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its too good yaar,but i hope raj leaves her gf asap for naina..........

Tooooo guddd sanya... really gudd.. haan mera heartbreak hogaya ki Raj has gf.. but i hope its R-N later.. addicted u c.. 😉

Originally posted by: sanyamalhotra

Finally u r bakkkk here....Guuuud to c u darling!!!Bt i'll b cutting short on 'Captain'thing for a while.

Yup me bakk.. glad 2 be bak sweety!! haan captain ke bina bhi sounds gud!!👏

i like this ff... its different.. huda naina flirting.. raj already has a gf.. and problems r yet to begin... hmm.. interesting.. continue soon sanya..

Originally posted by: Aamna Saran

It was really a light enjoyable part sweetheart. The conversation

and dialogues were absolutely out-of-the-world. Everything was just

perfect, na kam, na zyaada!!! Gr8 going!!!

Choooo-chweet!! Actually I was a bit apprehensive kyunki I thot not

many mite apprectiate d fact dat Raj already has a gf...Bt I swear

d feedbak is too cool!!I m soo

happy!😃

Originally posted by: yoginisahakari

hey sanya

great going

interesting storyline

indeed i feel that this not an RN fic

lets wait and watch

well I never said dat it is RN fic...while d fact remains I never

denied it either.So beyond any doubt wait & watch is d best

option.😉

Originally posted by: SAHELIGSWM

Now,in that conversation raj spoke very little compared to them.It

seems your raj speaks less and work more.But raj having a girl

friend!!!!!!!!!!! .I wonder who's that going to be .Really want to

know about her.I hope there is no Ritu Mishra in your fiction

.Anyways,keep creating suspense.

Frm first to last u r absolutely rite!!!Dat's d way Raj is...less

talking n more working.....N no Ritu Mishra at all.

Originally posted by: mahek-e-gulab

flirt!!! mera huda yahan bhi baaz nahi aayega
gr88 begining sanya..dinner to cool tha aur raj ki girlfriend

sounds too hot!!!

u keep rocking!!

tera HUDA?????????? Yeh Huda tera kab se ho gaya yaar...tera to

shona hua karta tha na....Bt anyways raj do hve a very hot

gf!!!Watch out for her...She'll come into d scene later.

Originally posted by: seasons

its too good yaar,but i hope raj leaves her gf asap for

naina..........

Abhi uski gf ki entry bhi nhin hui..break up plans pehle se ready

hain!!Not bad bt if RN had to come 2gthr to dat mite just happen...

Originally posted by: angelic eyes

Tooooo guddd sanya... really gudd.. haan mera heartbreak hogaya ki

Raj has gf.. but i hope its R-N later.. addicted u c..

Keep ur fingers crossed!!It may happen bt ho sakta hai they mite

not come 2gthr!!