tears well up in his eyes as he remembers the last time he saw her..happy and full of life and now sad and full of death! He slowly went upto her and called out kripa.
Kripa opens her eyes noticing that once again she made it alive, and yet doesn't bother to get up…just lays there dead…


WHAT HAPPENS NEXT?



Edited by tweetylicious - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#33
two super short parts and i m not happy
well angad u have to save kripa first to take a revenge
hope kripa gets well soon update long and soon
great parts sweety.keep it up

love u more than u


Asever 😉

Amneet 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#34

CHAPTER 7:

Josh: kripa…dekho main josh

Kripa just stares at him and slowly looks away

Josh: (teary) chindi chor…

Kripa: --

Josh thinks as he cries about the time before that day…

~ **** *** * *** ****~

FLASHBACK:

Kripa was listening to music on her ipod and looking out the window when someone came behind and scared the wits out of her…she turns around dead scared, screaming at the top of her lungs…

Person: CHUP!!!

Kripa: Josh tum…?!

Josh: ha main…aur tumhari wajaa se deaf ho gaya hoon

Kripa: isihe mein meri galati nahin hai…tumne mujhe peeche se akhe dar raya…

Josh: kya!? Mujhe kya patha tha ke tum yell karogi…

Kripa: JOSH!!

Josh: you CHINDI CHOR…

Kripa: kya? PATLI PATANGI

Josh: bewakoof

Kripa: bandhar!

Josh just walks away…moments later kripa came towards him, and held her ears while saying sorry…Josh maine kaha naa sorry…

Josh: (smiles) and says its okay..

Kripa: yeah…me wantiee…huggy

Josh and kripa hug…when sujal comes in and hugs them too..

END OF FLASHBACK:

Josh: gosh kripa…ek baar wapas ah jao bas ek baar

WHAT HAPPENS NEXT?

SORRY FOR SHORT PARTS....😳

Edited by tweetylicious - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#35
oooooooooohhh!!
First thing, lovely ff. Its reallly touching. I luved the Josh-Kripa flashback. It was v cute. Make Kripa back to normal soon 😳
Am sorry i dint check this ff before 😭 😭
luvya hun! And a really lovelyy ff.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#36
Awesome Parts Sukhi

Thx for writing 3 parts its very cute and sweet the scenes between Kripa and Josh I hope Kripa gets better soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#37
i just started reading this f-f !!
its great fan-fic .... 😃
wondeful job ....keep it up 👏

plz if you have time plz try to write long parts !!! 😃


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Posted: 18 years ago
#38
aww poor kripa
gr8 part


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sana
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Posted: 18 years ago
#39
That was great. Poor Kripa its quite sad. Continue soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#40
plz continue soon its too good

thnx
afshaa

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