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Posted: 17 years ago
hi saba,
im sonika 😊 .im cmmenting fr da 1st time 'coz i started reading ur fic jus 2 days ago n i likedit soooooooo .... much 👏 👏 n i hv completed up to dalast page.
u r such a gr888888.....writer. n about ur fic i can only say jus fantaboulus.. 👏 👏 👏 .
gr88 going.keep up the gud work n always keep smiling 😊 😊 .
n ya dont forget to update soon 😳 .
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: fravashi

ohhhhhhhhhhhhh wowwwwwwwwwww........hilarious part saba 😆 .kashish ne kya explanation diya about they being together 🤣 . sujal was flirting with that receptionist haaaa haaa..... 😆 and here kashish said that they met on cruise and then got togther jiske wajah se she got pregnant 🤣 .ohhh goddd.......kya story thi 😉 . i mean i was impressed, uske thinking ki daat deni padegi 👏 . bechara sujal.......and haaaa.....haa...lolzzz.....sujal and casinova 🤣 . i mean common uska iss shabd ke saath duur durr taak rishta nahi hai 😆 aur kashish ne uski image kya banayi uss receptionist ke saamne 😉 . she must have been like......hmmmm....what !!! awesome part saba 🤗 .loved the way kashish told sujal that "sujal garewal 3 multinational companies ka malik aur kisi se baat karne mein he is scared" , kitna pyaar hai dono mein, they can be totally themselves when they are with each other 😉 . the part was great 👍🏼 !!!contiue soon yaar plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz...............can't wait any longer.bye.takecare. 😊 😛 😊



thanx Nikki, glad u liked the part, your nice long comments mae me to update fast, but i haven't written the next part so can't do so yaar thoda thoda kabhi kabaar jab time milta hai to likh leti hoon, now i even have tuitions and skool aur tuition ka donon ka homework hota hai and ................the list will go on but i will definitely try to continue both my FFs as soon as i can.Hopefully i wont make u wait long and last but not the least mere net ka masla abhi tak theeq nahin hua u know jab bhi i decide to call some1 to fix the problem yeh khud ba khud chalne lag jaata hai.
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: lotus lover

hi saba,
im sonika 😊 .im cmmenting fr da 1st time 'coz i started reading ur fic jus 2 days ago n i likedit soooooooo .... much 👏 👏 n i hv completed up to dalast page.
u r such a gr888888.....writer. n about ur fic i can only say jus fantaboulus.. 👏 👏 👏 .
gr88 going.keep up the gud work n always keep smiling 😊 😊 .
n ya dont forget to update soon 😳 .



thanx a ton dear it feels s great when ppl appreciate my hard work....will update as soon as i can b/c even i don't like to make my readers wait for a long time. Keep Reading
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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

hey lovely part sujal ne flirt ki aur wo nurse peeche pad gayi and the story kashish told was just tooooo good 🤣 this part was amazing plzzzz cont soon



thanx dear yeh story bhi mujhe likhte likhte hee diimaag mein aa gayi pata nahin mujhe kya ho jaata hai jab bhi likhne baith ti hoon to pata nahin kya kya likh deti hoon.😆will continue ASAP
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Posted: 17 years ago
Is there something wrong with the fic that the replies have become so less, plz tell if u don't like it.
Edited by aishwaria - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago

awesome part saba 👏 😉 😛 👍🏼 😛 😉 👏!!!!!!!!!!!..hilarious yaar 😆 🤣 😆!!!!!!!!.....the scene where sujal is flirting wt nurse 2 het kunal address is so funny 😃, par kashish story was really cool 😉.....what an imagination 😆!!! ....even sujal was shocked listening it 😲!.....sujal a casanova 😆, shadie ke bad to ushne kisie aur larkie taraf dehka bhie nahie 😊!......par sujal ne sirf itna sa firlt kya kia receptionist serious hogaie 😆 😉 😛!!!!!!!...........kashish want soham to know abt his father brilliant ideas 😆!!! bechara soham bhie sochta hoga me kaha do babies ke saath pahsgaya 😆!!! SK really act like one sometimes 😛!!!........finally they reach kunal house, sujal is really nerouse thinking abt wht kind of person he may be😕? will kashish is trying to calm him 😊!!!............what will happpen in the next part????????...........continue soon plzzzzzzzzzz!!!!!!!!!!.......love this part ❤️!!! sujal, kashish n soham are a happy family 👏 😊 👏!!!.......the part is really funny 😆 🤣 😆!!! yaar really sorry for not commenting before 😭, i got stuck wt job n college at the same time !!! promise to coment as soon as possible for the next chapters 😊!!!..........continue soon plzzzzzzzzzzzzz!!!!!!!!!.......can't wait for the next part 👏 😊 😭 😊 👏!!!!!!!!!!!

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Posted: 17 years ago

Originally posted by: le_me_star

awesome part saba 👏 😉 😛 👍🏼 😛 😉 👏!!!!!!!!!!!..hilarious yaar 😆 🤣 😆!!!!!!!!.....the scene where sujal is flirting wt nurse 2 het kunal address is so funny 😃, par kashish story was really cool 😉.....what an imagination 😆!!! ....even sujal was shocked listening it 😲!.....sujal a casanova 😆, shadie ke bad to ushne kisie aur larkie taraf dehka bhie nahie 😊!......par sujal ne sirf itna sa firlt kya kia receptionist serious hogaie 😆 😉 😛!!!!!!!...........kashish want soham to know abt his father brilliant ideas 😆!!! bechara soham bhie sochta hoga me kaha do babies ke saath pahsgaya 😆!!! SK really act like one sometimes 😛!!!........finally they reach kunal house, sujal is really nerouse thinking abt wht kind of person he may be😕? will kashish is trying to calm him 😊!!!............what will happpen in the next part????????...........continue soon plzzzzzzzzzz!!!!!!!!!!.......love this part ❤️!!! sujal, kashish n soham are a happy family 👏 😊 👏!!!.......the part is really funny 😆 🤣 😆!!! yaar really sorry for not commenting before 😭, i got stuck wt job n college at the same time !!! promise to coment as soon as possible for the next chapters 😊!!!..........continue soon plzzzzzzzzzzzzz!!!!!!!!!.......can't wait for the next part 👏 😊 😭 😊 👏!!!!!!!!!!!



thanx Zaira n i knw yaar every1's busy yaar but its disappointing when ppl dont reply b/c its for them only us writers try to update ASAP
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Posted: 17 years ago
I cant understand why the replies have become so less, if u don't like the current track then plz state so. I am not going to continue till i have enough replies.
Edited by aishwaria - 17 years ago
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Posted: 17 years ago
pls cont. ur fic is really nice. so pls cont
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Posted: 17 years ago

Kunal comes in, Sujal and Kashish stand up

Sujal- hi I am Sujal, Sujal Garewaal {he forwards his hand}

Kunal shakes it- Kunal Awasthi, plz have a seat

Sujal- this is my wife

Kashish- hello

Kunal- hello {Kashish looked awfully familiar to him}kahiye kya kar sakta hoon main aap keh liye

Sujal- actually main aap shayad jaante nahin main Neha Garewaal ka

Kunal- keh devar hain, jaanta hoon, Shiv keh chote bhai Sujal

Sujal- jee

Kunal- so what brings u here

Sujal- actually wo…… {He didn't know what to say}

Kashish- us din hospital mein aap keh aur bhabhi keh beech jo kuch hi hua aur jo kuch bhi aap ne bhabhi se kaha maine wo sab sun liya

Kunal- maine jo kuch kaha main us keh liye sharminda bilkul nahin hoon kyun keh main Neha se pyar karta hoon…… aur pyar karna koi jurm nahin hai


Sujal- lekin bhabhi aapse pyar nahin karti

Kunal- aisa wo sochti hai

Sujal- aur wo aisa kyun sochein geen

Kunal- kyun keh usay lagta hai keh dubaara shaadi karna ghalat hai…..usay lagta hai keh wo aisa kar keh tum logon ko dhoka de gee….aur sab se badi wajah hai Rahul

Sujal- Rahul?

Kunal- haan I think usay lagta hai keh main Rahul ko accept nahin karoon ga ya phir agar maine kar bhi liya to Rahul ko aap sab logon se dur le jaane ka uska koi haq nahin kyun keh wo Rahul ki asli maa nahin


Sujal- kisne kaha keh wo uski maa nahin…she was is and will always be Rahul's mother

Kunal smiles- yeh main bhi jaanta hoon


Sujal- kya aap…. I mean agar Neha bhabhi aap se shaadi karne ko tayyar ho jaati hain to will you accept Rahul

Kunal- of course I will…..I love children

Sujal smiles

Kunal- lekin Neha tayyar ho tab na

Kashish- bhabhi ko humein yeh ehsaas dilana hoga keh wo aapse pyaar karti hain

Kunal- lekin kaise

Kashish- wo main soch kar bataun gee lekin usmien mujhe aap donon kee madad chahiye

Kunal- yeh bhi koi poochne waali baat hai

Sujal- I am with u

Kashish- great ….. main aapko phone kar keh bataun gee keh kab kya karna hai

Kunal- ok

Sujal- aapki family mein kaun kaun hai

Kunal- bas meri eik badi behen hai….. my mum died when I was quite small and dad passed away 3 years back

Sujal- I m sorry

Kunal- anyways….. this is your son right

Sujal- yes

Kunal- can I hold him

Kashish- sure

Kashish Soham ko Kunal ko deti hai

Kunal smiles- he is so cute…whats his name?

Sujal- Soham

Kunal- you know what….. he looks a little like Shiv


Sujal- u r the second person to notice that

Kashish- pehla kaun tha

Sujal- main aur kaun

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In the car

Kashish- you never told me that Soham resembled Shiv bhaiyya

Sujal- accha baba ghalti hogayi ab se main tumhein har baat bataun ga okay

Kashish- good

Sujal- waise tumnein bhi to nahin bataya

Kashish- kya nahin bataya

Sujal- yeh keh hum ship par mile

Kashish- Sujal!!! That was just…..forget it

Sujal- Soham keh honay ka eik to faida hai

Kashish- kya

Sujal- wo apne baap ko apni maa se pitne se baccha ta hai

Kashish- huh

Sujal- dekho yeh tumhaari goad mein hai to tum mujhe maarti nahin

Kashish- ghar chalein phir batati hoon

Sujal- haan main bhi kabse intezaar kar raha hoon

Kashish understood the double meaning of his words and did not argue with him further and started looking out of the window when Sujal suddenly stopped the car.

Kashish- kya hua

Sujal reversed the car

Sujal- Shikha bhabhi logon keh saath shopping par gayi thi na

Kashish- haan

Sujal- to phir wo yahan kya kar rahi hai

Kashish- kahan

Sujal- wo dekho wahan

Kashish- array haan usne kaha tha keh usay library mein kuch kaam hai

Sujal- library mein kaam hain na to yeh library keh bahar khade ho kar kisse baat kar rahi hai

Kashish then noticed that she was talking to some guy- haan

Sujal- kya haan… main dekh kar aata hoon

Kashish- kyun

Sujal- kya matlab kyun behen hai meri

Kashish- to kya kisi ki girlfriend nahin ho sakti

Sujal- Kashish!!! What are u saying

Kashish- kya ghalat kaha maine… uska bhi to koi boyfriend hosakta hai na

Sujal- nahin

Kashish- kyun nahin

Sujal- kyun keh… kyun keh

Kashish- kyunki Saas Bhi Kabhi Bahu thi

Sujal- what!!!! Whatever bas nahin hosakta

Kashish- Sujal chodein na….. look Shikha is a grown up girl… she can also fall in love

Sujal- love!!!

Kashish- yahi to umar hoti hai

Sujal- how do u know all this {he raised his eyebrows}

Kashish makes a face- isay keh pehle main kisi se pyar karti meri aapse shaadi hogayi

Sujal- what do u mean by mujhse shaadi hogayi

Kashish- to kya nahin hui

Sujal- hogayi lekin ismein itna dukhi honi ki kya baat hai

Kashish- agar nahin hui hoti to

Sujal- to

Kashish- wo Mercedes wala

Sujal- kaun Mercedes wala

Kashish- eik bohat famous business man, kya shakal thi, kya style tha

Sujal- tum apne pati keh saamne kisi aur aadmi keh baare mein is tarhan ki baatein kar rahi ho….. naam batana zara uska

Kashish- rehne dein

Sujal- nahin batao

Kashish- jaane dein na

Sujal- batao mujhe

Kashish- theeq hai…uska naam hai…….Sujal Garewaal

Sujal- uski to main……….kya!!!

Kashish- haan

Sujal- Kashish what are u saying

Kashish- kya ghalat kaha maine

Sujal- main

Kashish- yes

Sujal- what do mean by all this

Kashish- my dear husband aap mere college ki ladkiyon mein bohat famous the

Sujal- kya

Kashish- accha business man hona aur saath hee saath handsome aur rich hona… what more could a girl want

Sujal- and I believe that u r one of them

Kashish-no

Sujal- kyun

Kashish- mere college ki ladkiyan to SRK ki bhi deewani theen who is so elder than him

Sujal laughs

Kashish- chalein

Sujal- lekin Shikha

Kashish- aa jaaye gee

Sujal- okay

SK leave

Let's see what was going on b/w Shikha and that anonymous guy

Shikha- dekho Saksham tum mujhse dur raha karo

Saksham- kyun

Shikha- kyun keh…..main tumhein nahin pasand karti

Saksham- to maine kya kaha tumse keh mujhe pasand karo

Shikha- aakhir tum mere peeche kyun pade ho

Saksham- main tumhaare peeche kahan hoon main to tumhaare saamne khada hoon

Shikha- dekho Saksham, I don't love u

Saksham- mujhe pata hai……….tum yeh sab kyun kar rahi ho

Shikha- kya kar rahi hoon main?

Saksham- yeh natak

Shikha- main koi natak nahin kar rahi

Saksham- kar rahi ho………I know very well keh tum bhi mujhse pyar karti ho, agar nahin karti hoti to yahan itni dair tak mujhse baat nahin karti…..face it Shikha u love me too….sochna zaroor main tumhaare jawab ka intezaar karoon ga

Shikha- mera jawab na hai

Saksham- jo kehna hai raat ko kehna

Saying this Saksham goes away

Shikha- raat ko?

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Night Time {After Dinner}

Kashish was sitting on the bed thinking about something when Sujal entered the room

Sujal- kya soch rahi ho

Kashish comes out of her thoughts- bhabhi aur Dr. Kunal keh baare mein

Sujal comes and sits on the other side of the bed and kisses Soham who was sleeping

Sujal- unke baare mein kya

Kashish- yahi keh bhabhi ko kaise is shaadi keh liye tayyar kiya jaaye

Sujal- koi idea aaya

Kashish- haan

Sujal- kya

Kashish- eik idea se kuch nahin honay waala humein bohat saare ideas ki zaroorat hai

Sujal- to jo eik idea hai tumhaare dimaag mein wo to batao

Kashish- kal

Sujal- nahin abhi

The fight went on and on

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Shikha's room

Shikha was sitting in her room, she was quite worried because it was night time and Saksham had said that he would ask her at night.

Suddenly she heard some noise coming from the window she turned and found Saksham entering her room through the window

Shikha- tum!!!...........tum yahan kya kar rahe ho

Saksham- apna jawab lene aaya hoon

Shikha- Saksham tum yahan se chale jao isay pehle keh koi aa jaaye

Saksham- main apna jawab liye baghair nahin jaun ga

Shikha-u r an idiot…. Tumhein pata nahin keh agar tumhein kisi ne dekh liya to kya hoga

Saksham- eik to main tumhaare liye pehle deewar kud eh andar aaya aur phir saare guards se chupte chupaate tumhaare kamre tak puhancha hoon

Shikha- to kya maine kaha that tumse yahan aanay ko

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Cut to SK

Kashish- forget it main Shikha ko dekh kar aati hoon

Sujal- main tumhaare saamne baitha hoon mujhe nahin dekh sakti tum

Kashish- get lost

Saying this she goes out of the room

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Shikha's room

Shikha- Saksham get out of here

Saksham- no…..at least eik glass pani to pila do

Shikha- Saksham plz jao

Saksham- pehle pani

Shikha- theeq hai main pani laane jaa rahi hoon, tum yahan se hilna mat

Saksham- jaldi aana

{Shikha makes a face and he just smiles}

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Shikha was on her way back to her room when she saw Kashish going towards her room, Shikha became worried

Shikha thinking- Oh God agar bhabhi ne Saksham ko dekh liya

But too late Kashish had already entered her room, Shikha foran se bhaag kar upar gayi

Shikha- bhabhi {she saw that Saksham wasn't in the room}

Kashish- kahan thi tum

Shikha- wo …… main…… {Looks at the glass of water in her hand} Pani Laane gayi thi

Kashish- tum itna ghabrayi hui kyun ho

Shikha- main, ghabrayi hui, nahin to

Kashish- tumhein dekh kar aisa lag raha hai

Shikha- mujhe chodiye yeh batayiay keh {she saw Saksham outside the window}……aap yahan kaise

Kashish- aisay hee…mujhe tumse kuch poochna tha

Shikha- poochiye {trying to smile}

Kashish- wo ladka kaun tha

Shikha shocked-kaun sa ladka

Kashish- wohi jise tu library keh bahar baatein kar rahi thi

Shikha- wo to bas eik friend hai

Kashish- are u sure

Shikha- yes bhabhi

Kashish still not convinced- theeq hai lekin eik baat yaad rakhna keh agar tumhein koi pasand ho to tum mujhe bata sakti ho

Shikha- jee bhabhi

Kashish- ab main jaa rahi tum bhi so jao

Shikha- jee

Kashish goes out of the room, Shikha goes to the window and looks for Saksham

Saksham- main yahan hoon {he was standing beside the window…you now na because I cant recall it}

Shikha- tum abhi tak yahin ho aur tum gir jao ge

Saksham- aur kitne saboot dene honge mujhe keh main tumse kitna pyar karta hoon

Shikha- shut up aur niklo yahan se

Saksham- jaa raha hoon…..waise accha khaasa mauka tha bhabhi ko batane ka keh tum mujhe pasand karti ho…..main mil bhi leta unse

Shikha- tum jao yahan se main tumse baad mein baat karoon gee

Saksham- lekin wada karo keh tum mujhse milne aao gee

Shikha- theeq hai main kal tumse library mein milne aaun gee

Saksham- kal nahin agle hafte yaani keh Monday ko main filhaal kaam keh silsilay mein bahar ja raha hoon

Shikha- tum kaam bhi karte ho

Saksham- haan bhaee main

Shikha- accha bas jao yahan se

Saksham-bye and have sweet dreams, obviously agar main un dreams mein hoon ga to wo dreams sweet hee hongi

Shikha- bye {and smiles}

Saksham starts to climb down

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Kashish entered her room and closed the door when suddenly someone held from behind

Kashish- Sujal kya masla hai

Sujal turns her making her face him- yeh masla hai keh I love u {he caressed her cheek}

Kashish- Sujal chodein, Soham dekh le ga

Sujal- wo so raha hai {he moved forward}, I love you

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Little Rahul was walking in the garden in a foul mood because he had got a scolding from his mother.

Saksham had just climbed down

Saksham- pyaar keh liye kya kya karna padta hai

Rahul saw him and started to shout- CHOR!!!!!!!!!!

Saksham was confused and then saw a little figure in front of him screaming

Saksham- shit….bhaag Saksham nahin to pittay ga

Saksham ran away from there

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Sujal was about to kiss Kashish when he heard Rahul shout CHOR!!!!!

Sujal- what the hell {he immediately went out}

Kashish followed him

SK reached Rahul almost everyone was out

Sujal- Rahul kya hua

Rahul- chachu chor!!

Sujal- kya…kahan

Rahul- wahan us tree keh paas {he points towards the tree where he had seen Saksham}

Sujal looked up and then to Shikha- Shikha yeh darakht tumhaare kamre keh bilkul neeche hai…… kya tumne kisi ko dekha

Shikha- nahin bro…maine kisi ko nahin dekha

Neha- Sujal yeh horror film dekh raha tha…. Isiliye usko weham hua hoga …. Isiliye main mana karti hoon yeh sab dekhne se

Mehek- lekin jab yeh keh raha hai to

Mouli- lekin itni tight security keh bawajood how can someone come in

Sujal- ya u r right…. Rahul are u sure that u had seen some1

Rahul- chachu mujhe wahan par se awaz aayi thi kisi keh bolne ki

Neha- dekha….. Rahul andar chalo faaltu mein sabko pareshaan kar diya….chalo

Everyone goes inside except SK

Sujal- Kashish kya hua kya soch rahi ho…..andar chalo

Kashish- aap chalein main bhi aayi

Sujal- theeq hai jaldi aana

******************** ******************

Saksham was finally out of Garewaal Mansion, he looked at the place, {wo abhi abhi deewar se kuda tha} and smiled and said- pyar keh liye kya kya karna padta hai, he smiled and turned but soon his smile vanished because he found himself face to face with Kashish.

Edited by aishwaria - 17 years ago

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