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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: me2kool

😆 look mainay sahi predict kiya thaa 😆

i just luved that locket wala part 👏
oh my god angad is lyke that 😆 sujal say bhi 12 haqth agaye 😆

lagta hai angad kripa ko sath dekh kar sujal kashish kay dil main bhi wohi agg senay main phir jal pari hai 😆


aur han wo miss gupta museebat indian hi hain 😆
urdu-hindi bolo to samajhti hain english bolo to samajh ti hain 😆
ab insan khul kay burai bhi nahi karpata unki 😆


newayz cont soon.......cant wait to see the english class 😆 😆


rajeev rox 👏


yeh song toh wohi hai naa...lagi aaaj sawan ki..rajeev ka fav monsoon song...lol.muj woh yaad aa gaya..thnx an keep reading
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: aaakkii

rock & roll dhvani....what a mast part......yaar mere paas adjectives ki kami ho gayi hai.......I hate english classes.....best of luck for ur graduation....I too have got admission in delhi university.....

waise SK...ke beech kab kuchh hogaa.....and Angad krips....inke to sharmaane se main...paagal ho chuki hun.......
waise I loved the dialogue...

Oyee....hoyeeeeeeeeeeee....kya Beauty hai...lolz.....

& yes U have got a nick of humour.....& ur ff rocks...rolls.....crashes me......spellbounds my brain......& I too start rocking ...& rolling

Well......meri sense of humour tragic ho gayi hai....& bohot irritating too...... 😭 help me out...... 😭

Luv,
Akanksha 😊


no dear..tumhari sense of humor ko kya hua ...?kuch bhi nahi...don b sad...and congratz for admission in Delhi uni...gr8...thnx and keep reading
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Posted: 18 years ago
part 19

school 8:00 am

Eng class

All sitting on their places.Kashish is carefully listening to teacher ,Sujal busy staring at her,angad staring at kripa

ang:uffff….yeh ada…aaye haaye ada…hosh udaye ada…karde deewana…adaa…janleva adaa..katilana addaa…mar dale naaa..;

Su:uff…..ek ladki ko dekha toh aisa laga..jaise shyar ka khwaab…jaise khilta gulab…jaise ugli kiran…jaise… Hamlet's internal conflicts …

Tea:Sujal…Sujal…Describe Hamlet's internal conflicts..

Suj:[coming out of kashish land]oh…yaa…umm….Hamlet was….umm…having internal conflicts….yaa…

Tea:we all know tht…decribe it…according to his soliloquy.

Su:umm….I don't know…

Now,kash ko pata chal jata hai ki he was looking at her so she looked at him with angry eyes…

Teacher starts teaching again,telling suj to concentrate.now su is listening but attention is in his dreams.But Yeh kyaaaa…..



kash is staring at suj jo board pe dekh raha tha

Now su turns towards her and smiles at one side of his cheeks ..ka too smiles but tehn comes out of la la land , grins, pretends to rite something ..looks back at suj and finds su is already staring at her..She winks at him,suj ko toh jhatka laga…bohot zor ka..and mann hi mann mein muskura raha hai…lik this, staring and aankhein churaofying chalta rehata hai…for lik a half an hour…lol

Tea:Now u all will sit in groups,everyone on the left sides will go with everyone on left of another row and same for right siders,change the spots now…

Group1- Suj,kash,Sierra[sierra is Priyanka bassi-does not understand hindi/urdu-just normal girl in class]

Group2-kri,ang,Ben[ben is prithvi of kyph-normal guy –understands a bit of hindi/urdu,just a bit-normal guy ,(kya karoo…koi aur naam nahi yaad aa raha…isliye Ben…likhne mein bhi short hai..lol)]

Tea:now decide group leaders first,then .[.blah..blah…koi assignment deke goes]

Group1

Ka:I ll b grp leader

Su:no I ll b ..

Sierra:I don wanna b…u 2 decide..

Ka:ok…me then

Su:no….I ll b grp leader…I have more experience!

Ka:ok…sierra u say..I m more eligible ryt.?not Sujal

Sierra:ya..umm..

Su:[sierra ka haath pakad leta hai] me 2, beautiful😛

Sierra:umm…ya…

Ka:ok..lets vote…sierra…u want sujal ?

Sujal sierra ki book giratta hai 😆,both bend down,sujal winks at sierra …😉

Ka:[ka sees this,she is jealous]Do u want sujal??? To b the grp leader!

Sierra:plz guys…stop it…lets just divide the work…

Group2

Ang:I m not gonna b grp leader

Kri:me neither..Y don't u Ben

Ben:umm…I was absent for 2 days,I donno the recent stuff..I m I gonna guide u guys..

Ang:ok..then…kri is the grp leader

Kri:noo….U r …

Ang:no…u

Kri:no…u

Ben:fine…I ll b it…u guys can jst help me out with the story…will u kripa?[kri ka haath pakadta hai and uski chair kri ke paas leta hai]

Kri:I ll surely help..here…copy these notes…u lll get the main idea

Ben:ok…[aur paas aata hai kri ke][guys..use notes likhne hai isliye..not for any other reason]

Ang[ang ko toh gussa aa raha hai…Ben pe..]Hey,Ben take mine,kripa's notes r incomplete and untidy ,see my work

Ben:no ..i can get her writings,..and its complete

Kri:[gussa]Hey angad,if u donno ,don tell tht my work is stupid…look at urs…its awful..

Ang:I think there's some problem with ur eyes…plz get them checked…I can read my thing okay!!

Kri:tu kaun hota hai muje aise kehne wala???

Ang:umm….mein tera…umm..tumhara…umm…

Ben:well guys chill,lets start with the work

Kri[thinks]:yeh maine kya puch liya…thik ho toh pucha…jo uske mann mein hai…wohi toh kahega..

Ang:[looks at kri with mischevious eyes]bata doon…

Kri:[holds Ben's hands]wait…don wirte tht part…its rough work…fair is on next page

Ang[ very very very jealous]:is BEn ki toh main...aisi ki taisi..

Group1

Sierra;u both look lik ,umm…r u both bro-sis

Su:NO WAY!!!![sierra ka haath chhod deta hai and drags his chair near kash]She's my friend…V r friends…hmm…ya…friends…

Ka:[laughing]Sujal,ab kuch dino mein Rakshabandhan hain…aao ge naa…Tumhe meri taraf se special invitation!

Su:WHAAAAAAAATT!![accha toh,madam ko shaitani sujh rrahi hai..hmm…dikhata hoon ise toh…group leader banne nikli hai…ise toh mein banata hoon…maaaamuuuu]haan behna…mein zaroor aaunga…lekin usse pehle[takes sierra's hand]mein ise ek yummy si kiss dena chahta hoon…

sierra [ busy writing something]:Gosh!...these both started it again...tht too in their language!

Ka:[in total gussa]WHT THE HELL!!Shut up…mein koi teri behen –wehen nahi hoon…Stupid!!

Su:are…bura maan gayi…koi baat nahi…bhai duuj[comes after 2 days of diwali]Bhai duuj par bhi aa jaunga bas…ab toh khush…!!

Ka:stands up and storms out of the class


Edited by dhvanisoni - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
ha ha haaaaaaa that was hilarious, awesome and fantastic 😆 . they all r gone mad seriously , pagal ho chuke hai 😆 . yahan angad aur kripa na na karke ben ko bech mein latte hai and angad getting jelous of prithvi was obvoious cause prithvi was close to kripa at that time and was hand in hand 😡 . AUR YAHAN HAMARE MAHAN SUJAL AUR KAHSISH. AIK DOOSRE SE COMPETE KARNA, FIRST ANA, NEECHA DIKHANA AUR CHIDANA YAHIN UNKI DOSTI HAI . BUT DHVANI THAT WAS REALLY REALLY REALLT VERY UMMMMMMMM!!! SCENE WHEN SEIRA SAYS THAT THEY LOOK LIKE BRO-SIS AND THEN SUJAL MOVE TOWARDS KASHISH SAYING THEY R FRIENDS 🤣 . MATLAB KUCH TO GADBAD HAI CAUSE THE WAY HE TAKE SUDDEN ACTION WAS AMAZING 😉 . AND AND AND THIS KASHISH GOD,PEHELE KHUD SHURU KARTI HAI PHIR NARAZ HOKAR CHALI JATI HAI EXPECTING SUJAL SHOULDN'T HAVE DONE OR SAID LIKE THIS 😡 . SHE STARTS SAYING THAT RAKSHABANDHAN HAI TO AAOGE NA TO WHICH SUJAL BHI KYUN PICHE RAHE HE SAYS THAT BHAI DUJJ KO BHI AAUGA 😆 . AACHA HUA KI WOH BHI JAISE KO TAISA JAWAB DETA HAI. ABB SUJAL SAYS THAT USSE PEHELA I WANT TO GIVE A UMMM!!! KISS TO SEIRA 😳 . THAT WAS BAD SUJAL .U SHOULDN'T HAVE SAID LIKE THIS TO KASHISH 😭 BUT IT WAS REALLY VERY SENSIBLE DHVANI 👏 . NOW KASHISH STORMS OUT OF THE CLASS. BECHARI. NOW DHVANI I EXPECT THAT SUJAL SHOULD GO OUT AND CONVINCE HER 😳 .MAYBE THEY SHOULD HAVE SOME ARGUMENT,BEHAS BETWEEN THEM TAKI WOH THODA AUR KAREEB AAYE JAISE ANDGAD AUR KRIPA AYE THE REMEMBER!!! 😳 THE PART WAS GREAT 👍🏼 . I JUST LOVED IT ❤️ . CONTINUE SOON PLZ........ CAN'T WAIT ANY LONGER.BYE.TAKECARE. 😊 😛 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey very funny part 😆 rakhabandhan 😆 bhaidujh 😆

plz continue soon 😛 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
lovely ff... 👏 ..a different approach...gr8 gng.... 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
bhai-behen 🤣
gr8 part dhavani 👏 👏cont soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
🤣 bro aur sis 😆
good joke 😆
par chalo kam se kam is bahanay dil ki bat to zuban par ai!!!
sujal aur wo songs 😍 parhanay main hi acha lag raha hai jab telecast hokay samnay ayge to kya hoga 😆

angad itna sedha larka aur ya garam masala ka adda wala gana 😆 😆 😆

poor kripa usko jawab hi nahi mila kay humakay hain kunn



awesome part dhanvi 👏


aur han wo lagi aj sawani ki wala song raj ka favourite hi tha tabhi to likha tha 😆 😆


keep it up 👍🏼 n cont soon 😳


rajeev rox 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
I have just started reading ur fanfic.Its amazing 👏 .U r a very good writer.Please cont soon 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: fravashi

ha ha haaaaaaa that was hilarious, awesome and fantastic 😆 . they all r gone mad seriously , pagal ho chuke hai 😆 . yahan angad aur kripa na na karke ben ko bech mein latte hai and angad getting jelous of prithvi was obvoious cause prithvi was close to kripa at that time and was hand in hand 😡 . AUR YAHAN HAMARE MAHAN SUJAL AUR KAHSISH. AIK DOOSRE SE COMPETE KARNA, FIRST ANA, NEECHA DIKHANA AUR CHIDANA YAHIN UNKI DOSTI HAI . BUT DHVANI THAT WAS REALLY REALLY REALLT VERY UMMMMMMMM!!! SCENE WHEN SEIRA SAYS THAT THEY LOOK LIKE BRO-SIS AND THEN SUJAL MOVE TOWARDS KASHISH SAYING THEY R FRIENDS 🤣 . MATLAB KUCH TO GADBAD HAI CAUSE THE WAY HE TAKE SUDDEN ACTION WAS AMAZING 😉 . AND AND AND THIS KASHISH GOD,PEHELE KHUD SHURU KARTI HAI PHIR NARAZ HOKAR CHALI JATI HAI EXPECTING SUJAL SHOULDN'T HAVE DONE OR SAID LIKE THIS 😡 . SHE STARTS SAYING THAT RAKSHABANDHAN HAI TO AAOGE NA TO WHICH SUJAL BHI KYUN PICHE RAHE HE SAYS THAT BHAI DUJJ KO BHI AAUGA 😆 . AACHA HUA KI WOH BHI JAISE KO TAISA JAWAB DETA HAI. ABB SUJAL SAYS THAT USSE PEHELA I WANT TO GIVE A UMMM!!! KISS TO SEIRA 😳 . THAT WAS BAD SUJAL .U SHOULDN'T HAVE SAID LIKE THIS TO KASHISH 😭 BUT IT WAS REALLY VERY SENSIBLE DHVANI 👏 . NOW KASHISH STORMS OUT OF THE CLASS. BECHARI. NOW DHVANI I EXPECT THAT SUJAL SHOULD GO OUT AND CONVINCE HER 😳 .MAYBE THEY SHOULD HAVE SOME ARGUMENT,BEHAS BETWEEN THEM TAKI WOH THODA AUR KAREEB AAYE JAISE ANDGAD AUR KRIPA AYE THE REMEMBER!!! 😳 THE PART WAS GREAT 👍🏼 . I JUST LOVED IT ❤️ . CONTINUE SOON PLZ........ CAN'T WAIT ANY LONGER.BYE.TAKECARE. 😊 😛 😊


haha...i liked ur comments....hmm...so I have not yet decided ki next parts mein kya hoga....I kinda have the idea but ...anyway...keep reading
Edited by dhvanisoni - 18 years ago

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