'DON'T JUDGE...KYPH FF p33 (end)pg 31 - Page 16

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Posted: 18 years ago
Thanks everyone. Yes, the karwa chauth scene was certainly inspired by our all time fav romantic flick DDLJ 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
[SIZE=7>PART 23: this is a "hot" one- please read at ur own risk!

Angad and prithvi joined Dilip for dinner.

"Mujhey bahut afsos ho raha hai ki meri wajah se Kripa ki tabiyat kharab ho gayi……main ab usey fast nahin karney doonga," Prithvi said

"Prithvi…..dheere dheere aadat padh jaati hai……tension mat le…" Angad reassured him

As they were finishing up, Kripa also joined them

"Ab kaisi tabiyat hai beti?"

"Theek hoon papa…pyaas bujhi hai tabhi theek huyi hoon….," Kripa gave a glance to Angad from the corner of her eyes. Angad just rolled his tongue inside his mouth, as he read between the lines.

"Dekho Kripa, main tumharey liye kya laaya?" Prithvi took out a box and gave it to her.

"Isski kya zaroorat thi Prithvi?" Kripa hesitated

"Ley lo beti….yeh tho parampara hai…." Dilip ordered

Kripa looked at Prithvi, and then at Angad.

Angad reassured her by gently nodding his head.

There was a beautiful gold necklace in the box.

"Pehnaa do beta…." Dilip said

Angad and Kripa cringed at that thought. Angad could not bear that Prithvi's fingers would touch Kripa's neck. Kripa, herself was not keen, "Koyi baat nahin…main khud hi pahen loongi….," she quickly snapped the necklace in place on her neck.

Prithvi was pleased to see Kripa accept his gift, "bahut sunder lag raha hai….."

Kripa touched her wrist with her hand and felt her new bracelet, "bahut sunder hai….," her eyes were lowered but Angad knew what she meant; he just smiled to himself.

A LITTLE LATER:

After Dilip retired for the night, Prithvi, Kripa and Angad also went to their rooms.
Prithvi was in an unusually romantic mood that night; he grabbed Kripa from behind and tried to kiss her, "aaj kitni sunder lag rahi ho…yeh saree tum par bahut khubsoorat lag rahi hai…."

Kripa tried to free herself, "wo…wo Prithvi mujhey abhi bhi chakkar se aa rahey hain…..main sona chahti hoon…."

"Oh…koyi baat nahin…..tum so jao…main tumhey bother nahin karoonga…..main bas soch raha tha ki doctor waali baat yadi such ho jaaye tho….," he blushed as he said that but Kripa just shivered at that thought.

"Prithvi…main change karkey soney jaati hoon"

In no time, Kripa pretended she was fast asleep. Prithvi sighed when he saw she was in deep slumber and thought, "kabhi aur try karengey Kripa…,." and dozed off.

Kripa got up when she was sure there was no more danger. She took her cell phone and text messaged Angad, "PLEASE MEET ME NOW"

He sms'd her back, "MEET ME OUTSIDE IN 10 MIN"

Kripa changed into her jeans and a white silk shirt. She tiptoed downstairs and went outside. She saw Angad standing a block away with his car. She ran to him and hugged him, "Angad….please kahin door chalo…"

Angad kissed her forehead and opened the passenger door, "chalo….beach par chaltey hain"

"Really? Itni raat ko? Safe hoga?" she asked

"Jab tak main tumharey saath hoon…..koyi tumhara kuch nahin bigaad sakta…" he smiled and squeezed her hand.

They arrived at one of the quiet areas of the Juhu beach. They took their shoes off and walked hand in hand near the waves. Angad lifted her up from her waist, so that she was at eye level with him, "dekho heels ke bina, main tumhey dekh hi nahin sakta hoon….now this is better"

Their faces were inches apart, as Kripa circled her arms around his neck tightly, "Angad…..kya aisa ho sakta hai ki yeh raat kabhi khatam na ho…."

He just looked at her and kissed her lips passionately and then whispered, "tum chaho, tho har raat aise hi ho….."

They were lost in each other's eyes, when a big wave from the ocean hit them. They both fell down, Angad on top of Kripa, and started laughing. They were soaked with the salty ocean water. They could feel the heat from each other's body through their wet shirts. Her salty skin tasted like honey to Angad. He scorched her body with his kisses, their fingers and toes buried in the wet sand. The gentle waves caressed their bodies, burying them deeper into the sand each time. They lay in each other's arms with their eyes closed for a long time, unaware of how late it was in the night. Kripa finally opened her eyes, as she heard some dogs barking in the vicinity.

"Angad…utho…bahut der ho gayi hai…..humein chalna chahiye…"

Angad got up and looked at his watch, '3 baj gaye hain…." They tried to get up but realized that they were covered with wet sand all over.

"Aise ghar kaise jaayengey?" Kripa asked.

"Aisa kartey hain bina kapdon ke chaley jaatey hain…." Angad winked at her

"Main tho chali bhi jaaun, par tum jaa sakogey?" Kripa teased him back.

They hugged each other and walked towards the car.

"Kripa…mere car ki trunk mein meri kuch shirts rakhi hain…..chalo change kar lete hain…."

Angad took his gym bag out from the trunk and handed her one of his t-shirts; he then took one out for himself. Kripa went to the back seat and tried to change out of her silk shirt, but the wet shirt was clinging on to her sandy body. Angad saw her struggle with her shirt. He opened the door and joined her in the backseat. He helped her out of her shirt. She had goose bumps on her body as she felt his hands on her back and chest. She turned around and hugged him tightly. Angad could not resist himself either, and reciprocated her passion. They were soon tearing all their clothes apart and were once again united with each other on this auspicious karva chauth night!




….to be continued….
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Posted: 18 years ago
awesome part.....i really feel tht AK should tell everyone abt them before someone takes their love the wrong way.....i hope tht they don't get seperated frm each other.....hope they tell everyone soon before prithvi really starts to act more romantic toward kripa.......i really love seeingg angad possessive.... 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
prithvi.. ab khayal aya biwi ka?

AK!! 😳 😳 😳

lets hope they dont get cuaght while sneaking back in! 😕

and how long will kripa be able to keep prithvi away?
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey im ur new reader i read ur whole ff that gr8t just like the frist kiss 😉 😉 😉 plzzzzz cont soon cant wait
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Posted: 18 years ago
thanks everyone 😊
[COLOR=blue][SIZE=7]PART 24:

Angad and Kripa were successful in getting back home without disturbing anyone.

[SIZE=7]MORNING:

Prithvi left for work when Kripa was still sleeping. He gave her a light kiss on her cheek before he left. Kripa frowned in her sleep, as if she could tell that it was not Angad's kiss.

Angad peeked into Kripa's room before he left. She was still asleep. He gently walked to her bed and kissed her lips. She smiled in her sleep, turned over, and hugged her pillow. Angad smiled, covered her with her blanket and left for work. He left a note under her pillow.

She found the note when she woke up, "Aaj raat ko kahan milna hai?"

She blushed as she remembered their beautiful night at the beach and then the backseat of his car….."we are almost like teenagers in love" she thought. Shayad chup chup ke pyar karney ka mazaa hi kuch aur hai…..

She saw a bouquet of roses with a beautiful poem written by Prithvi on her nightstand. She felt guilty, "Prithvi bhi mujhsey kitna pyar karta hai…..main kaisi uljhan mein hoon…..kaise usey bataaoongi apney aur Angad key baarey mein……shaam ko Angad sey hi poonch loongi……kuch tho hul nikaalna padhega…."

She was about to leave for her work, when she saw Dilip staggering from his room.

"Papa! Kya hua?"

Dilip was sweating profusely and holding his chest, "beti…zara doctor ko phone karna…"

Kripa called the doctor, and then called Angad.

"Haan…main abhi aata hoon…Prithvi ko bataa diya?" Angad asked

"Haan…main usey bhi phone karti hoon…" Kripa said, as she hung up. Her first impulse was always to call Angad, she could only think about him whenever she needed someone. Although, Prithvi was her husband and Dilip's only son, she did not even think about calling him first.

"Prithvi…papa ki tabiyat theek nahin hai…doctor aaye hain, aur unhey hospital ley jaaney ko keh rahey hain…."

Kripa was shocked at Prithvi's response, "Kripa…Angad ko keh do wo chalaa jaayega….main abhi ek important meeting mein phansa hua hoon….main baad mein milta hoon…"


Kripa could not believe her ears- how can a son be so selfish-that is what Prithvi was- selfish to the core….he just cared about himself, no one else mattered…..he was not buying a house or starting all this business for her, but for himself! She had no guilt now…….there was no way she could live with a man like that even for another day.

Angad arrived soon, "chalo Kripa chachaji key saath hospital chaltey hain"

[SIZE=7]HOSPITAL:

Dilip did have a massive heart attack, but was stable enough to under go an angioplasty. Angad and Kripa stayed at the hospital, till he was out from the procedure. Prithvi and Kartik also came later.

"Kripa…tum nahin hoti tho aaj papa ka kya hota?" Prithvi sobbed on her shoulder. Prithvi's plight had no effect on Kripa. She stood still and did not even try to console him…..she had seen his true colors……those were crocodile tears with which he had managed to fool Angad and Dilip for years, and also made her feel guilty about her relationship with Angad………she was not going to fall for that anymore.

"Prithvi…..tum ghar jaao…main papa ke paas hospital mein rahoongi….." Kripa said firmly

"Nahin Kripa….tum Prithvi key saath wapas jaao…..main yahin rahoonga…."Angad intervened

"Angad theek keh raha hai…..Papa Angad key saath sabsey comfortable rahengey……chalo Kripa raat bahut ho gayi hai…….ghar chalo…." Prithvi held her arm. Kripa freed herself from Prithvi's grip, "muhjey apney papa ke yahan chhod do……mujhey unki bhi chinta hai……"

Angad understood that Kripa was no longer interested in spending anytime with Prithvi at home. Angad was too distraught after Dilip's heart attack to even offer to drop Kripa. At this point, he knew that he had to be at Dilip's bedside…….no matter what.Kripa understood Angad's dilemna, and did not expect him to accompany her.

"Theek hai…..main tumhey wahin chhod doonga…..achcha Angad raat ko kuch chahiye ho tho phone kar dena…..main ya Kartik aa jaayengey….." Prithvi put his hand on Angad's shoulder. Even Angad was surprised to see Prithvi's matter-of-fact attitude after his father's near fatal heart attack.

Kripa packed an overnight bag, and went to her father's house. Suryabhan was pleased to see her but worried about Dilip, "beta mujhey pehle bata diya hota….main bhi hospital aa jata…"

"Papa….aap kal mere saath chaliye ga…."

Kripa could not sleep that night. She went to get a drink of water from the kitchen, when her father turned the light on, "beti kya baat hai? Jab sey aayi ho pareshaan lag rahi ho……kya Dilip ki chinta hai?"

"Haan papa….wo bhi hai….par…."

"Par kya beti……batao kya baat hai?"

Kripa had always confided in her father since childhood. She hugged him and started sobbing, "papa…main bahut badhi uljhan mein hoon………"
"Aao….yahan baitho…aur batao kya baat hai" Suryabhan sat down with Kripa on his lap, just like he used to when she came back from school, upset about a friend or a poor grade.

"Papa…….main Prithvi sey pyaar nahin karti……."

"Wo tho main jaanta hoon beti, par ho sakta hai dheere dheere tumhey pyaar ho jaayega……"

"Nahin papa…." She poured her heart to him. She told him about Angad, his sacrifice, her initial attempts to make her marriage work, and then how Angad and her finally confessed to each other and got extremely close, "papa…..ab main aur Angad us mukaam par pahunch gaye hain, jahan sey wapas nahin aa saktey…….."

Suryabhan looked serious, "beti kya matlab?"

"Haan papa….main aur Angad ab ek doosrey ke ho chukey hain…….hamesha ke liye…."

"Beti……..main kuch upaay nikaalta hoon……aakhir tumhari khushi ka sawaal hai………Dilip sey baat karoonga…….wo pehley theek ho jaaye……." He kissed her forehead, "ab jao, achchi beti ki tarah so jaao……"

Kripa kissed him goodnight and went to her bed. She was relieved, as if a large burden had been lifted from her chest. A father-daughter relationship is always special….a father would do anything for his little girl's happiness, even if it meant breaking the societal rules.

Over the next few days, Angad helped Dilip recover at the hospital. Prithvi paid his visits like a visitor-he was always "busy" with something. Dilip was a little taken aback by Prithvi's attitude. One day, when Angad was helping him change his clothes, "beta……main bahut khush kismat hoon jo maine tumhey us din juvenile court sey apney ghar laaya tha…….tum hi mere sachche bete ho……." Dilip had tears in his eyes. Angad's eyes got moist also, "chachaji……..aapka karz tho main kabhi nahin utaar paaoonga……….aap na hotey tho main aaj bhi kisi jail mein sadh raha hota…….." they both hugged each other.

Kripa made sure she brought home cooked food for Dilip and Angad everyday. Suryabhan sat around and entertained Dilip, as they shared their past court stories.

Suryabhan noticed how comfortable Angad and Kripa were with each other. He was also unhappy with Prithvi's behavior, and particularly displeased with Kartik, who seemed unusually interested in his daughter. Suryabhan was happy that Angad was always there to shield Kripa from Kartik. Kripa insisted on staying with her father during this period.

Dilip came home after a week. Prithvi brought in the floor plans for the new apartment building, 'papa….ab aap theek ho gaye hain….dekhiye kaun sa floor plan aapko achcha lagta hai….Kripa tho kuch batati nahin hai……"

Kripa intervened, "Prithvi, main papa ko chhod kar kahin nahin jaaoongi….tumhey shift karna hai tho kar lo…..main tho yahin rahoongi…"
Dilip was touched by Kripa's gesture, he looked at Prithvi, "beta achcha hoga tum sab yahin raho….pata nahin meri tabiyat kahin phir kharab ho gayi tho…"

Prithvi looked disappointed but folded the floor plans, "jaisa aap sab chahey……"

Kripa went upstairs and saw Angad standing near his room. She smiled and went close to him. She whispered, "bhagwan bhi yahi chahta hai ki hum judaa na ho……ab papa theek ho gaye hain……….raat ko kahan milna hai?"

Angad smiled back mischievously, "wahin jahan koyi aata jaata nahin…….."

….to be contin
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Posted: 18 years ago
great part...
prithvi doesn't have even that little of a time to meet his father who jsut had a heart attack.. 🤢
thats just bad..
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Posted: 18 years ago
gr8 part lolz ["bhagwan bhi yahi chahta hai ki hum judaa na ho……ab papa theek ho gaye hain……….raat ko kahan milna hai?"

Angad smiled back mischievously, "wahin jahan koyi aata jaata nahin…….." ] 😳 😆 😆



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sana

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Posted: 18 years ago
omg. prithvi is soo heartless. ugh. he's so stupid.
but that last line was soo funny where kripa asked angad where they should meet. neway, cont soon. 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
thanks guys. That last line is from a famous old hindi song

achha tho hum chalte hain
phir kab miloge
jab tum kahoge
kahan?
wahin jahan koi aata jaata nahin.... 😊 😊

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