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Posted: 18 years ago
#11

Originally posted by: chiky n choc

hey its really sounds to b a diff 👏 👏 👏
n yr preasentation is also awesoome....
waiting for yr next part.... 😊 hey its really sounds to b a diff 👏 👏 👏



Yes, dear it is different. There are lot of secrets, shocks & surprises ahead. Thanks for reading. I hope u will have fun reading next parts.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: yoginisahakari

hey

great going pl continue soon



Thank you. I will continue soon.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey very well part written.....i hope that naina is 2 steps ahead from raj.. 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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too good

really poor Raj

pl continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
#15
who is gng to b a new ch at least kuch hint tn de deti.. 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
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well i just luved ure concept........ n am a crazy fan of rn........ well cant wait for the next part!!!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART – 2 (B)

Recap: All the cadets were angry at raj in the mess and abhi & others listened to their conversation. They asked raj about reason for punishment and raj told them story about MC's orderly watching over them when he caught naina. Cadets make plan to get revenge from raj.

Now:

It was the first day of classes. All cadets were excited about their first day, but before joining classes they all assembled in common hall where Brigadier chondok was going to introduce all faculty members to first year cadets.



BC: good morning cadets… welcome to the academy … You all now are part of KMA and its prestige is also your responsibility.

Aaj tak is academy mein aane wale har cadet is desh ka sachcha sipahi banta raha hai, aur aaj se aap log bhi discipline and responsibility ke saath is desh ke prospective soldiers bankar dikhayenge.

Aur jis kisi ne bhi is academy ke rules ko todne ki koshish ki use is academy se nikala jayega ye agar aap soch rahe he to bahut galat sochte hai. Aise cadets fauji to hum zaroor banayenge who bhi aisi punishments de de kar jis se who ye rule todna bhul jaye. Meri is baat ko hamesha yaad rakhna.

Now I want to introduce all our faculty members one by one. Then he first introduced Major Niar, Captain abhimanu, nandini, shalini, Lolita maam, suriji and at last he introduced captain rajveer. After that he gave them best wishes and ordered them to return to their classes in 30 minutes.

Now only our cadet gang came to class first and there were still 20 minutes left before first class.

Huda: chalo jaan chuti, ye taou bhi na kitna bada lecture sunaya, aur upar se dhamki bhi kitni de raha tha. Waise hamare kuch teachers kafi young hai aisa nahi lagta. Kya lag rahi thi captain nandini and dr. shalini wow.

Aalekh: shuru ho gayee iski nautanki, saale captain nandini shaadi shuda hai aur apun ne suna hai ki captain shalini ka koi boyfriend bhi hai.

Huda: oy to kya hua, mere ko thodi na kisi ke saath zindagi bitani hai. Mein to sirf date pe poochne ki baat soch raha tha.

Aditya: kya huda, kaisa sochte rahte ho. Aur waise bhi academy ka rule hai koi cadet aur teacher date pe ek saath nahi ja sakte.

Riya: To kya hua, waise bhi huda ko to rules todne ka bahut shauk hai. waise mein to captain abhimanu pe mar gayee, hi kitna handsome hai who.

Huda: who geet gata banjara, us mein dekhne layak kya hai. mujhe to ye samaj mein nahi aata ki us Bandar ko captain nandini jaisa motiyon ka haar kaise mil gaya.

Pooja: oy chodo, agar mera connection us rohit se nahi laga hota na to mein to apna connection us shah rukh se laga leti.

Aalekh: kya matalab, punjaban tu kis ki baat kar rahi hai.

Naina: Captain rajveer ki.

Pooja: tujhe kaise pata chala?

Naina: BC ke bhasan ke waqt tu use jis tarah se dekh rahi thi who dekh ke to koi andha bhi keh sakta hai ki tu kitni fida ho gayee hai uspe.

Riya: Haan yaar, hai to who bhi bada handsome, dekh ke bilkul nahi lagta ki ye log discipline followers hai.

Aalekh: apun ko lagta hai sab us BC & MC se darte hai.

Naina: lekin hum nahi darte. Kyonki koi bhi punishment hum ko hamara kaam karne se nahi rok sakta.

Riya: bilkul, are mujhe apni manmani karte hue government nahi rok payee to ye kya rokenge.

Aditya: aap is wajah se hi yahan pe hai bhul gayee.

Pooja: are chod na, waise pehla class kis ka hai.

Naina: strategy and communication ka.

Huda: kya pakao hai.

Pooja: are mere shahrukh ka class hai.

Aditya: haan aap ko to bahut mazaa aayega pooja.

Just then rajveer enters in class. He was 10 minutes early too as he wanted to set up everything.

Aalekh: le punjaban aa gaya tera shah rukh.

Captain rajveer: well, I never knew that first year cadets come to class early as they come either on time or late. This is first.

Huda (muttering): abhi to teri zindagi mein bahut kuch pehli baar hone wala hai.

Raj: ji aap ne kuch kaha cadet?

Huda: no sir (after standing up)

Raj: what's your name cadet?

Huda: cadet amardeep huda sir.

Raj: nice to meet you.

Then raj asked everybody their name one by one, and at last he went to naina and just gave a smile and by that time all other cadets arrived. Raj introduced himself and started his lecture.

During the lecture, aalekh, ritu and huda were bored, where aditya was actually learning and pooja was just enjoying looking @ her shah rukh. But naina, she had something else going on her mind.

The lecture was over and then there were other lectures of nandini, shalini, major niar & abhi. Every one was disciplined and serious as they were learning. But were the actually disciplined or something else was going on?

In the evening after classes:

There is a faculty meeting going on, and all the members are in a meeting room.

BC- maine aap sab logo ko is liye yahan bulaya hai kyonki is saal hamare academy mein ek naya subject ki entry ho rahi hai.

MC- naya subject sir?

BC- haan psychiatry, aur is liye defense board ne ek psychiatrist ko appoint kiya hai jinka naam hai Dr. Ritu Mishra.

Rajveer- lekin sir, psychiatrist ki kya zaroorat?

BC- who to hame bhi samaj mein nahi aa raha captain lekin ye defense ministry ka faisla hai aur hame ye rules follow karne hai.

Rajveer- ok sir.

Abhimanu- waise ye doctor mishra hai kahan par?

BC- is liye maine ye meeting bulai hai, who Saturday night yaani ki parso aa rahi hai, aur main chahta hoon ki hamari faculty se koi member un ko receive kare as a formality.

Dr. shalini- but saturday night ko to hamari defense ministry ki charity function ki presentation hai?

Nandini- yes, aur us mein hum sab ka rehna bahut zaroori hai sir.

MC- lekin captain abhimanu & captain rajveer us mein shaamil nahi ho rahe.

BC- haan mein jaanta hoon, is liye agar aap dono me se koi ja paye to captain………………

Abhi- but sir ambala mein jo musical competition hone wala hai us ke hum one of the judges hai and it's this Saturday night too.

Rajveer- It's ok captain. I am free, so I will receive Dr. mishra on behalf of KMA.

BC- thank u captain.

And then meeting gets over but all of them didn't know that somebody else was also attending that meeting.

Actually, huda and aalekh were up into ventilation space and were listening to their conversation which was part of their plan.

They came back and told everything to other four.

Preview: Captain Rajveer and Dr. Ritu Mishra meet for first time. Cadets are all dressed up, and Naina, Aalekh & Huda execute their plan.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey very nice part...........love it...lets see how teh 2st meeting of sharukh and ritu's go.......
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART- 3

Recap: saare cadets discipline se classes attend karte hai aur koi shararat nahi karte. Faculty ki ek meeting hoti hai jahan pe rajveer dr. ritu mishra ko receive karne jaane ke liye ready ho jaata hai. Aalekh & Huda saari baatein chup kar sun lete hai aur baaki charo ko batate hai.

NOW:

Another day went smoothly with classes, learning and discipline. Everything was perfect. It was Friday night so cadets didn't have to follow any preferable timing for dinner as there were no classes on Saturday morning. Our six cadets came last for the dinner and our four favorite teachers and suriji were present in the mess.

Cadets came, took their dinner plates and sat quietly on a table near raj, abhi & others. They were all eating silently. Raj smelled something fishy and so did abhi.

Abhi: so cadets, aap log kaafi dair se aaj dinner pea aye.

Aalekh: apun ne koi rule to nahi toda na sir waise bhi aaj Friday hai.

Abhi- nahi bilkul nahi, who to aap log bilkul shaant hai is liye.

Huda- who meri mummyji kehti hai na khana khate waqt baate nahi karni chahiye, and who kya hai na sir, huda apni mummyji ki bahut respect karta hai is liye unki koi baat nahi taalta.

Raj- very good, so she is your role model.

Huda- aisa hi samaj lijiye, mein unhi ke wajah se yahan pe hoon.

Nandini- kya matlab?

Huda told them about loosing bet with his mummyji and reason of coming to KMA.

Everybody laughed on this. Then dr. shalini asked everybody to say why they were in KMA if they don't have any problem sharing with teachers.

Aalekh- sharing karne mein apun ko kya problem ho sakti hai. Apun ko apne ma-bap ne do choice di ki tujhe kaun si jail mein rehna hai ghar ya KMA. To apun socha ki pichle 22 saal se ghar wali jail mein reh raha hai ab KMA try kar lete hai.

Raj- ye jail nahi hai, cadet aalekh.

Riya- jail se kuch kam bhi nahi hai. waise bhi mein to yahan teen saal apni sazaa katne aayee hoon, then she told her story.

Abhi- iska matlab ye hua ki aap ko yahan apni zimmedari sikhne bheja gaya hai.

Pooja- mein to apne raanze ki talash mein aaye hoon?

Nandini- kya matlab?

Pooja told her story about rohit, and every teacher was amused as these all were here for some reason except one and that was to become a true solider.

Raj- to aap mein se kisi ke paas yahan hone ki koi khaas wajah nahi hai. He was looking constantly at naina all this time as he wanted to know why she was here.

Aditya- hai na, hum soldier ban ne aaye hai jo hamara aur hamare parents ka sapna hai.

Raj – good, koi to hai yahan jo kisi sachchi wajah se yahan par na to koi majboori se. He was saying but he still was looking @ naina. He wanted to ask her but he didn't.

Abhi- cadet naina, sab ne apne yahan aane ki wajah batayee, lekin aap ne nahi. Agar koi personal reason hai to mat bataye lekin agar share karna chahe to…………………………….

Naina- nahi sir aisi koi baat nahi, kya karoon in logo ki tarah mere paas kehne ke liye kuch nahi.

Suriji – oy putarr….hum kuch samje nahi.

Naina- who kya hai na suriji, jaise ki rajveer sir ne kaha ki sab ke paas KMA mein hone ki koi khaas wajah nahi hai. Lekin mera ye manna hai ki zindagi mein kuch sahi karne ke liye sahi wajah ki zaroorat nahi hoti. Kabhi kabhi koi aam wajah ya koi itefaaq hum ko zindagi ki sab se sahi manzil tak pahuncha deti hai. To hum sab ki wajah chahe jo bhi koi fark nahi padta kyonki manzil to ek hai na.

Abhi- fantastic answer cadet naina, maan gaye aap ki zindagi ko dekhne ki philosophy ko kyon guys?

Nandini- absolutely.

Everybody had great time and all teachers and cadets leave after dinner. Raj & abhi were playing golf where all cadets are executing their plan.

(Now the scene is going to shift back and forth to cadets and raj & abhi)

In golf room

Abhi- tumhe kya lagta hai raj? Kya ye cadets such mein itne serious and disciplined hai?

Raj- bilkul nahi, ye to toofan ke aane ke pehle ki shaanti hai.

At the same time, in some another room

Aalekh- tere ko kya lagta hai naina, ye log apun ke chote se natak se phas jayenge.

Naina- bilkul nahi, cap. Rajveer aur abhimanu ke chehre par saaf saaf likha tha ki unhe hamare irado par shak hai.

In golf room

Raj- mujhe naina ke chehre se lagta hai tha ye kuch bahut bada plan karne wale hai.

Abhi- lekin kya?

Raj- yahi to hum ko janna hai.

At same time, in other room

Huda- lekin kya unhe ye pata lagega?

Naina- yahi to hume pata nahi chalne dena hai.

(Huda & riya went in some room and messed around with stuff in there, while pooja and aditya gathered ropes and other stuff and recorded some voices. Naina and aalekh got various things from mess and naina took some items from aalekh and went to rajveer's room)

Aalekh- bole to yeh sab kis liye?

Naina- for back up.

Aalekh- lekin back up ka zaroorat nahi padega, huda aur riya ne saara intezaam rakha hai.

Naina- captain rajveer is smart and that's why we need some back up.

Then they both picked lock and went in rajveer's room and sat up timer and everything and went to sleep.

In the Saturday morning, rajveer left to pick up dr. mishra, and everybody else went where they were supposed to go. All six cadets had fun in games room until 2:00 in afternoon, and then they went to their rooms.

At the airport:

Rajveer was waiting for Dr. Mishra. And a very beautiful charming lady in a pink sari came with some luggage. She came to rajveer as rajveer had a board saying KMA.

Lady: hello, are u from KMA?

Rajveer was mesmerized by her beauty and he was lost for seconds but he answered yes.

Lady: I am Dr. ritu mishra.

Rajveer: Hello, I am captain rajveer singh shekhawat.

Ritu: wow mujhe nahi pata tha ki mujhe koi captain receive karne aayege?

Rajveer: aur mujhe nahi pata tha ki aap itni khoobsurat hongi.

Ritu: Jee………..

Raj: you are looking very pretty dr. (waise ye raj bhi na flirt acha kar le ta hai)

Ritu: Thanks for compliment. Waise KMA mein har koi aap ki tarah hai?

Raj- Hamari tarah to ek bas hum hi hai.

Ritu- kaafi hai, chale

Raj- chaliye.

Then they left to come to the academy.

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey very good part...........lets see wat is going on naina's mind............... 😆

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