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Posted: 18 years ago
Great part and awesome fanfic. This fanfic made me Laugh and made me cry, and im very sad that its over. I love the epilogue, it was just so cute. And typicall Angad always wants to make love! Aryan sounds so CUTE!
thanks for this ff Neha!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey neha great ending. wonderful part i thought that she will get misscariage but the story turned new point thank god. i love this story very much but also sad that its ended. good job neha.


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Posted: 18 years ago
awwwww, im sad its over. but it was SO good. the end was cute. btw, i love da name aryAN. so prithvi wasnt all dat bad after all. i waz super shocked wen he said 3 yrs. i waz lyke holy crap dude!!!!

i thot they were gonna get divorced and she waz gonna miscarry and it waz gonna end all sad. but the end waz great....

i hope u write sum more stuff soon.....

<3 kiran
E> GA <3
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Posted: 18 years ago

Ahem.. the first thing I noticed is the last part and the eexclamation mark after that.. wats up with that? Wat happened to my epilogue

WAT!! She didn't tell angad for 5 months?? That she was pregnant?? R u kidding me? Whoa… that's something.. I cant imagine some1 hiding it for so long.. I mean they are together.. cant he tell? U know at I mean? Lol

Dude.. I still cant get over the fact that she didn't tell the man. I like the way u described about the baby girl and boy.. something so natural that every parent does..

LMAO!! The cooking part is the best in this fanfic… reminds me of u and well mayb the future I mite get to c.. hehe.. see I m gonna say sry rite now.. not even being cruel.. its too funny..

Aww it burned.. its ok.. I hope angad eats it anyway.. that wud be sweet of him..

LOL.. I like how she jumped in the shower..

Finally I was wondering why angad wasn't noticing her gaining weight..

Ok I kno she probably settled things with prithvi and told him she is pregnant.. and he was prob happy for her.. but now this is very amusing instead of sad… how angad just packs her suitcase for her and she is watching.. its too calm..

WTH!! Now I m panicking.. she actually left??? I thought she wud actually tell him and not leave.. oh o.. not good..

O LORD!! The dumbass.. haha.. ok.. I love how laura came in and put some sense into his head!! Ahh finally he is going over..

O MAN! Prithvi was dying?? Na ah? I wonder wats up wit this!

"What the hell am I doing? What the hell are you doing?" You look so tired. So beautiful.
"I'm living my life." You look so sad. So handsome. OMG!! And u say u cant write no more. U kidding? That was nice.. lol.. it made me smile how u wrote that.. they curse a min..worry and then say they look good.. lol… proves they love each other no matter wat the look like.. cute..

Ok I m gonna take it as a blooper that u said she was five months pregnant when she is three.. that makes more sense neway.. ok I m takin it in now..

Awwww.. that is just so cute.. how she said she cudnt be mad at him.. so sweeeett..

WHAT!! Angad loved her all this time?? WOW!! I gotta leave and eat man… this is too damn interesting.. I didn't expect ne of this!

Wow.. prithvi made a plan like that? Impressing.. did he actually fall in love with her?

O man.. so that's what the scar is for.. I wud have liked it in details better… let me c if u give it..

Hmm.. one year later.. yay.. they had the baby.. and here I was fussin over no epilogue.. lol…

LOL.. kripa is so cool in this ff man.. haha she emotionally blackmails him to get Aryan.. btw.. I like the name..

NINE months?? Whoa.. lol.. poor them

Ahh.. awesome part.. AND epilogue.. loved it.. this was an awesome ff! cant wait for my round 2 of it.. lol.. I m gonna have to do wit just that soon enough.. k slick.. I m gonna talk to u later.. LOL.. kiddin.. but I will catch ya laters..

Luv ya

Mansi

Edited by mansi1219 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
oh its finished 😕 😕
lovely part....
what angad luved her for 3 years.... whats wrong with him? how dare that stupid angad doubt kripa after all she was the first to accept the fact that they love each other... laura is very sweet lady... in a matter of 30 min she made angad to go to kripa 😆
wow prithvi is some sort of surprise package.... interesting... 😳 😳
y can't this kripa fight with angad as usual.... understood she changed a lot... 😛 😛
for a sec i felt as if kripa will undergo miscarriage... then i remembered u telling there is only one part remaining then i felt that such things are not gonna happen... 😛 😛
i was shocked at the epilogue... they dint make love for nine months.... unbelivable.... that tooo kripa and angad... 😳
anyways.... thanx for such a nice ff.... amazing... absolutely fabulous.... 👏
hope to see u soon... 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
amazing loved the end great work incredible how things workout at the end
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Posted: 18 years ago
it was another gr8 story of urs but u did not mention wat was d conversation b/w A n sonya dat changed his behaviour a little 2wards K (k had thought abt dis wen he said dat he met sonya) but K shd hv atleast told A abt her talk wid p instead of leaving home n also abt her pregnancy instead of torturing both of dem like dis but m glad dey were 2gether in d end wid their li'll aryan n hope u dont stop wrting coz u r just a superb writer so plzzzzz keep writing 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
as usual fantastic. i luved da ending. Keep up da good work.
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Posted: 18 years ago
superb mindblowing but i did understand in the starting of the part u wrote that she was 5 mnth pregnant.... i thought it could very noticible but then when a-k broke up u wrote she was three month ....
well great part and ending anyway
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Posted: 18 years ago
I liked this FF, short and sweet. Prithvi turned out to be a chupa rustam! Such planning! But then why did he advance on Kripa in the studio (when Angad sent him to the hospital?) Anyway, great job!

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