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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: -Pinky-

sorry for the late reply, i read it ages ago but didn't have time to reply. awww...it's ok Pinks! Atleast you did get a chance to read it!!
omgg arushi n adi r now married!! yup...they are!wowww i m sooooo glad u paired maya with rahul (i.e kajol with srk..they make the BEST pair😉 ) I know what you mean!! Srk-Kads are my fav!!!! i just hope raj doesn't stop their marriage..he proly will try tho... who knows??😉😆😆i hope he gets sum other girl but NOT malini...maybe a new girl..like maybe pz ?..hint hint 😉 😆 You shud have pmed me your hint hint....cus that might be happeneing!😳

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: angelic shaz

omg wow i jus like read ur ff and i totally luv it !!
cnt wait continue real;li soon 😃



Thanks a lot Shaz...will continue in a few mins!😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
Part 12


Next day at 1:30pm

Adi: can we take it from the top again?

Raj: mind if I join you?

Adi: Raj? I'm glad you decided to join us.

Raj puts his hand out to Rahul

Raj: congrats! You're a lucky guy!

Rahul shakes Raj's hand

Rahul: thanks Raj, for coming.

Raj: ok so, what song are you guys dancing on?

Adi tells Raj and the three of them start practicing.


In the afternoon, Jhanvi calls Maya and asks if she can come over before the sangeet.

While Maya is doing her hair, the doorbell rings.

Arushi gets the door: Hey Jhanvi!! Aww how is my little Reena? I can't believe she's gonna be two in three months!!!

Jhanvi: I know I still can't believe it!

Arushi: anyway, come in!

Jhanvi comes in and Maya comes down the stairs.

Maya: Reena!! Come to Maya auntie!!

Reena runs in her baby steps to Maya.

Maya: hey Jhanvi, how are you?

Jhanvi: I'm pretty good, how are you?

Maya: good….

Arushi: she's been smiling like this since a week ago!

Maya: shut up Aru! Anyway Jhanvi, what brought you and my sweet little Reena by?

Jhanvi smiles: umm…. I wanted to ask you a question about tonight, and your wedding?

Maya: go ahead…

Jhanvi: Maya, umm Raj is staying at my house right now, and um…. I was wondering if it was okay if….

Maya: Jhanvi its fine, he can come tonight and on Sunday. I have no problem with it, and I'm pretty sure Rahul won't mind either.

Jhanvi: thanks Maya. Anyway I better get going, only two more hours till the sangeet, and you still need to get ready.

Maya: ok Bye Jhanvi! Bye Reenu!

Maya heads upstairs to her room to start getting ready.
Jhanvi and Arushi stand by the door.

Jhanvi: so how's Adi?

Arushi smiles: Adi's good. How's Aman?

Jhanvi: Aman's good too. Arushi can I ask you a question?

Arushi: sure….

Jhanvi: were you ever angry with me, after that fiasco three years ago?

Arushi: I honestly would have been if you had taken Adi away from me, but that didn't happen and besides now we're all happy in our own lives right?

Jhanvi: ya, ok so I'll see you tonight? Bye!

Arushi: ya, Bye!

As Arushi is closing the door, she sees a car park across the street and sees Rahul run across the street.

Arushi: Rahul, can't you stay away for at least 24 hours?

Rahul: nope!

Arushi: weren't you and Adi rehearsing?

Rahul: Ssh! And ya we were, but then I wanted to see Maya so I came here!

Arushi: ok, she's upstairs in her room, but she's getting ready so make sure you knock.

Rahul: yes Aru!

Arushi calls Adi and they have a nice long talk, where Adi tells her that Raj agreed to do the dance with them.

Meanwhile Rahul knocks on Maya's door.

Maya: come in.

When Rahul opens the door, he sees Maya sitting by the dresser putting on her bangles to match her purple, blue and green lengha. She looks at herself in the mirror and then sees Rahul's reflection in the mirror. She immediately turns around.

Maya: Rahul? What are you doing here?

Rahul: I came to see how much I love you.

Maya: how is that?

Rahul: didn't Adi ever tell you, or even Arushi?

Maya: tell me what?

Rahul: that if a girl's mehndi is this dark (Hold up her palms) then is means her husband will love her a lot! Adi came to Arushi like this too….

Maya: how do you know that?

Rahul: Adi told me…

Maya: Arushi never told me!

Rahul: there are some things you keep private!

Maya: then why would Adi tell you?

Rahul: I don't know…. but don't sulk now…. come on cheer up!

Maya: I will, if you can find your name in my mehndi! (She holds up both her hands in front of her face)

Rahul: right…here! (He finds it, and they both smile)

Maya: ok, you saw my mehndi? Now leave!

Rahul: why? You don't want me here?

Maya: no! I'm getting ready and you should too! So go!

She pushes him out of her room and down the stairs.

Maya: now bye! Love you!

Rahul: one kiss?

Maya: no way! Bye!

Maya shuts the door in his face, and then she goes upstairs to her room to finish getting ready.

6:00pm

Adi: Maya! Arushi! Hurry up!!! We have to be there in 15 minutes!!

Arushi: give us two more minutes!

When Adi hears the click-click on high heels he looks up and sees Arushi walking down the stairs in a green and pink bandhni lengha, with her hair put up in a French twist.

Adi: you look absolutely amazing….

Arushi: thank-you. You don't look that bad yourself…

Adi is wearing a cream colored sherwani with a green stool (dupatta)

Adi: thank-you, now where's Maya?

Maya: right here!

Adi looks up and sees his little sister walking downstairs looking all grown up. She is wearing a blue/purple/green lengha and half her hair is up and half is left down with curls.

Maya: I'm ready, let's go.

Adi: ok…

They get into the Lexus and drive to Shubh Vivah hall. The minute Maya enters the building the photographer whisks her away to take photos, leaving Maya without even saying a hello to all the guests. Meanwhile all the guests arrive and start going into the hall to start the garba. While Rahul and Maya are sitting, all the guests come and congratulate them, and then Jhanvi, Aman, Reena, and Raj come. They all congratulate them and then Raj comes to Maya and he holds out a hand, but she goes for a hug.

Raj: (whisper) Are you happy?

Maya nods.

Raj: I'm glad.

Then the performances start and Maya's cousins dance to Chalka Chalka Re. then Adi being the emcee, introduces himself and Raj for the next item, at the exact moment, Rahul gets a phone call and so he walks away. Then the song Mehndi Laga Ke Rakhna(Dilwale Dulhania Le Jayenge) starts, and Rahul starts dancing, and then when the girl part comes, the three of them get Maya to dance too.

Ye Kudiyaan Nashe Diyaan Pudiyaan
Ye Munde Gali Ke Gunde
Ye Kudiyan Nashe Diyan Pudiyan
Ye Munde Gali Ke Gunde
Nashe Diyan Pudiyan
Gali Ke Gunde

Mehndi Lagake Rakhna, Doli Sajake Rakhna
Mehndi Lagake Rakhna, Doli Sajake Rakhna
Lene Tujhe O Gori, Aayenge Tere Sajna
Mehndi Lagake Rakhna, Doli Sajake Rakhna, O Ho, O Ho
Sehra Sajake Rakhna, Chehra Chhupake Rakhna
Sehra Sajake Rakhna, Chehra Chhupake Rakhna
Ye Dil Ki Baat Apne, Dil Mein Dabake Rakhna
Sehra Sajake Rakhna, Chehra Chhupake Rakhna
Mehndi Lagake Rakhna, Doli Sajake Rakhna

Ud Ud Ke Teri Zulfe, Karti Hain Kya Ishare
Dil Thaam Ke Khade Hain, Aashiq Sabhi Kanwaare
Chhup Jaaye Saari Kudiyaan, Ghar Mein Sharam Ke Maare
Gaaon Mein Aa Gaye Hain, Paagal Shahar Ke Saare
Nazaren Jhukake Rakhna, Daaman Bachake Rakhna
Nazaren Jhukake Rakhna, Daaman Bachake Rakhna
Lene Tujhe O Gori, Aayenge Tere Sajanaa
Mehndi Lagake Rakhna, Doli Sajake Rakhna
Sehra Sajake Rakhna, Chehra Chhupake Rakhna

Main Ek Jawaan Ladka, Tu Ek Haseen Ladki
Ye Dil Machal Gaya To, Mera Kasoor Kya Hai
Rakhna Tha Dil Pe Kaabu, Ye Husn To Hai Jaadu
Jadu Ye Chal Gaya To, Mera Kasoor Kya Hai
Rasta Hamara Takna, Darawaza Khula Rakhna
Rasta Hamara Takna, Darawaza Khula Rakhna
Lene Tujhe O Gori, Aayenge Tere Sajanaa
Kuch Aur Ab Na Kehana, Kuch Aur Ab Na Karna
Kuch Aur Ab Na Kehana, Kuch Aur Ab Na Karna
Ye Dil Ki Baat Apne, Dil Mein Dabaake Rakhana
Mehndi Lagake Rakhna, Doli Sajake Rakhna
Sehra Sajake Rakhna, Chehra Chhupake Rakhna


After that, Adi announces that Aman, Jhanvi, and Arushi, would be joining him, Rahul and Maya on stage, and so the song Maahi Ve from Kal Ho Naa Ho starts.


Maahi Ve Maahi Ve That's The Way Maahi Ve
Tere Maathe Jhumar Damke
Tere Kannno Baali Chamke Hai Re
Maahi Ve
Tere Haatho Kangana Khanke
Tere Pairo Payal Chance Hai Re
Maahi Ve
Naino Se Bole Rabba Rabba
Mann Mein Dole Rabba Rabba
Amrut Ghole Rabba Rabba
Tu Soniye
Jind Maahi Ve Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve
Everybody Sing Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve
Jind Maahi Ve Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve
Everybody Sing Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve

That's The Way Maahi Ve
O Tere Aankhen Kali Kali
Tera Gora Gora Mukhdha Hai Re
Maahi Ve
Tere Rangat Jaise Sona
Tu Chaand Ka Tukda Hai Re Maahi Ve
Tere Gaal Gulabi Rabba Rabba
Chal Sharabi Rabba Rabba
Dil Ki Kharabi Rabba Rabba
Tu Soniye
Jind Maahi Ve Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve
Everybody Sing Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve
Jind Maahi Ve Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve
Everybody Sing Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve

Barse Rangini Kaliyan Hai Mehki Bhini Bhini
Baje Mann Mein Halke Halke Shehnaiya Re
Jitne Hai Tare Aanchal Mein Aa Gaya Sare
Dil Ne Jaise Hi Li Angadayee Re
Tu Jo Aayee Sajhke Mehndi Rajke
Chal Bajke Oh Soniye
Dil Kit No Ka Khaye Dhajke Oh Soniye
Jind Maahi Ve Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve
Everybody Sing Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve
Jind Maahi Ve Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve
Everybody Sing Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve

Chanhda Meri Chanda Tujhe Kaise Mein Yeh Samjhaoon
Mujhe Lagti Hai Tu Kitni Pyaari Re
Khusiyan Jitni Hai Sab Jitni Hai Sab Dhoondh Ke Laoon
Teri Doli Ke Sang Kar Do Sari Re
Tu Jo Aayee Sajhke Mehndi Rajke
Chal Bajke Oh Soniye
Dil Kit No Ka Khaye Dhajke Oh Soniye
Jind Maahi Ve Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve
Everybody Sing Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve
Jind Maahi Ve Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve
Everybody Sing Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve
Tere Maathe Jhumar Damke
Tere Kannno Baali Chamke Hai Re
Maahi Ve
Tere Haatho Kangana Khanke
Tere Pairo Payal Chance Hai Re
Maahi Ve
Naino Se Bole Rabba Rabba
Mann Mein Dole Rabba Rabba
Amrut Ghole Rabba Rabba
Tu Soniye

Jind Maahi Ve Jind Maahi Ve Jind Maahi Ve Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve
Everybody Sing Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve
Jind Maahi Ve Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve
Everybody Sing Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve
Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve Soni Soni Aaja Mahi Ve



That's it for now....were the songs ok for you all? I thought Maahi Ve worked because all of them except Preity were there, and except for Abhishek! 😉 Please do leave comments!!

Luv ya all loads,

Meera 😳 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
dat was awesummmmmmmm!!! 👏 👏 👏
da songz were fab 😃
continue soon 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
Meera, again I love how well u make the dialoges fit ino each other, great work

Aww, how funny is Rahul??? LOL, can't leave his fiance alone for one min, but I guess it shows how much he loves her

Well once again Aru and Adi r showing how good they r together.

The songs were good, espcially mendhi laga ke rakhan. I can't believe I didn't think of that. Oh but both of my choices will b entering in at some time, thats good

Hey whats wrong with my vocab, its not that bad. I can't use the language I would like to use, coz this is a family forum 😳

Great work Meera once again, I really do like this FF 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
wow that part was great
it was sweet how rahul cant stay away from maya.. 😳
and the songs were great
can't wait for the next part..
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Posted: 18 years ago
ok so its been a while (barely a week but u ppl move fast.. lol)
neway, ppl mite not like adi better than raj but they definitely LUV adi/aru (heehee)
and whoever it was that commented on that love octagon thing is soooo rite!! lol
totally forgot abt the "hair whipping" (n the french twist - grrrr lol)

FROSTY

p.s. i luv Aru!! she's soooo sweet.... (LOL)
p.p.s ppl took the maya/raj break up a lot better than i thought.. but i guess itz the whole srk-kads mania!!
p.p.p.s wutever happened to vinit and his "fishes"?? hopefully the pathetic loser returns Arushi's dvd sumday soon.... she really doesn't want to have to call him......
p.p.p.p.s luv ya!! (oo n come up wid another name for jojo [gm])
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Posted: 18 years ago


omgg u serious?do it!! lolz u have no idea how much i love them..their pair the BEST no no no the second best pair lolz 😆 hope to see it happening soon 😃
todays epi was as usual GR88 ..rahul is cute lolz
i wonder wts gonna happen next..after they get married..cuz they will be happily married n then there will be no drama. .lolz unless theres a twist coming up..so i m existed to read further
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Posted: 18 years ago
That was such a sweet update!..i think my fav character is gonna be Reena for some reason!..btw, what happened to Aru's co-worker person, Vineet & Malini?

ohh, I have a feeling something's gonna happen to Aru because of her pregnancy!
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: angelic shaz

dat was awesummmmmmmm!!! 👏 👏 👏
da songz were fab 😃
continue soon 😳



Thanks so much Shaz!! Glad you liked it!!!😳😳

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