Graceful? Yeah, Right! Last Pt. Pg. 35!!! - Page 20

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: atohani99

Meera, again I love how well u make the dialoges fit ino each other, great work I'll tell you a secret....it's cus when I'm writing it, I'm saying all the dialouges out loud!😉😆😆

Aww, how funny is Rahul??? LOL, can't leave his fiance alone for one min, but I guess it shows how much he loves her I know....he's very funny...and yup....he loves her like crazy!!!😉😆😆

Well once again Aru and Adi r showing how good they r together. lol...I think I might ban you from talking about them!😆

The songs were good, espcially mendhi laga ke rakhan. I can't believe I didn't think of that. Oh but both of my choices will b entering in at some time, thats good I cudn't believe you didn't think of it either!!! But yes....your choices will be here!😳

Hey whats wrong with my vocab, its not that bad. I can't use the language I would like to use, coz this is a family forum 😳 I got it.....lol....

Great work Meera once again, I really do like this FF 👏 Thanks Arun...too bad its ending soon!😳

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: luv_eijaz_anita

wow that part was great Thanks so much Ami!!!
it was sweet how rahul cant stay away from maya.. 😳 Isn't it sweet???
and the songs were great thankoo!
can't wait for the next part..

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: desigurl14

ok so its been a while (barely a week but u ppl move fast.. lol) It's only been a week? seems like longer....😆😆😆
neway, ppl mite not like adi better than raj but they definitely LUV adi/aru (heehee) Raj....is old news...the new one is Rahul...who obviously they love!!! and yes they love Adi-Aru! lol....it's only cus I made them sound so cute!😆
and whoever it was that commented on that love octagon thing is soooo rite!! lol It was NOT a love octagon!😆
totally forgot abt the "hair whipping" (n the french twist - grrrr lol) the hair whipping had to be there...with the wrong person though....😆😆😳

FROSTY

p.s. i luv Aru!! she's soooo sweet.... (LOL) Obviously you'd like her....way to be subtle Frosty!😆
p.p.s ppl took the maya/raj break up a lot better than i thought.. but i guess itz the whole srk-kads mania!! I know....I thought everyone ws gonna kill me! Specially cus I made them so cute in the beginning! lol....SRK-Kads...rule the world!😉😆😆
p.p.p.s wutever happened to vinit and his "fishes"?? hopefully the pathetic loser returns Arushi's dvd sumday soon.... she really doesn't want to have to call him...... She should stop talking in third person too! lol.....he went off with Raashi remember...and which DVD does he have anyways??
p.p.p.p.s luv ya!! (oo n come up wid another name for jojo [gm]) Luv ya too!! Sent you a pm bout that!!😳😳🤗

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: -Pinky-



omgg u serious?do it!! was planning on it anyways!! lolz u have no idea how much i love them..their pair the BEST no no no the second best pair lolz 😆 I could def tell!😆 hope to see it happening soon 😃 very soon!
todays epi was as usual GR88 ..rahul is cute lolz Hands off Pinky! HE's mine!😆
i wonder wts gonna happen next..after they get married..cuz they will be happily married n then there will be no drama. .lolz unless theres a twist coming up.. The ff's gonna end soon!!! so i m existed to read further

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: xo-Krupa-ox

That was such a sweet update!.. Thanks so much Krupa!!!i think my fav character is gonna be Reena for some reason!. which reason would that be?? You know who Reena is right?.btw, what happened to Aru's co-worker person, Vineet & Malini? Vinit went off with Raashi...and Malini....hmm...you'll have to wait and watch!😉😆😆

ohh, I have a feeling something's gonna happen to Aru because of her pregnancy! hmmm.....maybe!😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
Part 13


Then everyone joins in and dances. After that, they start the dandiya, and Maya goes out for a few minutes. That's when Raj comes behind her.

Raj: how are you?

Maya: oh hi Raj. I'm good! Thanks for performing! It was really sweet!

Raj: I just wanted to congratulate you and tell you that I'm really happy for you and Rahul.

Maya: thanks Raj. You're okay na?

Raj: never been better….

Maya: Malini…. didn't come with you?

Raj: why would she? The minute we got to New York, she started flirting with the baggage attendant (He can be John, ok Krupa??), and before I knew it she was leaving with him, and I haven't seen her since…I never told you because I just didn't know how to say it to you....

Maya: oh wow…. I'm sorry to hear that.

Raj: don't be…. I'm glad!

At that moment, Rahul came out to look for Maya.

Rahul: hey you two! Raj that was a great performance on your part! I mean you learned the dance in less than 6 hours!

Maya: less than 6 hours??

Raj: ya, just for you!

Maya: how sweet Raj! Anyway Rahul, let's go in! I want to play dandiya!

Rahul: yes your highness! (Looks at Raj) I'm dead after Sunday aren't I?

Raj: definitely!

Maya: RAJ! Rahul! I hate you both!

She goes inside, dragging Arushi, who was on her way out, with her.

Raj: you better go in! She can get pretty feisty!

Rahul: I know Raj; I've been with her for three years.

Raj: Are you ready to get married?

Rahul: ya…. I guess so…. I mean with a person like Maya, I am ready. I mean if Jhanvi and Aman can last more than 2 years and Arushi and Adi for more than a year. It can't be that bad right??

Raj: well…. I wouldn't really know.

Rahul: do you still have feelings for her?

Raj: um…Rahul, I do and I always will, but she's marrying you, and I respect that. She picked who she really loves.

Rahul: ok…. well I better go inside, or else I'm dead!

Raj laughs: ya…I'll come in awhile.

Rahul goes inside and finds Maya and they both play dandiya. After about 10 minutes Adi comes out looking for Raj.

Adi: what are you doing out here?

Raj: I…. uhh…just wanted to be out here for a while.

Adi: will you be able to handle the wedding?

Raj: yes Adi! Now stop worrying about me, and go celebrate your sister's wedding!

Adi: that's why I came looking for you! Let's go inside and play dandiya. I got ditched by my wife for her friends.

Raj: oh poor you. But I'm not doing it! I don't know how….

Adi: fine, just stay here!

Adi goes inside and brings out Arushi and one of her friends.

Adi: Raj, this is Simi or better known as Simran, and Simi this is Raj, one of my closest friends.

Simran: Hi, nice to meet you…

She puts out her hand for a handshake, but Raj doesn't seem to notice since he's too busy staring at Simran, who is wearing a baby pink lengha with a short top that is cut at the bottom, slanted. (Kareena Kapoor's outfit from Bole Chudiyan)


Adi leans over to Raj: Raj! At least shake her hand!

Raj breaks out of his trance and accepts her hand.

Raj: it's a pleasure to meet you too!

Adi: Ok Raj, so Arushi, Simi and I are going to teach you how to play dandiya.

Raj still has his eyes on Simi, who is now starting to blush.

Raj: uh huh….

Adi goes to Arushi,

Adi: how long before they notice we're gone?

Arushi: I say about an hour….

Adi and Arushi both laugh and so Raj and Simran both come back to the real world!

Adi: now can we teach you?

Raj: huh? Ya sure…

The three of them teach Raj dandiya and so they all go into the main hall and set up a four people square for dandiya. Gradually Aman convinces Jhanvi and so they join the line too. Then, Maya and Rahul who are making their way to every group also join in. They danced the whole night away!


The next day is Maya and Rahul's Haldi ceremony, individually. At the Sharma residence, female friends and family have all gathered around Maya to apply the auspicious yellow paste to her. The same thing is taking place at Rahul's house. After the ceremony is over, Maya goes up to her room to shower and take off all the yellow paste. Two minutes after she dresses herself in a simple white salwaar kurta. Arushi knocks on her door.

Arushi: are you ready yet?

Maya doesn't respond but instead opens the door.

Arushi: should we go now?

Maya nods.

Arushi: what happened? Why aren't you saying anything?

Maya goes and sits down by her bed.

Maya: Aru…. I'm scared!

Arushi: to get downstairs? I know your relatives are loud, but they're not scary!

Maya laughs: shut up Aru! I mean to get married….

Jhanvi appears at Maya's door. She knocks on the open door.

Jhanvi: can I come in?

Maya: of course…

Jhanvi: are you scared?

Maya just nods.

Jhanvi: why?

Arushi: she doesn't know.

Jhanvi: But you do love Rahul right?

Maya: yeah…. I do…. I mean of course I do!

Arushi: then what's the problem?

Maya: I don't know…I'm not uhh…. ready to get married tom….

Jhanvi: yes you are. I felt the same way with Aman, but I know I wouldn't be happier with anyone else.

Maya: I guess…

Arushi: Maya, you'll be fine!

Raj comes and knocks on her door….

Raj: can I come in?

Jhanvi looks at Maya, who nods. And so she goes to open the door for Raj…

Raj: can I have a minute alone with Maya?

Jhanvi and Arushi both look at Maya, skeptical of leaving. But she nods and so they both leave.

Raj: you're scared?

Maya just nods

Raj: why?

Maya: I don't know….

Raj: are you sure Rahul is the one?

Maya doesn't say anything….

Raj: because if you're not sure, then remember main hoon na?

Arushi, who was listening from behind the door, opens it frantically and comes in the room and goes up to Raj and slaps him across his face.

Arushi: what do you mean, main hoon na? She's getting married tomorrow!! She's already confused as it; she doesn't need you adding to that! (She gets ready to give him another one)

Maya: wait Aru!! Don't slap him! It's doesn't mean anything to me anymore! I know how much Rahul loves me, and that's good enough for me!

Raj: it doesn't mean anything to you?

Maya: no Raj, we decided we would be friends. That's enough for me. What I feel with Rahul is something I never felt with you.

Arushi: Raj, I don't even know how you said all this to Maya? Last night you were totally mesmerized by Simran.

Maya: Simran? Our Simran?

Arushi: ya, didn't you notice them yesterday, while we were playing dandiya?

Maya: I saw them, but I'm sorry it was my sangeet. I had better things to notice…. So Raj, you like Simi? But yet you had the nerve to tell me that you're there for me?

Raj: yes, I'm attracted to Simran, but that doesn't mean that I don't care about Maya anymore. I love you, as a friend (He says that directed towards Arushi!)

Arushi looks down ashamed: I'm sorry Raj. I didn't mean to slap you, well actually I did, but for a different reason…

Raj and Maya laugh.

Raj: now that you're sure about Rahul, shall we all go down?

Maya: ya…gimme two minutes

Raj leaves her room, while Arushi still stands there. Maya looks at her...

Maya: What?

Arushi: nothing…I…uhh…. wanted to tell you something.

Maya: well then tell me.

Arushi: I need Adi with me, so wait a minute.

Arushi goes downstairs, and she finds Raj and Adi talking and she brings Adi upstairs, who looks confused.

Maya: Aru!!! Tell me quickly! You're making me worried!

Arushi: Maya, Adi and I have something to tell you.

Adi looks at Arushi and they both share a significant look.

Adi: you want to tell her now? A day before the wedding?

Arushi: I can't help it Adi! The guilt is too much!

Maya: ok now, you're scaring me…are you guys separating or something?

Adi and Arushi: NO WAY!! Are you kidding? We're very much in love…

Maya seems really scared at what they're gonna tell her?? Please do leave comments!! Only two or three more parts for this ff!! 😛 😛

Luv ya loads,

Meera 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
k so didnt realize u put up the next part.... but here goes!!

preity is an awesome choice for simran (luv saif n preity together!! lol altho it is kinda hard to imagine her in that outfit but it works!! lol)

enjoyed the slap immensely (as always....) wish it'd been a double (u kno like one side n then the other ---- *tsh-tsh* lol)

n the malini part (serves raj rite!!) luved the airport attendant/john thing lol

k i think im done (no sympathy for maya.. lol i think i kno too much........)

FROSTY

p.s. come up with names!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
simply fab!!!!👏 👏 👏
continue soon 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago

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