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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: sahr_8

ogm y did kripa do that
i think prithvi blackmailed her

Good guess😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part: 19

Angad returned home after four weeks of long trip in US and burst into tears when he heard about Kripa's marriage. He yelled, screamed, abused everyone for not letting him know and allowed Kripa to go with the marriage.

Dadi, Naina, Dilip, Anittah consoled him and explained everything in detail. "She agreed for the marriage with open heart and you unnecessarily worrying about her. We couldn't approach with the proposal as Kripa looks happy with Prithvi. How can we break that engagement when both bride and groom are happy with each other?"

Angad screamed "Yeh sab jhoot hai. I don't believe Kripa liked and agreed for the marriage with her full will. They forced her and you all sent her with Prithvi. She loves me only me. I shouldn't have gone, it's my MISTAKE to trust you all. Wo Kripa bhi kabhi phone par nahin aati."

Everyone thought Angad is obsessed with his love on Kripa. He couldn't reveal the truth of his commitment with Kripa.

He cried for three days and shuttled between Sarma house and his. He couldn't meet Gayatri or Suryaban as they are on one month long pilgrimage as Kripa left for Belgium a week after Prithvi left. Angad forgot doing daily rituals too in humiliation, guilt, heart break remembering Kripa every minute. Khannas tried hard to bring him back to normal.

Misthy got married to Shabbir in December and left after two months for Washington, D.C. troughh Khanna industries visa papers.

Angad gave a word to Misthy to get along with life and started diverting his mind in his business. After three months Angad noticed that Raj and Anittah are interested in each other and Angad informed in the house scolding Anittah for hiding things from family. "Mujh sey kya seekha hai, Anittah? Kabhi chup chupkey pyar mat karo. Sachaiyi ka saamna karna seekho. Otherwise, you might lose your life too like your brother."

Anittah is still grateful to Angad for his initiative in her love affair as Naina and Dilip agreed for their relation without any fussy. Anittah asked Raj to wait for marriage till Angad gets his girl. Angad warned several times but Anittah didn't give up hopes. Raj is also very cooperative and patient and still waiting for Anittah and Angad to find his girl.

Naina started looking for girls and Angad warned them from running away from home. Dadi consoled Naina and advised to wait for some more time. After six months project in Belgium, Prithvi got a job in Khanna industries branch in US, with Damini's influence. Gayatri and Suryaban visited US for Kripa's delivery.

Aaliyah tried to make friends with Angad but he always discouraged her. Damini and Aaliyah still puzzled at Angad's depressive status but Naina never gave any scope of suspicion. Aaliyah left for US after serious trials to get Angad in her life but in vain for two years.

Naina, Gayatri and Damini still meeting in the clubs but Naina never gave any scope for them to speak about Angad or Anittah. Damini is still trying to inject the thought of proposal of Aaliyah to Angad but Naina deaf eared all the time.

Angad moved out of Khanna Mansion as Naina forced him to marry Kanan, the leading Lawyer in the area. Kanan's mother, Avantika whom Naina met in her club two years ago and fond her instantly. Anittah went with him to take care of him on Devyani's advice. Though he disliked the constant bugging about his marriage Angad is maintaining the relations intact,.

Kripa and Angad are getting each other's news through their moms…truth about their outside life…..

Present:

"Hi, Prithvi!" Kripa wished him as soon as she entered the house. Sur is still holding Kripa's hand and watching Prithvi from distance.

Prithvi raised his eyebrow at her "Hey, Sur! Did you already forget me? Kyon, Kripa! Kya kar diya meri beti ko?" he held his hands out for Sur. Kripa signaled her and she went to him and sat in his lap. Prithvi showed his cheeks and Sur kissed him with a smile. He saw chocolates in her hand and new chain in her neck. "Yeh, chocolates kisney diya hai meri gudiya ko? Aur yeh chain? Meiney kabhi nahin dekha tumhari paas?"

Sur looked at Kripa and Kripa replied with a smile "Wo khareedney ke liye hi gayi thi. Wahan shop walon ney Sur ko pasand karliya aur chocolates bhi diya tha"

"Are they boys?" he asked Sur and she nodded her head with confused expressions. Prithvi smiled "Boys sey door raho, nain toh tumhey phasa kar lejayengay. Aur mein tumari liye rolunga" he kissed her cheeks and tickled her to make her laugh loudly, and played with her some more time.

Kripa relieved when they both got into usual routine and walked inside. Gayatri followed her and whispered "Prithvi was waiting for you for long time. Where did you go this early morning?" Gayatri doesn't seem too impressed with Kripa's reply about the chain and chocolates.

Kripa gave sharp looks to her mom and left silently without answering her to change her dress into casuals.

After lunch Prithvi took Kripa and Sur to Damini's house.

"Mom! I want to settle back here in India. Look for an apartment."

Damini surprised at Prithvi's sudden decision "I guessed something like this will come up. I was wondering about your sudden surprise visit. Why do you want to stay separately? We all can stay together. I will arrange all facilities like in US otherwise we all can move together to the new house in Panvel."

Kripa wondered at Prithvi's decision and disliked the idea as it is far from her mom's house and Angad's house but kept quiet. Prithvi agree to move to Panvel's house as it is big and constructed with modern amenities.

"Bhaiya! Prithvi decided to move here for good. They are moving to Panvel next week along with Damini Aunty. Kripa called me in the morning." Anittah gave the news after two days while dining.

Angad surprised for Prithvi's decision "I guessed Anittah! He resigned for the job in Washington branch. I'm not sure if he joins here or completely resigning. I don't want him to leave the company but I don't know if Dad allows him."
Anittah surprised "So, you know before me!! I was wondering if Kripa insisted to come back."

Angad nodded his head "I don't think so. She didn't keep any relations with us, me, for last four years and I don't think she insisted to move back. It must be Prithvi's decision."

"Do you think so? Kripa ki tone sey aisa nahin laga tha. She is so excited to stay here."

Angad stared at Anittah and thought in his mind "Do Prithvi knew about us? If Sur knows about me, probably Prithvi is also knowing about the truth? I have to clarify with Kripa. How can I contact her?"

"Does she leave any contact number?" Angad asked curiously.

Anittah moved her head left to right "Don't try bhaiyya! I don't want you to hurt again."

Angad nodded smiling faintly.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#93
yeh prithvi ko bhagaao aunty 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
#94
nice part but why kripa married prithvi?and now what will angad do?
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thanks kaj,deeya
Next part will show why she married P and everything about her life 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#96
awesome part
omg i really want to know why did she marry prithvi 😡


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sana
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Posted: 18 years ago
#97
hey di nice two parts. i hate that prithvi so much. idiot. i hope kripa will never love him and i hope she killed him or slap him. poor angad has to suffer a lot and still waiting for kripa and poor kripa she can;t decide what she wants she always does what this boys told her to do. ahhhhhhhh please continue soon. this ff is going so good. love ya mittal with lots of love and hugs.

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Posted: 18 years ago
#98
ThanQ mittal and sana

prithvi is the person who made Angad jealous to have Kripa
He will be the person wo makes Angad to get kripa too 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
#99
Part: 20

Four days later:

Angad switched on his computer and took his files to start his work. "Helloo! Goodmorning!!" one sweet voice came out of computer after it finished booting up. Angad smiled to see Kripa's face on his screen and wished back her. He went through his files for an hour. He got a call from Anittah when he is about to step out of his room.

"Bhaiyya! Bhaiyya! Kripa…Kripa.."Anittah paused to take breath as she is sobbing in the phone.

"Anittah! Are you okay? What happened to Kripa? Kya hua tha ussey? Why are you sobbing? Can you tell me for God sake in clear voice?" Angad's heart is beating fast as suspecting something bad and screamed in the phone.

"Kripa is in ICU, Bhaiyya! She had an accident. She is in serious condition, Bhaiyya! Can you come to City hospital in Panvel?" she gave address while sobbing and Angad ran out with keys and cell phone. He noticed Suryaban and Damini are not at work.

His thoughts went on different directions to figure out the possibility of accidents while driving crazily fast to reach the hospital. "Kya huva hoga? Kaisey hua hoga? Was it a car accident? Prithvi tha uski saat? Akeli jaa rahi thi? Sur kahan hai? Dam* it I didn't even ask details. I forgot to ask Anittah in hurry."

He saw Damini and Gayatri sobbing in ICU lobby while Naina and Anittah are consoling them. Dilip is consoling Suryaban who stood near some policemen. Anittah burst into tears after seeing Angad. Angad dropped his hand around Anittah gathering his guts "Kya hua Anittah? How is Kripa? Accident kaisey hua tha?"

One of the policemen came to Angad "May I ask about you? Mr…."

"I'm Angad, Angad Khanna, and General Manager of Khanna Industries." Angad introduced himself.

Police Inspector shook his head "who told you that it's an accident? It's a domestic abuse case. She found unconscious in her house. And this lady brought her here(he showed Damini). Can you tell me anything about this?"

Angad is shocked and looked at Anittah with puzzle. Anittah swallowed and kept silent. He walked to Damini "Aunty! Yeh kya hai? Domestic violence? Kya Prithvi ney kuch kiya tha? What's going on here?"

Damini is silently sobbing and Naina caressing her back. Gayatri is uncontrollable and sobbing other side of Naina. He walked to her "Yeh kya hai Aunty? Can you please explain to me? What was the problem? Aap sab hotey huvey Kripa ki aisi halat? How could he do this? Is he a human or animal?" He screamed at her thinking if Prithvi knew about Kripa's past relationship with him.

"Did Prithvi come to know the truth now? Or does he abusing her before too? How will I know about this?" He again looked at Damini. "Aunty ! aap toh Kripa ki saat hi rehtey haina? Phir yeh kab aur kaisa huva? When did this happen? How much severe is this abuse?" he got more irritated when Damini silently sobbing. "Aap kuch kehtey kyon nahin?. Yeh sab kab huva aur kaisey huva? Where is Prithvi? What the he** is going on with her? God Dam* it Why don't you speak up?" he shouted at her forgetting the surroundings of the hospital.

Anittah pressed his shoulders to calm him down. Dilip and Suryaban reached him and dropped hands on his shoulders. Naina, Gayatri, and Damini opened their mouth with startle at his aggressiveness. Police Inspector came to him and warned "Look, Mr.Angad! We are searching for Prithvi, the victim's husband. We don't know his whereabouts yet. We are suspecting him ran away from crime spot with fear. Mrs. Damini Bose brought her daughter-in-law after noticing her unconscious in her room. She barely heard any fighting between the wife and husband. But she heard her granddaughter screaming and crying. Then she brought Mrs.Kripa Bose here."

Angad is stunned and dumb found after hearing the brief of the incident. Naina recovered and explained the rest "Damini informed Gayatri and Sarma ji before bringing Kripa here. I was with Gayatri to visit Kripa. I informed Anittah and Dilip. I only informed Police on the way to hospital."

Tears are dropping from Angad's eyes and he faintly looked at Naina. "Where is Sur?"

Everyone then realized and looked for her. "She is with us" Police inspector informed. Meanwhile they heard Sur screaming and crying vigorously struggling in two police women hands. The two police women are trying to console her.

Angad melted to see her crying and got up to take her "Leave her Dam* it!!" Everyone shocked at his rude behavior and Sur ran into his arms screaming loudly "Papa!! Papa!!Papa!!"

Angad stretched his hands and held her tight in his embrace. Sur circled her hands around his neck and crying mumbling something but only one word is audible "papa!!"papa!"

All are watching them silently in shock. Angad dropping tears closing his eyes and securing her in his tight embrace. After few seconds he sighed, "Chup hojao Sur! It'll be okay. Everything will be fine, darling! Chup hojao gudiya!" Sur is still trembling vigorously in his hands and is sobbing violently. He caressed her back and head for a few seconds and settled on the floor as wiping her tears and trying to suppress her sobs. One of the police women brought some cold water. Angad made her drink some and she again tightly hugged him crying "Dad stabbed mama! Bad dad! I hate him. I hate him." she started crying violently remembering the scene she witnessed in the morning. Angad is shocked and couldn't believe his ears. He hugged Sur tightly and mumbled loudly "Chup hojao, gudiya! My love, My sweety! Mere jaan! Nothing happens to Mama. I'm here. Papa is here to save her. Believe me papa will save her. Papa will save her. Cup hojaao." He caressed and rubbed her back to calm her down.

Naina, Damini, Gayatri, Anittah and rest of the witnesses forgot their pain and cry and glaring at them with shock.

After a few minutes of counseling Angad could make Sur to calm down and faint in his arms. He kissed her cheeks with tears falling on his cheeks and made her sleep in his lap. He wiped his tears and looked at everyone. He faintly shook his head and spoke between tears "Sur meri beti hai. Humari beti. Meri aur Kripa ki beti." Everyone shocked while opened their mouths.

Anittah slowly walked to him and pressed his shoulder. He saw into her eyes. Both silently dropped tears.

Police Inspector approached Angad after recovering from shock of the little child's violent sobs and Angad's statements. An on duty nurse came and interfered "Aap sab Kripa ki ristedaar hai na? She is out in the room. Doctor is there to speak to you all." The doctor approached them "she is now out of danger. She lost lot of blood and you are lucky we could able to provide her group of blood in time. She had 40 stitches. You can visit her one by one without disturbing her.

Angad got up holding Sur and everyone walked to Kripa's room. Gayatri and Suryaban; Naina and Dilip; Damini and Anittah visited her one pair by another. Angad slowly walked inside. Sur got up and checked her whereabouts. Angad whispered "Do you want to see Mama?" Sur shook her head while tightly encircling his neck. He hugged her to his chest and walked to the bed.

Damini and Gayatri tried to stop their sobs by covering their mouths. Naina is consoling by eye gesture. Everyone stood aside in line silently.

Anittah wiped her tears silently. Angad took Sur closer to Kripa. Sur is hesitantly watching mama. He whispered "You can gently touch her."

Sur unbelievingly looked at him and caressed Kripa's cheeks with her tiny hands. Everyone felt heart wreck to see the scene. Angad dropped tears to see Kripa lying on the hospital bed with pale and soulful face. His heart is yearning to caress Kripa and hold her in his tight embrace. "Sorry, Kripa! I must be the reason behind this torture. I will solve this soon. I can't see you suffer like this." He instantly promised in his mind. Now, his eyes fell on Kripa's hand where a big bandage wrapped. He shocked to see it from elbow to the wrist.

His eyes turned to Damini "What happened?" He walked slowly clenching his teeth. Damini moved behind Naina and replied with trembling voice "he cut her hand" she couldn't speak further and showed the place on her hand from elbow to wrist inside of the hand. He closed his eyes to feel the pain under clenching jaws. Tears are flowing constantly from his eyes. Damini's words and Kripa's status flashed in his mind. He couldn't control himself and walked out of the room holding Sur. He sobbed silently leaning his head to the wall outside the room.

Everyone slowly walked out of the room as Kripa is unconscious on the bed. Sur wiped his tears from cheeks with her two tiny hands. Angad opened his eyes but couldn't stop tears from flowing. "Mama will be alright. Doctors told right?" He couldn't control tears for her innocent counseling and hugged her and sobbed violently. Anittah with tearful eyes pressed his arms "Sur will be scared, Baiyya! Sambhalo apne apko" she whispered as something stuck in her throat. He sobbed hugging Sur's cheek to his and looking at her with tearful eyes.

"Yeh mera paap hai. I'm the culprit for this. I ruined her life. I was to blame for all this. She suffered for me. I don't know how long she was suffering. I can't forgive myself, Anittah! I can't forgive myself"

Anittah nodded her head and cried with him resting her forehead to his shoulder. Sur hugged both of them and hid her face in his neck.
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Posted: 18 years ago
hey di this part was so sad. how could prithvi do this to her. idiot. i hope kripa get better soon. and angad will kill or punish that idiot. continue soon.

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