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xoxsubhaxox

@xoxsubhaxox

Voyager

Posted: 18 years ago

#71

wut!! kashish loves kavya!!!!!!!!! 😲 😲 omg!!! i cant believe this! i wonder wut anjali will do..wut about poor sujal?? 😕
plz cont soon!! 😃 😃
suspence is killing me 😉

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Daebak

@Daebak

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Posted: 18 years ago

#72

whaaaaaaaaaaaat??????? ermm i hope kashish draws a heart n writes something n its anjali who says i luv kavya....err,......well we know that baad me sab theek ho jayega, hai na?? 😕

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zaira

@le_me_star

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#73

hey sujalthegreat, many many congratulations for the wonderful story you are writting 👏 ....the cast is of first class 👍🏼 .....the story is awesome 😊 ...just love it 😊....i have read the story in an a hour or two, but so touching 😊 😭 😊..... how sujal treat shena and prem like their own brother and sister, and can't stand when anyone say a thing against them 😊 ....kavya is a other story, don't you think so???? 😆 😃 😆 he is so different from sujal, but one think in common, both of them don't believe in love 😛 (hope they soon will 😉 😉 ) .....shena and kavya fight alot, they are like small kids, who fight for everything 😊 ....poor anjali she don't deserve kavya, she loves him so much and kavya is with her, bacause he is scared 😆 ....but he will relaise how much he loves her 😉 ...although the scene in his dream was hilarious 😆 😃 😆 ...poor kavya...bechare ko dream me bhi nahi schora anjali ne 😊 ....the scene where shena is pull by some guys is 😭 ....how could they do that, but thanks god before anything bad happen sujal comes to her resque 😊 ....and start fighting for her sister 😊 ....but they were alot and they hit sujal hard, and poor sujal fell on the ground 😭 ...and shena couldn't do anything, and start hotting the guys who hurt sujal, but they were more powerfull then her, but there comes the great prem 😊 😉 😊 who with sujal start the fight again...prem tell shena to run, but while running one of the bad guys catch her hand 😡 ...and there enter another hero 😉 angad 😉 ...he get to see sujal's car and came (i think 😕 )...but any ways they tell the guy to show were are the other, and the funny part is that angad keep's kicking the guy 😉 while protecting shena 😊 when they reach there they see that sujal and prem have finished with all of them, but angad need to kick someone right? 😉 ...so he does and prem give the guys a last warning that the next time angad will fight and he's worse than sujal and prem 😉 .....at last everthing f9 😉 ...but sujal and shena got hurt. after that the new entry is of kripa who's waiting for shena, after anjali and kripa comes to know what happened with sujal and sneha, they reach their and see prem coming from the stairs 😊 ...they ask where sujal and kripa are and then prem sarcastically says' that thanks for asking adnd he's fine 😆 and then says that he saved the day 😊 ../.......well after that kripa goes and meet sneha and they are talking ans sneha says that angad was also there and tell's kripa to tell angad about her feeling, then kripa goes to sujal's room and ask if he's fine, just then kavya enter behind him prem(who told him everything 😉 )...and sujal tell kavya that go and meet shena ,,,,,and he goes, par kavya aur shena ne ajj tak thik se baat ki he kya ? 😆 ...they start their conv. and kavya say's that he's happy that nothing happened to her 😊 .....well about the promo is schoking man 😲 😲 😲 kashish says that she loves kavya 😲 !!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!! ....and anjali read it 😲 😲 .........what's gonna happen next ❓ ..........continue soon plzzzzzzzz...........can't wait 👏

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Sujalthegreat

@Sujalthegreat

Voyager

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Posted: 18 years ago

#74

Part 5

The whole day went peacefully. Kripa ended up staying over. Anjali went home and Kavya and Prem went out. This left Sujal, Sneha and Kripa at home. Kripa was taking a shower. While Sujal made his way to Sneha's room to see if she was okay. Sneha was trying to get to some things on top of her wardrobe, when a box fell down and some photos slipped out. She knelt down to pick them up, but then she stopped at two photos and both bought tears to her eyes. One was a family picture of her and Prem, with their parents and the other was a picture of her and Aryan. She loved Aryan more than her life, but he left her due to circumstances.
Sujal: Sneha…
Sneha: Bhaiya…what are you doing here, you should be resting
Sujal: You were remembering your past.
Sujal saw the photo of Aryan in her hand.
Sneha: No I wasn't, these just dropped from the box, I was putting them back.
Sujal: You can lie to me, but not to yourself. You were remembering Aryan.
Sneha just stared at Sujal.
Sujal: You've been looking at that photo for quite sometime.
Sneha just sat down on her bed looking at the photo.
Sneha: Bhai…what shall I do…I still love him. I want to forget him but I can't. After what papa said to him, he just left and I can't blame him, but he never said anything to me and he just left.
Sujal: Your papa was just looking out for you. He was right, Aryan wasn't doing anything in life. He had no job no nothing.
Sneha: I know…you're right…but he just left me without saying anything. I didn't even know where he'd gone to or how he was. And I'm still wondering how he is…strange isn't it.
Sujal: Its not…Its how much you loved him and how much you still do.
Sneha: I guess so…What about you bhai?
Sujal: What about me?
Sneha: Have you ever fallen in love?
The question totally caught Sujal by surprise.
Sujal: What…me…no way?
Sneha: What do you mean no way?
Sujal: Just look at me…Love just isn't my thing.
Sneha: Why…I mean you're good looking, you have a good personality and….
Sujal: Enough Sneha…If love is written in my fate then it will happen, but as far as I'm concerned at the moment, love just isn't my thing, can you honestly see me being romantic….I'm happy as it is.
Kripa just came out of the bathroom and was drying her hair.
Kripa: Bhai…Sneha is right…Everyone needs love in their life and that means you….
Sujal: Listen…Both of you…Lets leave it to fate…If love is meant to happen then it will…Now both of you get some sleep.
Sujal smiled as he left the room.

The next morning, it was raining and slightly windy as well. Kripa and Sneha, were already downstairs getting the breakfast ready for everyone else. Sujal came downstairs, obviously before Kavya and Prem.
Sujal: Hey good morning and what are you two up to?
Kripa and Sneha: Good morning bhaiya
Sneha: We just thought we'd get the breakfast ready for a change.
Sujal: What's the real reason?
Kripa: So we need a reason, to make the breakfast now do we?
Sujal: Kripa…
Sneha: In a way its for saying sorry for teasing you last night.
Sujal: That was nothing. You didn't have to do this, just for that.
Kavya: Oh yes they did
Sujal, Sneha and Kripa were all shocked at seeing Kavya up this early and also so smartly dressed. He was wearing a shirt with tie and trousers.
Sneha: Am I dreaming or is this actually happening…pinch me Kripa.
Kripa: Okay
Sneha: Ouch – Kripa!
Kripa: What you told me to do it?
Sujal: Kavya whats going on, where are you going?
Kavya just sat there eating his breakfast.
Kavya: Bhaiya…I'm going to our office today…I've decided that now is the time to get serious.
Sneha: Helloooo….Kavya….What are you saying?
Kavya: Yes Sneha…I'm going to work today
Sujal: What side of the bed did you wake up from? Are you feeling okay?
Kavya: Yes I'm fine, now bhaiya, I'll meet you there so you'd better hurry up, we got that meeting later on today.
Kavya then got up and left the house, in a hurry. Before Sujal could say anything, Kavya had gone.
Sneha: Okay now he's scaring me.
Sujal: I think I'd better get down there as well, because he's also scaring me as well.
Sujal also got up and headed out of the house.
Sujal: Thanks for the breakfast…it was really nice…I'll see you two later.
Outside the rain had stopped but it was still slightly windy.
Sujal got into his car and drove off. While he was driving all he could think of was, what had happened to Kavya overnight, that made him wanna work all of a sudden.
But his thoughts were distracted by this white dupatta flying across his front screen. Sujal automatically stopped the car and got out. He picked up the dupatta and looked around. He saw this female covering her face, from the wind, heading towards him. The wind started to calm down. So the female moved her hand away from her face, really slowly, first Sujal saw her eyes, then her nose, then her lips. Her beauty just knocked Sujal over. Sujal just stood there rooted to the ground just staring at her. At the same time the very words that Sneha said to him. the previous night, they just kept on going through his mind over and over again.

Edited by Sujalthegreat - 18 years ago

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Jas Cheema

@sujal_kashish

Dazzler

Posted: 18 years ago

#75

mindblowing!it's kashish finally!omg ur stories r so in depth dat wid da details we can imagine da actual scenes!keep up da gud wrk! 👏 👏 👏

X.o.X.o.---Jasmine---x.O.x.O

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Bhumika amin

@ami_princess

Voyager

Posted: 18 years ago

#76

hey finally kashish entry.......sujal is out in first ball.... 😆

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Daebak

@Daebak

Trailblazer

+ 7

Posted: 18 years ago

#77

oh nice.....kashish aa gayi......superb.....hey promo wali baat to batai hi nahi tumne....uska kya hua???? wo heart....wo kavya??? 😕

😆 😆 anyways....nice part!!!!

continue soon!!!

luv,
vandu 😉

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Anamika

@ana13

Inactive

Posted: 18 years ago

#78

aawwwwww......sooo koooolll.........ahem kavya's acting wierd...lol!!!!!!!!ohk n y does kashish luv kavya.....plzzzz......disclose it soon...never expected sucha twist!!!!!!!!
Anamika

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Sujalthegreat

@Sujalthegreat

Voyager

+ 2

Posted: 18 years ago

#79

Originally posted by: togepe30
oh nice.....kashish aa gayi......superb.....hey promo wali baat to batai hi nahi tumne....uska kya hua???? wo heart....wo kavya??? 😕

😆 😆 anyways....nice part!!!!

continue soon!!!

luv,
vandu 😉

don't worry, all will be revealed in next part lol 😆