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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: monikaseth

wow last too parts verry god thx for update dear 👏



thanx

Originally posted by: **-**Guriya**-*

awesome... 👏
lovely parts...gr8 gng... 👏



thanx dear

Originally posted by: cute_samrah

grt part!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!waqi mein kashish insepector lag rahi thi....................anywayz con't soon 😊



thanx and ya Kashish bechaare Saksham se sawaal par sawaal are jaa rahi thi

Originally posted by: ananya7736

awesome part saba!!!

loved it totally!!!

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thanx dear

Originally posted by: sun_423

saba dear that was really sweet part..the way kashish was questioning saksham..i found it really cute...bechare saksham ke tho pasine choot rahe honge.. the way kashish was asking him..itne seriously..bechara darr gaya hoga.. haha... 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 😆 ab kashish ek behen hone ka , ek biwi hone ka , ek bhabhi hone ka , ek devrani hone ka farz khoob nibha rahii hai...aur yeh sab possible hai only because of one person's support, one persons haath in her haath that is sujal.. sujal hii kashish ka hosla hai..uski himmat hai.. kashish joh bhi kadam utathi hai woh bas issi bharose se utathi hai kii chche koi uska saath de ya na de par sujal zaroor dega uska saath... yahii hai sujal,kashish ke rishthe kii kboobsurathi.... 👏 saba dear next part jaldi se post karna..me waiting for it eagerly... 😊 😛 😃



thanx Suri and u r right, Kashish and Sujal share a really strong bond and they r inseparable until and unless i want them to separate 😉
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Posted: 17 years ago

Night time, SK's room

Kashish- I hope everything turns out well

Sujal- same here

Neha, Sujal and Kashish were sitting in the lounge waiting for Kunal

The bell rings, Sujal gets up to open the door

Sujal and Kunal enter the living room, Kashish gets up to greet Kunal but Neha stays still, she was shocked to see him.

Sujal- bhabhi yeh hain Kunal

Kunal- hi Neha

Sujal- aap jaante hain bhabhi ko

Kunal- haan hum donon ne medical eik hee university se kiya hai

Sujal- that's great

Neha smiles a little

After some time

Sujal and Kunal were left in the living room and the ladies had gone to the kitchen

Sujal- aagay ka plan kya hai

Kunal- main tumse abhi yahi kehne waala tha

Sujal- aapko bhi nahin pata

Kunal- Kashish ne tumhein bi kuch nahin bataya

Sujal- nahin…..pata nahin isne kya socha hai

Kashish- khaana lag gaya hai {to Neha} bhabhi aap Kunal keh barabar mein baith jaayiay ga plz actually main aur Sujal to saath baithein ge na isiliye

Neha unwillingly- theeq hai

At the dining table

Sujal and Kashish are sitting side by side and Kunal and Neha opposite to them

Kashish- Kunal

Kunal- haan

Kashish- tumnein shaadi keh liye haan keh dee

Sujal- shaadi?

Kashish- haan wo Kunal keh liye eik bohat hee accha rishta aaya tha uski dee isay keh rahi theen shaadi kar lene ko

Sujal- to kya kaha tumnein

Kunal- abhi tak to kuch nahin kaha lekin haan kehne ki soch raha hoon…shaadi to kabhi na kabhi karni hee hai aur ladki itni acchi hai to I don't think I should refuse

Neha was not feeling well

Neha- excuse me

She goes to her room

Kashish- chalo at least now we r sure about her feelings

Kunal- I hope she realizes it too

Sujal- yup

************ *************

The Next Morning

SK room

Sujal was lying on the bed and watching TV, Soham was doing something with his hand and Kashish was taking out clothes from the cupboard

Sujal- Kashish

Kashish- jee

Sujal- kal Sunday hai na

Kashish- haan hai to

Sujal- main soch raha tha keh kyun na hum log kahin picnic keh liye chalein

Kashish grins- really!!!

Sujal- ya

Kashish- waise yun achanak picnic ka idea…kyun

{She comes and stands near him}

{Sujal holds her hand and pulls her which makes her fall on him}

Kashish- Sujal kya kar rahe hain chodein

Sujal- picnic is liye hai………. So that I can spend some time with u

Kashish- Shut up!! Mujhe acchi tarhan se pata hai yeh wajah to bilkul nahin hai

Sujal smiles- tumne Kunal ko dinner par bulaya……..to maine socha keh mujhe bhi kuch karna chahiye

Kashish smiles and looks at him- I love u b/c u r too sweet

Sujal kisses her forehead

Soham starts to giggle

Sujal smiles looking at him- aap kyun has rahe hain {leaves Kashish and picks him up} mama loves u too

Kashish smiles- yes mama loves both of u very much {she rests her head on Sujal's shoulder}

************ *************

Sujal, Kashish and Neha were having breakfast, the girls were sleeping, the bell rung, Kashish got up to see

She opened the door and was shocked

Kashish- tum!!!!

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done ......mera net 🤬 kabhi chalta hee nahin hai khair plz do comment

take care,
Saba
Edited by aishwaria - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Nice part.......! Ye kaun aya? 😕 Acha ya bura insaan? hehehehe!! Ohh Saksham to nahi hai 😆 😆 😆
Tereko broadband connection lena chahiye...kya masla hai re net ka..complain kar na!
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Posted: 17 years ago
nice part specially morning wala ..................but yeh kaun hoga?????????????????????plz con't soon
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Posted: 17 years ago
awesome parts saba 👏 😉 😛 😆 😛 😉 👏!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!............poor saksham 😭, kashish was interrogating him like he was a criminal 😆!!! ...par yaar pyaar kia to darna kya 😉! ......par agar sujal hota to saksham to gaya kam se 😆 😉 😛!!!!! ..........kashish ko yeah to pata chala ke mouli ka ek boyfriend hai 😊!!! abb to kahir nahie uskie! she goes back to her room where sujal is waching tv n soham is sleeping...he's so cute 😛!!! ....kabhie kabhie sujal bhie pareshaan ajata hoga ke kashish dimagh mea ase ideas ate kaha se hai 😆!!!..........the next day kashish announce that they are going to have guest😉, charu has game to win (in which sujal support her totally 😉 while the other have smth else to do 😕!!!!!!!..........that only leave neha, sk n soham ( maybe rahul also!) 😉 !!!!!!!! ...........wowwwwwwwww neha did get shocked seeing kunal there 😲!!! kashish plan did work out 😉, neha plzzz start a new life wt kunal😊, no one is saying that u should forget shiv 😭!!!!!.........the next day 😊.........sk room ......soham was doing smth wt sujal hand 😛, while s was waching tv n k talking clothes out 😊!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...............bhai ab sujal kyun piche rahae plan banane mai 😉! soo they are going to picnic 😉!!! ..........funny part soham giggling at SK 😆 😛 😆.........they make a perfect family 😉!!! .....................whom did kashish saw ????????/ why is soo shocked 😲???????..............continue soon plzzzzzzzzz.........can't wait for the next part yaar!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!........awesome part's!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!.................
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: togepe30

Nice part.......! Ye kaun aya? 😕 Acha ya bura insaan? hehehehe!! Ohh Saksham to nahi hai 😆 😆 😆
Tereko broadband connection lena chahiye...kya masla hai re net ka..complain kar na!



aggar Saksham hua to uski khair nahin...and net ka yaar pata nahin kya karoon mere bhai behen ka chalta hai mera nahin i think mere connection mein problem hai

Originally posted by: cute_samrah

nice part specially morning wala ..................but yeh kaun hoga?????????????????????plz con't soon


thnax and jald pata chal jaaye ga keh kaun hai

Originally posted by: le_me_star

awesome parts saba 👏 😉 😛 😆 😛 😉 👏!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!............poor saksham 😭, kashish was interrogating him like he was a criminal 😆!!! ...par yaar pyaar kia to darna kya 😉! ......par agar sujal hota to saksham to gaya kam se 😆 😉 😛!!!!! ..........kashish ko yeah to pata chala ke mouli ka ek boyfriend hai 😊!!! abb to kahir nahie uskie! she goes back to her room where sujal is waching tv n soham is sleeping...he's so cute 😛!!! ....kabhie kabhie sujal bhie pareshaan ajata hoga ke kashish dimagh mea ase ideas ate kaha se hai 😆!!!..........the next day kashish announce that they are going to have guest😉, charu has game to win (in which sujal support her totally 😉 while the other have smth else to do 😕!!!!!!!..........that only leave neha, sk n soham ( maybe rahul also!) 😉 !!!!!!!! ...........wowwwwwwwww neha did get shocked seeing kunal there 😲!!! kashish plan did work out 😉, neha plzzz start a new life wt kunal😊, no one is saying that u should forget shiv 😭!!!!!.........the next day 😊.........sk room ......soham was doing smth wt sujal hand 😛, while s was waching tv n k talking clothes out 😊!!!!!!!!!!!!!!...............bhai ab sujal kyun piche rahae plan banane mai 😉! soo they are going to picnic 😉!!! ..........funny part soham giggling at SK 😆 😛 😆.........they make a perfect family 😉!!! .....................whom did kashish saw ????????/ why is soo shocked 😲???????..............continue soon plzzzzzzzzz.........can't wait for the next part yaar!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!........awesome part's!!!!!!!! !!!!!!!!.................


thanx Zaira and exactly pyar kiya to darna kya 😆 i know yaar Soham is extremely cute apne baap ko pitne se bachata hai 😉and Neha ko kisi ki baat samajh hee nahin aati.....khair anyways Kashish ne kisko dekha..hmm pata chal jaaye ga😉😉😉
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Posted: 17 years ago

Sujal heard her- kaun hai Kashish

The person came in, he was Akshat

Akshat- dekho na Sujal main itni dur se isay milne aaya hoon aur eik yeh hai keh na hi na hello, gale bhi nahin mil rahi

Kashish- Shut up {she hugs him}

A voice comes from behind- main bhi hoon yahan

Sujal- Rishi!!!!!, dadaji, dadi

Rishi- yes bhaiyya

They hug each other

All sit on the table

Sujal- aap log yun achanak kaise

Dadaji- apnay potay aur par potay se milne

Rishi- main to apne {bhateeja hota hai na………..mujhe bhateeja, bhanja mein fark nahin pata he….he…he}

Akshat- aur main bhi, kahan hai wo

Kashish- upar so raha hai

Akshat- sonay keh maamle mein to bilkul tum par gaya hai, kyun Sujal

Sujal laughs

Kashish- jee nahin……….saari raat jaagta hai aur phir subah sota hai

Neha- phir to bilkul Sujal par gaya hai

Sujal chup hojaata hai

Kashish brings Soham, Akshat takes him form her

Sujal-Kashish mein inhe kal ki picnic keh baare mein bata raha tha

Neha- and he made me promise that I'll come

Sujal- hmmm……..aur ab Akshat, Rishi hain to aur bhi maza aaye ga

Kashish smiles

*********** ****************

Evening time

All the girls were sitting and watching a movie, Kashish came and paused the movie

Mehek- what di yeh kya

Kashish- mujhe kuch poochna hai

Charu- jaldi poochein

Kashish- Vardhaan kaun hai

Mouli- kya!!!....dee aap yeh kya pooch rahi hain……..kaun Vardhaan hum kisi Vardhaan ko nahin jaante

Kashish- so he is not your boyfriend

Mouli- dee……wo actually

Kashish sternly- yes or No

Mouli- yes

Kashish- kal usay picnic par bulao….mujhe milna hai usay

Mouli- kal

Kashish- haan aur uskay bhai ko bhi bulaana

Mouli- Saksham?

Shikha becomes numb at the mention of Saksham

Kashish smiles seeing Shikha- haan Saksham

Mouli- how do u know him?

Kashish- that's none of your business, I want both of them here tomorrow, is that clear

Kashish goes to her room, Sujal had just arrived and was taking off his tie, he sees Kashish

Sujal- baat karli Mouli se

Kashish- haan……aur donon ko bulaane ko keh diya

Sujal- uskay bhai ko kyun bula rahi ho

Kashish- take wo awkward feel na kare

Sujal- aur uska bhai awkward feel nahin kare ga

Kashish- uska bhai is a friend of Shikha too

Sujal- tumhein kaise pata

Kashish- wo sab chodein…main aap keh liye chai laati hoon

Kashish brings tea for him and puts it on the table, he was going through some file

Kashish- yeh kya Sujal, aap abhi aaye aur office keh kaam mein lag gaye

Sujal- tum jo nahin ho meri madad karne keh liye…tum office dubaara se join kyun nahin kar leti

Kashish- aur Soham ka dehaan kaun rakhe ga

Sujal- yeh bhi hai…..lekin jab Soham bada ho jaaye ga tab

Kashish laughs- jab bada hoga tab dekhein ge

Sujal smiles at his stupidity

Kashish- I cant wait for the picnic tomorrow

Sujal- dada dadi nahin aa rahe, Soham ko unke paas chod denge

Kashish- okay

****** ************

Next Morning

SK, Neha, dadaji, dadi and Akshat were sitting in the hall when the bell rang, Sujal came in with Kunal. Neha was shocked to see him.

Sujal- dadaji, dadi, Akshat this is my friend Kunal, bhabhi aap to inhein jaanti hee hain

Neha smiles or rather tries to smile.

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I was about to post a bigger part but then i realised that it was almost half of what i had written 😆😆😆, okay i posted this part for Vandu, see Vandu i m not a dormant writer 😃. The sooner i get the comments the sooner i will post the parts 😆, i know i m doing nautanki but i can't help it 😆😆😆 thodi si nautanki waise bhi chalti hai. And all the readers start commenting because i have started to write the climax of this story. 😃
Luv,
Saba
Edited by aishwaria - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
Teri to........Saba ki bachi.......hehehehe!
Luv ya.......Was surprosed to see both the fics updated..........A bigggggggggg Jaadooooooo ki Jhappppppppi for u !

And im loving all your fics ........and kal -parso tak "other side" bhi update kar dena plzz 😳 😆 😆

Chalo sablog......comment maro is part pe.......warna merese bura koi nahi hoga 😆 waise bhi merese bura koi nahi hai i think 😆 😆 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
wow lovely part cant wait to read what happens in the picnic
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Posted: 17 years ago
awesome dear thx for update 👏 👏 👏

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