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hey ure ff is amazin. i can almost sense their sizzling chemistry and ure characters have been etched out really good. well too gud!

Woww... love the part! I just love the way angad is always annoying kripa! Kripa gets annoyed to easily 😆 Continue soon! 😃

Originally posted by: fabremixed

hey ure ff is amazin. i can almost sense their sizzling chemistry and ure characters have been etched out really good. well too gud!

Hey thanks a lot....

Originally posted by: kimmu

Woww... love the part! I just love the way angad is always annoying kripa! Kripa gets annoyed to easily Continue soon!

Hey thanks. Lol...that of course she does get annoyed easily...

Well I hope the next part will be good enough...I realise I shall always proof-read my parts before posting and do the little bit of editing too...since I get better comments if not more comments .....well just to let you all know, the next part will be short but not as long as the recent one.....maybe very short-I don't know....I'll try to make it a little more longer-as I'm an expert at that....if you want a sentence to be a paragraph long, ask me! ...I don't know I just can't write short......and I need two days to post it as these two weeks we have our relatives coming home for this reason or that, there's only a gap of about 2 days at most...and tomorrow we'll be going to our cousins....

Well actually my uncle and aunt who used to live in Canada had come here a year ago or was it 2 years-lol-I don't remember…..but yah they had come to HK and settled here but around in May or June they had gone back to Canada, and we all only knew that my aunt was pregnant, and then they came back to HK on the 23^rd of August 2007 and they had twins-boys with them who were already 2 months old on that day….we knew that she must have given birth but we had no idea when…but we didn't know they had twins…nor did we know the baby's a boy or a girl…they said on the phone it's a surprise…so we all knew it at the airport only besides the babies had a pre-mature birth…I think they were born 6 weeks earlier-but I'm not sure…besides there were some things in the past and all so that's why when they had twins CCTV (I don't remember which but when they talked they said something like 'CCTV') even interviewed them or something.…...oh well…I don't know why I typed all that….but as I've said before….when I start writing…it's hard for me to stop……is that some kind of disease…lol? Well….instead of backspacing all of that I guess I won't let the time, which I used to type all that, into waste😊

Sumra

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He opened his mouth to say something when he heard her gasp. 'What the hell? I just opened my mouth to say something and this girl gets scared just like that.' he laughed to himself in his mind; he dare not laugh out loud. He had a hard time controlling his laughter but he still managed to seem serious. 'Kripa?' he called out to her. 'Kya? Kya hua?' she asked scared.

Angad: I'm a little tired, can I just rest here for 10 minutes.

'What?' she asked totally surprised. She had not even once thought of such a thing, she was expecting him to say that something must have gone wrong with the car but still she felt like thanking god that nothing like that happened.

Angad replied slowly and managed to remain calm and not laugh 'I want to rest.'

Overcoming the surprise quickly, she asked confused 'Here?'

He shook his head 'No, no. Not here. I mean in the cottage.'

'In the cottage.' she echoed.

Angad: Yah so let's go.

She didn't know what to do and so just agreed. They got out and walked towards the cottage. He walked ahead and she carefully walked behind. She called out to him 'Angad, have you used this way many times?' Without turning around, he replied casually 'Yah.' Thinking before asking, she asked again 'Have you ever seen snakes around here?' He stopped and turned around laughing, it was hard to control it then 'What? Snakes? And here? Of course not.'

Kripa smiled back hesitantly 'Oh.'

They reached the cottage, Angad pushed open the door. It wasn't creepy inside, no spider webs or such things like that. There were a few wooden chairs and one big wooden table. There was also a staircase leading to the second floor. They both went up. There were a few rooms, they entered in the room which was the nearest to the staircase. There were a few chairs and Angad went ahead and sat on one of them. He looked up to see Kripa standing at the doorway. 'Why are you still standing there?' Kripa replied hesitant 'It's just…' Kripa looked around, it wasn't spooky but it was empty, she felt weird being inside the cottage. 'Just sit down. I've come here before too.' he told her. That comforted her someway and she sat down hesitantly on one of the chairs.

Angad closed his eyes and leaned his chair back against the wall. He rocked the chair back and forth for sometime then he stopped and simply leaned the chair against the wall, eyes closed. Kripa didn't know what to do and so she brought another chair close to her and leaned on it, with her arms on the chair, and closed her eyes.

After quite a time, Kripa felt herself being pushed and dragged. She opened her eyes to see herself being tied around with ropes all around her on the chair she had been sitting on. She had no idea what was happening, she looked around confused and to her surprise, she saw Angad tying her. She looked at him confused, when he saw her looking at him; he looked back at her with a smirk, the smirk sunk in the reality in her head.

Kripa asked with fear 'Angad…Angad what are you doing?'

He smiled which was almost like a smirk, he was done and he sat on a chair across hers 'Well, well, well, Kripa darling, haven't you realize what I just did?' he winked.

She was way too surprised to even say something, thinking was a different matter compared to that. Angad shook his head smirking 'Darling, haven't you realized you've just been kidnapped?'

The shock on her face sent him laughing out of control 'Well darling, you were right when we were passing by during the day. But you know, I had to keep a good image and all in front of your mom. Your mom's way too smart; I couldn't take a risk then, could I?'

She was stunned to hear that. She couldn't believe she was kidnapped, even after being kidnapped she couldn't feel it. Everything had sunk in except the fact that Angad was a kidnapper; somehow she couldn't sink that into her head.

'Angad…' she began but couldn't continue. Something burned in her throat. It was hurting so much.

Angad laughed 'Oh Kripa darling, I won't do anything. I'll just call your parents and ask for a small amount of money and that's it. Now don't tell me your parents won't do that. I've seen your mom; she'd do anything to get you out of troubles like this, won't she?' he smiled sweetly. 'Oh darling, you can speak, I haven't tied an invisible cloth on your mouth to cover your mouth. After all I've got to give you some freedom, don't I? Now darling don't stay quiet, I'd love to hear something from you. And oh yah, you can scream all you want, I won't mind since no one's here and I love noise, you must have realized that, remember in the car…' he left the sentence hanging for her. 'Don't be quiet darling, oh darling say something at…' he got interrupted by a shout.

'Don't call me "darling"!' she screamed 'Don't call me "darling", don't you even dare!'

He pretended to look surprised, his eyes were wide open. Then he returned to look his warm self 'Oh thank you. Now that I've heard from you, let's get to the business. So……huh?...wait ok.' He stood up and walked towards her and bent down in front of her and held his hand out to touch something. He reached for the chain on her neck, he touched the chain and then held the pendant and looked at it with interest, and he was really close to her, especially her face. He was just beginning to observe the pendant when Kripa started to shake herself violently causing Angad to move; fall back slightly. She screamed loudly, deafening herself and most importantly Angad. He looked at her annoyed by this kind of behavior; he stood up and went ahead to reach for her dupatta. Before he could even touch her dupatta she began to move more violently causing Angad to lose his cool. She screamed with tears running down her cheeks 'You are so sick. Disgusting. You're a piece of ****!' That was the limit, he couldn't stand her anymore. 'Will you shut up for once?' he shouted at her, she fell silent. She stared at him with rage and fear while he stared back with dangerous anger.

When he was sure she'd remain silent, he bent towards her and spread his arms almost like how people do when they hug someone, but he wasn't hugging her. He bent and he hugged Kripa, except that he wasn't hugging her but was opening the tight knots behind her. She didn't understand why all of a sudden he came over her, he wasn't exactly hugging but she didn't know what he was doing so she started to shake herself violently so that he'd move back. But something else happened, due to the violent shaking he lost his balance and fall on top of her causing the chair to fall backwards, he quickly put his hand behind Kripa's head to prevent her head from getting injured. The chair didn't broke and so Kripa wasn't in a comfortable position. Angad winced in pain as his hand, the one which he had put behind Kripa's head, made contact with the floor. He was sure his hand was injured, no fracture but there will be an amount of blood flowing out. Since he had put his hand behind Kripa's head so his arm was across her neck. When he fell, he fell right next to her except that she was still tied around the chair. She wasted no time to scream 'Angad, get your b***** hands off me, you sco**drel!' Now she had gone way beyond his patience. He stood up fast and lifted the chair and put it back in its original place. Her hair was a mess. He stood in front of her while she shook her head so that her hair would fall back in place. He pointed his finger at her angrily 'You know what, girl? I was just going to untie the knots when, because of you, we both fell. I was just playing around; do you really think I look like a kidnapper? All this was a simple joke only!! Get that in your thick head fast!'

When she heard that she burned with rage, she screamed back 'You're so sick. You thought that since I was scared about being here and all, you'd try to have fun scaring me. Nice job Angad. But I'm afraid this makes your image in front of me all the more worse. You're this low, I could have never imagined that if you hadn't done this. You're a disgusting young brat! I pity your mother for ever giving birth to you. I wonder if she ever regretted the moment she gave birth to you.'

He put up his hand to slap her, when he stopped himself at the right moment. He looked at her closed eyes and moved his hand away which had been an inch away from her face only.

When she didn't feel anything make contact with her cheeks, she slowly opened her eyes only to find Angad missing. When she felt something behind her, she slightly turned around to see Angad undoing the knots and then he came forward and undid the knots on the rope which he had tied around her hands. The rest he left for her to untie herself.

While she undid the knots, he warned her with an angry stare 'I'm going now. Don't you ever expect me to wait for you down there if you don't come before I'm ready to drive off...?' Something interrupted him.

They both looked towards the window to see, it was raining heavily. They could see it was raining heavily besides when the rain made contact with the windows, they created loud sound waves.

That satisfied him, a little, to some degree. It also cooled his anger by some measures. He looked at her for a moment even when she turned back to look at him. He left the room. Kripa undid the knots quickly and ran downstairs; she didn't want to be stranded alone in a place like that, and out of the cottage only to feel her heart sink suddenly at the sight she saw. She felt something hurt her throat, again. She looked around but couldn't find the car or Angad. She ran here and there in search of the car or Angad, but couldn't see anything. He must have driven off. She felt like crying and before she let herself cry, she felt tears streaming down her cheeks already. She ran ahead in the direction of which they were heading before. She was soaked completely. She felt heavy with the clothes all wet. Her purse and bags were all in the car. 'How could he just leave me like this? she asked herself. She had thought, just to take off his anger at her and to frustrate her, he'd drive a little and stop and wait for her, but she had gone very far already and he was no where in sight. She couldn't even go back now, she was lost. She cried bitterly. She had never ever, not even for a mere second, lived life roughly. Before she could get a scratch, her parents were there for her. She started walking slowly in no direction in particular. She felt like she was going to die any moment if she was going to be in that state for an hour.

After 5 minutes, she heard a faint sound of a car horn. Then again. Again. Then constantly. She felt her heart fill up with hope. She began to run in the direction of the car horns. Tears still ran down her cheeks but this time partial because of her hope rising.

After a few minutes, she saw a faint light. She felt the happiest woman on earth at that moment. She ran in the direction of the light, soon she saw the car also. She ran faster towards the car. The car was right in front of her 20 meters away. She ran straight towards it but only to stop abruptly when she was a few meters away. She couldn't see clearly in the rain before but she saw it then.

Fear overcame her. She thought she was going to faint or die of fear right then. She saw a few seconds later that those thug-looking people noticed her presence. She saw smirk and felt dirty thoughts play in their mind when they noticed her fear filled face.

Kripa ran backwards a few steps and then turned around and started running faster when she saw those people had started after her.

Kripa ran and screamed. Tears streamed down her cheeks. As she ran, she got flashbacks of the good times she had spent with family and friends. She was sure that the day was her last day, she was going to die soon, either now or in a few hours time.

The guys were close behind. Kripa ran crazily here and there not knowing which direction she was heading.

Her dupatta suddenly got stuck between some trees, she was too frightened to even think about something so she simply left her dupatta there and continued running.

It was dark and hard to see between the trees but she still tried her best to get her way through the trees and she screamed as loud as she could hoping that someone could hear her even though she knew no one was there. She was losing energy which was causing her to slow down with the added weight of fear as she slowed gradually and they came closer and closer.

Kripa bumped into something soft. At first she thought it was a tree but then when she had bumped she had put her hands on that thing and she felt that she had felt fabric. Kripa looked up to see that it was a person. She felt relieved, scared, frightened, nervous and every other single emotion there was on earth. She felt those positive emotions because she had felt that the person could be her savior. She felt negative emotions because when she looked at the situation from another angle, that person could be one of the thugs as well.

When Kripa had bumped into the person. The person had gone still for a second but turned around instantly in the other second.

Kripa cried in relief 'Angad. Angad please help.' She folded her hands and begged him 'Angad please. They…' Kripa couldn't breathe, she tried pointing behind her trying to tell him what she wanted to say, she couldn't form words anymore, her brain was suddenly blank 'They…Angad…they…' while Angad looked at her, his eyes furrowed in concern, trying to understand what she was trying to say. He also looked behind Kripa trying to figure what she was trying to point at. At first he didn't see anything which he could think of what Kripa was pointing at since there were only trees and plants all around but soon he saw a few shadows. Angad saw the men. The men gradually slowed when they saw Kripa and then stopped when they saw that a man was also with her. Angad saw them all grinning. Angad finally understood the whole situation at hand. Or he thought he did.

Kripa turned around and her heart started racing faster 'Ang…Ang…Anga ple…' Angad held her arm firmly and moved her on his side so that the men could now see him clearly.

One man smiled which made Kripa more uneasy while the other men smirked 'Hey girl, we thought you were lost so we just wanted to help you.'

The man started walking towards Kripa. Kripa went behind Angad. The man reached them and was just about to hold Kripa's arm when Angad held out his arm to block the man's way.

Angad asked tonelessly 'What do you think you are doing?'

The man looked surprised 'Hey man! I didn't see you. Are you with her?'

Angad replied in his same toneless tone 'What's it you?'

The man smirked thinking that Angad was probably a stranger to the girl as well just like his men and him. He lowered his tone a little but kept the smirk on his lips 'You know we all can share her. No one is…' Angad punched him straightaway in the eye when he heard "share her". He could never stand that kind of thing especially not then.

The other men jerked. They started coming forward but before they came the other man near Angad tried to give Angad a blow but before he could Angad punched him hard which sent the men at the back running away and the man in front of Angad staggered away while Angad glared at him.

When the men were totally gone, Kripa came out from behind Angad. She lowered her eyes and said 'Thank you.' It was barely audible but Angad heard it. Angad had started to feel sorry for her but he got furious again when he remembered something. 'Where the hell were you? I was looking around for you for so long!! Where the b***** hell on earth were you?'

Kripa broke down hard. She hiccupped while she cried. She had been looking for him. She had lost her hope. She thought she was abandoned in the forest and was going to die soon. She had felt scared to death. When the men had chased her, she already felt she was ruined. She…

Kripa cried harder, not being able to control herself at all. What could she tell him? She hadn't had the mind to speak anything; all she was capable of was cry.

Angad fumed as he saw her cry. It was her mistake and she was crying? It made no sense for her to cry. She had made him worried sick!

Angad ordered her in a grave tone 'Follow me!'

Kripa followed him as he led the way to the car. Both were drenched. Angad cursed himself when he saw that he had left the driver's door open and the rain had soaked his seat almost completely.

They both sat in the car and Angad drove them out of the forest. They had a heavy and tensed silence between them.

Angad again went on the roll 'I thought I would have killed myself if I hadn't found you. I was going to have to feel guilty for something which wasn't my fault at all! What would I have told your mom? You're such a…What were you thinking? You know…'

Kripa couldn't control it any longer and burst out herself 'I know what?' she screamed.

'You told me to come out and if I didn't you'd go away. I tried my best to get free of those stupid ropes as fast as I could!! I ran out and when I didn't see your car anywhere near, I thought you left. I felt so alone, so hopeless, what would you know? I thought I was going to die!! I walked around aimlessly hoping hopelessly that you hadn't really left! How'd I know where you were? I searched for you everywhere! Get it? EVERYWHERE!'

Angad halted the car to a stop suddenly. The car jerked forward a little. He looked at Kripa angrily 'Do you really think I would have gone and left you there? If you have eyes you could have seen me at the back side of the house if you had really searched for the car! I had promised a lady that I would send her daughter home safely. I'm not like those b******* who would have cared less about all this. You know Kripa? You are the biggest piece of crap I've met ever.'

Kripa looked at him in horror 'If you had the mind Mr. Khanna, you wouldn't have tried to "pretend" to kidnap me. You could have just drive and take me home. Simple. It's all because of you. Everything happened because of you! You wanted to have fun scaring me, right? Well congratulations. You'd be glad to know that you've succeeded.' She added sarcastically with a sarcastic smile 'And my god, you've succeeded to such an extent that it's hard to believe that this all was just for a simple joke which you had intended to enjoy! Well did you? I hope I hadn't disappointed you. I'm glad to have helped you in this thing to make a joke out of myself.'

Angad clenched his teeth and pressed the gear pedal ever harder. Kripa looked at him in horror. She shouted at him. Ordered him to slow down or stop. But he never listened.

Originally posted by: sameira-90

hey great part...continue soon

Thanks.....but only one comment won't boost me to write the next part yet.....I haven't even started writing the next part for this fanfic yet.....so please do comment so that I can be boosted to write it faster and then alos post it faster this time....😳

great part and most importantly after such a long time.i almost forgot about this ff.but now plz post soon.angad kripa scene was simply awsum.

wow!! very intense!! angad can be soo stupid sometimes!! grr!! thank god he saved her!!

finally u continued after a long time. i really had to refresh my memory for this one but it was definitely worth it. it was an amazing part. thrilling , exciting and entertaining all at once.
angad can be such a jerk sometimes. it was soo stupid of him to play such a prank. poor kripa was scared out of her witts. and then he screams at her like there is no tommorrow. seriously the guy needs anger management classes!
will be looking forward to the next part!!

awesome part cont soon plz!!!!!!! 👏