{LRL}.....Doomed...End Pg-54 {See Pg-55} - Page 38

I was correct!!!Aalekh was there at the time of huda's murder.Anyways,gr8 part 👏 .Jaldi se batana mere raj ko kisne maara.I want to know that culprit.Hope the nxt part will be the flashback.

ya i agree with violence_peace if rajeev read ur ff he will definately like ur role............very good update.plz continue ..........

oyeeee yeh ki hoyaaaaa 😡 😆
orderly bangaya hero i mean villian 😆
yaar yeh alekh itna cute hai ki abhi bhi vishavas nahi ho raha ki yeh bhi chalu niklaaaa 😉

waise d unbelievable things r always converted to something so believable only by ur write ups guddoo 👏

so true to ur work n so gr88 n ossome in it...u rock sanya.....again a dhasuu part keep rocking sweety 👏

hey cool sanya


good going

Alekh ko bhi villain

are yaar tune sare LRL ke ache characters ko villain bana diya

ok what can i say?

well pl continue soon

and to tell u the truth ur FF is awsome

Originally posted by: violence_peace

wow nice update yaar.sanya if rajeev reads ur story he will agree with in fraction of sec,even he need a diff role where he could play many shades n ur fics role is -ve but more interesting than present rajveer.n djs i agree with u,comeon yaar yashchopra sometimes produces good action movie like dhoom-2 n romantic movie like humtum,n ur story involves both.so we can get 2 diff masalas in a same movie. n sanya im not at all sad that u killed raj but im feeling bad that naina is still alive.plz kill her asap.wat she will do in this world without raj?

Bt I still feel Rajveer's char is wasted....It cud hve been better!! Bt I m really shockingly surprised dat u r not sad wid Raj's death....& as I sed Naina ki tension na le...Main hoon na!!Sab sambhal loongi...Dekh loongi usko!!!

Originally posted by: SAHELIGSWM

I was correct!!!Aalekh was there at the time of huda's murder.Anyways,gr8 part .Jaldi se batana mere raj ko kisne maara.I want to know that culprit.Hope the nxt part will be the flashback.

Yes u were!!!!Batati hoon...batati hoon....3 parts baaki hain abhi usmein se kisi mein bhi bata doongi!!!!!3 isnt too much..haina??

Originally posted by: ami_princess

ya i agree with violence_peace if rajeev read ur ff he will definately like ur role............very good update.plz continue ..........

Thanxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxxx....Lemme hope he doesnt thrashes me for those hot n wild love making scenes!!!😉

Originally posted by: mahek-e-gulab

oyeeee yeh ki hoyaaaaa
orderly bangaya hero i mean villian
yaar yeh alekh itna cute hai ki abhi bhi vishavas nahi ho raha ki yeh bhi chalu niklaaaa

waise d unbelievable things r always converted to something so believable only by ur write ups guddoo

so true to ur work n so gr88 n ossome in it...u rock sanya.....again a dhasuu part keep rocking sweety

Mere sabse pyaare cadet ko agar order lee banaoge to woh yeh sab bhi nhin karega!!!!Waise Yeh bahut chalu insaan hai...just w8 & watch!!!

Originally posted by: yoginisahakari

hey cool sanya


good going

Alekh ko bhi villain

are yaar tune sare LRL ke ache characters ko villain bana diya

ok what can i say?

well pl continue soon

and to tell u the truth ur FF is awsome

Agar Huda typical hero material ho sakta hai to Bittu villain material kyun nhin!!!Bt d pointremains if u r happy...so m I n they all as well!!!

So alekh was present at the time of huda's murder....aree yaar u could have liked alekh or naina ..why raj 😭 😭 😭 and u could have given a DON2 ending but now nothing can be done...i dont want u to turn ekta kapoor so i am not requesting u 2 get raj back.