Kya pyar dard hai? (sk)..upd pt 10 pg 16

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sidivyapall

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Posted: 17 years ago

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hey hana... finally u continued!!!!! 😃 😃 i love this sujal tooooooooooooo much!!!!!! but even if this sujal didn't believe in love... SK would still be together! 😳 gr888888888 part but short part 😭 😛 !!!!!! yayyyyyyyyy SK romance..!!!!!! and plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon!!!!!!!! im waiting... tick tock tick tock!!!!! 😛 😆

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Posted: 17 years ago

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gr8 parts hana dear.. 👏 ..so sujal lst his memory....n now iz diff sujal frm wht he was b4...kool...will be waitng 4 more...cont soon.. 😊

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Wow dear gr888 fic its really nice😊plz continue soon

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whr have u disappeared pls cont soon

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sidivyapall

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Posted: 17 years ago

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hana where r u yaar!!!!? plz continue soon!!!!!!! 😳

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Hana

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Originally posted by: le_me_star
nice part honii!!!.....sujal lost his memory 😭...like this one better 😉........angad save kripa n drop her home 😭 😊 😭......kripa should be missing her Big B !!!!!!!........kashish n sujal fall 4 each other 😉 👏 😊 👏 😉........can't wait for the next part!!!!!!!!........continue soon plzzzzzzzzz 😭 👏 😭 👏 😭 ........!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!

thnx dear...keep reading...😃

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Hana

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Originally posted by: Sai-licious
hey hana... finally u continued!!!!! 😃 😃 i love this sujal tooooooooooooo much!!!!!! but even if this sujal didn't believe in love... SK would still be together! 😳 gr888888888 part but short part 😭 😛 !!!!!! yayyyyyyyyy SK romance..!!!!!! and plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon!!!!!!!! im waiting... tick tock tick tock!!!!! 😛 😆

thnxu sai jeee...keep reading...

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Hana

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Posted: 17 years ago

#108

Originally posted by: **-**Guriya**-*
gr8 parts hana dear.. 👏 ..so sujal lst his memory....n now iz diff sujal frm wht he was b4...kool...will be waitng 4 more...cont soon.. 😊

thnx di...will continue sooon keep reading...

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Hana

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Posted: 17 years ago

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Originally posted by: Anam azhar
Wow dear gr888 fic its really nice😊plz continue soon

thnx anam dear will continue sooon...keep reading😃

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Hana

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Posted: 17 years ago

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PART 9...

Abh the same day jab kashish sujal ko dawai khilla keh jaa chuki thii thodi deher baaad mr sinha aee aur doctor seh baaat karkeh sujal ko aapne saath aapne ghar le gae...kashish ki halaaath kuch confused thiii she was a lil happpy a lil scared a lil shy kyunke ek aanjaaan aadmi unke ghar rehne wala hai jab tak uske koi rishtedar ka patah nahin chalta...

At Mr.sinha's place...

mr.sinha: welcome beta isseh aapna hi ghar samjo...agar kuch kaaam ho ya any problem be jijakh kehdena mein hun kashish hai [sujal kashish ko dekh raha thaa lekin kashish neh sharm seh aapni nazzrein jhuka li] aur haaaan meh toh bhul hi gaya charu bi hai...

sujal: charu???

mr.sinha: haaan woh kash....[is interrupted by someone]

someone: kisi neh humeh yaaad kiya....[havin a big smile]

kashish: jeee nahin charu madam....appp toh hamesha bin bulae mehmanoo ki tarah pohonchjaati hai..

charu: accha toh kya tumharre ghar aane keh liye mujeh kisi ki permisson lenni paregi?

mr.sinha: bass bass basss tum dono harrh jagaa shuru hojatti hoo...[looks at sujal giving an i am sorry for jo kuch bi hua look] chalo mehmaan ayee hue hai inke liye kuch khaane piine ka intazam karo...

charu: haaan chalo [hitting kashish lightly on her back]

both of them go to the kitchen to prepare food...

mr.sinha: i m sorry beta yeh dono bi nah..

sujal: its okay uncle...chotte motte jagdo seh hi toh pyar bhadta hai...[giving a cute smile] jab sujal yeh sabh keh raha thaa kashish usseh chupkeh seh dekh rahi thii giving a shy smile...

Mr.sinha showed sujal the guest rooom...by the time foood was prepared everyone was there except sujal..

mr.sinha: kashish beta jao sujal ko bula lao...

kashish: jee papa [kashish goes jab darwazze peh pohonchti hai she wonders kya karun after alot of hichkichana finally she knocks]

sujal:[from inside] come in...

kashish :[jab woh ander aati hai she sees sujal lying on the bed] chaliya khanna taiyaar hai..[turns to leave]

sujal: kashish jee kya app mera khaana room mein bejh sakti hai woh mujeh kuch theek nahin lag raha kuch chakar aarahe hai [holding his head] aur saarh meh dard hai..

kashish [yeh sunteh hi kahsish turned jhattke seh] kya??? [goes to him] aapne pehle kyun nahin bataiye?? ek minute [touches his head] OMG !!! appko toh bukhaar lagta hai yahin bethiyeh mein abbi aii...

kashish leaves to bring a thermometer and thandah paani with a cloth...as sooon as she brings it seedha thermometer sujal ki mooh meh rakh diya and told him to wait...after a few minutes..

kashish: app ko toh bohot tezh bukhar hai ...chaliyeh yahan leth jaiye (lie down) { and she keeps the soaked cloth on his forehead} abbh app yahan seh nahin uthenge mein abbi app ke liye soup leke aati hun...

sujal: {smiles] jee theek hai { after kashish leaves sujal thinks} yeh kaunsi pari hai jisne meri jaan bachai aur aaaj muje naaa jante hue bi mera itna khayal rakh rahi hai

kashish comes with soup and fresh juice

kashish: chalo abbh jaldi seh yeh soup piyo aur juice jab mein wapas auun toh yeh sabh {pointing at the food tray} khatam hona chaiye samjeh {she says in an orderly manner}

sujal: (smiles) jee madam aur kuch?

kashish: nahin abbi keh liye itna hee [she turns to leave lekin usseh kisi cheez neh rokh liya hai yes u guys are right her dupattah was stuck near the side table that was close to sujal}

sujal: (while taking a sip looks at kashish and asks) kya hua?

kashish : jee woh woh {she knew agar woh dupattah khud nikalne jaegi toh she'll be very close to sujal after alot of hichkichana} mera dupattah {pointing at the corner)

sujal : ohh {takes it out gently } loh hogaya [kashish leaves with a shy smile and sujal confused hojata hai] pagaal

kashish aapne kamre mein jaa rahi thii lekin saamne seh charu aarahi hai...

charu: kaun milgaya....kiska dil gaya...humko batao yaroo...(she sings the song from the movie kuch kuch hota hai, koi mil gaya and changes the words)

kashish: charuu tu bi nah...kuch nahin

charu: abbh meh itni parai hogai hun keh tu mujseh appni dil ki baat bi share nahin karogi...theek hai koi baat nahin {starts to leave lekin kashish usseh rokh leti hai and usseh appne kamre mein leke jaati hai}

kashish : chal aah beth..

charu: nai mein jaa rahi hun..

kashish :{ she starts} pata nahin usmeh kya jadoo hai,jab bi usseh dekhti hun merri dil ki dhadkan tezh hojati hai, mujeh kuch nahi sujta aisa lagta hai jaise uske bina zindagi ka haarh pal ruka hua hai....

charu : kiski baat kar rahin hai tu {confused}

kashish: stupid mein sujal ki baat kar rahi hun {blurts out aur phir feels shy}

charu: haaan pata hai...(not knowing what she is saying)

kashish: huh??? [thinks how did charu know]

charu: [realizing] kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa??? ssssssuuuuuuujjjjj.......[kashish feels shy and runs out] oee ruk to sahi....

kashish tells everything to charu what she feels about sujal and charu tells her if her love is true she will get sujal...

next day...

Mr.sinha and sujal are asleep...kashish woke up early as usual made breakfast and went to have a shower...she came out of the bathroom at the same time sujal came out of his rooom and saw kashish drying her her...

sujal: [to himself] wow yeh chand jaisa chehra isseh kisi ki nazar na lagge

kashish looked at him and smiled sujal did the same...

kashish: good morning [keeping the towel on the side table] kaisa mehsoos kar rahe ho?

sujal: ab pehle seh behtar...tum itni subha subha?

kashish: oh woh mein yahan gaon mein bachon ko paraati hun...kyunke mein nahin chahti yahan ka koi bi bacha anparh ho(uneducated) [sujal kahsish ki baton se impress hojata hai and says]

sujal:app jessi larkian iss dunniya mein bohot kamm(less) hongi...[kashish smiles to his comment]

kashish: chaliye app nashta karlijiye

sujal: jee... mein abbi ayah...

jab tak sujal fresh honne jata hai mr.sinha bi aa jata hai kashish serves breakfast to both of them...mr.sinha forces kashish to have breakfast with them but she refuses saying she's getting late...Mr.sinha leaves for work telling sujal if he wishes, he can roam around the village...sujal agrees...

sujal wanders around and some villager see's him...

villager: arreh app...kaisi tabiyat hai appki...?

sujal: app kaun??

villager: woh jab app ka accident hua na tab hum appko legae thay hospital

sujal: ohhh thnxu so much...abbh kaafi behtar mehsooos kar raha hun...waise ek baat bataiye kashish jeee kahan par milengi? mera mutlab woh parati kahan hai?

villager: oh woh toh tumeh aggeh milegi...aggeh jao aur wahan seh left

sujal: jeee shukriya...

sujal goes where the villager instructed...and he found kashish scolding a student...

kashish: {gusssah naakh paar chara hua} maine kitni baaar tumseh kaha hai homework muje time paar chaiye lekin tum ho ke sunte hi nahiin...

student: sorry maaam it won't happen again...

kashish: no i won't accept your sorry this is the 5th time...aaj tumeh sazaa zaroor milegi (takes a stick) haath aggeh karo...[the boy stays still] maine kaha haath aggeh karo [abbbh kashish ka gussah itna baad gaaya tha keh she was going to hit the student on his arm, unfortunately nothing happend to the student but kashish hit sujal as he came in between them] oh my god!!! sujal tum {the stick fell from her hand} i am so sorry

sujal : [holding his arm tightly] nahin kashish koi baat nahin mein theek hun...i am sorrry mujeh tum teacher student keh beech dakhal nahin dena chaiye lekin kehte hai keh bachon paad kaboo paana bohot hi asaan hai bohot sarreh tareeke hoteh hai lekin yehi tareka kyun jisse tume bi takleef ho aur iss masooom bache ko bi...kya tumeh lagta hai ke aaaj isseh maar kar tum usseh saabak sikhaogi..?? [kashish aapne nazrein jhuka leti hai] nahin ...baache shabdon ki bashaa bi samajte hai agaar hum unneh appni tareekeh seh samajae......

sujal :[telling the boy] beta yeh maaam jo aapna sab kaaam chorh kar sirf app logon ke pass aati hai aappko paraati hai...aur applog usko yeh sila dooge..

student: i am sorry sir...[goes to kashish haath joorh ke] i am sorry maaam aaj seh mein wadaa karta hoon aapna saraa homework complete karunga aur appko shikayat ka mauka bi nahin dunga...

kashish: no i am sorry...[and both of them smile] okay chalon bachon adeh (half) ghante baaad mein appko saamne wali hill paad milungi...aaj ka topic hoga nature...[everyone leaves]

sujal baaju wali paadi par beth jataa hai still holding his arm kashish notices and goes to ho him...

kashish: sujal i am really very sorry...

sujal: kashish maine kaha na i am fii..[before sujal could say more kashish uska sleeve upar karti hai and notices a thin wound and there was blood]

kashish: sujal khoon beh raha hai..[gets damn worried]

sujal: maine kaha naa choti si kharoch hai ek do din mein gayab hi hojaegi...kash....[lekin kashish nahin maanti she takes her duppatah tears off a small piece and ties it on sujal's arm...sujal doesn't say anything as he is enjoying the whole moment to the fullest]

okay guys hea comes the end of part 9...will be waiting for your comments...

Edited by Honii - 17 years ago

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