thoda sa pyaar hua haii (sujal&nandini) - Page 4

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hey continue kar bhi do dear!!!!

epi 4 😛

tulsi sujal aur nandini ki baat sunn leti hai aur phir mann hi mann kuch sochti hai.

Sujal - (tulsi ko dekhta hai) maa aap yaha ?? dadi ki tabiyat kaisi hai abb 😕

Tulsi - sujal nandini tum dono fikr mat karo mere jite ji tum dono ko koi alag nahi kar sakta 😳 chalo mere saath.

Nandini and sujal together - lekin kaha maa??

tulsi - koi sawal nahi bass chalo mere saath.

on the other hand mihir and abhay are tensed

Mihir - abhay yeh sabb kya ho raha hai hum sochte kuch hai aur ho kuch aur jata hai .hamare baccho ki jindagi unki khusiyaan dav par lagg gayi hai na jane ab kya hoga . main kya muh dikhaunga nandini . un dono ne to chup chap hamare iss faisle ko swikar kiya tha bina koi sawal jawab ke aur abb yeh shaddi hi ...

Abhay - mihir humare bacche samajhdar hai. hum jo unse kahenge woh wo kar lenge lekin iss shadi ke na hone se hamari reputation par ..

Mihir - abhay yeh tum kaisi baat karr rahe ho. mujhe sirf apne baccho ki khgushiyon ki parwah hai mujhe kissi aur baat se koi matlab nahi (aur phir mihir waha se chala jata hai).

udhar tulsi nandini aur sujal ko kahi le ja rahi hai lekin bich main hi usse savita ke kamre se kuch awaz ati hai. woh dekhti hai ki kripa aur savita dono behad hass hass kar batein karr rahe hai aur savita ek dam thik hai aur woh tino unki batein suntlete hai :-

Kripa - dadi u r superb, i love u dadi, kya natak kiya hai apne . ek pal ke liye to main bhi dhoka kha gayi thi.

Savita - abb yeh shadi kabhi nahi ho sakegi. mujhe yeh sabb to karna hi tha kyunki main iss ghar mein ek aur tulsi nahi chahti thi
and then kripa and savita both laughs.

tulsi bina kuch kahe sujal nandini ko chale ko kehti hai
aur sujal nandini ke mann main kai sawal uth rahe hai jaise kripa aur savita ne aisa kyon kiya ?? kyon unki jindagi ki khushiyaan chinnna chahi?? aur tulsi unhe kaha le ja rahi ?? kya undono ko ab alag hona padega kya ?? kya unhe unka pyaar kabhi nahi milega ??agar woh kissi ko iss barein mein batayenge to kya koi un par vishwas karenge ??
inhi sawalo ke saath nandini ne sabb kuch bhagwan par chod diya hai aur sujal ne apni maa par aur dono tulsi ke saath chale ja rahe hai .

to be continued soon....
sorry for any mistake and sorry to those who dont like it 😔

oh gosh!! savita is soo disgusting.........huh!!

by the way dear!! tum itne din gayab kaha thi??

lovely part haan!! 👏 iss baar continue soon !!


luv,
vandu 😉

main tu bhul hi gayi thi is ff ke bare mein lekin achanak se yaad aya aur bas aa gayi main 😛


epi 5

mihir aur saumya doctor se baat karta hai ki uski maa kab tak puri tarah se thik ho jayegi aur doc usse kehta hai ki savita ji ki halat abb behtar hai lekin thodi si bhi tension unke liye janleva sabit ho sakti hai .
mihir tulsi se iss barein mein baat karne jate hai lekin servant batata hai ki tulsi subah se hi ghar se gayi hui hai. mihir sochta hai ki tulsi jarur mandir gayi hogi inn pareshaniyon ka hal dhundne aur woh bhi mandir janta hai .
idhar doc savita ko phone karne batata hai ki mihir aur saumya aye the aur jaisa savita ne usse kaha tha usne woh sabb un dono se keh diya hai aur doc savita se 20 lakh rupiye mangta hai aur savita kehti hai ki woh jald se jald paise bhej degi😡
mihir mandir pahuchta hai aur mandir mein dekhta hai ki tulsi sujal aur nandini ki shadi karwa rahi hai . (last phera baki tha aur mihir waha aa gaya tha lekin ab shadi ho chuki sujal ne nandini ko mangal sutra bhi pehna diya hai aur mang bhi bhar di hai aur ab unhe koi alag nahi kar sakta😛) :-
tulsi - mihir tum ...
mihir :- tulsi mujhe tumse yeh umeed nahi thi tum itna gir gayi ..
sujal - papaaaaaaaaa aap meri maa se aise baat nahi kar sakteeee😳 savita dadi galat thi aur mom sahi hai .
mihir - tum mujhe sikhaoge tummmm arey jis insaan ne kabhi kissi rishtey ki kadr nahi ki woh insaan mujhe sahi aur galat bataega .aur tulsi tum aj tak maine tum par khud se jyada vishwas kiya apni maa aur apni behan ki koi baat nahi mani uss tulsi ne mere saath itna bada dhoka kiya sharm ati hai mujhe tumhe apni patni kehte hue cheeeeee.
tulsi - tum nahi jante mihir ki kis wajah se maine yeh kadam uthaya .. ek bar meri baat to sunn lo..
mihir - main janta hoon tulsi aur achi tarah samajh bhi gaya hoon ki tumne yeh sabb meri maa ki jaan lene ke liye kiya hai haina . itne salo ki nafrat ka acha badla liya hai tumne tulsi lekin ab meri ek baat achi tarah se sunn lo abb mere dil mein mere ghar mein tumhare liye koi jagah nahi hai . main mihir grewal inkaar karta hoon tumhe apni patni manne se .aur haan tulsi agar meri maa ko kuch bhi hua to main tumhe jindagi bhar maaf nahi karungaaaaaaa
tulsi - mihir meri baat to sunno mihir maa natak kar rahi hai mihirrrrrrrrrrrrr..
sujal apni maa ke ansu dekh nahi pata aur mihir se kehta hai ki woh iss tarah uski maa se rishta nahi tod sakte :-
mihir - thik hai tulsi main tumhe maaf karne ke liye taiyaa hoon lekin meri ek shart hai .
tulsi - shart ?? kaisi shart mihir ..
mihir - tum mere saath ghar aa sakti ho lekin tumhe apne bete se sare rishtey todne honge 😡😭
tulsi is shocked woh kuch keh nahi pati
sujal - thik hai Mr. mihir grewal mujhe bhi apke saath rehne ka koi shauk nahi hai mere liye meri maa ki khushiyon se bad kar aur kuch bhi nahi hai lekin ek baat meri bhi sunn lijiye jis din aap ko sacchai pata chalegi usdin aap khud ayege iss bete ke pass lekin tab tak aap iss bete par har hakk har adhikar kho chuke honge.maine jindagi bhar apse nafrat ki hai lekin aj apki baton par sirf hasi ati hai , hamare bich kabhi baap bete ka rishta nahi tha sirf nafrat ka rishta tha aur aj nafrat ka rishta bhi tut gaya 😭

sujal nandini tulsi ka ashirwad lete hai aur chale jate hai 😭

to be continued soon ..😊

awesome just saw u cont. it was a lovely part.

👏
Nice one.......mihir is as usual foolish !! Im glad ki sujal-nandini chale gaye.......warna agar ghar jaate to waise bhi savita unhe alag karne ki koshish karti 😡

continue soon !

luv,
vandu 😉

hi everybody

i m really sorry to all who liked this ff i m really sorry for leaving this fic like this

here is a part for ya all hope u like it
as always i must have done a lot of mistakes so do tell me and plzzz forgive me

this time ill definately continue.. (if i get atleast one positive reply 😛 )

epi 6

<font size="3">mihir ne sujal ko business se bedakhal kar diya.
jab sujal aur nandini (nandini ke insist karne par) malhotra mansion jate hai tab kusum unhe ashirwad dena chahti hai par abhay sujal ko damaad manne se inkaar kar deta hai kyunki sujal ke pass ab kuch bhi nahi hai.aur woh nandini ko bura bhala kehta hai :-
Abhay- aaj tumne apne gande khoon ka rang dikha hi diya na nandini , maine maa se kaha tha ki woh ek anaath ko ghar lakar bahot badi galti kar rahi hai magar unhone meri nahi suni aur aaj iska nateeja hamare samne hai ,

these words were like thunderstrom for nandini. jinko apna samjha woh to kabhi uske apne the hi nahi. nanidni buri tarah tut jati hai.. par sujal usse sambhalta hai aur uska saath deta hai

sujal aur nandini shimla chale jate hai aur sujal apna naya business start karta hai aur ek hi saal mein he is on top. har taraf ussi ki tarif , everyone wants to do business with sujal. Sujal is businessmen of the year. Sujal ka business partner hai akshat shergill equally talented and equally nice.
sujal aur nandini behad khush hai apni nayi jindagi se lekin maa se durr rehna ka dard aaj bhi unn dono ka picha nahi chodta.

grewals aur malhotras ek saath rehne lage hai , sujal ke business se hatt jane se sara bojh saumya par aa gaya hai . Mihir as usual rishton main uljha hua hai isliye woh business mein dhyan nahi de pa raha aur abhayhar jagah har cheez "hook or crook" apply karne ki koshish main laga rehta hai aur isliye uske haat kuch nahi lagta aur kabhi kabhi to contract milte milte bhi chinn jata hai. In nutshell their business is sinking.

Tulsi bete aur bahu ke saath insaaf na kar pane ke bojh ke tali dab rahi hai , jab mihir aur savita ke tane hadd par kar jate hai to woh sochti hai ki kyon woh bete ke saath hi nahi chali gayi. par uss waqt woh sujal par bojh nahi banna chahti thi aur uske patni dharm ne usse aisa karne ki izazat bhi nahi di.

Sujal is aware of everything aur woh akshat ke saath mumbai shift hone ka plan banata hai , woh apni maa ke saath hui jyadati ka badla lena chahta hai aur family business ko support dena bhi chahta hai.

Akshat mumbai jata hai aur SA industries ko represent karta hai aur grewals and malhotras ke saath partnership pares par sign karta hai. but grewals and malhotras are unaware of this. Yeh partnership 70-30 hai matlab 70% shares SA industries ke hai aur 30% G&M ke (grewals and malhotras). aur iss deal ke tahat G&M akshat ke ghar aa kar rahenge.

Sujal aur nandini bhi mumbai aa jate hai.

nandini - sujal iss ek saal main kya kuch nahi ho gaya , sab kuch badal gaya , meri zindagi meri zindagi ka sach , sujal thanks for ur support agar tab tumne mera saath na diya hota to main tut gayi hoti, iss beraham duniya main kho gayi hoti...

Sujal - agar aisi baat hai nandini to phir meri sari zindagi tumhara ehsaan manne main hi guzar jayegi.. mera dil janta hai ki tumhari meri zindagi main kya ehmiyat hai .. i love u nanidni .. 😳

nandini - i love u too sujal.. 😳

sujal- nandini aaj grewals aur malhotras aa rahe hai.. hamare saath rehne..

nandini- sujal kya sab kuch thik hoga?? kahin rishton main duriyon aur na badd jaye..

sujal - sabkuch thik hoga nandini lekin sirf hamari zindagi main.. unn logo ki zindagi main kya hoga yeh to waqt hi batayega.. maa aur tumhare har ek aansu ka badla lena chahta hoon main.. jitna tum dono roye ho usse kahin jyada unhe rulaunga .. mohtaz bana dunga sabko ..

Nandini - sujal yeh tum kaisi batein kar rahe hoo .. woh tumhara pariwar hai tumhare apne hai sabb ..maine to socha tha ki tumunhe support karne mumbai aye hoo..

sujal - mere apne sirf tum , maa aur akshat hoo.. jinhone harr kadam par mujhe hosla diya pyaar diya aur saath diya hai.. aur mujhe bass inn teen rishton ki parwaah hai..

saying this sujal waha se hall main chala jata hai , akshat waha already hota hai aur G&M bhi aa jate hai
sujal ko dekh kar all are shocked
nanidni bhi hall main aa jati hai

Mihir - sujal.. tum yaha kya kar rahe ho..

Sujal - well agar aap jante nahi to sunn lijiye .. yeh ghar mera hai .. main malik hoon iss ghar ka aur akshat mera dost mera business partner hai , aur ab hum dono aapke business partners ya yu kahoon ki aapke doobte hue business ke supporters hai

tulsi - sujal .. kaisa hai tu beta .. mujhe yakin tha ki tu apne pariwar ka saath jarur dega..

sujal - haan mom main apne pariwar ka saath kabhi nahi chodunga aur mere pariwaar main aap , nanidni aur akshat hai bass..

saying this sujal waha se chala jata
nandini sabka ashirwad leti hai magar siwaye dani maa aur tulsi ke aur koi usse ashirwaad nahi deta..

at night - all r in their respective rooms

mihir(to tulsi) - dekha tumhara beta ab apne pariwaal walo ko niche dikhane ke liya kya karr raha hai

tulsi chup hai

savita and kripa - na jane hamara kya hone wala hai😆

abhay (to kusum)- kusum maine uss din nandini ke saath bahot galat kiya .. mujhe aisa nahi karna chahiye tha, par woh meri beti hai apne baap ko jarur maaf kar degi 😡

kusum (mann main) - kitne swarthi hai aa app abhay..

saumya (to himself) - jo ho raha hai sahi ho raha hai , sujal bhaiay aur nandini bhabhi ne bahot kuch saha hai..



nandini khidki ke pass khadi hai sujal bed par leta hua hai
nandini (mann mein) - apna irada badal lo sujal isse sabko sirf takleef hogi aur sabse jyada maa pisegi

sujal(mann mein) - main nahi janta nandini ki main sahi kar raha hoon ya galat

both look at each other, sujal uth kar nandini ke pass jata hai aur usse hug karta hai

nandini - kya hua sujal ??
sujal - bahar chale ??
nandini - hmm..

dono bridge pe jate hai (sujal's fav spot in kahin to hoga lol)
sujal nanidni ko kamar se pakad kar khada hai 😊

sujal - janti ho nandini main jab bhi yaha ata hoon bahot sukun milta hai , thodi der ke liye har dard harpareshani bhul jata hoon ..

nandini - matlab yeh meri sautan hai ..😆

both laughs

nandini - pata hai main yaha ayi hoon to mujhe kaisa lagg raha hai ..

sujal - kaisa lagg raha hai ..

nandini - aisa lagg raha hai ki mujhe ab thodi icecream khana hai 😆

sujal - nandini tum itni idiot ho ya isse bhi jyada??

nandini - shut up sujal mujhe tumse baat nahi karni.... ab tum akele hi kha lena icecream meri taraf se bhi aur akele hi chale jana ghar main nahi aungi... 😕

sujal - arey tum to naraz ho gayi main to mazak kar raha tha .. waise tumhe idiot ka matlab pata hai .. idiot ka matlab hota hai I Do Ishq Only Tumse.. 😆

nandini - veryy funny .. ab chalo mujhe icecream khana hai plzzzzzzzzz

dono iceceam kha ke ghar ate hai

nandini washroom chali jati hai change karne aur sujal uska intzaar karta hai bahar aur jab woh bahar ati hai to samne sujal ko pati hai..

nandini - aise ghur ghur kar kyon dekh rahe ho ..

sujal - itni khubsurat biwi ho to koi kya kare

nandini - raat ke ek baje koi sirf yahi kar sakta hai ki jake chup chap bed par so jaye ..

sujal - aisi baat hai to phir chalo
sujal nandini ko utha kar bed pe le jata hai

nandini - sujal yeh kya kar rahe ho chodo mujhe..

sujal - nahi maine tumhe icecream khilayi hai ab mujhe bhi badle main kuch chahiye..

nandini - shut up sujal raat bahot ho gayi hai mujhe sona hai aur phir subah jaldi bhi to uthna hai , tum bhi chup chap so jaoo

nandini dusri taraf muh karke so jati hai

sujal - nandini suno na ..

nandini - hmm.. bolo ..

sujal - tum janti ho na ki mujhe baccho se kitna pyaar hai ..

nandini - hmm.. thik hai subah hote hai hum aashiyaana chalenge okk.. ab so jao ..

sujal - so nice of you main khud ja sakta hoon chala jaunga ..
sujal dusri taraf palat kar so jata hai ..

nandini sujal ki taraf palat ti hai aur usko apni taraf karti hai aur usko kiss karti hai .. sujal nandini ko apni baho main le leta hai ..

nandini - sujal tumhe beta chahiye ya beti ??

sujal - beti .. betiyaan hamesha maa baap ka khayal rakhti hai .. bete to nalayak hote hai , betiyaan samajhdar hoti hai .. tumhe kya chahiye nandini??

nandini - mujhe to ek beta aur ek beti chahiye .. then our family will be complete

sujal - bass ek beta aur ek beti .. nahi hamari kam se kam ek cricket team to hogi hii.... 😆

bass inn dono ki yahi batein chalti rehti hai..</font>

hey ya nice to hav u back...was really upset when u stopped writing gud ke u resumed....coming to the part it was very well written ..u cn count me as ur regular reader frm nw..he he he