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Posted: 17 years ago
#61
Recap:

In the evening around 6:30 there was a knock on kripa's door!! GUESS WHO IT WAS????

if you guessed her friend your wrong if you guessed
ANGAD ur right!!!!!!!!!!

so as usual kripa opens the door but this time she sees angad upset..

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Angad entered with his whole face red.

Kripa: ab kya chahiye. drama band karo mujhe pata hai yeh zaroor teri koi chaal hogi mujhe bother karne ke liye. Hai naa????

ANGAD:....(SITS ON THE BED.)

Kripa: hello, angad. kya hua??? 😕

angad: kya main tumhe kuch puch sakta hoon?
owwww(cheecks hurt)

kripa: lagta hai jaise kisi ne tumhe bahut maara ho. aur haan bolo..

angad: your right.

kripa: par kyun?

angad: look i entered the room then all of a sudden this guy knocked and said go in fast. i didnt really care but im like what dude? one second later he punched me and said im telling you stay away from her, if you even try to get close to her i will kill you.

kripa: whatt???? whoo????

angad: what im thinking is that some guy is obsessed with you and he thinks I LIKE YOU..

kripa: WHAT.. i dont like you..i hate you..

angad: hey, girl, i dont have any interest in you either.

kripa: but who was that anyways

angad: he had an bandana on

kripa:why would you let him in then

angad: i dont know he didnt look that strong. well whoever it is he does love ya.

kriap: was he hot??? because then i dont mind 😉

angad:HEYYY

kripa: why are you jealous

angad: me jealous.. anyways bye

kripa: be careful

angad: (angads turns back fast with a smirk but again it hurts his face)

kripa: wait i think i should help you. i have first aid.

angad: no prob i cool it didnt hurt that much

kripa: stop showing off and come.

kripa put some cream etc.

angad: hey, im good as new...bye

kripa: take care..

angad: (turns fast and this time it didnt hurt at all when he smirks) OH WOW.....your saying take care. ohhhhhh . you like me huh??

kripa: angadddd , goooooooooooooo

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angad goes to his room ***thinks***** hey, good idea on the day of the concert...oh tommorow...i should do something odd to kripa and see if that gut returns!!!!

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NEXT DAY!!!

Welcome to the talent show that we always have when a year is coming to an end!!

This year we have an exciting offer to the selected participants of our "love" groups...all will preform their songs then there will be a voting system where the most point pair will preform in our talent show and then on valentines they will have to join this special thing@!!!!!!!!

Lets start with Sushma and Rohit

dance......dance.,......etc.

now, ..... and ........

now ...... and .........

and now angad and kripa

in the song touch me angad ended by kissing kripa neck and then pushing her to the wall.. the audience said woooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooooo

the teachers felt odd and the youngsters loved it!!! 😕


kripa had no expression



AND THE WINNERS ARE ANGAD AND KRIPA

angad and kripa were called to the stage..

host: just a few questions..

h:odd question and a bit personal but anything going on with you 2?

a: first of all if anything was ahppening we wouldnt tell you

k: (interrups) but no!!

h: ok. did you both enjoy performing?

k: it was fine

a: come on be a good sport.. it was fun!!!!

h: ok ok we are getting past our time... thanks everyone!!!!
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On the way to the rooms...

angad: hey kripz

kripa: what????? why u calling me kripz

angad: wait i wanted to ask , u thin kthe guy would return???

kripa: yeah he will come (worried)

angad: how do you know?

kripa: i found this note..." stay away from angad, or i will kill him"

angad: why would u care

kripa: angadd.. oviously

anhad: what??

kripa: it also said i will come soon today if you call any secruity i will make sure i kill your family

angad: look dont listen i will stay with you and make sure he comes...

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at night around 11:15

angad: he is not ever coming...

kripa :wait

angad: im leaving

kripa: no

angad: angad purposly goes to the door like he is gonna leave


The end
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Posted: 17 years ago
#62
okay that guy really has some issues. he claims to love her and now says that i'll kill your family?? poor angad . i think right when angad pretends to leave that guy will come and hurt angad again. maybe the guy is prithvi. anways great part, and continue soon 😳
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Posted: 17 years ago
#63
Recap:

at night around 11:15

angad: he is not ever coming...

kripa :wait

angad: im leaving

kripa: no

angad: angad purposly goes to the door like he is gonna leave

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kripa then runs to angad and holds his arm.

kripa: angad....please dont go 😕

angad:why honey???
angad turns around and says,"oh yeah remember when i kissed you in touch me, how was that..

kripa:angad, i found that unessicary..

angad:really?

kirpa: yeah, you never even told me u were gonna do that//

angad:ohhhhhhhhhhhh....so you wanted to rehearse that!!!

kripa:nooooo, oviosly not!

angad:well you want to replay that scene

before kripa could say no angad grabbed her and kissed her neck for fun..

kripa: angad, stop

that second covinidently the unknown guy walked in since the door was left open when angad was preteneding to leave. the guy enter and kicked angad far on the floor.

kripa:ANGADDD

the unknown guy pulled the bandana on his face: maine tum dono ko mana kiya tha na.....MANA KIYA THA!!!! phir bhi angad tum issey kiss kar rahe ho...

kripa: listen guy it was just by accident..dont touch angad!!!

guy: well tumhe saaza dena nahin chatta meri phulchari!!

angad:ehhhh...hold your tongue ehh..

guy: what will you do ?

the guy grabbed kripa and once again kissed kripa neck

kripa: stoppppp itt....angaddddd

angad couldnt let that happen 😆

angad went and grabbed his neck, threw him off and grabbed kripa.

angad: (holding kripa) if you even try to touch her , you will really regret!!!

kripa then let go of angad, ran to that guy and pulled off his bandana really fast!!!!!!!!!!!! 😲 😲

kripa: pritvi tum 😊

angad: matlab

kripa:angad, agar mujhe phele pata hota ke pritvi iss school mein hai toh main iss ke saath yeh show karti..he's my boyfriend from high school.

angad:

kripa:actually what happen was that after highschool i came here to study while he went to another university. i told him there that we would meet always but i never found him. but you know me i forgot about him. when did you come here?

pritvi: yesterday i came here because our universities have a special program where i need to come here for a week . then i found your name on this universities list!! but i saw you with this guy and got scared.

kripa:but pritvi why would you want to kill my family?

pritvi: i wouldnt have..i just wanted to make sure you dont end up with angad..

kripa:thats not a nice threat.. well anyways pritvi say sorry to angad..

pritvi:sorry man

angad was hurt on his arm (a bleeding scratch)

angad:its okay im just bleeding

kripa:go to the nurse, please leave us 2 alone for a few minutes.

angad: yea (***last time she helped me , what happen to her**)

angad left that room

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angad ***why do i care anyways, i will go just kind another girl to bother!!

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at night

angad***oh shit i forgot that me and kripa had to go to the candy shop!!***but oh yea she is with pritvi...come on angad forget kripz...dont give a damm about her

THE END
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Posted: 17 years ago
#64
Great part. Wish Prithvi wasn't there.

Can't wait for more. Continue soon.
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Posted: 17 years ago
#65
RECAP:
at night

angad***oh shit i forgot that me and kripa had to go to the candy shop!!***but oh yea she is with pritvi...come on angad forget kripz...dont give a damm about her

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the next Morning

angad went to his classes. angad noticed that kripa never said anything to him.it was like she was lost in her dreams.......about pritvi.

angad did this same routine for a few days: wake up, go to class, sleep. no talking no masti. till after 5 days when it was finally pritvi's end of his extra class, kripa came to angad's room.

kripa: knock knock

angad: (opened door in surprise)

kripa:hi angad...itne din huye, mile nahi

angad: i thought you hate me right

kripa: oh yea...i forgot!!!

angad:so where's uf bf? ever since he came u forgot about me!

kripa:no....well he went back.,well u can bother me again. par ek baat kahoon angad.jabse pritvi se tum mile ho na...tum badal gaye ho...u never bother me..

angad:im not in the mood. just leave please.

kripa:ok if u say!!

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next day.

kripa was going to her room when she saw angad's room a bit open. she went in!!!!!!!!!

there she saw angad with another girl on the chair romancing!

kripa: 🤔

angad saw her from his side of his eye.

angad:oh kripa.,come in a few minutes..then i will spend time with u...haha

kripa:disgusting

angad: go away now lily...thanks anyways

kripa came back later again.

kripa:so u think ur hot and all that eh??????

angad:why do you think ur hot???

kripa: im hot and UR NOT!!!!

angad: actually i think im the one who hot , all the girls just melt on me!!!

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OH NO!! 😆
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Posted: 17 years ago
#66
yay 2 parts!! how could kripa just leave angad like that?? and that to for prithvi?? god i hate prithvi. lol i loved it when kripa was jealous. angad has every right to do whatever he wants, especially after what kripa did. anways continue soon 😛
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Posted: 17 years ago
#67
sorry but scool is in and i have less time to write !
Recap:kripa:so u think ur hot and all that eh??????

angad:why do you think ur hot???

kripa: im hot and UR NOT!!!!

angad: actually i think im the one who hot , all the girls just melt on me!!!
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kripa: you know what angad, you shut up, and im going 😳

angad:ouuuuuuuuu i see sweat on you tooo, wow i must be tooo hot for even you!

kripa: yeah right , u know what let me tell u the truth "You were hell jealous when u saw me with pritvi"

angads: WHAT CRAP R U SAYING?

stay tuned for more of angad and kripa's hot fight!!!!

sorry g2g
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Posted: 17 years ago
#68
oh verry short pl write big great sweet 👏
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Posted: 17 years ago
#69
Recap: kripa: you know what angad, you shut up, and im going

angad:ouuuuuuuuu i see sweat on you tooo, wow i must be tooo hot for even you!

kripa: yeah right , u know what let me tell u the truth "You were hell jealous when u saw me with pritvi"

angads: WHAT CRAP R U SAYING?

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Kripa: It's not crap angad, its the truth. You always talk alot in class, flirt around but this week girls were coming to you and you , no reply.

Angad: what shit kripa, You have to belive that u were jealous when you saw me and lily toggether. You left saying disgusting like you didnt have something like that with pritvi.

Kirpa: Anyways angad im gonna prove that you were jealous and that u do care about me, maybe u even think im hot!!!!!

Angad: Hah, lets bet on it.

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3 days later...

Kripa: Roshini main chati hoon ke tum na angad se call karke kaho ke kripa ko accident hogaya hai... main dekh na chahti hoon ke kya woh ayega ya nahin?

Roshini: why do you care anyways?

Kripa: it was part of our bet.

Roshini: u know what kripa, i think you guys are just in love!!

Kripa: Shut Up ROSHINI, I do not like him okay!!!

Roshini: ok jokes

Roshini calls angad: angad main hoon roshini kripa ki saheli, mujhe na sirf tumara number pehle mila hai kripa ke cell phone se

Angad: and what?

Roshini: kripa had an accident please come fasttttt, we are at (says an address, i couldnt think of something)

Angad: Im coming

5 minutes later

Angad's friend Rohit: ROshini kripa kaisi hai?

Roshini: where angad

Roshini whispers to kripa ****they belive It*****

Rohit: roshini!! while angad was trying to get to you guys he had an accident we are at the Moti Hospital.
i will take care of him and you take care of her

Roshini: KRIPAAA....angad had an accident while he was reaching here,, i think we shold go..

Kripa: Oh noooooo, we have to goooooooo and i think we should tell him the truth

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When They reached outside of the hospital they saw rohit outside and he said lets go to room # 102

When they got there angad was hearing his Ipod and sitting on the bed normally as ever singing "Arrey Jhuth Math bholna , oh kripa saach kehna," 😆

Kripa: HUHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHHH 😲
Angadddddddd???????????????????????????????????????

Angad: 😉 Haha kripa, Kya tumhe lagta hai ke sirf tumhe chal chalana aati hai??? Nahin Nahin kripa, mujhe bhi chalne aati hai. Tum jab roshini se baat kar rahi thi bahar, Actually rohit bought a new device that he can hear anything a person says thats 8 feet away from them. and when we saw you guys in the cafeteria we said lets just hear your conversation so here we are we knew everything you guys planned. And then we started our plan by saying that we got an accident while we were gonna get to you. And look you do care for me.......awwwwwwwwwwwwww (sarcastically) how cute.

Kripa: Not evennn

Angad: roshini, rohit leave for 5 mins please

Rohit: we will go drink some cofee!!

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in the hospital room

Kripa: how did u get this room with our having a problem?

Angad: Money can do anything dear. 😉

Kripa: why did u tell them to leave?

Angad: actually i wanted to ask you something

Angad suddenly pulled kripa onto the hospital bed and now angad was on top of kripa!!!!!

Angad: So were you really caring for me?

Kripa: angad leave me what nonsense.

Angad:such batao nah?

Kripa thought that she should just go on with the game.

Kripa then touched angads face that made angad a bit nervous.

Kripa: angad actually mujhe teri chinta nahin thi, i was just worred about Rohit. You know he might of been hurt in the car tooo right????

Angad: what do u mean?

Kripa: iwas scared for rohit

Angad got a bit irratated. : so not for me?

Kripa: kyun angad, tumhe kyun jalan ho rahi hai?

Angad: kya? what? no..

Kripa; anyways angad i was joking, I didnt give a damn about rohit, nor i dont like him, so dont worry babes..

Angad: Kripa lets get up

before they could get up angad's hand slipped and he fell flat on kripa. both staredinto each others eyes but kripa in time pushed her head back so it wouldnt touch angads lips.

That second it was over 5 minutes so rohit and roshini walked in and were in total shock...................
😲

Rohit and roshini: ANGAD KRIPA WHAT THE HELLLLLLL??????

angad and kripa quickly got up!!!!

angad: ohhh i just slipped

Kripa looked at angad and rolled her eyes.

angad: smirked

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Rohit and roshini met the next day and disscussed angad and kripa.

Rohit: hey roshini, why do i think kripa and angad lied yesterday about them sliping, i think they like each other.

Roshini: well im not really sure.

THE END

stay tuned for more....and make sure u comment, long comments 😆


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Posted: 17 years ago
#70
really cute amd imteresting both still stubborn 😆

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