Kya pyar dard hai? (sk)..upd pt 10 pg 16

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey everyone after reading many sujal kashish fan fics i came up with one...i can't say its going to be the best but i'll try my best to not make it boring...

Characters...

Garewal family...

I am Sujal Garewal (Rajeev khandelwal) ...sometimes sweet ..sometimes arrogant..Aksar logon ki takat unka pariwaarh hota hai lekin meri takat meri behen hain...Pyar ...yeh lafz sunnneh mein bohot accha lagta hai ...lekin iskah koi mutlab nahin hottah...pyar dard keh ilawa aur kuch nahin dettah...(23 years old)

I am Kripa Garewal (neha bamb)...sweet...chubby..very naughty...and caring...i love my brother sujal and can never see him in pain...(20 years old)

I am veena Garewal ( same in kth) ...Socha tha unkeh saath kush rahungi akkhir maine usseh hi shadi kii jisse mein pyar karti thi lekin usne kya kiya kabi mere aur mere bachon ko waqt nahin diya...hamesha humseh judaa rahe...

I am Chetan Garewal (same in kth)...Mera business hi meri duniya hai aur pyar ka koi mutlab nahin meri zindagi mein...

Chetan aur veena ki love marraige hui thii lekin jab seh business mein problem hui...usss din seh aaj tak chetan ignored his family..gussah hamesha uski naakh(nose) paar hotah tha...harrh(every) subha chetan office janneh seh pehle ladta hai kabbi veena seh toh kabi sujal aur agar inmeh seh koi maujood nah ho toh woh naukron seh jagda karta hai...

Garewal family mumbai mein rehte hai ...they are one of the rich people in Mumbai...

Sinha family

I am kashish sinha (Aamna shareef) ...i love my life...meri maa nahin hai toh kya hua mere papa neh mujeh kabi iss baat ki kammi mehsoos nahin honneh di...mera ek chota bhai hai bohot hi shararti...kabi kabi mein uski maa banjatti hun...meri hamesha yahi koshish rahi hai keh Angad koh maa ki kammi mehsoos nah ho...(23 years old)

I am Angad Sinha(Iqbal khan)....merii burai toh sun hi lii hoggi applogon neh meri behen seh...balleh hi mein bohot shararti hun lekin uskeh saath sweeet bi....caring bi...i always try not to hurt my sister lekin kabi kabi hojata hai...aaj mein jo kuch bi hoon apni di ki wajeh seh agar woh nah hoti toh zindagi nahin hoti...(20 years old)

I am Mr.Sinha(same in kth) ...meri takat mere doh bacche hai Angad aur Kashish ...agar aaj Savita hotti toh fakhr seh keh sakti keh yeh dono mere bacche hai...

Mrs.Sinha yanni Savita koh cancer thaa toh jab angad pedah (born) hua tab woh unneh chodd kar challi gai...

Sinha family stay in a village...though kashish and angad stay in a village they studied in a goood university ...kashish is done with her studies lekin angad is still finishing his last year...Now kashish teaches ...Her aim is to educate all the children in the village...

other characters...

I am charu (surveen) mein hun kashish ki best friend ...meri ek hi khwaish hai kisi larkeh ko thapad marun woh kya hai na yaha gau(village)mein koi flirt hi nahin karta toh thapad kaise khaaega. ...pata hai kashish hamesha kehti hai "charu tum bak bak bohot karti ho " kya app logh bi yahin sochte hai???

saabh ki introduction ho hi gai abbh meri bi toh koi sunnnnnnnooooooooo....I am Akshat(same in kth) ...ek boring larkeh ka dost jo enjoy karna nahin janta sirf akeleh bethna pasand karta hai yah you guys must have guessed him right Sujal...I am known as akshat the great...mujeh ek cheez karna bohot accha lagta hai chotti ko satana...abbh app log soch rahe honggeh yeh choti kaun hai ...hmmm chalo bata deta hun ....she is none other that kripa...Mere mom and dad ka accident hua tha jab mein char(4 years) saal ka thaa tabb hi seh veena aunty neh mujeh sambhala hai...mein sujal kah bachpaan kah dost saath mein business partner...

i will be waiting for your comments...

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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow nice 2 see a ff by u dear... 😃 ..seeming good n interstng... 👏 ..n character intro was in different style... 😳 .. loved charu's line...wanna slap somone..lol... 😆 hopes da frst one she slaps iz nt poor aki...lol... 😆 😆 😆 ...gr8 wrk... 👏 ..will be waitng 4 frst part 4 sure...bst of lck... 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wohoooooo.......kya baat hai ji.....finally apne likhne ki soch hi li......hehehe.....awesome intro episode....ab jaldi jaldi continue bhi karna 😆 😉
kya khwaish hai charu ki.....plzz usse ekta kapoor se mila de , aur bol ki ladka samajke ekta ko 1 kya 10-15 thapad mar de....hehe 😆


luv
vandu 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey grat start honii........cant wait to read more..sujal and kashish are my favourite jodi...so plz cont..soon 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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@guri di:no thnx di...heheh lets hope charu's victim is not aki.. 😆 will surely continue sooon 😊

@vandu:no thnx jee..haan finally haaan...naaaa...mein ff start kar hi lii...waise appka idea burra nahin hai...kekta ko slaps hmmmm sochna padega 😆 😆 will continue sooon 😊

@bhhumi:thnx dear will continue sooon 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey Hana
thats a surprize haan 😛 but a wonderful one 😳

luv the intro and characterization
😉

waiting to see the 1st rocking part from u

Best of Luck 4 This FF 👏

luv u tornado😳

lolz
ana
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: cool_SK

hey Hana
thats a surprize haan 😛 but a wonderful one 😳

luv the intro and characterization
😉

waiting to see the 1st rocking part from u

Best of Luck 4 This FF 👏

luv u tornado😳

lolz
ana

hey ana no thnx 4 liking ....haaan i know it was like a suprise...will continue sooon..😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey honii..amazing characters..but plzzzzz dont make kashish gaon ki gori.!!!hehehee 😆 😆 😆
plz post 1st part soon..m w8ing! 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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nice stry,lookin forward 4 more
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Posted: 18 years ago
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@easygold : thnx yaar...will contnue now....keep reading... 😊
@neelu: no thnx neeelu jeee....will continue...keep reading..

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