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Angad: Aur aap ka?


Gayatri: Gayatri Sharma. Aur meri beti ka nam hai, Kripa, Kripa Sharma.


Angad looked at Kripa looking at him with ice cold eyes from the rear-view mirror and said (to Kripa in the mirror) 'Kripa. Umm nice name.' He smiled at her only to see her ignore him again.


'What the hell is wrong with this girl, can't she smile for once. I'm being polite enough, why can she? God she's a girl! Isn't she supposed to be polite and shy? But instead this girl in shalwar kameez (actually it's pajama kameez not those kinds of pajamas in English but the ones which are like trousers but not shalwars-he's a guy, he can barely find the difference between the two) is actually throwing daggers at me!' He thought to himself.


Angad: Aunty kya wakey hi Kripa aapki beti hai?


Kripa was confused and this time she looked at him at his back (his head's back, probably his hair then) and not through any mirrors. Not only Kripa but Gayatri was confused and of course surprise by the question as well.


Gayatri (in a confused tone): Kyun?


Angad: Aap kaafi young lag thi hai aur Kripa itni baari (old-meaning older than what he was expecting her to be, he doesn't mean in any kind of rude/ negative way) hai.


Gayatri gave a hearty laugh. Kripa rolled her eyes at that one which he saw her doing from his rear-view mirror.


Gayatri: Of course meri beti hai.


Gayatri turned her head to look at Kripa with the expression Dekha-Woh-Acha-Ladka-Hai written on her face to which Kripa just gave a dull look.


Gayatri turned back front. Gayatri and Angad had just begun to talk when Gayatri received an SMS from someone on her mobile.


Mom dekha na,
woh hume kisi
aur raaste leja
raha hai. I'm
sure he's up to
no good. Please
do something!!!


Gayatri smiled at that. Kripa could be a 5 years old girl sometimes she wondered.


Gayatri looked around and noticed they were indeed somewhere new.


Gayatri: Angad beta yeh raasta galat nahin?


Angad confused: Kyun? Yeh sahi nahin hai kya?


Gayatri: Hum kabhi bhi is raaste se nahin gaye.


Angad understood the case and replied in a knowing tone.


Angad: Oh. Aunty yeh ek thora chota raasta hai. Aur yahan se ek shortcut bhi le sakh the hai. Mom sirf is raaste se jati hai, un hone kabhi shortcut nahin use kiya. Mujhe lag tha hai aap us lamb-he (long) raaste se jate ho ge. I think at least teen (three) raaste toh hai yahan se us Plaza mein jane kille. Aap ne kaunse raaste se jana hai, us lambhe raaste se ya phir us chote raaste se ya shortcut se.


Gayatri thought about it.


Gayatri: Shortcut se hi theek hai.


Angad: Okay.


Angad kept driving and in between Gayatri and Angad talked.


Kripa was tired of their talking and laughing.


Angad looked at his rear-view mirror when Kripa wasn't looking at him through it. He looked at her through it for a while when suddenly he asked (still looking at the mirror) 'Aunty kya Kripa baat (he looked away from the rear-view mirror and looked at Gayatri and just before he looked away from the rear-view mirror he saw Kripa look at him through the rear-view mirror with annoyed-angry eyes because he had just mentioned her name out of no where to which he chuckled inside) nahin karti hai kya?'


Gayatri smiled: Of course karti hain lekin pata nahin aaj itni chup kyun hai. Kyun Kripa? Baat karte hai na. Angad humari itni help kar raha hai.


Kripa was annoyed by her mother's response. She looked at the rear-view mirror where he was glancing a few times while driving to look at her and her expression where he now saw annoyance and angriness more than before as well. He chuckled inside again because of the expressions in her eyes.


There was no use hiding her anger and annoyance from this guy she concluded since he couldn't be that dumb that he doesn't get the hint that she wants nothing to do with this guy.


Kripa (in a calm tone) through gritted teeth asked with a plastered smile, which was not plastered according to her mother, asked 'How are you?'


Gayatri just felt a little weird with Kripa's odd question but smiled since at least she was not quiet anymore all was normal according to her but Angad got the hint of the sarcasm in her voice with another ingredient: anger, too. He chuckled again inside. He decided to play along and he casually replied.


Angad: Oh I'm great. Haven't been feeling this great in days! And you?


He smirked now looking at Kripa through the rear-view mirror.


Kripa was now more than sure that he was doing this on purpose and this time she glared at him (though the rear-view mirror) and replied through gritted teeth again 'I'm fine!' With that she looked away. He smirked and thought to himself 'This girl must be something.'


5 seconds after Kripa's reply when no one talked anything Angad spoke up 'Kripa you have a beautiful voice.' This time before she could glare at him, Gayatri with a smile turned to look behind at Kripa who forced a smile to just show her mother. After Gayatri turned to look back front again. Kripa looked at him though the car side mirror where she gave him a hard stare to which he smirked. Gayatri's phone started to ring and she attended her call. Angad mouthed Kripa 'My Pleasure.' while looking at her through the car side mirror then smirked when she rolled her eyes again. She thought to herself 'Weirdo. Why on earth does he even bother?'


After about 10 minutes, Kripa began to notice her scary surroundings, they were traveling off the road into the trees, woods it almost looked like a forest or a jungle, but they weren't in either but they were surrounded by tall thick trees which made it all look like they were in a dark forest! She called out 'Mummy!' Gayatri turned to look back at Kripa 'Kya hua?'


Kripa: Mummy yeh….yeh bohut ajeeb jaga hai…hum….


Kripa stopped when she saw a cottage in the woods and she noticed they were heading towards it. Kripa couldn't be any kinder now, this was it.


Kripa began shouting: Mummy, dekha na maine aap ko kaha tha. Strangers aren't to be trusted…


Angad started to feel anger build inside him 'What the hell is wrong with this girl? First she doesn't talk! What talk? She doesn't even smile! Then I'm trying my best to make Gayatri aunty and her comfortable and now this girl says strangers, meaning ME here, are not to be trusted!! What the hell? This girl seriously needs something!' he thought to himself.


Kripa hadn't stopped:…dekha abhi isne hume kidnap karliya hai…


Angad wondered 'Kidnap? Oh god, someone send this girl to a mental asylum.'


Gayatri wondered aloud confused 'Kidnap?'


Kripa went on:……..Mummy please kuch karo na, dekho woh hume us cottage mein lekar jar aha hai phir hume lock karde ga. Mummy please…


Angad saw the cottage and began to laugh as if someone had just told him the funniest joke ever. He now understood the problem, HER problem from the beginning and his anger subsided. He pointed out the cottage for Gayatri to see to which she was a little surprised to see there.


Angad told Gayatri, Kripa didn't hear since she was to busy being terrified, 'Aunty yeh bas ek chota cottage hai. No one lives there. Jo log yahan se guzar the hai kabhi woh is cottage mein thori daer rest karne chale jate hai.'


Gayatri nodded understandingly. She turned to look back at a restless Kripa and wondered 'Yeh ladki bhi na, too much novels and movies have given her silly imaginations.'


Gayatri (in a calm-realistic tone): Kripa, Angad kuch nahin aisa kar raha. Yeh cottage bas raaste mein agaya hai us ka yeh to nahin matlab Angad kidnap kar raha hai.


Kripa: Mummy lekin dekho toh….


Gayatri cut her calmly: Kripa, Angad humari kitni madat kar raha hai aur tum kaise uske baare (about him) mein soch rahi ho. Kripa, aaj se horror movies or novels bun (close/ no more).


Gayatri made her final statement but Kripa was still getting ideas.


They were nearing the cottage which Angad was purposely doing to scare Kripa now. He looked at her through his car side mirror and chuckled to himself inside.


They neared the cottage; Kripa was getting more ideas, near…..near…..near……WHAT???


They passed the cottage right beside them. Angad looked at Kripa, in the car side mirror, who looked more disappointed than relieved. But slowly she relaxed and sat back in her seat quietly, Gayatri turned to look at Kripa 'Dekha Kripa. Tum bhi na.'


Kripa mumbled to herself but all heard it 'Mujhe kya pata tha.'


Gayatri and Angad engaged in a conversation. Angad sometimes looked at Kripa through his rear-view mirror and sometimes through the car side mirror. She hadn't once looked up or glare at him. He smiled a few times when looking at her. Soon enough they were on one of the main roads where there was too much traffic.


They stopped at a traffic light. Angad began to adjust his rear-view mirror. Which brought up Kripa's attention again. She was angry with him for purposely making her scared. She glared at him though his rear-view mirror. He adjusted the rear-view mirror so that he could see her eyes only. When she noticed that she made a mental note not to look at him from there any more.


Angad started driving the car when the light was green but soon enough there was another traffic light. Before they knew it, they were stuck in a traffic jam.


Gayatri announced: Traffic jam!


Kripa became excited but when she remembered where she was she cursed mentally.


Gayatri told Angad: Kripa ko traffic jam bohut pasand hai. Hamesha woh upset ho jati hai jab kisi din woh kisi traffic jam mein phas (stuck) na gayi ho.


Gayatri turned to look at Kripa: Tum khush toh ho gayi ho gi na ab. Traffic jam mein phas gaye hai.


Kripa gave a small smile to her mother.


Gayatri's phone rang and she attended the call. This time it was her husband, Surya.


Angad looked at his rear-view mirror where he saw Kripa looking out the window. 'Weird girl's got weird taste. Nice combination-unique that is!' he thought to himself 'But sweet.' he added.


Angad honked twice just like almost everyone was doing. At the sudden loud noise Kripa jerked, kind of scared at the weird loud noise from the car in which she was sitting. Angad laughed silently at making Kripa scared again but unknowingly this time. Kripa caught him doing that through the car side mirror where he had seen her get scared, she ignored him. He laughed to himself silently then asked Kripa looking at her through his rear-view mirror this time 'You like long drives?' Kripa looked at him though the rear-view mirror with a questioning look. He then said 'You like traffic jams so I thought maybe you like long drives too, do you?' Kripa turned away to look outside and said in a completely annoyed tone but not loud enough for her mother to catch the rudeness 'Yah!'


Gayatri had just ended her call and joined in the almost silent conversation 'Angad tum soch bhi nahin sakh the isse kis tarha ki long drives pasand hai. Long drives ka matlab at least do (two) ghante gari mein bethe ke drive karte jao, chaye koi apne ghar ke hazar (thousand) chakar kyun na laga le.'


Both Gayatri and Angad laughed at that. Angad looked up at his rear-view mirror to see Kripa's expressions but she wasn't bothered.


Gayatri turned a little business-like: Kripa?


Kripa turned to look at her mother: Hhmmm……kya?


Gayatri: Kripa tumhare papa ka phone aya tha aur unho ne kaha tha ke mujhe office jana hai do (two) ghatoon (hours) mein. Toh mein tumhare saath thori daer shopping karloon gi baki ki tum khood kar lena aur ek aur baat, shopping ke baad tum taxi lekar ghar chali jana, theek hai?


Kripa: Okay.


Angad: Aunty aap office kaise jao ge. Mein chordoon? Agar aap chati hai.
Gayatri smiled at Angad: Nahin, main theek ho. Kripa ke papa mujhe pick up karle ge.


Angad: Oh okay, aur Kripa? Mein usse ghar chord sakh tha hoon. If you want.


Gayatri thought about it for a while but before she could come to a conclusion Kripa spoke up 'Mummy mein taxi le kar chali jao gi…' she looked at him through his rear-view mirror but he wasn't all that visible there after the adjustment he did to it, it had been hard to see him I the mirror the previous time too. She went on in an innocent, caring and kind tone in which in between she hinted him that she didn't totally enjoyed his idea with her bits of sarcasm '…inhe koi takleef karne ki koi zaroorat nahin hai. Inhe bhi koi kaam hoga kyun nahin?' She ended with a smile while glaring at him through his rear-view mirror. He smirked. Gayatri then spoke 'Haan beta tumhe koi takleef karne ki koi zaroorat nahin hai. Tumhe bhi toh koi kam hoga na, nahin?' Kripa gave a triumph smile indicating she won this battle. Angad blinked his eyes innocently at her through the rear-view mirror when he knew that Gayatri wasn't looking his way 'Actually I'm free today. Mujhe aaj aur koi kam nahin. Toh main soch raha tha ke mein kisi ke aaj kam kyun na ajao.'


Gayatri thought deeply for a while whereas Angad and Kripa were playing battles with their eyes, she glared at him while he blinked his eyes innocently 'Haan toh phir theek hai, Kripa tum Angad ke saath ghar chali jana.' Gayatri began to write the address for Angad on a piece of paper. Angad winked at Kripa through the rear-view mirror, she looked away and cursed her day. This traffic jam was lasting more than it should have. Kripa couldn't even protest to let her just go by taxi back home after shopping.


Gayatri gave the address to Angad. He kept it in his shirt pocket.


Gayatri: Lekin beta tum itni daer tak kya karo ge.


Kripa began to have hope; he sensed that too without looking at the mirrors, it was pretty obvious to him. He smirked and replied shattering her hopes again 'Aap dono ke sath shopping. If you don't mind?'

Edited by Shazia_haya - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hahahah kripa like traffic jam 😆 😆
she's so weird 😆
gr8 part


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Posted: 18 years ago
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it is superbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb.i loved it
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Posted: 18 years ago
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nice part
kripa is so funny and weird at the same time
loved it
plz cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: iamsmart

hahahah kripa like traffic jam 😆 😆
she's so weird 😆
gr8 part


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Thanks😊 Hope you like the next part.

Originally posted by: amritafan

it is superbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbbb.i loved it

Aaawwww.....thanks😊

Originally posted by: Happiness**

wow that was sooo goood'

plz continue soon 😛 😛 😛

Thanks, hope the next part's up to your taste.😊

Originally posted by: mintfresh

nice part
kripa is so funny and weird at the same time
loved it
plz cont soon

Lol....thanks, the next part I'll post tonight if I get a few more.....actually one more comment, if I don't then I'll post it tomorrow.😊

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Originally posted by: arooj124

ooooooooo awesome fanfic!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! 👏

Thx...well I guess I can post a part now😉!

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Gayatri smiled: Of course we don't mind, do we Kripa?


Her mother looked back at Kripa to see what her response was; she was pleased to see Kripa didn't object in any way, which meant she agreed.


Kripa smiled at her mother but inside, her head was burning with rage 'Can this day be anymore worse?'


Soon after 40 minutes they reached River Bay Plaza. It was an enormously big plaza. Angad parked the car in the parking lot which was in the basement, two levels down the ground floor of the plaza. All 3 got off. Angad's car had a mini remote control too along with the car keys. When they got off he used the mini remote control to make sure his car was locked. Then he tested al the doors if they were really locked or not. They were.


They all walked towards the lift in the parking lot, got in and got out on the ground floor of the plaza. All the while Kripa had avoided looking at him but she knew he'd been smirking all the way which was oblivious to her mother and it was pretty obvious to her that the smirk was meant for her. He was enjoying his victory. They hadn't started shopping when Kripa realized why all they way she'd been feeling awkward, she knew that hadn't to do with Angad but she couldn't figure out what was it only then she realized her purse had been left in the car.


Kripa screamed to herself in her head 'Oh ****! My purse!'


Kripa hurriedly walked towards her mother, who was a few steps ahead.


Kripa (in a hurrying tone): Mummy, main apna purse gari mein bhool ayi hoon.


Gayatri sighed: Kripa tu bhi na.


She turned back to call Angad, who was behind them looking at a shop window.


Gayatri: Angad?


Angad turned to look at Gayatri and walked towards the women.


Angad: Kya hua?


Gayatri: Angad Kripa ka purse tumhari gari mein re (left) gaya hai. Woh zaara…


Kripa interrupted 'Mein khood le aao gi.'


Gayatri turned to look at Kripa 'Lekin tumhare paas gari ki chabi (key) toh nahin hai na.


Kripa thought to herself 'Lekin woh chabi toh de (give) sakh tha hai na!'


Gayatri continued, she turned to look at Angad, knowing Kripa would want to get her purse herself but it'd be rude if she took the keys from Angad and went over to his car without him 'Tum aur Kripa dono jao aur Kripa ka purse le ana. Mein top floor mein jati hoon. Tum dono ajana theek hai.'


Both the youngsters nodded in agreement. When Gayatri turned to go, Kripa looked at him with a sour expression and all he did was smirk at her again, he knew that Kripa wasn't enjoying the opportunity to be with him alone.


Angad looked at Kripa and gestured with his hands like as if he was allowing a queen to enter a room 'Chale?' He didn't wait for her to go and started walking towards the lift. Kripa was about to leave when Gayatri called her back 'Kripa, sun.'


Kripa turned back to look at her mother who had a kindly-serious expression.


Gayatri: Kripa, be polite. Woh acha ladka hai. Main toh yeh kaho gi ke tum usse sorry boldo lekin agar tum nahin bhol na chati, theek hai, lekin ab kuch rude mat karma. Theek hai beta?


She patted Kripa's head while Kripa nodded 'Theek hai.'


Kripa turned to go to the lift and Gayatri turned to go to the escalator.


When Kripa arrived at the lift lobby, she saw him leaning on the wall, his back facing the wall, next to the only lift in the lobby. He had his eyes closed and was facing towards the ceiling.


She sighed tiredly. Was this a dream? In reality this would be the worst day of her life, breaking all records!


Angad opened his eyes slowly and faced straight when he felt someone's presence. He smirked when he saw her irritating her even more. Her expressions said it all but she didn't speak a word.


He pressed the lift button next to him then stood straight facing the lift door, his back facing Kripa who was behind him.


Kripa looked at his back annoyed then turned to look somewhere else.


Angad (not turning back): Tum itni chup kyun reh rahi ho? Aunty toh keh rahi thi ke tum kabhi chup rehti hi nahin.


She turned to look at him (his head (the backside meaning she only saw his hair, as that was what was facing her)) 'You could've given me the key? I could bring my purse myself!'


He turned his head sideway 'You could do the same: let me get you your purse alone!'


He turned back to see her and smirked. She snapped right away 'I don't trust people on the first day I meet!'


He turned back facing the lift 'I can say the same.'


He chuckled when he felt she began to fume with rage.


(Inside she knew he could be trusted since her mother didn't have the slightest bit doubt about him and she couldn't be wrong but Kripa was angry! She also knew that he didn't mean it but had just said it. He trusted her mother, she knew, but in that way he knew that she, Kripa, can be trusted but anyway he just said it.


He knew it as well that she's just angry that's why she said it since the way she and her mother are, she'd believe in what her mother judge or say but she was angry at the moment, still he knew that deep inside she knew he could be trusted but just didn't want to show, just like him. Deep inside he too knew that she could've been trusted since her mother was nice, kind, honest and all, Kripa wouldn't be any different but he had just said it…to fume her.


Both knew they could be trusted but didn't show it, both also knew the other knew that they both could trust each other since Kripa's mother already trusted Angad and she trusted her daughter, Kripa, the same.)


The lift door opened and they both went in. He pressed the button to the parking lot. They both stood on either side of the lift, right opposite each other. He stared at her to irritate her, his smirk never leaving his face. She looked on the other side irritated. The door opened, he again gestured her to go first, without speaking anything this time, she was about to walk out of the lift, when he went out she wanted to strangle him so badly. He just chuckled.


They were walking towards his car, him ahead and she was behind him a few steps.


While walking Kripa began to wonder about the day's events.


She realized that how weird she had been acting today. No matter what happened she couldn't have behaved that way but why did she today, she pondered. She let out a small laugh to herself; it was funny the way she had reacted. Somewhere she knew she made a mistake, after all maybe Angad's a good guy, no wonder her mother was friendly with him, and she just got hot-tempered and reacted rudely, very rudely indeed. She shouldn't have behaved like that even if she was annoyed. She just met him today! And that too when he was helping, her mother and her, out. She then thought about what her mother said about saying sorry. There was no way she was apologizing, he wasn't acting innocent too, but she would say thank you she thought.


They reached his car and he unlocked the door. He turned back to see Kripa, he found her expressions had softened a bit, her anger had subsided a little 'What's she up to now?' he wondered.


He opened the door for her. She looked at him confused.


Angad: Get your purse fast.


Kripa, under her breathe, muttered 'You could get it as well!'


Angad had heard it, he smirked and said 'I thought you didn't trust me!' while she got her purse from inside.


When she came out she was about to say 'You couldn't have done anything in front of me, could you?' (Meaning steal something or do any kind of damage and all) but instead she tried to remain calm. He locked the door and make sure all the doors were locked just like before.


To his surprise she hadn't answered him back this time, she was acting unusually weird considering the way she'd been acting a few moments and hours back.


Anyway he didn't say anything. He started walking back when he noticed she was still standing there. He walked back towards her.


Angad (a little annoyed): Ab kya hua, MaDam?


He emphasized on the 'madam'.


She looked at him and started to speak hesitating at first and later she started to blabber but he could still understand what she was speaking 'I…I actually…maine jo gari mein kiya…' her eyes seemed to dart from place to place, she didn't want to face him '…I shouldn't have been…mujge pata nahin kyun…but…lekin main…' He understood where she was getting to so he replied with the smirk which was partially a smile now 'It's okay. You don't have to be sorry…'


She looked at him straightaway, confused at first then later it drawn on her that he thought she was trying to say sorry. Sorry?


The anger seeped back in her 'Look mister, I wasn't saying sorry nor do I intend to say it! I was just going to say 'thank you' for giving us a lift. I knew that the way I behaved was unusually rude of me but now I don't think of it that way anymore. I think I was right the way I thought about you all along! But still there's no way I was going to say 'sorry' and now I guess no way I'm saying 'thank you' as well!'


With that she started to walk away angrily, he was annoyed yet calm about the way this girl was behaving but he didn't do anything. He just followed her with anger burning inside him which was controlled since he wasn't that angry though.


They reached the lift lobby, Kripa pressed the button.


'Kya basibat hai yeh, itna time kyun laga rahi hai!' Kripa thought to herself impatiently with anger, the lift was taking too long to come.


He stood directly behind her, staring at her intensely and thinking angrily to himself 'Isse ek din bhi nahin hua mujhe jaane hu-ae or yeh iss tarha behave kar rahi hai??? This girl seriously NEEDS something. If she behaves like that (meaning if Kripa behaves this way when they barely even know each other since the way she's behaving is supposed to be between people who know each other for at least a certain period of time but in this case they barely know each other and she's behaving angrily and with attitude with him as if they know each other-hope it's not confusing) I'll give her the same thing back.'


Then with a smirk he thought to himself 'After all our very famous Newton's third law of motion states that 'every action has an equal and opposite reaction'.'


The lift door open, Kripa angrily went inside and quickly pressed the button to the top floor and then the closing door button in the hope of the door closing before he enters. But she knew it wasn't possible since he was right behind her, it was silly of her to hope for it even still she had thought it would be a miracle if it happened. If a hopeless hope actually became true, of course it'd be a miracle!


She stood where he had stood when they were previously in the lift. Same with him (he stood where she'd been standing when they came down). When the door closed he went to her and stood directly in front of her, annoyed by his actions she tried to move but he hold her wrist and held her back with a firm grip. He then put both his hands on either side of her shoulders on the wall. He looked at her in the eye. Her eyes darted everywhere except anywhere on him. Then she looked at him in the eye and quickly moved her gaze else where.


He came closer to her, just inches away, when he spoke with a small rage in his eyes 'Tum samjh thi kya ho apne aap ke bare mein. You say something and I'll listen. That's too old-fashioned Miss Kripa Sharma. If I don't reply it doesn't mean I can't or I won't. Beware of Angad Khanna.'


Kripa had been a little frightened when he'd come so close, just 3 inches away, but when he said that last line she couldn't help but roll her eyes. Just at that time the lift door opened and two girls in their teens entered from the second floor. They pressed the button to the fourth floor and stood at the back corner of the lift giggling.


Angad and Kripa could hardly hear what they were giggling about but they both know that was due to their positions. That was confirmed when one of the girls spoke a little loudly in a whisper to her friend which they both heard as well. That's when Kripa turned to look in his eyes with rage, but his eyes were looking at her with……a smirk. 'Gosh, he smirks with his eyes as well! Doesn't he have something better to do?' she thought annoyed.


Girl: Gosh that's so cute. Damn romantic yaar, especially in a lift! Lucky couple.


Angad hadn't moved even when the girls had entered which irritated Kripa more.


When the girls went, Kripa quickly pressed the close button so that no one sees them in that position. Then she put both her hands on either side of his shoulders and pushed him with all the force she could muster. He had hardly moved back. Too strong she thought but at least she managed to move him out of her way. The lift door opened, Kripa quickly got out but was held back. Angad was still inside the lift and didn't make any move to come out either. She turned back to see what the problem was. But the first thing she saw was Angad grinning, irritated she looked down and saw her dupatta (the scarf with Indian/ Pakistani suits for ladies) stuck in one of the bars in the lift (you know in some lift's walls there are bars on the other 3 side and on the fourth side there isn't any bar since a door is there). She was about to move back to take it out when he made his move to get it out for her. She was still raged; she looked at him angrily then moved her eyes away and let him 'help' her. He had untangled the dupatta from the lift bar already but was holding it. When she noticed that she looked at him with a raised eyebrow. She held out her hand and demanded 'Dupatta?'


He gave her a coy smile 'Let's make a deal. Say 'thank you'?' he stated with a questioning raised eyebrow. She rolled her eyes. She dropped her hand and folded her arms across her chest.


He smirked 'Okay if not that, then what about 'sorry'?'


Irritated she looked at him and asked 'What makes you think I'll say it?'


Without waiting for the answer she demanded again 'Are you giving or not?'


'Say 'yes' to the deal then 'yes', say 'no' then 'no'.' Angad smiled.


Kripa let out a sign 'What the hell's wro…' she got interrupted by some force acting on her from either side '…ouch…what the?...ouch…' she jumped back in the lift as the lift doors were closing automatically. She had been standing right in the middle of the doors where she could've been sandwiched by the lift doors from either side. Unfortunately Angad hadn't been standing far enough because when she hastily jumped in she had to lay both her hands on either side of his shoulders as there wasn't room for her to go left or right side of the lift since he had blocked the front as he'd been standing just a feet away from the doors.


When she had jumped in the lift all of a sudden Angad was surprised at first since he wasn't expecting such a thing to happen nor was he expecting her hands to get hold of his shoulders for support or anything 'Wow…wow what was that?' (not indicating Kripa's hands on his shoulders and all) he was just too lost at the sudden turn of events. Kripa, had forgotten what had been happening before the lift doors closed in on her, naturally went 'Oh…I'm so sorry.' Angad had been surprised at the incident as well and had gone lost for some while at the sudden rush of reactions but when she said 'sorry' all came back to him, he smirked. Kripa had let go of him while she said that. He seemed to notice that she hadn't realized she'd said it. She looked up only to find the lift was going down to some other floor, she got annoyed and then she remembered her dupatta. She looked at him and saw the dupatta was still in his hands. She looked at him, he was smirking more than ever. She sensed something wrong; she went over the past few moments and wondered 'Ab issi kya hua?...' she felt awkward when she remembered how she jumped in the lift and right away hold his shoulders from either side for support (try to imagine that she had hold him from <slightly> sideway) then it hit her, out of the situation she'd said 'sorry'! Naturally! She hadn't noticed as it was natural of her to say sorry when something small (and/ or accidental) happened.


He saw the realization drawn on her, he held the dupatta high above her head then let go of it in front of her eyes. (Remember one end of the dupatta was still on Kripa's shoulder and the other end had been in Angad's hands, he hadn't gotten the whole dupatta.) Kripa glared at him while she set her dupatta 'You know I didn't mean it to say to YOU!'


Angad, too happy with himself, said with his trademark smirk 'Either way, you said it!'


Kripa fumed. They were back to where they were standing when they had been going down the lift to the parking lot. Kripa had her arms folded across her chest. When the door opened, before other people could enter in, Kripa went out startling Angad. He just followed her out calling out 'Kripa, yeh top floor nahin hai.' Kripa called back while still walking ahead fast 'I don't care, I can use the escalators!'


He sighed tiredly 'This girl, man!' and just went forward and walked with her towards the escalators.




<Hey remember for past, present and future references that '****' isn't the word starting with 'f' and I don't intend to ever use it for any of my characters in any of my fanfics as I feel really awkward saying the word myself but mainly it'll just mean the one starting with 's'. I know it's weird I'm explaining this for nothing but I just want you to know it's just not the one starting with the letter 'f'.>

Edited by Shazia_haya - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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it was cool plzzz continue soon
cant wait for the next update

thnx for the wonderful ff



afshaa
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Posted: 18 years ago
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kripa's like priety zinta from kal ho na ho
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Posted: 18 years ago
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haha...cute partt i cannot
wait till the car rideee...
continue sooon.. 👏 👏 👏

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