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lol, cute part they make suchh a cute pair, continue soon. 👏 👏 👏
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Kripa broke her sleep when Sur's tiny hands touched her cheeks. "Mom! Why are you crying? I love you!!" Kripa smiled and wiped her tears and took Sur in tight embrace. "I love you too! I just got a dream sweety! I'm fine. Sojao" She again put Sur in sleep asking about her day with grandparents. In five minutes Sur went to sleep again in Kripa's warm arms.

Kripa remembered depressive Angad in Anittah's house.. "Kitna daring step liya tha thumney, Angad! Tumhara jindagi ko tumhara haaton se hi barbaad kardala. Itna pyar karta tha magar kissi ko keh nahi paya. I wish you could tell your parents before committing this MISTAKE. Mere liye tum jindagi bhar adhura rehgaya. Why couldn't you move forward in life? Tum pehley se hi jaanta tha mein kissi aur ki amanat banchuki thi. I couldn't save myself from this marriage. I was committed to the relationship, Angad! I'm so sorry. I couldn't come into your life. I couldn't wait for you." She silently sobbed and pulled Sur more close and kissed her forehead. She went back into past again.

Past:

Kripa woke up and checked surroundings. Her heart is still beating fast. She felt sultry. Angad is sleeping over her. He is face down under the pillow besides her. His left hand around her waist and left leg tangled with her left leg. Both are uncovered, neither blanket nor their dresses seemed around them. Kripa became red and embarrassed to see herself naked with Angad and warm tears rolled over her corners of eyes. She wiped and slowly removed his hand and leg without disturbing him. She checked the time from Angad's wrist watch as 10 and covered him till waist with blanket. Angad is in deep sleep and couldn't even move an inch. She gathered her clothes and walked into bathroom. She quickly wore them and combed her tangled hair and washed face fast and came into the bed room. She walked to the closet and took his blue button down sweater and covered herself. All buttons of her kurtha were broke coz of Angad's rough handling. She covered her head with dupatta and bid bye to Angad silently in her mind and walked out to exit. She folded her red sari and put it in the bag. She once stared at Angad's bedroom with tearful eyes and walked out with all her packets locking the door behind her. She took a taxi and reached her apartment.

"Mama kya kehegi? Iss sweater ko lekey kitnay sawal karti hai. Hope she won't call Misthy to check about me. If so, Misthy kya kehti hogi? What would Misthy think about me and Angad? Why this happened? Why Angad carried away with his emotions? Why is he so scared to lose me? Couldn't he convince his parents? Can't convince them to approach mamma and papa? As a girl I couldn't tell mamma papa about us but kehti bhi kya? Mein toh ussey pyar toh nahin ki. I controlled my senses but why couldn't he? Yeh kya hogaya hai? How could I come over this now? Could I able to talk to Prithvi about this? Kya kahungi ussey? That I love Angad? I consummated the relationship? What will I tell him? Mamma, papa… kaisey muh dikhaoongi abb?"

"Madam kahan jaana hai?" Taxi driver yelled at Kripa and she startled at him. "Mein kabsey pukar raha hoon, madam! Aap toh kahin kho gayi thi? Kahan jaana hai aapko?"

Kripa recovered quickly and said the address. She postponed thinking about the situation and got down the taxi. She realized Angad money is still in her purse. She opened the door with her extra key and stepped inside with heavy heart praying her parents doesn't attack her. She slowly cat walked to her room and noticed a note on the center table. She read it and sighed loudly. Gayatri left a note saying she and Sarma are going out to Damini's house for dinner and will be back late night. She asked Kripa to finish her dinner and take a nice sleep as she has to get up early for 'Karva Chaut' on next day. Kripa locked her door and sat on the floor near the door. Her eyes started rolling tears out of relief about her parents. She rested her head into knees and recollected everything from Angad' visit till night. She cursed herself for going with him after shopping.

"Khaash mein mama ke saat gayi hoti. Why did I drawn towards Angad? Gayi toh bhi kyon wo sari dikhayi? Aakhir mujhey kyon wo sari kareedna tha? Why couldn't I stop the thought? Why did I allow him to kiss me? What happens to me in front of him? Why can't I bluntly refuse him? Why did I lose in front of him? How did I allow him to touch me. Kya hai uski baahon mein." Kripa's body became warm remembering his touch. She caressed her lips, cheeks, eyes, forehead, hair, thorat, neck and whole body. Her eyes are flowing tears constantly. "Kya hogaya tha mujhey? Kyon mein apni aap ko ussey somp di. Why couldn't I control my senses?" she started sobbing loudly. "Why couldn't I stop him?" she covered her face in her palms and cried out loudly cursing herself. She didn't realize when did she fell asleep.

Gayatri's continuous knock on the door wake her up. She opened her eyes with force as they are stick together. Her head is spinning and throat felt stuck. She tried to wet her dry lips and checked the surroundings. She fell asleep on the floor near the door. She recollected last night and checked the time now in the wall clock. It is showing 4:30. "Rotey Rotey yahin sogayi thi?" She heard again bang on the door and worried tone of Gayatri, "Kripa! Kripa! Utho beti!"

Kripa gathered her voice and slowly answered in husky and drowsy voice "haan, Maa!" Gayatri sounded happy "darwaja kholo beti!" Kripa got up and set herself and opened the door. Gayatri shocked to see swollen Kripa's eyes "Yeh kya haal banadi? Ye sweater kyon pehna? Yeh kiski hai? Bukar hogaya kya? Kal raat kab aayi thi? Misthy ke ghar itni deir tak kabhi nahin gayi thi. Aakhir gayi kyon? Kaisey raha kal raat? Tumhara packets kahan hai?"

Kripa sighed for her flow of enquiries and kept silent and handed the packets to her. "Jaldi taiyyar hokar neechey aaja. Meanwhile I will set your clothes. Wahan Naina aunty ke ghar mein sab log intezaar kartey hongey."Gayatri sounded excited for the festive.

Kripa walked into the bathroom silently after Gayatri left. She took her brush and stunned to see her reflection in the mirror before putting brush into mouth. Her eyes filled tears again. Her face is swollen near eyes coz of constant tears. Her lips are broken in some places and swollen a little with Angad's bites. She caressed her lips, tears escaped from eyes and cheeks reddened thinking about his touch. Goosebumps spread all over her body. She ran her fingers through her neck to touch the bruises. She removed his sweater and put aside on the counter and closed the bathroom door. She removed her kurtha and checked her body. Her upper chest, stomach, shoulders, biceps has his teeth marks. She caressed them with tearful eyes. Her body felt little shivers when a strange pain ran over her spine and goose bumps building over the body. She closed her eyes and felt his touch by cuddling herself "Angad!!" She muttered with sweet pain "Do I love him?"and couldn't stop sobbing. "Kyon aisa hua humaray saat? Why did you break like this? Kuch control karpata." She sat near the wall and sobbed for few minutes. She cried till lost energy to do anymore. She didn't eat anything after lunch yesterday. She felt hungry all of sudden and her stomach is growling.

Gayatri gave another call reminding the time. Kripa got up slowly gathering energy and took shower over head. While hot water going over she felt relieved and her tears also started flowing along with shower. "Main abb kya karoon? Where should I start? Shall I tell mom everything? Shall I take Misthy's help as she knows about us yesterday? Anittah sey kahoon? Aaliyah? Kya kahungi uss sey? I was very strong willed girl in their opinion and now besahara banker ussey madat maangoo? Yeh kahan khada diya mujhey, Angad?" she got anger, felt helpless, frustration, irritation everything mixed together. She would have killed Angad if he comes in front of her now.

Gayatri's another reminder brought her out. She wore black with red border south cotton silk chudidhar with high collar and three fourth sleeves to cover her bruises. She left hair open to dry it. She took milk from fridge and Gayatri warned her. "Yeh kya Kripa? Mein kal batayi thi na Damini wants you to observe vrat? Abb kuch mat kha. Chalo mere saat puja karo and we leave for Naina aunty's house by 8."

Kripa without uttering a word followed Gayatri till she reached Khanna house. Khanna house is filled with festive glow as Anittah, Aaliyah singing, dancing, and moving around busily with arrangements. They warmly welcomed Kripa and took inside "Kahan kho gayi maharani? You must have a mobile for your own now. We were missing you yesterday. We went to beauty parlor and ordered for mehendi today…" they constantly updating about the arrangements of present day's vrat.
Kripa slowly came out of her dismay with their company.

Angad woke up at 10 and checked for Kripa. He suddenly feared if she left. He dressed up, checked the whole house and confirmed she left. He called her home but no one responded. He thought to call Gayatri but changed his mind and decided to check her home in person. He got ready fast and went to his apartment by 11. He found no one responding him. He decided to ask the neighbor and he got call from Dilip fuming in the phone.

"Angad! How come you become so irresponsible? Yesterday whole day you were missing. Today till 11:30 you are not even turned up to office. What's going on? Do you know what crisis we are going through"
Angad who is already worrying about Kripa got irritated "Dad! I'm coming there right now. Okay!" he headed direct to work thinking about Kripa. He recollected last night union with Kripa. "Kripa! I love you. I won't keep quite now. Before late, I will tell mom about us. We should get married and I definitely don't let you go with Prithvi. You are mine, made for me."
Dilip gave order to him by lunch time, "You and Misthy are leaving by tomorrow early hour's flight. Here are the tickets. Ghar jaakar taiyyar hojaao and I'll call Shabbir for other arrangements."

Angad held his head and heaved his breathe out. Misthy surprised at his fallen face "Kya hua, Angad? Everyone excites to go to US and you are looking so dull?" she took the chair in front him "Lunch leliya?"

Angad shook his head 'no' and turned his eyes and covered his face in his hands to cover his feelings. He faintly looked at her "Where were you in the morning?"
She surprisingly looked at him "I was busy with work, and I was in my cabin only. Waisey tum kahan they? Aaj late aya hai?" Misthy expected something wrong. "Kya hua Angad? Kal bhi gayab tha. Kiskey saat raha? Aaj itna depressive kyon lag raha hai?"

Angad sadly looked at her "Subah sey Kripa ko contact karney ki khoshish kar raha hoon, pata nahin kahan gayi thi. I couldn't contact her." Misthy confused at his disappointment "Kripa? Ussey kya lena dena? Why do you worry about her all of sudden?" she paused and stared into his eyes "Don't tell me that you were with Kripa last night."

Angad gave faint look at her and shook his head and turned his eyes away from her. "I was with her. We were together." Misthy's breathe stopped and looking unbelievingly at him. He stared into her eyes "I ….I…We consummated our relationship." Misthy stopped gasp by covering her mouth and slowly walked to his side and dropped her hand on his shoulder "What were you saying, Angad? Are you crazy? Yeh kab, kasiey hua? When you both were started dating, I mean liking each other? I know you are crazy behind her but Kripa!! I don't believe she does this. What will she answer to Prithvi? Kya hogaya hai tum donon ko? I can't believe this? I can't believe Kripa aisi kar sakti hai!!"

Angad rubbed his forehead with fingers "Kripa ki galati nain hai, Misthy! I made her surrender, I seduced her, I forced her. I was scared to lose her and I confessed this way before I go. I want her to wait for me. I want her to break her engagement. I don't know, I can't think of anything else. I'm madly in love with her. I need her. I need her forever."

He paused and wiped his tears and looked at Misthy "Misthy! Can you call her mom and enquire about Kripa? I want to know if she is fine. I tried but I don't know where to search for her. I went to her house but it is locked. I didn't see Sarma ji also. Pata nahin, pura family ko kya hoagaya hai. I don't think Kripa could ever disclose this to her family. I only have to take initiative. Ek baar Kripa miljaay, mein ussey Mom ke paas lejaana chahta hoon. I want to tell mom everything."

Misthy patted his shoulder "You did a big blunder, Angad! You should have told me. Actually you showed your interest but I took it easy. I should have warned Prithvi or Kripa or Damini or Gayatri or atleast Naina ji or atleast Dilip. You really put the situation at the edge of everyone's prestige." She walked to her seat and suddenly asked, "Did you call Anittah?" Angad shook his head and Misthy enquired and found about the puja and Kripa.

Angad jumped in his seat "Oh God, Misthy! This totally slipped from my mind. Kal wo ek sari bhi kareedli mere pasand ki. I have to go now. Can you be with me tonight in my house? Please!!"

Misthy smiled "Friends hotey kiss liye?" Angad blushed "Chalo, hum chaltey hai. I can't wait to see Kripa now."

Misthy laughed and followed him. "Mein bhi December mein shadi ki date fix karney ki soch rahi hoon, Angad! Shabbir is not going to wait anymore."Misthy informed in the elevator about her future plans of her wedding.

Angad is in good mood and lifted Misthy and turned once and dropped her down "Hum donon ek hi saat shadi karengey. Nahin, I can't wait till December, I'll marry as early as possible, soon after returning from US, bus mom sey sab kuch aaj hi bata deta hoon."

Misty smiled and slapped his shoulder playfully, "khaash tum Kripa sey pehley hi miljata, humey ek haseen prem kahani sunney ko milta."

Angad blushed. Misthy bid bye "I'll pack my things and reach your house by 6."

Angad shook his head and hesitantly asked her "Misthy! I need a favour!" Misthy teasingly smiled at him "Abb kya hai? Tumhara ghar toh aarahi hoon na"
Angad nodded his head "wo baat nahin, I want to buy a gift for Kripa. Some gold ..Which store is good?"

Misthy showed one shop in the same complex "go there. They are reliable and reasonable. Waisey kya khareedna chahtey ho?"

Angad searched for words "wo….something" he blushed for Misthy's suspicious looks "mangal sutre…tum madat karogi?"

Misthy opened her mouth with shock "Angad! Lagta hai you directly going to tie the knot"

Angad nodded his head seriously "Haan, Misthy! Jo shadi ke baad karna tha wo darr ke maari pehley kardiya tha. I don't want her to embarrass in front of anyone. I don't want to leave her in depression while I'm in US. I want to tell everyone now immediately."

Misthy smiled "I'm glad you realized your mistake atleast immediately. You can buy and I'll help you for it. But I don't think you get opportunity to say anything now as there will be everyone around your family coz of Karva Chaut."
Angad agreed "Let me see, I want to take the first opportunity to disclose our relationship"

They both selected a two row black beads with mangalsutras engulfed in the middle of diamonds and rubies.

They both headed in different directions.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great update Di, i don't have words to describe!

i just hope Angad is able to inform his mother about his n Kripa's relationship before going to U.S, or otherwise he might not be able to stop the wedding.

Or is it exactly what happened kripa got married while he was in U.S

By any chance is Sur kripa n angad's daughter 😕
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awsome part continue soon! 👏 👏 👏
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Thanks sirza, iamsmart, jiya

jiya! Sur is Angad and Kripa's daughter...tis is to eleave you from tension 😉 ...if Angad had told aout his relation and decision Kripa wold have waited for him atleast her parent would have waited for him 😕
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Part: 16

Angad is in cloud9 till he reached the house. His heart is beating fast making him impatient. He saw his house filled with many guests mainly many women. Anittah, Aaliyah shouting and screaming in joy and other girls laughing when they are painting their hands with different designs in mehendi.

His eyes searched for Kripa but he couldn't find her. Damini, Naina and Gayatri are arranging something with some pots and Dadi is instructing them about the ritual. Dilip, Suryaban Sarma and other men are chatting in a corner wearing the Indian traditional attire.

He walked upstairs and changed his clothes into maroon sherwani and came down. He checked the box with the mangalsutra and put it in the pocket. He greeted everyone but his eyes are still searching for Kripa.

Around 6 Misthy came and greeted everyone. She reassured him moral support by gesture and walked inside. He whispered as he couldn't see Kripa anywhere. She smiled at him and pressed his hand in friendly way assuring him.

She found Kripa in Devyani's room peeling her dried mehendi. She looked gorgeous in maroon sari which she bought on Angad's wish. She wore big choker with ruby and pearl and gold. She wore red and gold bangles on both hands and decorated like a bride. Misthy reached her and admired her beauty. She kissed her forehead and stared into her eyes. Her eyes lost glow and reflecting the sorrow behind her heart. Kripa tried to hide her sorrow and smiled forcefully at her. Misthy caressed her cheeks as reciprocating her smile. Kripa guessed Angad might have updated her something. "Did he share about their consummation too?" She wondered if their friendship is that closer.

Around 6:30 everyone gathered on the terrace. Misthy took responsibility of Kripa and everyone got position of their pots, thali and other items for the actual ritual. Almost 15 pairs stood in a line and Misthy took Kripa in a corner away from everyone.

Kripa is not in a mood to notice all this and performing the vrat mechanically. Her mind is totally filled with Angad and their consummation night. She is still rehearsing to break the engagement. Her mind is tossing between Angad and Prithvi. She is observing vrat and fasting for Prithvi for name sake but her mind is filled with Angad.
She didn't crave for food, water not even once. Everyone teased her determination for welfare of her would-be husband, Prithvi. Damini felt proud for her. She couldn't enjoy any of those teases. Her mind is roaming around Angad, cursing him, herself. "Khaash wo sab kuch nahin hota aaj mein bhi khulkar hasee hoti." Tear drop stood at the corner of her eyes.

Devyani as an elderly lady is supervising everything. All men got possession in front of respective wives. Damini took the responsibility of Aaliyah and Anittah as they are still married. All sacred pots are filled with bangles, haldi kumkum, make-up items like kajal, bindiya, flowers and other feminine things which are used to offer to Maa Parvati. Devyani announced moon showing out and everyone got their sieves out to see the moon through them. They lit the sacred lamps and put in the sieve and lifted the sieves to the moon.

Misthy helped Kripa to do so. Devyani is watching everyone to follow the rituals religiously. Everyone moved the sieve to see their respective husbands. Damini teased the unmarried girls to imagine their dream boys. Anittah teased "Aunty! Aap Prithvi ka photo layi ki nahin? Bechari Kripa ko toh apni dream boy ko hi dekhna padega." Everyone laughed and religiously immersed in their duty.

Kripa filled tears and Misthy pressed her shoulders to console her. Kripa lowered her eyes and sighed under breath. She is about to remove the sieve and found Angad standing in front of her. She saw him through sieve and dropped tears. He smiled and walked close to her and moved the sieve down and wiped her tears. She hiccupped a sob as her eyes again filling tears. He shook his head sideways to stop her tears "you are looking gorgeous, Kripa! Thanks for wearing the sari."

Misthy took the thali and gave her "Finish before anyone notices."
She mechanically washed his feet with her tiny hands, sprayed the water on her head and Angad's eyes escaped tears. Misthy pressed his shoulder to console him. Kripa gave aarati to Angad and put sindoor on his forehead. She bit her lips together and tried to stop her tears. He wiped her tears again and gave the water to break her fast on Misthy's gesture. She drank the water and opened mouth for the food. Misthy smiled and told Angad to feed her peda. He smiled and put a piece of peda in her mouth. She bit the peda half and ate. He put the other half in his mouth winking at her with tear filled eyes. She smiled at him with tears with unknown satisfaction.

Misthy smiled at them "Kitney pagal hai yeh donon, behut pyar kartey hai, but realized in wrong time. Wish they both get together soon." Angad removed the box from his pocket and dropped in the thali "Tumhari liye mera gift". She surprisingly looked at him and he removed the mangalsutra from it. "I love you, Kripa!" he whispered and put the mangalsutra around her neck and he kissed her cheeks. She is shocked and he caressed her cheeks "You are my wife, no one could separate us." Kripa tried to stop her sobs and ran inside before anyone notices them.

Devyani as checking everything shocked to see them and stood still unbelieving her eyes. Misthy and Angad didn't notice her. Misthy gestured him to go inside behind Kripa and she followed him. Dadi silently followed them as everyone else immersed in the ritual. Angad walked inside and searched for Kripa. He found her in Dadi's prayer room and approached sobbing Kripa.

Angad lifted her face and stared at her with soulful eyes. Both looked into each other eyes exchanging sympathy. Kripa couldn't stop her sobs and hiccups. He wiped her tears and bent to kiss her cheeks. She slapped him hard and pushed him down. As he didn't expect the act, he couldn't control himself and fell down on the floor. She sat in front of him and slapped his two cheeks few times and started crying. She started yelling at him with low tone "What are you thinking about you, Angad? Why did you this to me? Tujehy pata hai abb natiza kya nikalega? Do you know the consequences of this? Have you ever think about how much are you hurting people around you? And you are expecting I tell everyone about us. Kya hai humara beech mein. Tumhara harkat ke siva humarey beech mein kuch bhi nain hai. Yeh sab tumhara obsession hai. Abb tuhi sochlo kya karogey. Tuhi kuch hal nikaalo. Tu hi sab ko yeh baat batao. You ..you are only going to do whatever have to do." She stopped to take breath and wiped her tears and pulled him by holding his collar "What do you think by wearing this mangalsutre I become yours? Nahin, Angad! Bina Saat phere humdonon ek dooserey ko kuch bhi nahin lagtay. Now you take initiative and tell everyone about us. If you don't tell you are going to lose me. Lose me as long as you keep quite. Mein kuch nahin kahungi kisse se bhi nahin. It's your turn to get me in your life. Tumara pyar, tumhara commitment sab kuch vahi khatam hoga jaha tum ruktey ho." She got up and wiped her tears and took steps passing him. She turned to him with tears and removed her mangalsutre and put around his neck and kissed his cheek "keep this for yourself"

She is hiccupping and kicked his leg "I hate you!"

She ran out of the room. Angad stunned and stared her way for a few seconds to digest her words. He caressed his cheek and smiled "I love you, Kripa! I will love you forever."

Angad turned his face when he felt a hand on his shoulder and startled to see Devyani. He wiped his tears turning his head away. "What's going on Angad? Yeh sab kya hai? Why Kripa is slapping you? Why is she crying? What is there between you both?" Angad searched for words as swallowing "Kuch.." he stopped and decided to confess now "I love Kripa, Dadi! I madly love her. I love her crazy. I want to marry her. I need her. I need her for life Dadi!" he wiped his tears and held her hands "Dadi! Aap help karengey? Aap mom aur dad se keengey? Please dadi! I don't know if I could tell them before I leave for US. But please stop her wedding with Prithvi. I want to marry her."He couldn't disclose about their consummation.

Dadi is shocked and sat on the floor beside him to compose herself slowly. She slowly uttered each word out "Do you know what are you saying ,Angad? She is engaged and you want to break the engagement. Do you know how absurd is this? You are going to break two, no, three families' trust, friendship and prestige."

Angad interfered "Dadi! I know all that. But I have no option. I love her and I can't live without her. I have to get her in my life. Mein Prithvi ka commitment aur pyar nahin jaanta. Kripa also loves me. She is tied with family obligations but I can see my love in her eyes. We want to be together. Please, Dadi help me."

After few minutes of arguments and conversation Dadi decided to speak to all parents and promised Angad to tackle the situation. Angad kissed her hand and thanked.

By the time they walked out Kripa is chatting with her friends. She looked relieved and her eyes are twinkling with smile. Dadi looked at Kripa and noticed her eyes tied with Angad's. She noticed Angad's passion on her in Dasserah days but she ignored it in the next moment. She walked to Naina and Dilip. Angad stood and watched Kripa without moving his eyes away. She met his eyes and twisted her lips. He caressed his mangalsutra which he hid behind his collar. Her cheeks blushed and lowered her eyes. He felt relieved and sighed along with smile. She lifted her eyes at him and smiled with chirpy looks rolling her tongue inside as challenging him. He bit his lower lip, held his hands on waist and walked towards her. She gulped and checked the girls around her and shook her head as pleading him. She slowly moved her hands and pretended setting her strands on either side of her face and held her ears. He smiled with tears. She smiled and dropped her tears and got up from there to walk away inside.

"SURPRISE!!" Everyone turned their heads for the big yell and shocked and surprised to see Prithvi at the door. Aaliyah ran to him "Bhai!! Tum kab aye ho? You should have come little early, Bhai! You missed Kripa's fasting break. She couldn't see you through sieve."

Damini and Gayatri walked to him and expressed the same feeling. Prithvi apologetically looked at Kripa and greeted everyone else. Kripa is socked and swallowed her tears and helplessly looked at Angad. Angad realized the fact now. She is engaged to Prithvi. He came in between and trying to grab Kripa from Prithvi. "But she is made for me; I should get her any cost."

Prithvi walked to Kripa and Gayatri signaled her to touch his feet. Kripa unwillingly bent and touched his feet. "Arerey yeh kya, Kripa! I don't encourage this."
Damini interfered "Yeh rivaz hai beta! Aaj patni pati ke liye vrat rakhtey hai aur pati ki puja ke baad hi vrat chodti hai."

Prithvi smiled and sat besides Kripa."Mom! I have to leave for Belgium next Monday. It's fixed all of sudden and I have to report there within a week. So, I came to pack all my things soon and see my wife before leaving." Kripa is still under shock and gave a fake smile but her eyes filled tears. Prithvi hugged her with one hand and wiped her tears "Don't worry, Kripa! I come back and marry you. It's only two month project."

Angad clinching his teeth as Prithvi mentioned 'wife' and walked away from there.
Everyone mingled cracking with jokes exchanging gifts. Prithvi gave Kripa a necklace set with different color beads. Angad tried to tell Naina but both his parents are busy with guests.

Prithvi stayed with Kripa all the time through dinner cracking jokes and teasing her along with Aaliyah and Anittah.

Dilip also didn't give any chance to Angad to mention about his decision. Dadi reassured "Prithvi toh abb do mahina ke liye Belgium hokar ayega. Wo wapas aney tak sab ko sab kuch samjhayengey. You don't worry and have a safe trip to US."

Around 11, Angad bid bye to Devyani with tear filled eyes. He bid bye to Kripa touching his mangalsutra as promising her to keep his word. He bid everyone and left along with Misthy to the airport.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#77
Oh yes!! so atlast they consumated 😳
Poor angad was soo scared of loosing kripa but didn't really expect him to take such a daring step.

But, oh well he's unpredictable!!

The Karva-Chaut scene was soo cute, good Lord nobody noticed them except Dadi hope she helps them out the situation.
What happened to Kripa all of a sudden , poor Angad he got slapped so many times, yet he didn't complain , he's really a crazy lover 😆
Kripa is also weird in her own way first she slaps him then holds her ears apologizing , rather cute!!

Keep going Di, awaiting your next update 😳

P.S thanks 4 revealing about Sur , u actually relieved me from the tension. 😃
Edited by jiya imdad - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: jiya imdad

Oh yes!! so atlast they consumated 😳
Poor angad was soo scared of loosing kripa but didn't really expect him to take such a daring step.

But, oh well he's unpredictable!!

The Karva-Chaut scene was soo cute, good Lord nobody noticed them except Dadi hope she helps them out the situation.
What happened to Kripa all of a sudden , poor Angad he got slapped so many times, yet he didn't complain , he's really a crazy lover 😆
Kripa is also weird in her own way first she slaps him then holds her ears apologizing , rather cute!!

Keep going Di, awaiting your next update 😳

P.S thanks 4 revealing about Sur , u actually relieved me from the tension. 😃

Both AK are not sure of their acts except Angad's love on Kripa..she likes him but tosses between two minds...she gets angry for her dilemma...she apologies for her anger and slapping and kicking...

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: iamsmart

gr8 part
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sana

thanks😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part: 17

Present:

Anittah dropped her work as she heard constant calling buzz. "kaun hai itni subah? Hogi koyi sales person!!"

"Kripa!!" she screamed and held her hands and brought her inside. "Arey wah! Yeh sehzaadi kaun hai? Sur hai aap?" she lifted the little 3+ year old cutie girl besides Kripa. Sur shyly nodded her head as confirming her question. Anittah kissed her cheeks "Aao Kripa! Bhaito. I'm glad you came today."

"Sorry! Anoo! I didn't call you before I come. I didn't know if I took your time." Kripa apologetically explained.

"Haan, Kripa! You are right. You should call me before you come. Waisey mein kuch world conference ki taiyyariya kar rahi hoon" Anittah rolled her eyes and both laughed. Anittah screamed "Angad bhaiyya! Dekho kaun aya hai"

Angad walked out of his room and surprised to see them. "Hi, Kripa!" he stopped as opened his mouth surprisingly at Anittah widely staring at the girl in her arms. Anittah handed over her to him "Mein coffee banati hoon." She left and Angad carried Sur as a delicate doll. Sur dropped one hand around his neck. He checked her from head to toe and changed his looks to Kripa who is admiring them with tearful eyes. He filled tears in his eyes quizzically looking at Kripa and she shook her head and he closed his eyes hiding his face in Sur's small tummy admiring Sur's embrace. He delighted to have Sur's little hands on is ead. He is experiencing the flashes of his past, his first day of office, Kripa's appearance, his craving for her, his flirting with her in festive days, his consummation with Kripa.

He carried Sur to his room and placed her on bed. He removed her shoes and placed them down near the bed. He caressed Sur's cheeks, hands, legs and feet. She is looking like a fairy princess in light pink frilled gown and bob hair, small ear rings. He smiled at her and she blushed by squeezing her mouth with her tiny hands making the mouth oblong. He softly rubbed her feet on his face and kissed under feet. His eyes are flowing tears and placed his head in Sur's lap.

Kripa who is watching them standing at the door wiped her tears and dropped hand on Angad's head. Angad looked into her eyes and held her hand. He kissed her palm and hid his face into her lap, her sari frills. He silently sobbed. She caressed his hair with trembling hands. Tears are rolling down her eyes too. She wiped as Sur is watching them confusingly.

"Angad! Sur is scared." He wiped his tears and smiled at Sur. Sur is relieved and smiled back. He removed a chain from his neck and dropped around Sur's neck. Kripa startled "Angad! Yeh kya hai? Iski kya zaroorat hai?" Angad stared at her and got up. He caressed her left cheek and held her chin with his forefinger and thumb "Zaroorat meri pyar ki hai. Mera sab kuch tum donon ka hi hai, Kripa!" He turned his looks to Sur and said with trembling voice "This is just a first gift to my daughter."

Kripa moved at his emotion and covered her mouth to stop her sob. Angad looked at her at her sob and moved his head sideways and hugged her with one hand and kissed her head. "Chup hojaao. I don't mean to make you cry. Thanks for bringing my daughter." She shook her head and wiped her tears and sniffed. "It's my duty. I couldn't bring her in past years. Now I came and thought it's my first duty to show her to you."

He stared at her for a second and lifted her face to stare into her eyes. Kripa's eyes are still moist and he glared for some more time. She stared into his eyes expecting him to say something. He stared into her eyes hesitating to utter his mind out. At last he gathered words "Thanks for having my child" Kripa hugged him and hid her face in his neck fold. Her sob, heavy hiccups and her closeness is giving some soothing sensation in him. He felt the pain he hid for all these years coming out of her. He tried hard to stop his tears and embraced her caressing her back to sooth her pain.

Sur watched the room silently for a while and took Kripa's picture frame from the side desk "Mama! This is your picture" Kripa moved away from Angad and wiped her tears sniffing between hiccups. She looked at him and smiled faintly. He smiled and wiped the tear drops on her cheeks. Both looked at Sur and Kripa emotionally moved to see the picture "Tum pagal ho."

Angad nodded his head and smiled biting his lower lip "Pagal, deewana, sab kuch hoon tumhari liye"

He stretched his hands for Sur and she came to him "Why did you keep mama's picture? You love her?" Angad startled and worriedly looked at Kripa. Kripa blushed "You can tell her. She won't open her mouth in front of anyone else. Bahut samajhdari hai"

He surprised, "Clever than mother!!"and carried Sur to kiss her cheeks loudly thinking in mind "I love her to core of my heart."

Kripa got a call and walked out gesturing 'excuse' from Angad. Angad's smile disappeared and his face became pale when he heard Kripa saying "Haan, Prithvi! Really! I will be there in few minutes. I'm starting now immediately, bye"
Anittah came with coffee tray and suspiciously looked at her "chaley jaaogi?"

Kripa faintly laughed "haan, jana hai. Prithvi is here. Surprise visit. Sorry for disappointment. I'll come again" she took Sur from Angad and put her shoes. Angad helped to put another shoe "Itni jaldi kya hai? Is he already home? Why don't you have coffee and go?" Kripa smiled "it's okey, Angad! Anittah! (she turned to Anittah) I will come again. Prithvi is almost home. He is already missing Sur."

Angad shrug and walked her out of the room. "Bring Prithvi home sometime, if he stays for some days." Kripa looked into his eyes blankly. Anittah took Sur inside the kitchen to give her some chocolates. Angad looked at her with soulful eyes. "Aisa mat dekho, Angad! Settle hojao. Shadi karo,have kids. Sab kuch bhool jaogey."

Angad laughed sarcastically "karoonga jab.." Kripa stopped him by covering his mouth "Don't start again, you know it's not possible. Think positive way. I forget everything when I see Sur's innocent face. Tum bhi bhul jaogey jab tumhara bachon ka nadani cheherey dekhe toh"

Angad smiled and kissed her hand and held to his heart "Sur ko chod do mere paas. I too forget everything." Kripa smiled between tears "you don't change." She tried to take her hand but he held it tight staring into her palms. She quizzically looked at him "kya dekhraha hai? Chodogey nahin? Mujhey jaana hai"

Angad nodded his head "Ek baar chod diya, galat kiya tha. Abb phirsey dhaamney ki icha jaag rahi hai"

Kripa pulled her hand "Then I will stop coming." Angad laughed.

"Mama! See so many chocolates. Anittah gave me."Sur's voice brought them out of their world.

"Anittah nahin, bua kaho." Kripa took Sur and Sur shyly looked at Anittah "bua."
Anittah filled tears "Yeh pukar Kitna acha lagraha hai. Khaash yeh such much meri bhatiji hoti" she kissed her cheeks and wiped her tears. Angad and Kripa stole looks.

"Kripa! Wait a minute, I give you some sweets, you like sweets right." She walked into kitchen despite Kripa's warnings.

Kripa told Sur "Papa ko kiss do."

Sur shied and loudly kissed his cheeks when Angad bent for it. He stared into Kripa's eyes and she nodded her head "She knows. Only she." Angad suspiciously looked at Kripa and kissed her cheeks when she blushed. "I have to talk to you a lot. Spare some time for me" Kripa shook her head as agreeing.

"BYE" she left after taking sweets from Anittah. Both Anittah and Angad stared at her way for a while with painful eyes.

Angad lay on the bed pressing his temples. Anittah reached him "Aaj phir office nahin jaogey?"

He shook his head sideways and she sighed "Papa ney kahin baar phone kiya tha. Chaley jao, bhaiyya! Kripa kush hai tujhey aur kya chahiye? Aaj tak tum uskey liye pareshan tha na. Abb wo sur ke saat aur Prithvi ke saat bhi kush hai. Get along with life, bhaiyya!"

He stared at her for a while and shook his head and got ready to leave for office. Anittah smiled and walked into kitchen to arrange breakfast.

"Pagli, mere liye apni jindagi bhi kharab karli. I have to do something for Anittah. I'm so lucky to have her in my life."

He got ready in cream yellow dress shirt and blue trousers. He came to Anittah "Anittah! I'm leaving. Kush? But you have to promise me too. You also have to go forward with life. Karogi?" Anittah smiled between tears of joy.

"Good. I will tell Raj that you are ready to go out for dinner with him." Anittah thought of stopping him and again stopped as she seeing him becoming normal.

Angad is recollecting the scenes of Sur with Kripa while driving to his office. Kripa ki baton ka matlab kya hai "she knows, only she?" Sur knows I'm her father? Kripa doesn't stay with Prithvi? How could Prithvi leaving Kripa alone? Phir donon saat mein rehney ki kya matlab hai? Wo Kripa ko chod deta meri liye. I should find out this. Abb Prithvi hi agaya hai toh he must be doing something. Kripa mere paas wapas ayegi?"

Angad felt happy and excited with the thought of Kripa coming back to him. He recollected the past where he left it at his US journey.


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