'THE TURTLENECK GIRL' AK ff end,p131 - Page 97

Originally posted by: johnangad

read da whole story today- just luved ur characters, esp kripa's idiosyncracies! great writing. wished u had killed mishti

thanks Johnangad! Kripa was quite a character in this ff for sure😆. I usually don't kill the bad guys as they need to redeem themselves by staying alive😆

Hi bheegi di, Wonderful ff. Waise I was not an AK fanbut after reading To err.. I think I started to like them a lot. But to tell you the truth when I read this FF of yours..I was speechless..literally...I enjoyed it as much as I did all the AR ff's. Well it is a GREAT piece of work...I m still living the moment. But I still confess..I actually Cheated a lil..Though I was reading AK ff...I couldn't help but imagine them as AR...Kya karu can't help it...I m a crazy fan...But seriously Loved the way you Write them di... The whole ff is very special to me..but there are some instances which I really loved a bit more like...The hospital scene and Angad parting words. The scene where Angad shreds Kripa's Turtleneck and then takes her inside and his words..You are Beautiful.., Then...their parting at hamptons, bike ride scene, Angad consoling Kripa all those times, The splinter scene, the Nain-misthi-Riddhima scene at the Namaste India and also theCourt room scene, Ak's unconditional Love 4 one another, The temple scene....Etc..etc..etc...Actually it's a Loooong List and i don't think if I start it would End today.

Originally posted by: ammy-ridz

Hi bheegi di, Wonderful ff. Waise I was not an AK fanbut after reading To err.. I think I started to like them a lot. But to tell you the truth when I read this FF of yours..I was speechless..literally...I enjoyed it as much as I did all the AR ff's. Well it is a GREAT piece of work...I m still living the moment. But I still confess..I actually Cheated a lil..Though I was reading AK ff...I couldn't help but imagine them as AR...Kya karu can't help it...I m a crazy fan...But seriously Loved the way you Write them di... The whole ff is very special to me..but there are some instances which I really loved a bit more like...The hospital scene and Angad parting words. The scene where Angad shreds Kripa's Turtleneck and then takes her inside and his words..You are Beautiful.., Then...their parting at hamptons, bike ride scene, Angad consoling Kripa all those times, The splinter scene, the Nain-misthi-Riddhima scene at the Namaste India and also theCourt room scene, Ak's unconditional Love 4 one another, The temple scene....Etc..etc..etc...Actually it's a Loooong List and i don't think if I start it would End today.

To Cut it short.....MIND-BLOWING, FANTABULOUS.....Aur jitne bhi ache ache words apko pata ho woh saab add karlena.

I think I m still in the Daze of this ff.

Thanx a lot for awarding us with such Wonderful Creations of yours. This is as Dear to me as Definitely yes or any other AR ff now.

Love Shraddha.

aww shraddha. UR comments are much sweeter than my morning cup of tea right now. Thanks a ton for reading my old ffs. One day, i will hopefully have the time to re post all my old AK ffs as AR ffs so AR fans can enjoy them too. One in particular is EHSAAS which IMO suits AR more than AK but i wrote it when AR did not exist on TV😆 The turtleneck girl is close to my heart as Kripa's character with someone with OCD was not a typical goodie goodie girl character and when i wrote it, i was not sure if people would accept such a weird character😆 Thanks again for making my day😊

this is now one of my fav ff of yours. really loved it.

i was meaning to comment on it last week, but never got around to it..

some parts, first few, of this reminds me of that movie..the name that i cant recall now😳

but loved reading this ff.

Originally posted by: olive_green

this is now one of my fav ff of yours. really loved it.

i was meaning to comment on it last week, but never got around to it..

some parts, first few, of this reminds me of that movie..the name that i cant recall now😳

but loved reading this ff.

cheers

aria

thanks Aria! U mean 'something is gotta give?' Yes, the initial parts at Long Island were inspired by that movie😃 Shraddha wants me to rewrite it for AR...phew that would be a task but looks like AR fans are already here😊 thanks again for reading and commenting

Haiiiiiiiiiiii Diiiiii😊

Originally posted by: k_anjali12

Haiiiiiiiiiiii Diiiiii😊

Finally I caught up with ur another ff . . . . .

U know di when I first read the title "The Turtleneck Girl" . . . I really felt ,its really a weird name!!!!

But dii after reading the 2-3 parts I myself can't able to stop reading it . . . .

Its really one of ur THE BEST FF 👏👏👏

I reallly wish it would be also the version of AR like Ehsaas!!So that many of can read these wonderful ffs of urs!!(I also read all the AK ffs by imagining AR )😃😃😃

Takecare . . . . Love U😊

thanks anjali! I am glad u liked this ff- it was a weird name for a weird girl like kripa in this ff😆 but that's to angad, she did evolve into a beautiful young lady😳 I am not sure if this one will suit AR....let me think about it😃

Mmmmmmmmmmmmm such a shweet romantic ff. kripa in a very different character. The budding romance was very cute. Your description of Kripa in various dresses, was very vivid but better that was the description of Angad's reaction to it everytime. i could feel my heart thudding alongside theirs.

Maza aagaya Bheegi saheba !!!!!😊 In this half of the ff there were many predictable things like carl's backstabbing, Kelly's help and support, Kripa's doubt about Angad's fidelty, forgiving Mishti,....etc. But what I didn't expect was Naina's recording,(I thought she would garner the help of some popular person), Carl's blackmail, Carl-Mishti relation and AK shifting to Mumbai. But best of all were the lovely AK moments throughout the ff and especially in the second half (obviously as they were married). I'm sure the AK fans would have no complaints on that score. Next which ff do u recommend?

Hey...thanks ssh....u are a voracious reader indeed. Thanks for the title, although i am sure a lot of other writers on this forum deserve it too. Kripa's character in this one was def very different from most characters i have written but i am glad everyone liked it

Hmm, next ff....if u want to get all confused and dizzy, read MIXED DOUBLES lolz