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Posted: 18 years ago

#61

Awesome Part Continue soon 👏 👏

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Sujalthegreat

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Posted: 18 years ago

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Part 4

Sorry guys this is all I could post today as I ran out of time. I was planning on posting Kashish's entry in this part. But I couldn't, but I do promise that it will be posted in next part, but I will try and add it to this part, tonight, when I get back. If not then it will definitely be added in next part.

Thanks for understanding.

It didn't take long for Anjali and Kripa to arrive at the house. The first person they saw was Prem. He was just coming down the stairs.
Prem: Hey, the two lovely girls, no change that, the one lovely girl…Kripa.
Anjali: Prem
Prem: Oh sorry, okay okay the two lovely girls
Kripa: Prem, how are they?
Prem: Well they both are resting. But I think….
Kripa: Can I see Sneha?
Prem: Yeah…go on, she could do with the company.
Anjali: I'll go and see Sujal bhaiya
Prem: Cool
Anjali and Kripa were about to go upstairs.
Prem: Oh and I'm fine by the way. Thanks for asking, you know me, the one who saved the day.
Anjali: Well done, I'll see you in a bit.
Then both of them went upstairs.
Prem: Well done Prem.
He just sat there and patted himself on the back.

Sneha, was sitting on the windowsill, in her room, just looking outside and reflecting on everything that had happened to her.
Kripa: Sneha
Sneha: Kripa
They both hugged each other.
Kripa: How are you?
Sneha: I'm just a little shaken.
Kripa: So what happened. I mean….you don't have to
Sneha: No its okay. I'm glad you've come.
Kripa: So what happened.
Sneha: I was on my way to meet you, when I realized I didn't have money. So I stopped to get some cash, from the cash machine. Next thing I knew was, I was being dragged down this alley way. I tried to scream for help, but one of them covered my mouth.
Sneha started to cry. As it all came back to her. Kripa passed her a handkerchief, to wipe her tears away.
Kripa: Wasn't anyone around at the time?
Sneha: All I could see, were a few people, but they were further up. The area was like virtually disserted.
Kripa: You were lucky Sujal bhaiya was there.
Sneha: Yeah, he risked his own life for me…me!
Kripa: So what did you expect? You're his sister.
Sneha: You know what I mean
Kripa: Listen! You said this to me, but you better not let him catch you saying this. It'll hurt him even more. You know how much he cares about you. He probably cares about you more than any of us do.
Sneha: Yes but….
Kripa: Listen just shut up and try and forget about what's happened.
The way Kripa was talking to her, it brought a smile to her face. Kripa was her best friend. She's always been there for her, through everything life had thrown at her.
Kripa: If you want I could stay over if you want.
Sneha: I'd love that. You'd better let Anjali didi know.
Kripa: She'll be fine with it.
Sneha: Oh I forgot to tell you, Angad was here as well. He also saved me as well.
Kripa: Angad….
Sneha: Yes you know Angad….pretty tall and good looking. His pictures are all over your bedroom wall…Angad
Kripa: He's not here now, is he?
Sneha: No he had to go somewhere. He said he'll come back tomorrow…Is that why you want to stay over then?
Kripa: Stop it Sneha.
Kripa blushed and then threw a pillow at Sneha.
Sneha: Why don't you just tell him, how you feel about him?
Kripa: It's not that easy. You just can't go up to someone and say that you love them can you.
Sneha: No, but in the time you're taking, someone else might tell him that they love him.
Kripa: I'll just have to leave it to fate. If he is the one, then he will be the one.
Sneha: We'll see…have you been to see bhaiya?
Kripa: No…I'll see him now. I came to see you first.
Sneha: You should have seen him first.
Kripa: I'm going now aren't I.
Kripa got up and was about to leave the room.
Sneha: Kripa…thanks for coming.
Kripa smiled at her and then walked out of the room.

Kripa: Bhaiya
Sujal: Hey Kripa, how are you?
Kripa: I'm fine, what about you bhaiya? Are you okay?
Sujal: Well I'm standing and fully fit. So yes I am fine.
Kripa: You know what I mean.
Sujal: I'm fine…honestly.
Kavya: Bhaiya!
Sujal looked up and Kavya was standing in the doorway, with Prem behind him.
Kavya: What happened?
Sujal: Will everyone just lighten up. I said I'm fine see, everything is in the right place and moving perfectly.
Kavya: Who were they?
Prem: Hey just relax, we took care of them. They won't do anything like this again.
Sujal: Yes Prem saved the day, along with Angad.
Prem: Finally some recognition for my heroic imagery.
Kavya went up to Prem.
Kavya: Prem…thank….
Prem: Don't mention it, we're family right.
Kavya: Right.
Sujal: Have you seen Sneha?
Kavya: No where is she?
Prem: In her room

Kavya: Sneha
Sneha: Kavya…you come to get revenge for earlier on
Kavya: Yes…come here
Kavya stood there with his arms out. Sneha went up to him and hugged him.
Kavya: I'm just sooooo glad that you're safe.
Sneha: No you're not
Kavya tapped Sneha on her head.
Kavya: You know me too well, silly

Edited by Sujalthegreat - 18 years ago

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MeethiMirchii

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Posted: 18 years ago

#63

lovedddd it hahahaha prem is funny patting himself lol

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72968

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Posted: 18 years ago

#64

lol...funny Prem..."finally some recognition for my heroic imagery" 😆 😆

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Jennifer Mall

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Posted: 18 years ago

#65

more more!!!! i want more!!!! add more soon, kay? i really lyke da story so far. the brother-sister relationship is so cute... 😊 cont soon!

<3 kiran
E> GA <3

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kia

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Posted: 18 years ago

#66

wonderful part 👏 waiting for kashish's entry make it soon 😊

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Daebak

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Posted: 18 years ago

#67

Hey nice part!!!!!! 👏 ......hehe prem is too good!!!......patting himself n getting happy on sujal's compliments ......hehe......waiting for kashish's intro......n really glad that sujal is fine *phew* 😳 😆

Continue soon !!!! 😛

luv,
vandu 😉

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xoxsubhaxox

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Posted: 18 years ago

#68

Originally posted by: tsamhita
lol...funny Prem..."finally some recognition for my heroic imagery" 😆 😆

😆😆 haha..prem is to cute! i wonder why mukti left him..everyone LOVES him😉

awesome part...plz cont soon😃😃

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Anamika

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Posted: 18 years ago

#69

awwww......sucha nice part....kripa luvs angad kripa luvs angad...mee2 mee2....lololol m overly excited...hehe...everyones sooo nice in this fic!!!!!!!
u rok man
Anamika

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Sujalthegreat

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Posted: 18 years ago

#70

PROMO 3 -: COMING UP SOON

Kashish sitting thinking. She draws a heart in her diary and she writing something inside it. Anjali walks past and sees what Kashish has written -:

I LOVE KAVYA !!!!!

Edited by Sujalthegreat - 18 years ago

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