Mistake!! AK story!! Part 53 END...pg 71 - Page 49

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Posted: 18 years ago
lolz angad can't stay away from kripa even for a week
oh and wht's wrong wid prithvi he's only talking about kripa and sur lolzz poor harshini 😆
amazing part


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~Sana~
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey di nice part. pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee send prithvi and his family away from kripa so they don't bother her any more. pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee do this poor angad has to suffer because of this lol he can't romance with her. lol any ways this part is really good.

pleaseeeeeeeeeeee continue soon

love ya di

mittal
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Posted: 18 years ago
lol well first of all i dun think this FF was too long that itz part 521 ALRAEDY!!! lol u wrote part 521 instead of 21 hahaha lol
and i think harshini deserves wat she is getting!!! that is how kripa felt..well she din but she wud if her husband was with or talkin abt a naother gurl 🤢 bi*** deserve wat she is getting!!!

cute part btween AK!!! angad is a sexc annoying bast*** 😳

cnt soonnn
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: sahr_8

lol well first of all i dun think this FF was too long that itz part 521 ALRAEDY!!! lol u wrote part 521 instead of 21 hahaha lol
and i think harshini deserves wat she is getting!!! that is how kripa felt..well she din but she wud if her husband was with or talkin abt a naother gurl 🤢 bi*** deserve wat she is getting!!!

cute part btween AK!!! angad is a sexc annoying bast*** 😳

cnt soonnn

😆😆😆thanks for noticing I'll correct it.... itna gussa? oh god...I think I did to much to irritate u😉...anyway prithvi will go away now, after all he is a changed man now😛...harshii, insecure, blames kripa for prithvi's acts😕

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetmittal

hey di nice part. pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee send prithvi and his family away from kripa so they don't bother her any more. pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeeee do this poor angad has to suffer because of this lol he can't romance with her. lol any ways this part is really good.

pleaseeeeeeeeeeee continue soon

love ya di

mittal

Angad has is own prob with kripa😆...prithvi will go away...thanks for liking the part

Originally posted by: iamsmart

lolz angad can't stay away from kripa even for a week
oh and wht's wrong wid prithvi he's only talking about kripa and sur lolzz poor harshini 😆
amazing part
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~Sana~

Prithvi will go away...abb wo toh changed man hai...Angad!!! kya karein iska pyar aisa hi hai😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
ThanQ deeya!

Part: 53

Angad wanted to take Kripa home next morning but Gayatri requested to leave her for two days until Sur's vacation. "Aunty! Delivery ke liye toh Kripa aapkey paas hi rahegi na? abb mein bhi akela rehta hoon. Mom went to Anitta's house." He tried to convince Gayatri. Kripa also requested him to allow her to stay with her parents. Angad reluctantly left her after taking promise from her for calling every other hour.

Kripa called him four times a day if not every other hour. Angad satisfied atleast for her making attempt to call him at office. Naina came back after four days. Kripa also came back home.

Angad talked to Prithvi about Kripa's disinterest in developing back their relationship. Prithvi felt bad for it but kept distance from Kripa. He maintained client-customer relation with Angad in the office too.

Kripa explained the problem to Anittah about Prithvi and his family and Anittah assured her to handle the situation when necessary. She eventually happened to meet Aaliyah in a club party and discussed the problem. Aaliyah assured to keep Prithvi away from Khanna family and make Harshini understand the situation.

Two months passed. Prithvi left for US with his family, and mother. Aaliyah joined him in US after a week. Prithvi left a note for Kripa before leaving "Kripa! I knew you are not interested in developing any relationship between us anymore. I certainly behaved wild with you in the past and I 'm ashamed of it even now. When we were engaged I took you for granted and believed our relationship. I agree, we never shared any sweet memories but I thought you were mine. You disrespected our relationship and developed a relationship with Angad. Whatever, you didn't want to go forward with our commitment. I forced you to get into marriage thinking to change your mind which failed at first moment. Now, I realized the word 'love'. I love Harshini and respect her as my better half. I just wanted to respect you as a friend which you never agreed. I don't force you for this. I wish you all happiness in the world."

Kripa showed it to Angad and trashed the letter. She warned Angad again not to make any efforts to build up any friendship with Prithvi and his family. Angad dramatically bent his head as if obeying her instructions. She smiled and left to take care of Sur.

Kripa delivered a baby boy after completing the pregnancy as per Angad's wish. Naina and Kripa together named the boy 'Prateek.' Sur and everyone in Khanna family enjoyed the naming ceremony. Naina forgot her past anger on Kripa and gave lot of respects to her. Angad as usual never forgot to love Kripa after office though he became busy with work and family.

After twelve months Kripa started resuming her studies. Initially, Angad tried to change her mind as she doesn't need to struggle now instead of taking care of kids and him. Kripa gave enough reasoning and convinced him to allow her to go for her studies.

After some days, Kripa was getting tired and told him to give up her studies. He convinced her to concentrate on her studies as he took care of her other responsibilities like looking after Sur's homework, sleeping Prateek on bed in time.
Most of the time, Angad helped her in studies in the night only after putting Prateek and Sur to bed and finishing his passionate session.
They fight more than studying as Kripa refused to spoil her mood with his passionate love just before studies. But he always fought back with her and won over her as he wanted to refresh his mind before helping her with studies. "Seeing you in front of me and not touching? Hoyi nahin sakta. Pehley mera gurudakshina dena baad mein padhayi shuru karna," His all time reasoning!! Kripa always gave up for his naughty reasoning. Kripa tried hard to put her mind on studies despite his naughty caresses all over her body.

Three years passed. Kripa completed her graduation. Prateek started going to school. Sur was in third grade now and always brought one and other trophy home saying she won speech on 'green day', 'teacher's day,' 'freedom fight', 'disarm movement.' Prateek imitate her in everything either it was about studies, or speech practicing, or singing practice, or sports.

Suryaban retired and became good counterpart in club for Dilip. Naina followed Devyani's footsteps and involved in many mythological meetings. Gayatri also accompanied her many times.

Aaliyah moved back to Mumbai for good. Her second baby girl and Anittah's first delivery happened at the same time in same hospital. Both Aaliyah and Anittah became good friends again in no time. Damini passed away after few months from Aaliyah's second delivery coz of severe heart attack. Prithvi never came back to India with family. Harshini still had the aversion on Kripa. Prithvi kept sending his occasional messages to Kripa. Kripa now got rid of the aversion on him and stopped trashing Prithvi's greetings but still holding the distance between two families.

Angad succeeded in convincing Kripa to go for another pregnancy. For her fear she was told in third months itself by the doctor that she was having twins. Everyone at home made plenty lists with millions of rhyming names for upcoming twins. Kripa became irritating because of the tiredness by pregnancy and always kept fighting with Angad.

"Tum aaj kal bahut irritative hogayi hai, Kripa! Ghar aaney sey hi darr lag raha hai" Angad kept complaining. Kripa rolled her eyes without changing her facial expressions "shukre hai, kum se kum issi irritation ki wajah sey tum door rahega."

Angad grinned at her comment and giggled "do you think so? Mein soch raha tha ki humarey doori ki wajah sey tum irritate horahi hai." Kripa groaned with anger and playfully slapped him "tum suderega nahin.."

He cuddled her "I did. Prateek ke time mein ek din bhi tum sey door nahin rehta tha, except the days you were in your parent's house for delivery. But now, I didn't pamper you since 6th month."

Kripa blushed and giggled "Pata hai aaj ki jamaney mein mein hi ek aurat hoon chaar chaar bachon ko paida karney wali." He kissed her "Humara pyar bhi aisa hai, unique. I'll wait till you deliver. I don't want to hurt you, promise." Kripa moved her lips sideways two times "thanks."

Kripa delivered twin healthy babies after completion of full nine months, one boy and one girl. Sur disappointed as she couldn't give her 'paired names' to them. Suryaban consoled her "don't worry, Sur! You give your choice of girl's name and I give boy's name this time. Kyon naina ji! Aap kya kahengey?" he asked Naina as she took the chance of naming 'Prateek' last time. Kripa and Angad named them 'Satyavad" after Suryaban's father and 'Diya' on Sur's one of the choices.

Angad promised to put full stop for kids before Kripa allowed him to touch her after eight complete months of separation as "their record break" in Kripa's theory and "wonders of world" in Angad's theory.

END.............thinking not to torture AK with another seperation as they already gone thru a lot for four years in the beginnig.

Hope you all enjoyed this ff.......Thanks for all encouragement I got from you all through out the ff.....hope you all are not much bothered by me :grin
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Posted: 18 years ago

yay i am the first one to reply lol

hey di u ended this ff i thought u would do some more romance lol anyways it was awesome ending wow kripa and angad have four kids lol angad is happey but kripa is like so tired lol

i loved ur all ff and this ff very much

i want to know r u gonna start new ff soon can;t wait to read what ur next ff would be about

pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeee reply soon di

love ya always

mittal

Edited by sweetmittal - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
omgggg u ended this ff 😭 😭 noooo
amazing part lolzzz prithvi would never change 😆
this ff was superb i loved it
i like the way ak were inseperable 😳
r u gonna write another ff on ak 😆 then that's gr8888888888888 😆 di plzzz write another ff on ak

i loved to read ur ff 😳


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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: iamsmart

omgggg u ended this ff 😭 😭 noooo
amazing part lolzzz prithvi would never change 😆
this ff was superb i loved it
i like the way ak were inseperable 😳
r u gonna write another ff on ak 😆 then that's gr8888888888888 😆 di plzzz write another ff on ak

i loved to read ur ff 😳 _________
~Sana~

ThanQ sana! ..next ff...try to wrie soon...iss ff mein koyi nahin badlengey...na prithvi...na Angad's passion...na kripa's obeying her love😳

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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: sweetmittal

yay i am the first one to reply lol

hey di u ended this ff i thought u would do some more romance lol anyways it was awesome ending wow kripa and angad have four kids lol angad is happey but kripa is like so tired lol

i loved ur all ff and this ff very much

i want to know r u gonna start new ff soon can;t wait to read what ur next ff would be about

pleaseeeeeeeeeeeeee reply soon di

love ya always

mittal

Thanks mittal...kripa ki baat main nahin jaanti but I'm tired of this romance😆.....in real kyph kripa got pregnant four times😆...so I applied that here😳...Angad never tires in loving his beloved😳

I try next ff soon...AK per hi likhoongi...then I have to think about Shabd-Mahi too

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