Kya pyar dard hai? (sk)..upd pt 10 pg 16 - Page 12

Finally you continued 😆 😆 subah hee i was remembering your FF 😊 😊 . Awesome part, hmmm so Kash has realised her feelings for Sujal 😃 😃 😃 but Sujal bechare ka memory loss will cost a lot of troubles in SK's lives think. plz cont. soon is baar and once again great part 👏

hey just read your ff its 👏 👏 👏 a lovely story cont soon

finally!!!!!!! 😆 gr8 part!!!!! i hope Sujal realizes that he loves kashish as well, very very soon!!!!!!!!! plz continue soon yaar!!!!

hana the story ab thak was awesome yaar..mujhe behad pasand aaya..bohat achcha likha hai tumne...mazaa aagaya... ab tho sujal,kashish kareeb aa rahe hai isse achchi tho koi aur baat ho hii nahii sakthi...me loved the story ab thak.. aur me sure aage bhii story badii hii dhassu hogi... the story is very interesting... different... me very curious to know kii aage kya hoga...i'am liking the way the story is progressing very damn much... keep up the gng.... the story is just amazing,rocking,lovely,good, nice, excellent, par excellence...the emotions,the feelings all have been portrayed perfectly well...very beautifully written parts.. i seriously enjoyed reading the parts... super duper cooll.. & the present scenes between sujal,kashish are just tooo nice..& i'am loving it... 👏 do post the next part soon..me waiting for the next part eagerly... 😊 😛 😃

Originally posted by: aishwaria

Finally you continued 😆 😆 subah hee i was remembering your FF 😊 😊 aww thts so sweet😳 . Awesome part, hmmm so Kash has realised her feelings for Sujal 😃 😃 😃 yah she has lets wait 4 the response frm sujal 😃but Sujal bechare ka memory loss will cost a lot of troubles in SK's lives think well probably...keep reading to knw more . plz cont. soon is baar and once again great part 👏 thnx once again keep reading

Originally posted by: jyothi_cool

hey just read your ff its 👏 👏 👏 a lovely story cont soon

thnx jyoti dear...will continue in a while😳

Originally posted by: sun_423

hana the story ab thak was awesome yaar..mujhe behad pasand aaya..bohat achcha likha hai tumne...mazaa aagaya... ab tho sujal,kashish kareeb aa rahe hai isse achchi tho koi aur baat ho hii nahii sakthi...me loved the story ab thak.. aur me sure aage bhii story badii hii dhassu hogi... the story is very interesting... different... me very curious to know kii aage kya hoga...i'am liking the way the story is progressing very damn much... keep up the gng.... the story is just amazing,rocking,lovely,good, nice, excellent, par excellence...the emotions,the feelings all have been portrayed perfectly well...very beautifully written parts.. i seriously enjoyed reading the parts... super duper cooll.. & the present scenes between sujal,kashish are just tooo nice..& i'am loving it... 👏 do post the next part soon..me waiting for the next part eagerly... 😊 😛 😃

no thnxx suri di 😳 loved your comment...will try to come up to your expectation..😃 thnx will continue sooon keep reading...😳😃

PART 10...

recap: kashish hit sujal by mistake....

sujal: maine kaha naa choti si kharoch hai ek do din mein gayab hi hojaegi...kash....[lekin kashish nahin maanti she takes her duppatah tears off a small piece and ties it on sujal's arm...sujal doesn't say anything as he is enjoying the whole moment to the fullest]

kashish:[finished tying her duppatah] abb theek hai na

sujal:[is staring at kashish...appni sapno ki duniya mein khoya hua hai] hmmmm

kashsih: sujal???[clicks her fingers]

sujal: huh [coming back to reality]...[looks here and there both are feeling shy finally sujal speaks up] kya mein tumhare saath hill peh chal sakta hun...actually gaaon ghhum keh bore hogaya hun...agar koi problem na ho to...
kashish: lekin !!!

sujal: lekin kya...nai agar koi problem hai its okay i don't mind...

kashish: nahin eissi baat nahin hai..kya tum aissi halaath mein hill chaar paoge...

sujal: haaan kashish i am perfectly allright...

kashish: to phir theek hai...mein zara charu seh milkar aati hun [turns to leave]

sujal: kashish [pyar seh uska naam pukarta hai]

kashish: [woh ruk jaati hai aur uski dil ki dhadkan tezzh hojatti hai] hmmmmm

sujal: tumne nashta kiya?

kashish: haaan...waise bi abbi 12:30 hue hai...nearly khanne ka time hai...

sujal: tum jhoot bol rahi ho

kashish: nahin....wo..wo ...mein..[trys to think for a reason] nahin

sujal: to chalo abbi karlo 20 mins hai...

kashish: tumeh kaise pata chala ke maine nashta?

sujal: come on kashish zahir si baat hai subha ko khaay baghair chali gai...aur jab seh nikli ho tab seh busy ho to nashte ka time kahan se milega...aur haan tumhare mooh peh saaf saaf likha hai tume jhoot bolna bilkul nahin aata [laughs]

kashish:[talks to herself] yeh to bohot tezzh kidi hai..(lolz)

sujal: kuch kaha...

kashish: nahin to...chalo...


At garewal house...

kripa: mamma app pareshan maat hoiye sab theek hojaega bro ajaenge...

veena: kab tak huh ?kab tak yeh jhoota dilasa deti rahegi...ek to inki wajeh seh sujal chala gaya[reffering to chetan] aur abb...

kripa: mom please app himmat maat haro

chetan enters...

chetan: [talking to some1 on his cellphone] haan sharma jee..woh contract ka kya hua? kya ? mil gaya humein? wow thats gr8...chalo ek baadi party organise karo ...jee theek hai mein baad mein baat karta hun...bye...

veena: humara beta laah patah hai aur app ko party suj rahi hai...sharam aani chaiye appko

chetan: oh shut up sujal koi baccha thodi na hai...jab maan karega to aajaega aur waise bi maine police ko inform kardiya hai abb unka kaam hai...

kripa: [comes face to face with lots of anger] mr garewal [chetan gets shocked when kripa calls him by his name] app appne app ko samajte kya hai huh ? app hai kaun ek mamuli insan jiske pass paisa toh hai lekin khushiyan nahin...app yeh samajte hai na keh appne inn paison seh khushiyan khareedenge theek hai jaiye jo khushi khareedne hai khareedlijiye lekin ek baat yaad rakhiye ek din tarsenge app appni biwi ke saath ke liye ...jisne itne saal appka saath diya...appne bachon ke pyar ke liye jinne aapne kabi khud ke kareeb aanay nahin diya...tadpenge lekin khushiyan appke zindagi seh miillo duur hongi...i hate u mr garewal i hate u...agar meri bhai ko kuch hua na toh mein app ko kabbi maaf nahin karungi kabi nahin...[leaves the room with tears in her eyes while chetan gets shocked]

chetan: ek to gaya mere mooh peh saab sunah kaar[reffering to sujal]...abb iska roop dekhna baaki reh gaya thaa...[usseh kripa ki batein bohot burri lagi lekin phir bi uska ghamand nahin toota]

cut to kripa..

she is in her room crying...remembering sujal and suddenly her cellphone rings..thinking it's sujal she attends it rapidly

kripa: hello sujal bhaiya...

angad: kripa mein angad bol raha hun

kripa : oh hi...

angad : woh maine yeh puchne ke liye phone kiya thaa tum theek ho na?

kripa: nahin [and suddenly starts crying]

angad: kya hua kripa? dekho mein janta hun yeh sabh bhulana mushkil hai lekin tume bhulna padega...

kripa: nahin angad yeh baat nahin hai...[tells him everything about about sujal]

angad: don't worry kripa sab theek hojaega tum fikar maat karo...ek kaam karo muje 2 ghanteh mein college ke bahar milo

kripa: theek hai bye...


in the village...

sujal ,kashish and all the children are climbing the hill and exploring the nature around them..

kashish: bachon yeh dekkho [pointing at a green plant] iss podeh ka ghar yahi hai hills par...

student 1: maam yeh abbi tak baccha kyun hai humari tarah barah nahin hota kya?

kashish: hota hai lekin bohot saal lag jatte hai...

they move on, all the kids are infront followed by kashish then sujal...suddenly kashish lost control and was about to fall but she fell in someone's strong arms (yes it's none other then sujal) sab bache aggeh jaa chuke hai except for the 2 love birds dono ek dusre ko dekh rahe hai kisi ko kuch patah nahin unke aas pass kya ho raha hai...sujal ki nazar mein kashish kisi pari seh kuum khubsoorat nahin lag rahi thi..achanak the love birds were disturbed by giggles...lol all the children came back and were murmmering

student 1: hehehe madam aur handsome uncle...woh kya kehte hai...

student 2: JODIII KAMAL KII....(lol)

kashish's cheeek turned pink and sujal turned his face as he was embarassed..finally he spoke up...

sujal: bachon chalo chalo jaldi humein andhera honay seh pehle lautna hogah...[and all move on]

All explored the nature and finally they were returning and it was dark...everyone was facing problems while moving down...kashish was facing problems the most because she had worn heels...and abbi panch minute bi nahin hue aur kashish fell...her toes were slightly bleeding sujal hairan sah hogaya all the kids stopped and rushed to kashish..

students: madam app theek toh hai..

kashish: haan tum log chalon [trys to stand but again lost her control but this time sujal caught her]

sujal: sambhal ke...[kashish kept her hand around sujal's neck]

kashish: chalo chalo mein theek hun...[she tried walking with sujal's support phir bi it didn't work out her injury wasn't normal...abb sujal couldn't see her in that situation he carried her in his arms and started walking without looking at her]

kashish ki palkeh jhuki hui thii she too didn't dare to look at sujal her cheeks were bright pink and she was shivering...lekin usseh samaj nahin araha thaa keh yeh thand ki wajeh seh thaa yah sujal ki chooh neh se...sujal usseh chup chap ghar tak lejata hai on their way koi kuch nahin bola bass unki ankhein ishare kar rahi thiii... On the other hand kripa meets angad and tells him everything that happend and angad agrees to help her...


Okay here comes the end of part 10...will be waiting 4 your comments...