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qurratulann

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Posted: 18 years ago

#41

fanfiction is going great!!!....love all the characters....=)

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Aliya

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Posted: 18 years ago

#42

great paRt!! 👏 ..continue sOOn!! 😳 👏

love,aliya 😳

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cheeselova

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Posted: 18 years ago

#43

hey just read ur fanfic it's awesome

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kia

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Posted: 18 years ago

#44

gr8 promo 👏 sounds interesting 😛 😳 post the part soon 😊

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Anamika

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Posted: 18 years ago

#45

awwwwwww........luv tha promo....waiting 2 c sujal fallin in luv at first site........u rok
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Sujalthegreat

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Posted: 18 years ago

#46

Part 3

Sneha: Prem
GM 1: Who the hell are you?
Prem didn't say anything back, instead he took his shirt off and put it around Sneha.
Prem: Go and sit in the car.
GM 1: She's not going anywhere.
Before he could even touch Sneha, Prem grabbed his hand and kicked him in the stomach, causing him to fall backwards, against the others. They also fell as well. Prem then went up to Sujal and helped him onto his feet. They both smiled at each other. But then the gang members surrounded them.
Prem: Sneha get away from here.
Sneha: But Prem…Bhai
Sujal: Just go, we'll deal with this.
Sneha ran away from there. One of the guys ran after her. Prem couldn't catch him, as others grabbed hold of him. Sujal got them off Prem and they both fought against the guys. Meanwhile Sneha was running towards the exit of the alleyway. The guy was almost close to her. He almost caught her, when a foot came out of nowhere, causing him to trip over and fall. Sneha was once again relieved at who again came to her rescue. He picked up the guy by the collar and pinned him up against the wall. It was Angad. He turned towards Sneha.
Angad: Are you okay?
Sneha nodded. He then turned towards the guy.
Angad: Now why were you chasing her?
Sneha: Angad….Sujal Bhaiya and Prem are back there with the rest of them.
Angad: What there's more of them?
GM: Yes there's more of us and your friends are getting whats coming to them.
Angad: Oh really, well lets go and see, because I think it would be unfair for you to miss out on the treatment your buddys are getting. So come on lets go.
Angad let go of him and just kept on pushing him forward. The guy tried to get away from Angad, but Angad wasn't having any of it. There was no way that he could get away from him. He tried one last time to get away, but Angad pushed him so hard that he fell onto the ground. He looked up and saw most of his friends were down on the ground beside him, crying out in pain. One was getting beaten up by Sujal and another by Prem. Another tried to get away, but Angad kicked him.
Angad: Nobody leaves. You've dealt with them two now deal with me.
But before Angad could do anything, Sneha stopped him.
Sneha: Angad stop! They've already had enough from Sujal Bhaiya and Prem. Just look at them.
Angad picked up the guy, that he bought with him.
Angad: What about him? He hasn't had any special treatment.
GM: Look just let me go, okay I hardly did anything. I'm sorry just let me go.
Angad: Why should I, they've probably forgiven you, but not me. You hurt Sneha and you hurt Sujal. Do you think I'm just going to let you go.
Sneha: Angad just let him go. He's on his own now. Just like I was, just like how Sujal bhaiya was, when he fought them. If you all beat him up then whats the difference between us and him.
Angad: Well atleast slap him Sneha.
Sneha: No he isn't worth it.
Angad let go of him, but then Prem grabbed hold of him.
Prem: You're lucky, we're letting you go and its because of her. Now next time I catch you anywhere near her, I don't care even if its by coincidence. You won't have me to deal with, but Angad and he's worse than I am. Do you understand !!!!!
Then Prem pushed him to the floor and the guy got up and ran away.
Sneha looked at Sujal and ran up to him and hugged him tightly.
Sujal: Hey Sneha, they've gone now. Everything is fine now
Sneha: I'm sorry bhaiya, because of me…..
Sujal: Don't ever say that. It wasn't your fault. I'll go through this again, if it means saving you.
Prem interrupted.
Prem: If you two have had your moment, then can I also get a hug as well.
Sneha then went up to Prem and hugged him as well.
Sneha: I missed you a lot.
Prem: Well I didn't. (Prem joked)
Sneha was about to hit him.
Prem: Just kidding. I missed you a lot as well.
They all smiled at each other and then left.

Meanwhile Kripa was waiting outside her house, for Sneha. But she didn't turn up. Kripa was getting worried. Then Anjali came out of the house.
Anjali: Kripa what are you still doing here?
Kripa: Don't know didi, Sneha should have been here by now, but she hasn't come yet.
Anjali: Have you tried phoning her?
Kripa: Yes, but I can't seem to get through.
Anjali: Try phoning the house, she might not have left yet.
Kripa: I've already done that, that's why I'm worried.
Anjali: Ok look, I can wait with you if you want.
Kripa: No didi, you might as well go, Kavya will be waiting for you.
Anjali: OK look phone them at home once more, then we'll see.
So Kripa dialed the number again. The phone was ringing. But this time Prem answered the phone.
Kripa: Hello who is that?
Prem: What do you mean who is that? You forgotten already Kripa !
Kripa: OMG! Prem! When did you get back? So that's why Sneha hasn't come to pick me up.
Prem: Hey slow down, Kripa, take a break, will you?
Kripa: Oops sorry…
Prem: Hey listen, something happened earlier on, with Sneha…..
Prem told Kripa everything that happened with Sneha and Sujal, while she listened over the phone.
Kripa: Is she okay though?
Prem: Yes she's fine, she's upstairs resting, why don't you come over? It'll make her feel better.
Kripa: Yes I'm coming over right now.
Anjali looked at Kripa. Tears started to form in Kripa's eyes and she looked really worried.
Anjali: Kripa whats happened, is everything ok?
Kripa: Sneha…Sneha was attacked earlier on today by some guys.
Anjali: What is she okay?
Kripa: Yes she's fine, Prem just said that she's resting.
Anjali: Prem?
Kripa: Yes Prem, he's the one who saved Sneha and Sujal bhaiya. I have to go there didi.
Anjali: Okay look, I might as well come with you. I'll phone Kavya and let him know as well.

Edited by Sujalthegreat - 18 years ago

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brainychild92

@brainychild92

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Posted: 18 years ago

#47

awwwww!!!!! family reunion!!!! lol.. but felt bad for sneh but she is rite that gunda was not worth moving her precious muscles for.lol

continue soooooooonn