dosti aur pyaar (fan-fic) can't continue - Page 6

that was very good i just love the story please write more

just a thought can you show that angad and kripa are like locked in a closet or some thing when they find out there in love for each other, but havent told each other yet .that will realy get me jumping up and down.😆

Wow, that was really good. Plz continue...

tht waz gr8 continue soon!!!!!!!

that was gr88! cont soon 👏 👏 👏 👏

Part 6

Angad lifts his eyes up and he sees the same girl from the elevator. He looks at Kripa. Well he kept on looking at her.

Rajiv: Angad je hai hamari dost, jaan of the gang, Kripa. Aur Kripa je hai Angad mere dad ke friend ka beta

Kripa seats herself, at opposite side of Angad. Angad can see Kripa clearly.

Angad comes back to reality.

Angad: hi Kripa

Kripa: hi

Angad: hum pehle bhi mile hain (he says so to make a conversation)

Kripa: haan apne aaj mere liye lift ko roka tha

Angad: yaad aaya

Kripa: thanx for that

Angad: no problem

Rajiv: so, aab kya karein, mujhe toh bohat bhookh lagi hai

Rahul: yaar dinner order karte hai na

Rajiv: sure

Rajiv calls the waiter and everyone orders their food from their menus. The waiter takes the order and now everyone goes back to their conversation.

Rajiv: Angad tum ne bataya nahin, tum yahan kab tak ho

Angad: kal ko meeting hai phir ek din yahan hoon, uske agle din main wapas jar aha hoon.

Rajiv: waise tumari meeting kab khatam ho rahi hai

Angad: I should be done around noon.

Rahul: excellent

Rajiv: yah tum hamare saath lunch karna aur phir hum Goa main masti karne jaayenge

Angad: I hope the ladies don't mind.

Tina: don't be silly Angad, tum Rajiv ke dost ho, aur abh hamare bhi. Right gurls?

Dia: of course, Angad you're most welcome to come.

Angad is waiting for Kripa to speak but she just nods her head.

Then everyone's food arrives and they all had a great dinner.

Tina: Rajiv, let's go dance na. kitna acha song hai

Rajiv: okay

Rajiv and Tina excuse themselves and they go dancing.

Rahul: Dia, hum dance karne chalein.

Dia: par hum Kripa aur Angad ko kaise shor kar ja sakte hain

Kripa: it's okay dia, tum dono jao dance karne

Dia: tum mind toh nahin karogi

Kripa: not at all

Rahul and Dia leave and Kripa is left with Angad. They both sit while looking at others dance.

Angad: Kripa

Kripa: haan

Angad: should I order some desert for you?

Kripa: its okay

Angad: please, let me

Kripa: okay

Angad then orders two slices of chocolate cake for both of em.

Angad and Kripa are sitting when Rajiv comes to them, leaving Tina at dance floor alone. (hahaha bechari Tina)

Rajiv: hey guys, why don't you guys come dance

Kripa: nahin Rajiv, its really fine

Angad: ya rajiv, aur waise bhi I don't have anyone to dance with

Rajiv: a beautiful lady is sitting by you, and you care not to ask her.

Kripa: rajiv tum bhi na

Rajiv: yaar abh aus se dance ke liye poosho bhi

Angad walks toward Kripa. He bends little and takes his right hand out.

Angad: may I have the pleasure to dance with the beautiful lady, or shall I say my friend.

Kripa slides her hand in Angad's palm.

Kripa: yes you may, but a dance with your friend

Angad and Kripa smile to each other and they all go to dance floor. As they reach the dance floor, the song changes. The song is aye kaash ke hum hosh mein ab aane naa paaye from movie Kabhi Haan Kabhi Naa.

Angad and Kripa do their slow dance on this one. Angad brings his hand on Kripa's waist and Kripa places her hand on hi shoulder. They look at each other and they dance. They move by the music and they dance so elegantly. It was like the song was made for them. They both knew exact steps. Angad kept looking at Kripa and Kripa was enjoying herself.

Background music plays.

aye kaash ke hum hosh mein ab aane naa paaye aye kaash ke hum hosh mein ab aane naa paaye bas nagmein tere pyaar ke, gaate hee jaaye aye kaash ke hum hosh mein ab aane naa paaye aye kaash ke hum hosh mein ab aane naa paaye

Background music plays.

khilatee, mahakatee ye julfon kee shaam hasate, khanakate ye hothhon ke jam khilatee, mahakatee ye julfon kee shaam hasate, khanakate ye hothhon ke jaam aa zoom ke saath uthhaye, bas nagmein tere pyaar ke gaate hee jaaye Angad twirls Kripa around and they both are enjoying themselves. People stopped dancing and they gave Kripa and Angad the dance
floor. They both were busy dancing that they didn't even notice
that people were looking at them dancing. aye kaash ke hum hosh mein ab aane naa paaye bas nagmein tere pyaar ke, gaate hee jaaye aye kaash ke hum hosh mein ab aane naa paaye bas nagmein tere pyaar ke, gaate hee jaaye Background music plays ho bas agar tum humaare sanam hum to sitaaron pe rakh de kadam ho bas agar tum humaare sanam hum to sitaaron pe rakh de kadam saaraa jahaan bhool jaaye, bas nagmein tere pyaar ke gaate hee jaaye
aye kaash ke hum hosh mein ab aane naa paaye aye kaash ke hum hosh mein ab aane naa paaye bas nagmein tere pyaar ke, gaate hee jaaye aye kaash ke hum hosh mein ab aane naa paaye aye kaash ke hum hosh mein ab aane naa paaye Angad and Kripa finish dancing and everyone claps for them. Angad is
feeling extremely happy and Kripa is just enjoying herself. Angad, Kripa, Rajiv, Tina, Rahul and Dia all head to their table. Tina: you two were awesome. Dia: yup they were Rajiv: wow Angad u two rocked on dance floor. Rahul: mujhe toh pata hi nahin tha ke humari Kripa itna acha dance bhi
karti hai Angad: maine kuch nahin kia, Kripa itna acha dance kar rahi thi, main toh
usse follow karta gaya Kripa: Angad tum wakaye main hi bohat acha dance kar lete ho Angad: thanx Kripa Dia: hey guys ab apne apne rooms main chalein. Kaphi raat ho gayi hai Rahul: yup lets go guys Everyone walks from there. They all head toward the lobby, and then
to the elevator/lift. They all get inside the lift.l Rajiv: Angad tume kaunsi floor par jaana hai Angad: 3^rd floor Rajiv: arey hum sab bhi 3^rd floor par hi ja rahe hain Angad: kewl, waise I am staying in room 310. Rajiv: phir toh paas hi hai By then the lift opens and they all walk thru the corridor. They come in front of Dia's room, 300 and next was Tina's room 302,
and then Rahul's room 304 and then Rajiv's room 306, and then came
room 308, its Kripa's room and next to her room is Angad's room.310.
They all had rooms on even side. They all say good night to each other.
They all go to their rooms and since all were tired, they all go to sleep.

I'll write the next part on Thursday cuz I have midterm thurday and I
need to study for that.

awsome happe!!!! that was soo good!!plzz contiue!! and good luck on your mid term!!

Forgot to mention in the post that you have to read the lyrix of the song as well. I am sure you will all like it. I tried to pick the song for Angad, and what he is feeling for Kripa.

Originally posted by: dadhich

awsome happe!!!! that was soo good!!plzz contiue!! and good luck on your mid term!!

thanx. I hope I do good.

story abhi shuru hui hai aur maine apna saara concept hi badal dia. ab phirse nayi khahani sochni pardgi. thanx to evee, she was the one who wanted Kripa and Angad to meet when they shouldn't have met. 😕😆