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very nice story continue soon 😊

very cute...plz update soon i love ur story 😳 😃

Originally posted by: amritafan

it was damn cute

Aww...thanks so much!!! It means a lot to me when you all comment!!

Originally posted by: afshaa!!!

it was cool plzzz continue soon
cant wait for the next update

thnx for the wonderful ff



afshaa

Thanks so much for liking Not Decided

Originally posted by: iamsmart

kripa's like priety zinta from kal ho na ho
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sana

Hey thanks but I still can't figure out Kripa in Not Decided sounds like Priety Zinta from Kal Ho Na Ho....seriously I hadn't thought about that...lol....but as I think of it maybe Kripa might sound similar when considering the way she behaves with Angad....all annoyed and all....maybe just like Priety in Kal Ho Na Ho with Shah Rukh Khan perhaps.....but really I hadn't thought of that I didn't intend to copy or think of anything similar to that......whatever I write's original.......hope you don't mind what I say.....and your comment means a lot...and I guess you might be enjoying Not Decided.....thanks for that😊 An really really really....I didn't want to sound rude, and I hope I didn't.....I'm sorry if I did.

Originally posted by: Sabrinaa xo

haha...cute partt i cannot
wait till the car rideee...
continue sooon.. 👏 👏 👏

Lol same here, I can't wait to write that out though.......the scenes are playing in my head always.............lol anyway thanks a lot!

Originally posted by: tava

very nice story continue soon 😊

Thanks so much.

Originally posted by: tweetylicious

very cute...plz update soon i love ur story 😳 😃

Thanks.....😊

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Kripa returned her pace to normal as it was no use walking fast as he'd catch up anyway.


While walking they said nothing. Angad decided to break the ice.


Angad (casual tone): What's with you man? Why do you always behave like that?


Kripa stopped and turned her whole self to her right to face him and asked with a raised eyebrow (not in surprise but questioningly) 'Always, huh?' and nodded her head questioningly.


She continued 'Mister, aap mujhe pehle kab (when) milhe hain? Aaj hi toh milhe ho, so on what basis are you saying 'always', huh?'


Without waiting for an answer she continued walking, he followed. He chuckled as he repeated in his mind what she said earlier, in his min he talked to himself while looking at her walking forward 'So she listens to every single word I say, huh? Not bad Angad.'


Angad: Tum saab ke saath aise hi behave harti ho?


She turned took look at him (while walking), she gave him a sweet sarcastic smile 'Nahin, sirf aapke saath hi since you're special, aren't you?' with that she changed her sarcastic smile to an annoyed frown. 'Kya masibat hai yeh?' she asked herself silently (thought to her self so he probably didn't hear).


Angad grinned at her and blinked his eyes, affectionately (pretence) and replied (not sarcastically and he doesn't have any sarcastic expressions, he just wants to play along) 'Oh! I'm touched.'


She turned to glance at him with annoyance in her eyes then rolled her eyes when he smirked.


They reached the escalator, it was the third floor. There were long escalators and short ones, the short ones were to go up one floor, the long ones were to get to the floor above the next one (skip one floor in between). Since it was a big plaza so people weren't really all crowded together at the escalator side, it was pretty empty except for a few people going up or down from time to time.


Kripa went towards the long escalator. Kripa was about to walk on the escalator when he stepped in front of her. She went ahead anyway moving to the right side but he purposely came ahead in front of her there. Then she tried to go to the left side, he moved left in front of her again, blocking her path. Frustrated she again went towards the right side and was about to put her hand on the handrail (you know the rubber handrail on either side of escalators) he moved right and put his hand before, her frustrating her even more. She went for the left side and put her hand on the handrail and was about to take a step forward when he again comes to the left side, in front of her, blocking her way. He turned to look at her expressions. 'Oh boy! These expressions are worth a billion dollars!' he chuckled and wondered to himself. She had had enough, she went for the right side but as like before he blocked her way. 'Now that's the limit!' she screamed in her head. She pushed him ahead and he fell on the escalator but by luck he had got hold of the handrail and managed to save himself from getting any kind of injuries or bruises or else his head was just about 5 inches away from the escalator stair. He was surprised only at the time when he jerked forcefully, that is when Kripa had pushed him suddenly. While the escalator was taking him up steadily, he turned to look at Kripa. Kripa tried her best not to look at him. When a few escalator stairs emerged, she didn't want to stand directly behind him, not after what she'd done then, she walked forward and stood on the single escalator stair while he looked down at her from a few escalators stairs ahead of her. While the escalator was taking both of them upwards, he walked down the few steps which separated her from him. Her heart started beating fast, she tried her best to not look bothered or troubled, somehow she managed but there was a slight hint of being frightened in her eyes. She worriedly, and angry a herself, talked to herself in her head 'Yeh kya maine kiya? ****! I just called for trouble. Main toh isse jaan thi bhi nahin, pata nahin gussa hoi ga ya phir kya. Mujhe toh pata bhi nahin woh gusse mein kya kar sakh tha hai. Oh god please mujhe bachalo. Kripa, tub hi na, dakha (push) deni ki kya zarurat thi. Woh toh intentionally tujhe taag (irritate) kar raha tha aur tune…..Kripa yaar ab toh tu phass gayi. Oh god, just do something na!! Kripa I'm going to kill you if you ever get out of this. Tujhe kya zarurat thi? Kya ZARURAT thi??? Usse dacha deni ki. '


He stepped on the escalator stair on which she was standing and looked at her in her eyes. She looked back at him, she tried looking in his eyes to make sure if it was anger or something else, if she was in trouble or not but she couldn't quite figure it out. She couldn't make out if she wasn't going to be in trouble or not but she tried to stay at her spot firm, she was standing close to her left side of the escalator. He was closing in the little space there was between them. He stopped moving forward when he was close enough and where he thought it was appropriate. Since he was taller than her so when he came close she had to move her eyes slightly up to look at him (she didn't move her head up, only her eyes). There was a space of 4 inches between them only. Too close for strangers.

woooooooooooooooow.i m eagerly waiting 4 the next part

just read last two parts
loved it
plz cont soon

i love ure ff. its so cute and lovable.. sply the lead's bickerings.. amazing!!!

haha..that was great..post the next part!! 😛

nice fan fic........the story seems cool and interesting............can't wait to read more, ur a great writer and ur ideas r one of a kind!
keep up the good work........can't wait to read the next part!
continue soon!!!

Originally posted by: amritafan

woooooooooooooooow.i m eagerly waiting 4 the next part

Lol...I hope it's worth reading, the next part I mean. It took me too long to post that one because I wanted it to be good and I edited it 4 times, not editing like changing stuff but just like making the text better.

Originally posted by: mintfresh

just read last two parts
loved it
plz cont soon

Thx. Hope you like the next part.

Originally posted by: fabremixed

i love ure ff. its so cute and lovable.. sply the lead's bickerings.. amazing!!!

Lol.....thanks😊.

Originally posted by: iamsmart

gr8 part


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sana

Thanks

Originally posted by: Sabrinaa xo

haha..that was great..post the next part!! 😛

Thx. Hope you like the next part too.

Originally posted by: meme25

nice fan fic........the story seems cool and interesting............can't wait to read more, ur a great writer and ur ideas r one of a kind!
keep up the good work........can't wait to read the next part!
continue soon!!!

Hey thanks a lot. Hope the next part is good too.