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Posted: 18 years ago
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Hey,
Im glad thatKripa's character is really different from your other ffs. She definitely cries less. Im glad she doesnt keep crying over Prithvi. And she already forgot her love for Prithvi and has feelings for Angad...im not complaining.
Aww...Angad is soooo sweet. I loved this part. This is one of my favourite parts from all you ff. Kripa needs to start being nice to Angad in return. Shes not that bad right now, but its sad when Angad thinks shes uding him.

Aanchal
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: pal89711

awesome part..... i read th efirst part then i was waitin baldly 4 u to put the second part part.............it was really sweet the way angad was trying to make kripa smile but she got mad..........then the flowers,shoesn also the dinner...............hope they get closer to each other.....continue soon......as.............possible .. can't wait 2 read the next part


I'm glad you like the different plans he's making for her!

Originally posted by: berkeleygirl818

ok, i COMPLETELY nd TOTALLY loved the prt, it was PERFECT!!! cute,
sexy, funny nd a teensy bit sad!!! wht is up with Angad nd smoking, i
hope Kripa makes him quit!!! smoking is terrible, nd it mite kill him bfore
Kripa mite get a chance to!!! lol... i LOVED how AK handled themselves
infront of Prithvi!!! it was cute!!! but i still dont get why Prithvi is jealous!!!
he was the one who left her!!! u know they need to quit telling themselves
tht they r lusting each other nd they need to accept tht they r actually
falling in love with each other!!! lol... left the house barefooted??? lmao...
Angad delivering the shoes before she got there was cute!!! nd the whole
pink roses, candles, nd a Tiffany's bracelet was schooo cuteeee!!! it has
got to be the perfect way to apologize to ur wife!!! lol... Aaron is just
hilarious!!! 'Want some tips on seducing men?' roflmfao... nd again, i still
dont get why Prithvi is worried if he knows wht Kripa's fav flowers r??? he
really needs to get his priorities straight!!! lol... first he runs off nd now
he is jealous!!! wht a confused person!!! lol... nd Angad giving Kripa's butt
a friendly pat, nd pulling her on his lap prt was soooo cute!!! i cud
visualize the whole scene!!! lol... ooohhh, sum1's jealous & possesive!!!
lol... poor Angad, he got hit with a phone, nd heels!!! ouch! lol... tht was
funny!!! ur an amazing writer hun, nd u write funny scenes very well too!!!
how do u do it, i seriously envy it!!! lol... Summer School, ughhh!!! stinks,
sry!!! i like the fact this will be a short nd schweet FF!!! anywazzz, i am
gonna stop babbling, i just had chocolate nd am a tad bit hyper, lol...
continue soon!!!


Haha… we'll That's Prithvi for you, what can I say? I can't let people love him too miuch ever! :P Glad you liked th FF… I don't have much more to say! I'm trying my best to make it funnier, but I never really write comedy… Im glad its coming around fine… and they ARE lusting over each other! Man, if I make them lust for each other next time, I'm gonna do better job of it!

Originally posted by: ~*Milly*~

great part hehe shes real good at not knowing and getting him to fall for her or well "lusting" over her anyways great part the stories good is prithvi gonna do something well enough of me comtinue soon


Hehe.. Continue reading.

Originally posted by: sahr_8

omg sexc part
i love angad i wanna touch his body
can i ask u sommething...wat does slick mean????
woow short and sweet FF hehe
cont soon



Well hun, you're not allowed to! ;) Slick means done or able to do things with great skill and apparently effortlessly…. For Angad I'd say it means smooth or refined in manners or behavior… that's the way he is!

Originally posted by: mansi1219

LOL.. she learned to cook.. but burning came as gift!! LMAO!! Hey… I got the same gift so hush!

Hmm.. so Angad was accused of cheatin? And duded.. ew Kripa.. y wud she go for a Married guy.. Yeah… stupid him! Cuz it's a lie! Lol that's why she would go for a married guy…

Hahah.. she started takin her clothes off like that.. LOL
Sounds like me! I take my cloths off anywhere in the house… its sad…
Ahh.. I liked how they acted with prithvi! Now they seem like good friends to me.. I mean Angad and Kripa.. eventhou they don't kno each other much..
They will soon! It gets better and better

Aha.. they are both getting attracted! Yippee!!
Of course… and rite now its meant to be strictly lust, obviously im not doing a good job of it and it seems like they are in love!
Woo hoo he wants to date his wife!! Excellent!
Hehe…. Yeah he does! I think that's fun… to date ur wife!
HAH! Angad comes in knowing her fav roses and prithvi is sitting there thinking about which color it was!!
lol…. Yeah, I loved that too! :P
LMAO… I love this ff so far.. its hilarious!
Thank god! For a change….
Angad in this ff amuses me!
How???
Hahahaha.. is this his plan??? The girl callin him about a date??
No… Amanda is just a friend
Awesome part! Nicely written.. god they aer both slowly falling in love.. hmm.. I wanna c how it happens finally.. did I tell u how I love their little fights? Aww Kripa is soo touchy.. its kinda cute..
Told me tooooo many times, love.
Ok well.. cant wait to read the next part.. o and nice descriptions with the piano and movie and everything!
THANK YOU!
Luv ya
Mansi




Originally posted by: erier101

Fabb part!!! I'm lovin this ff!! Its different from all your other ones, but dont ask which one I like better! lol! cuz thats gonna put me into a huge dilemma!
Yeahhhhh…. That's good to hear!
KK, so the part was fab like I said beforeee. Loved the whole Prithvi thing, the roses, and the room decorating and the Tiffany bracelet . Prithvi's jealousy and forgetting Kripa's fave flowers was hilarious!! Lovedd it!! I'm loving their little hurting game (lol am so evil) its so cute when they try to make it up with whatever. lol.
Hehe… I love guys jealous… good or bad!
Oho Angad lusting after his wife! lmao! he shud seriously start dating her! Cont Soon!!
Lollllzzz…. Yeah! It's lust! Not love… not yet
**P.S- Is she gonna make him stop smoking those cigars, I cant take it, poor guy is killing himself before his wife does it LOLZ…. Soon! Soon…




Originally posted by: sweetmittal


hey neha wonderful part like always. i feel sorry for angad and kripa i hope they fall in love soon. i really want to know what happen to angad marriage and how did it broke. well its good because only kripa can be his wife
well anyways continue soon.

mittal


You'll know the whats and hows and when soon!

Originally posted by: sujalangad_rock

nice part neha... i hope AK fall in love soon...
i wanted 2 clear some facts...
1. angad & his wife got divorced becoz of a miscarriage. That will be cleared soon!
2. angad never wants any1 2 be near him becoz of this. Hmmm… not exactly… u'll know soon
3. he is attracted 2wards kripa.. Yeah…. He's lusting for her
4. kripa is falling 4 angad??? He's falling for his friendship more… not love just yet!



Originally posted by: vidhi_rocks

hey.....that was an awesome and a truly long part..................and i hope kripa stops being so short tempered...lokk she just hurted angad........hehehe....but it was a fabulous part and i loved the way kripa replied back to prithvi for tht scene change one.....too good


But, she's cute short tempered! Lol… I'm glad you liked it!

Originally posted by: Shazia_haya

that was awesome...totally brilliant...well if I get to reda 7 more parts....that long....oh how am I gonna enjoy.......it'll be enough to digest it all...do continue soon.....n thx for an awesome part...


Yeahhh… the parts are gonna be longer cuz each part will be covering a month's time!

Originally posted by: Bolly*_Crazed

great part, i love how you decribe the characters in your story's especially angad.csoon


Thanks love… I wanted him to be different from the old ones

Originally posted by: 1985

Hey,
Im glad thatKripa's character is really different from your other ffs. She definitely cries less. Im glad she doesnt keep crying over Prithvi. And she already forgot her love for Prithvi and has feelings for Angad...im not complaining.
Aww...Angad is soooo sweet. I loved this part. This is one of my favourite parts from all you ff. Kripa needs to start being nice to Angad in return. Shes not that bad right now, but its sad when Angad thinks shes uding him.

Aanchal


LOLLLL… She cried less… hehe Hmm… she's too proud to cry over Prithvi again. Lol… haha… yeah I know ur not complainting! :P Lol… well, she did start of with using him in the start. She got married to make Prithvi jealous… they both knew that!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#93

sorry for the late reply
to start with it was a super long part...and i loved it
kripa knows lil bit about angad'd marrige and hope angad will open himself in front of her soon as he wanted to do in today's part
Awwww angad his such a sweet heart...he's perfect to be a husband.he is very smart and knows very well how to make up with his wife. 😳😳
kripa was throwing things at him...deciding to beat angad with her shoes...thanking god as they came in different cars...grabbing angad's collar...this girl has got a real bad temper...lol i was laughing my heads off 😆😆

she truly gave angad a trip to hell hope she gets one very soon😉
hope they fell in love soon
cont soon...i m waiting 👏 👏 👏

as ever

amneet

Edited by amneet89 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: amneet89

sorry for the late reply Its okay! Better late than never...
to start with it was a super long part...and i loved it Thanks!
kripa knows lil bit about angad'd marrige and hope angad will open himself in front of her soon as he wanted to do in today's part Yeah... soon! :P
Awwww angad his such a sweet heart...he's perfect to be a husband.he is very smart and knows very well how to make up with his wife. 😳😳 Hehe.. only if guys would be like that in real life
kripa was throwing things at him...deciding to beat angad with her shoes...thanking god as they came in different cars...grabbing angad's collar...this girl has got a real bad temperIt's diff from all the FF's! hehe
. ...lol i was laughing my heads off 😆😆 That a good change in my ff's!

she truly gave angad a trip to hell hope she gets one very soon😉
hope they fell in love soon Hehe... doesn't she in every FF in some way! I'll cont on Either tomorrow or thursday!
cont soon...i m waiting 👏 👏 👏

as ever

amneet

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Posted: 18 years ago
#95
great part neha 👏

awww they aree sooo falling inluv wit each other
itz so sweet

im happy prithivi the a$$ is getting jealouse he deserves it and more

great part again and ctn soon

dammy
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awww, its okay honey. I gots summer skool too. ur loyal readers will juss have 2 chill wit me till 2 update (haha jk, lyke im even a fraction good as u) but amazing part.

I could've sworn ive commented dis one b4 but w/e. 😕

I loved da pink roses, bracelet, teddy bear part. seemed lyke he waz gonna seduce her but now it seems lyke kripa's handling dat. haha, theyre both lusting over each other. lol. 😆

theyre married so they should learn sum stuff bout each other! 😕

Kripa cant cook. lol. angad's so sweet!!!! I wish my hubby waz lyke him (lord knows dats true ;) they flirt so much.

cant wait till da next chapter, update soon ur so super good! with neha it juss keeps getting better and better, don't it? 👏

<3 kiran
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Posted: 18 years ago
#97

Okay guys,

I'm sorry! I promise I'll have the part up tomorrow by five! I'm kinda behind right now. 😭 I only have half of it written.

Love,

Neha

P.S.- I promise it'll be a long part!

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Posted: 18 years ago
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aww, its ok hun, take ur time!!! i am sure it will be worth the wait!!! 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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its ok neha.just take ur time. because i know u always have good story. but r u gonna post it tonight.

well i know when its long it lots of fun to read everybody's love story.

mittal 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: neha9

Okay guys,


I'm sorry! I promise I'll have the part up tomorrow by five! I'm kinda behind right now. 😭I only have half of it written.


Love,


Neha


P.S.- I promise it'll be a long part!


your parts are always long hun(gotta give u credit for that), but longer wont hurt...at alll 😆
Edited by Bolly*_Crazed - 18 years ago

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