Tanhai ak EPILOGUE p53 - Page 6

Originally posted by: kIrAn...E>GA<3

wow, this is really sad. angad's gonna feel lyke crap wen he finds out y kripa needed josh. i agree...and thanx for reading..

da flashback was sweet,i agree... reminds me of my bhaiya wen he USED to be nice... 😆 same with my bro...

cont soon, the parts were short but VERY GOOD... i agree they will be longer starting from part 9...thanx again😳

<3 kiran
E> GA <3

CHAPTER 8:

Josh: toh uncle, doctor ne kya kaha
Suryaban: osihe ne kaha ki agar kripa ko isihe sadme se baare nahin nikaala toh hum osihe humesha kiliye kodenge
Josh: KYA?
Gayatri: ha beta…please meri bachi ko bachalo
Josh: don't worry aunty…kuch nahin ho ga osihe
Suryaban: lekin tum karo get kya beta…
Josh:…hmmm…patha nahin
Suryaban: --
Josh: ha…ek tareeka hai…aur who hai sujal…
Gayatri: lekin beta…tum toh…(is cut off)
Josh: main osihe sujal ki saari baatein yaad dilaonga sujal ki saari yaadein osihe yaad dilaonga…ke woh khud baare aa jayegi ishe sadme se
Suryaban: lekin kaise…
Josh tells them something but its muted so we cant hear it…
Josh: kripa…tiyaar ho jao…kyunki josh aa raha hai

~ NEXT DAY ~ PLAN NO. 1:

Josh, Gayatri, and Suryaban completed all their plans, setting up everything…josh runs into kripa's room, and takes her to the garden…
The garden was decorated with pink, red and white flowers all over, it was so peaceful that it felt as if heaven came to earth. Kripa looked around and noticed a couple in the middle…she walked towards them and listened…
Guy: I love you kripa…will you marry me?
Girl: awww! Sujal, of course, I will marry you…I love you tooo…
The guy gets upa nd picks the girl up and twirls her around…
Kripa listens and thinks about her and sujal….she then runs from there in fright….of loosing her beloved once again.
Josh runs after her, and helps her calm down, before she tries to harm herself,…Josh then goes downstairs where Suryaban and Gayatri were waiting for him…

Josh: uff…
Gayatri: kya hua josh…
Suryaban: Josh, kuch to bholo
Josh: -- (tries to speak)
Suryaban: please, say something…josh
Josh; uncle, aunty (jumps out of his seat and points two thumbs up…) and screams yeah!!
Suryaban and Gayatri are so happy that they get up and hug him to death...josh finally says …uncle, aunty aap …cough…cough your killing me…
Suryaban and Gayatri finally let go of him, but tears of joy still slide down their wet cheeks…
Josh; okay, plan no. 1 successful…now plan no.2...lekin after two weeks, because too many shocks for her can be dangerous and that too in this condition…
Josh then begins telling Gayatri and Suryaban about plan two, and precisely says that plan number two take place APRIL 19TH ….

~ **** *** ****~

Two weeks pass and finally the day josh, Gayatri and Suryaban waited for arrived…it was the day that kept a lot of importance for kripa, two years ago.
People were going crazy everywhere, preparations were being made, people here and there, music playing in the background, flowers set up everywhere, a mandap in the center of the room. Two chairs set up in the center of the stage, balloons on the sides, red and pink flowers scattered all over…and in the mandap sat the BRIDE….

What is plan no. 2? What is plan no. 3?😃

CHAPTER 9:

Josh, Gayatri, and Suryaban dress up, ready for this day. Gayatri goes into kripa's room and helps her get ready.
7:30 P.M. on April 19th, was the worst day of kripa's life and the best day of her life….the clock struck &:00 P.M., in half and hour kripa's life would change forever.
They all got into the car and arrived at the bride's house. Kripa stepped in and felt as if lightning had struck, as if the world stopped right there, her worst nightmare was not just a nightmare anymore. She turned and looked around, all the preparations were done the same way as her wedding. She wanted to leave but something told her to stay back was it the thought that sujal was back or the piercing gaze on josh's facce or the hope in her parent's eyes?
Everyone was dancing here and there, hours passed but there was no sign of the groom, people began talking…lagta hai baage gaya aur kyon naa ho kaisi ladki se pyaar kar bheta…
After hours of waiting people walked into the house, the bride smiled thinking, her love could be late but not a fake….
Crash! You hear the puja ki thali fall…the bride looks up and instead of seeing her groom she sees policemen all around, and then four people caring a dead body. Kripa looked up and felt as if the life had been sucked out of her. The dead body is placed before the mandap, tears run down the bride's cheek, she slowly gets up and walks towards it, and falls to the floor! She slowly lifted the white cover on the body and screamed. Nahin…mujhe chor ke maate jao sujal! Kripa's head started pounding, tears ran down her cheek.
The music in the background stopped playing, the girls ran down the stairs hoping to bug the groom's side tonight.
Kajal: aaj, dekhlena hum ladkiyaan jeetenge
Payal: ha ha…dekhlenge
Roshini: -- (stops dead in her tracks)
Kajal: areh, roshini kya hua tujhe?!
Payal: BHAIYYA!
Roshini: (cries) nahin aisa nahin ho sakta…
Kajal: DIDI!!
Kripa cant take the pain anymore and runs outside, in fright, her heartbeat was beating so fast, she felt as if she had been shot. Tears ran down her cheeks so fast she felt as if she had just eaten one hundred spiciest peppers..
Gayatri notices kripa has ran outside when josh stops her by shaking his head. Tears stream down her face as she thinks about Kripa's state. But she had to let her go if she wanted to see her alive.
In the corner of the room behind a shadow someone quietly observed this. He stepped back and left soon enough.

Suryaban: Kaisa baap hoon main jo apni beti ko kitna gham de raha hoon osihe ki jaan bachane kiliye…
Gayatri quietly and full of tears put her hand on Suryaban's shoulder comforting him. Suryaban turned around and quietly hugged her.

~ MEANWHILE ~
Kripa sat in the corner of her room and cried, she couldn't stop herself and she wouldn't either…not today….not ever. As kripa cried,…you see josh crying in the corner watching her….

IN THE BACKGROUND PLAYED SONIYE HIRIYE:

Soniye hiriye teri yaad aandhi ye
Seene vich tadapta hai dil jaan jaandi ye
Seene vich tadapta hai dil jaan jaandi ye

Tuhi jind meri ye dil da karaar ni
Tuhi jind meri ye dil da karaar
Tu aaja tenu rabda wasta
Tu aaja tenu rabda wasta
Udekta main tera rasta

Kinna tenu chaava ey na samji tu
Tera naam kitti zindigi
Jab tu milengi tenu dassange
Tera naal meri har khushi

Tuhi jind meri ye dil da karaar ni
Tuhi jind meri ye dil da karaar
Tu aaja tenu rabda wasta
Tu aaja tenu rabda wasta
Udekta main tera rasta

Soniye hiriye teri yaad aandhi ye
Seene vich tadapta hai dil jaan jaandi ye

Suna suna dil da aasiyaana hai
Suna zameen ho asmaa
Khoya khoya renda mera pagaal dil
Aaja laut ke hun aa bhi jaa

Tuhi jind meri ye dil da karaar ni
Tuhi jind meri ye dil da karaar
Tu aaja tenu rabda wasta
Tu aaja tenu rabda wasta
Udekta main tera rasta

Soniye hiriye teri yaad aandhi ye
Seene vich tadapta hai dil jaan jaandi ye
Seene vich tadapta hai dil jaan jaandi ye

Seene vich tadapta hai dil jaan jaandi ye

Soniye…jaan jaandi ye

Jaan jaandi ye

Here is the video off of youtube:

http://www.youtube.com/watch?v=BM9UazYTD4Q

DOES KRIPA GET BETTER, WHAT IS PLAN NO. 3? WHO ENDS UP IN THE HOSPITAL….find out in the next chapter….to be continued

Originally posted by: Anam Ali

Awesome Part Sukhi thanx anam di...

So Josh is reminding Kripa of her and Sujal so she gets out of shock, Its a good plan I hope it works i hope so too...😳

Originally posted by: jdsean

Great part thank you very much.... I'm glad Josh is trying to help her.me too...😳