Pyaar Mein Hulchul LAST PART/EPILOGUE p49

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Posted: 18 years ago

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guys i am not updating today, someone here at I-F who i see as my older sister has lost her brother due to an heart attack, i am too depressed to write today, i hope you all understand, and if you know her plz help her through this emotional time at sp, her username is ramas, and everyone knows her as raksha di, plz pay your respects if you know her...and help her through this emotional period 😭 😭

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Jennifer Mall

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Posted: 18 years ago

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awww, we understand completely...i dont kno her but im sure she knows she had our sympathies. ill be praying for her and her family to pull through the loss....

i still hope u update dis soon! btw, i hope u get unDEPRESSED soon.... 😕

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Posted: 18 years ago

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thanx kiran, i really needed that...dont worry i will update soon, you take care 😳

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thanx everyone for bearing with me, and my depression, i feel a bit better today, i might continue today or tomorrow it depends if i feel a bit more better, thanx again to all my readers 😳

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eternal

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Posted: 18 years ago

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hello my fellow readers,

thank you so much for enjoying PYAAR KYA HULCHUL HAI, and well i wanted to let you know that i am helping write another ff, so if u enjoy my writing, please check out jab dil churaye koi, which is being written about ak, and the authors are Anam ali (my di), memze (shaz) and mimi_rani (me) 😃

we hope you will enjoy this ff 😳

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Posted: 18 years ago

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ok will deffi. check it out.. and good luck in it!
and hope you feel better sweety!
and i wish to see more parts in this fanfic!!
really great parts! 👏 👏 👏

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thanx hun and guys i will be continuing today 😳

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sorry for not posting the part my stupid little sister wouldnt get off the laptop, so i will post first thing in the morning and it will be super duper long, i promise 😃

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Today's episode:
Angad pulled into the school's parking lot, and found josh and prithivi waiting for him there. He walked up to them and gave them brotherly hugs, and said "hey man, how come you guys are in the parking lot?" josh looked at him and said, "nothing much, was too bored to go inside, now that you're here, lets go…" "whatever!" prithivi mumbled…they walked into the school, and all eyes were glued on angad, even after the controversy girls came running to him, and guys gave him jealousy looks, his eyes still searched for tanya. He found her but would she forgive him that easily after weeks off rude remarks and hatred?

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Zaib looked around for kripa, he really missed her, it had only been a few days and he missed her. Finally he saw her walking towards the principal's office, but what the heck was she going there for? "hehe, will just have to ask her in class," and walked off to class.

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Kripa and gauri, boarded the airplane, and sat down, waiting for their destination to arrive. Gauri reassured kripa, "nothing will happen to tanya, after all you are with her." "thanx gauri, it means a lot!" A hostess walked by, but when she saw kripa and gauri holding hands, her eyes grew wide in shock. Kripa noticed and decided to play along, she started rubbing gauri's hand, and went near gauri's ear and told her that the waitress is watching. Gauri's eyes shot up, and noticed the hostess staring at her so she decided to play along, they began holding each other, they hugged each other and started going up each others back, and acted as if they were kissing. The hostess looked at them in disgust, and shot them a you-lesbian-look and walked away. Kripa and gauri looked at each other and started laughing holding there stomachs.

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Tanya walked with Tina through the crowds that blocked her way, people stared at her and wanted to apologize but no one dared to. Tanya walked into class and sat down with tina talking about shopping, yes they were going to go shopping today, and they couldn't wait.

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Aaliya had been cranky a bit lately, she would rarely talk to anyone and when she did, she was mostly in anger. Kiran and Prithivi's plan had been working she was very jealous of their relationship, even though they were only the best of friends. "prithivi, look there is aaliya, ready to start plan no. 1?" prithivi looked at her and smiled, "of course!" They started walking forward, with prithivi's hand around kiran's waist, and they both kept repeating lovely things in each others ears, smiling and laughing. Aaliya looked at them and her eyes filled with anger, oh how she hated aaliya for taking her man. Aaliya mumbled to herself, "get your dirty eyes off ma man!" and shot kiran a I-hate-you-look and get-your-hands-off-ma-man look. Days passed by and the same thing was repeating, aaliya burned with more jealousy, kripa and gauri had returned to oxford, and tanya still hated angad.

5 MONTHS LATER ~
Aaliya had enough, that kiran girl had been so chipkoo with her future husband. She went up to prithivi, and started yelling at him. He had been avoiding her for 5 months no hi's or bye's. She herself didn't remember the last time they talked so she went up to him to start a converstation. "prithivi, how come we don't talk like we used to, I mean you don't even say hi or bye to me, and where have you been lately?" Prithivi looked at her and said, "with kiran, I think im going to propose to her, I love her a lot, do you think she will accept?" "what?" aaliya screamed. "ya, we arent officially boyfriend and girlfriend, so I thought why not ask her to go out with me?" aaliya burned in anger, she wanted to kill prithivi right now, but resisted the urge. "um prithivi, I have to go and do something, I will see you around," she said nearly in tears. Prithivi's heart began aching when he nearly saw her in tears, and decided to say what he had been dying to say for such a long time. "aaliya, do you really think I like kiran?" She turned around and said, "ya," prithivi responded by saying, "and what if I tell you I love someone else, and that kiran and I are just friends, would you believe me?" aaliya mumbled "I wish that was true!" "it is hun, I don't love kiran." aaliya began walking away again when she heard the magic words, "...., i love you!" he yelled as she walked across the gym in anger. She stopped dead in her tracks turned around, tears ran down her eyes, her anger melted in a flash of seconds. she ran into his arms crying "i love you,....i love you too! lekin what the heck was that all about for ignoring me for four months, you idiot!" "im sorry hun, but it was the only way to make you so i love you and it was all because of her." "i hate you," she said hitting him playfully on his arms and chest finally saying "i love you, i love you, you promise you wont ever leave me?" "i promise, i love you too!" and kissed her forehead lightly.

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Kripa began to feel something awkward, she had many sleepless nights, so she decided to go back to Mumbai, for her month long vacation, instead of staying here. She quickly called up the airport, and booked two seats, one for her and one for gauri. She was really scared something was going to go wrong.

The next morning gauri and kripa boarded the flight, to remove their fear.

WHAT HAPPENS NEXT, DOES THE SCARY PROMO COME UP NEXT, IS TANYA ALRIGHT? WHEN IS GAURI AND SHIV'S ENGAGEMENT? FIND OUT SOON 😳

Edited by Mimi_Rani - 18 years ago

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Jennifer Mall

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Posted: 18 years ago

#280

yay!!! i helped get aaliya and prithvi together!!! dats so cool.... *sigh* i need me a man....lol.

gauri and kripa air hostess scene was hilarious....im confused wit da whole tanya scene rite now but we'll get 2 da l8er....

GREAT PART, cont soon!!!

<3 kiram
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