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Originally posted by: Evee

lol....sorry!! I didnt know my comments actually influence ppls decisions.....neha ne prithvi ko mar diya...or tumne...AK ko mila diya!!!! lol

ab AK ki shaadi kar do! lol

happe listen to evee!!!

loved the fan fic i cant wait till the next part continue as soon as you can

good luck on your mid terms

Aww great job Happe! Can't wait to read the next part! Also, good luck with your midterm! 😊

Originally posted by: simplyconfused

happe listen to evee!!!

i second tat!! 😆

btw awesome prtz n good luck on ur midterm!!

awesome story read all the parts today 😛

read ur fan fic n its mind blowing
good luck on ur midterm 👍🏼

Originally posted by: happe

Part 3

Sharma Mansion

Kripa is all ready. She comes downstairs and has breakfast with her mom and dad.

Kripa: Mom-Dad, much aap sab se permission chahaye thi.

Kripa's mom: kis cheez ki permission beta

Kripa: wo mere saare friends aaj shaam ko Goa ja rahe hain

Kripa's dad puts the newspaper down and looks straight up to Kripa.

Kripa's dad: aur tum unke saath jaana chahati ho?

Kripa: please dad

Kripa's dad: ek sharat par

Kripa: kya?

Kripa's dad: tum Goa ke trip se aane ke baad us topic par gour karogi jo hamne last time discuss kia tha

Kripa: I promise, I will think about it

Kripa's dad: well then you're free to go

Kripa gets up from her chair and goes to her dad and hugs him.

Kripa: thank you dad, you're the best.

Kripa's mom: what about me?

Kripa runs to her mom and hugs her too.

Kripa: mumma, you're the best too.

Kripa's mom: acha bataa ke tum kitne bajhe ja rahe ho?

Kripa: mom hum sab evening ko jahan se jaayenge, around 4 or 5.

Kripa's mom: acha main aur tumare papa office ja rahe hain. Tum packing kar lena

Kripa: maine already packing kar li hai

Kripa's parents are stunned.

Kripa's mom: already kar bhi li

Kripa: haan much pata tha ke papa much jaane ki permission de dein ge

Kripa's dad: shitaan

Kripa: sorry papa

They all laugh and after short minutes Kripa's parents go and Kripa goes to as well.

Bose Mansion:

A young man is walking down the stairs, and we see a lady sitting at dinning table waiting for someone to come, so they can have breakfast. The young man comes, kisses lady's cheek and its none other than Prithvi and Damini Bose.

Prithvi is only son of Damini Bose. Damini Bose has an event organizing company (same as in the serial). Prithvi helps his mom in the business. Prithvi is very down to earth guy, very simple, never jealous, helps his friends out. He is very caring. He is exactly like how he is the serial but he is always irritating his best friend. He teases her all the time. He is rich as Angad and Kripa.

Prithvi: Good Morning Mom

Damini: Good Morning Beta

Damini: Beta tum breakfast karo, mujhe abhi office jaana hai, bohat important meeting hai aaj meri

Prithvi: okay mom

Damini leaves and Prithvi is sitting by himself at dinning table having breakfast.

Prithvi: aaj phir se akele breakfast karna parde ga

A voice comes from behind.

Gal: aaj akele breakfast nahin karna padhe ga

Prithvi turns around, and we see a beautiful girl standing at the door, wearing beautiful light blue chooridaar suit. She walks by the dinning table and now we see it's Kripa.

Kripa: aaj tum akele breakfast nahin kar sakta, aaj main bhi breakfast karoongi tumare saath

Prithvi: kyat um ghar se nahin kah kar aayi

Kripa: aayi hoon, par mujhe aur bhookh lagi hai

Prithvi: kitna khati ho tum

Kripa: aaj toh main aur khaaoongi

Prithvi: kis khushi main

Kripa: mom-dad ne mujhe permission de di hai, goa jaane ki

Prithvi: mujhe pata tha

Kripa: kaise

Prithvi: har baar ki tarah uncle ne koi sharat rakhi hogi, aur tum ne zaroor kaha hoga ke shochoongi. Hai na?

Kripa: tume kaise pata

Prithvi: mujhe saab pata hai

Kripa (in her mind): toh phir tume mere dil ki baat bhi pata honi chahaye.

I'll post the next part tomorrow.

Take care everyone 😃

happe is this a prithvi and kripa fan fic???? 😕

yes! finally caught up! Lovely story happe cont when u can! 👏

that was great plz continue soon