thoda sa pyaar hua haii (sujal&nandini)

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Posted: 18 years ago

hi friends, i am starting a new fanfic and its a bit different one. may be u dont accept the characters but just for a change i wrote this ff. characters Rajeev khandelwal :- Sujal Grewal( A person who
loves his mother the most and can do anything for her mother.Apni Maa
ke liye sujal sari duniya ko aag laga sakta hai. koi uski maa ka apmaan
kare ya uski maa ko taklif pahuchaye yeh usse bardasht nahi hota. sujal
apne chote bhai saumya se bhi behad pyaar karta hai. sujal sabko khush
rakhna janta . he cannot express his emotions easily. sujal apne pita
se behad nafrat karta hai kyunki woh sochta hai ki jab bhi uski maa ko
uske pita ki jarurat thi uske pita ne uski maa ka saath nahi diya.
sujal ko chote baccho se behad pyaar hai. apne busy schedule se thoda
waqt nikal kar woh har roz "ashiyana" jata hai anaath baccho ko thodi
si khushiyaan dene.) Gauri Pradhan :- Nandini Malhotra (confident,
beautiful, loving, incomparable. ek aisi ladki jiski chahat har maa
baap karte hai aur ek aise jivan saathi jiski talash har ladke ko rehti
hai. jindagi mein badi se badi musibat ko parr karne ki himmat rakhti
hai nandini. kabhi koi mushkil ho to nandini ki har mushkil ka ant kar
deti hai uski jindagi ki angel uski "Dani Maa". Nandini apne pariwar se
jyada khush nahi hai lekin kabhi apni maa aur pita ko koi shikayat ka
mauka nahi deti. Nandini ka ek bhai hai jo shimla mein rehta hai aur
nandini ke saath hi shimla ke boarding school mein raha hai. Nandini ne
apne bhai ke saath jiske saath uska khoon ka rishta to nahi hai par
phir bhi yeh rishta nandini ke liye har rishtey se badh karr hai.) *~rajeev and gauri are the main characters~*

Tulsi Grewal :-Sujal's mom (Tulsi hamesha sach ka saath deti hai chahe phir iske liye usse apne pariwar ke khilaf bhi kyun na jana padhe. tulsi ne kabhi nahi chaha ki uski wajah se uske pati aur uski saas mein koi duriyaan aye isliye tulsi ne mihir se kasam li hai ki chahe kuch bhi ho jaye woh tulsi ke liye apni maa ke khilaf na jaye. tulsi apne dono baccho aur pariwar se behad pyaar karti hai.) Mihir Grewal :- sujal's dad (mihir ne hamesha ek acha beta ek acha pati aur ek acha pita banna chaha lekin woh hamesha apne pariwar ke bich piss karr reh gaya . Mihir kabhi apni patni ko woh khushi nahi de paya jiski woh haqdar hai kyunki uski maa ki khushi mein tulsi ki khushi thi aur tulsi ki taklifo mein uski maa ki khushi.) Amrita sehgal :- Sujal's bua (har musibat ki jadd hai amrita . isne kabhi apni maa aur apni bhabhi tulsi ke bich pyaar aur mithass nahi ghulne di hamesha harr rishtey mein zehar gholna iski adat hai. apne sasural se jyada waqt yeh apni maa ke ghar bitati hai.)

Savita Grewal :- sujal's dadi (jaldi se harr kissi ki bato mein aa jati hai log isse iski bahu ke khilaf badhkate hai aur yeh apni bahu ko satati hai. isne hamesha yeh socha hai ki tulsi ko kaise ghar se bahar nikalu lekin in sabb bato mein yeh bhul gayi hai ki iske yeh sabb karne se sabse jyada chot iske bete mihir ko pahuchti hai.)

Saumya Grewal :- sujal ka chota bhai (chocolate boy,behad acha insaan aur yeh hamesha laga rehta hai apne pariwar ko ek karne mein. isne jindagi mein kuch khas to nahi paya lekin haan sabka pyar pura mila hai. saumya sabse jyada pyaar sujal se karta hai aur isliye yeh jante hua bhi ki sujal kuch galat kar raha hai woh sujal ka saath deta hai taki sujal kissi musibat mein na pad jaye.) Kusum Malhotra :- nandini's mom (ek behad achi patni lekin kabhi ek acchi maa nahi bann payi.hamesha apne pati ki harr khushi ka khayal rakhte rakhte yeh apne baccho ki khushi ko hi pura karna bhul gayi.apni shadi ko bachane mein yeh apni dono betiyon se dur si ho gayi hai. lekin phir bhi nandini ko isse koi shikayat nahi hai.)

Abhay Malhotra :- Nandini's papa (Most successful business man. business mein abhay ka mukabla koi nahi karr sakta lekin agar rishtey nibhane ki baat aye to sirf yahi kaha ja sakta hai ki business nibhane ke junoon mein abhay rishtey nibhana hi bhool gaya . abhay pichlle 23 saal se kusum ko kathputli ki tarah nacha raha hai(in dono ki shadi ko 23 saal ho chuke hai) aur kusum bina kuch kahe uski harr baat manti hai .) Kripa Malhotra :- nandini ki choti behan (jiddi , total bigdi hua ,paisa pani ki tarah baha dena iski adat hai . mostly available at pubs.Kripa apni behan nandini se behad nafrat karti hai kyunki use lagta hai ki usse kabhi apne pariwar ka pyaar nahi mila sirf nandini ki wajah se. use lagta hai ki nandini ke ane se uska pariwar tut gaya hai bikhar gaya hai uske poariwar mein koi khushi nahi hai.nandini ko chot pahuchane ka koi mauka kripa apne haath se jane nahi deti.)

Edited by ~~~~ - 16 years ago

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Posted: 18 years ago

love the intro
sound kool

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varallikka

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Posted: 18 years ago

hey interesting intro post soon

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Posted: 18 years ago

thanks baby girl and varallika

i think i have to post my story for u two only 😆
but its okk with me 😊
here's the first part

samajh nahi aa raha pehle sujal se shuru karu ya nandini se❓ .chalo dono ki family se hi shuru karr dete hai 😊

A big mansion (malhotra mansion) with beautiful garden ,swimming pool ,and a small bridge.Lots of servants doing decoration with a speed of rajdhani 😆 .

voice - arey kaka jaldi jaldi kaam khatm kijiye 7 baje party shuru ho jayegi aur yeh sara kaam khatm hone se pehle Abhay ghar aa gaye to jante hai na aap ki kya hoga . plsssss zara jaldi kijiye.(bechari kusum 😭 )

A car stops outside and a man in suit boot comes out of the car. He scolds the servants and decorators who r cleaning and decorating the mansion from outside. (yes he is abhay 😕 )

in parallel to abhay's scene - A beautiful girl wearing a designer salwar suit is running fast towards the door in grnd floor but in between the two servants carrying flowers tokari on the second floor collides with each other and the flowers fell on that girl. she laughs but then remebers that she has to do some important work and starts running again 😆

arey pehchana nahi yahi to hai nandini 😳

Abhay - arey hamari pyari beti itni jaldi jaldi bhag kar kaha ja rahi hai.

girl - papa sameer bhaiya ne important meeting rakhi hai office mein. i have to reach their in 5 mins😔

Abhay - acha thik hai beta lekin tumhe yaad haina ki aj hamare ghar mein party hai.

girl - haan papa i'll be their at 7 dont worry.

Abhay - arey suno to ......

girl - bye papa sorryyyyyyy....

kusum is watching all this and smiling

Abhay - dekha kusum tum mujhe kehti ho ki mein busy hoon magar dekho hamari beti to mujhse bhi jyada busy hai.

kusum - ab batein band kijiye aur jaldi se taiyaar ho jaiye party shuru hone mein sirf do gahnte baki hai .

Abhay - kusum mujhe taiyaar hone mein jyada waqt nahi lagta . tum aur maa taiyaar hona shuru kar do abhi se hi warna pata chala mehmaan to aa gaye magar mezbaan hi gayab hai 😆. kusum aj tumhe jitna waqt lagana hai laga lo kyunki mein chahta hoon ki aj ke iss sabse khass mauke par meri biwi bilkul dulhan ki tarah lagey. aur party mein maujud harr koi tumhe dekh kar meri itni achi kismat parr jaleeeeeeeee😛

they were talking but in between a voice is heard

voice - mamma aap kaha hai jaldi aiye na mujhe kuch samajh nahi aa raha mein kya pehnu ........ mammaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaaa (yes she is kripa😡)

Kusum - aa rahi hoon baba . le yeh dress tujh par bahot achi lag rahi hai ab ja aur jaldi se taiyaar ho ja.

Surekha - kusum betaaaaaaaaaaaaaa

kusum - ayi maa . arey maa aap ab tak taiyaar nahi hui ??

Surekha - arey beta meri choti behan ke ghar se phone tha meri behan ki tabiyat thik nahi . mujhe abhi waha ke liye nikalna hoga.

Kusum - par maa..... acha thik hai aap ja kar abhay se baat kar lijiye tab tak mein aapka saman pack kar deti hoon.

Surekha - woh to thik hai beta lekin tujhe taiyaar hona hai kitne kaam padhe hai tuja mein sabb kar lungi.

Kusum - nahi maa aap jaldi jaiye aur abhay se baat kijiye aapka jana bahot jaruri hai.

surekha leaves and kusum is doing the packing

scene shifts to Grewal house it is just same as malhotra mansion :-

lady - tumhe yaad haina aaj hame malhotra bhai sahab ke yaha party mein jana hai .

Man - oohhhhh i am so sorry mein to bhul hi gaya thaaaaaa.

Lady - bhul gaya tha ka kya matlab mihir ?? abhay bhai sahab is ur bussiness partner. tum jitna waqt mere saath nahi bitate usse jyada waqt tum unke saath hote ho aur tum unhi ke bare mein bhul gaye . lagta hai aise hi ek din tum mujhe bhi bhul jaoge hainaaaaaaa😡

Mihir - arey tulsiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiiii kaisi batein karr rahi hoo . mein sanse lena bhul sakta hoon lekin tumhe nahi

Tulsi - arey bas bas shayar sahab ab jaldi se sujal aur saumya ko lekar ghar aa jaiye.

Mihir - apka hukm sir aankho par 😛

after half an hour -
voice - mommmmmmmm mommmmmmmmmmmmmmmm mere shoes kaha hai ??????? we r getting lateeeeee

Tulsi - meine kaha tha office se late ane ko bolooooo sujal betaaaaaaa (tulsi sujal ke kaan pakad leti haii😆). aur yeh tumhare shoes aankho ke samne rakhe hai lekin phir bhiiiiiiiiiiiii mom mom chillata rahega . chal ab jaldi karr sab log tera niche intazar kar rahe hai. mein zara saumya ko dekh kar ati hoon .

in saumya's room

Tulsi - saumya beta mujhe to yakin hi nahi hota ki tu chota hai aur sujal bada.ek tu hai jo har kaam waqt par kar leta hai aur ek woh hai jo jan bhujh kar baccha hi bana rehna chahta hai😊. chal niche aja

savita and others are ready and waiting for saumya and sujal.
they all move for the party.

malhotra mansion is decorated like a dulhan 😃 (party was to start by 7 but now its 8:30😆)

the party hall is full of people , some are dancing some are drinking some are gossipping. Abhay and Kusum are now talking with Grewal's(mihir,tulsi,savita and amrita while sujal and saumya are talking with their frnds)

achanak se lights chali jati hai......
Voice - ladies and gentlemen (aur issi ke saath light bhi aa jati hai)
the voice is of nandini 😛 (she is looking sooooo prettyyyyy 😳)

Nandini - kai shadi ke bhandhan aise hote hai jo jindagi ki kasauti mein saal do saal bhi nahi tik pate, to kai aise hote hai jo tutte to nahi magar mazbut bhi nahi hote. Magar jo bhandhan sacche mann se jode jate hai aur jis bhandhan ko bhagwan khud jode rakhte hai aise bhandhan atut hote hai jaise ki Mr. abhay malhotra aur Mrs. Kusum malhotra .inn dono ne jindagi ki harr kasauti ko pura karte hua apni shadi shuda jindagi ke 23 saal aaj hassi khushi pure karr liye haii

aur idhar kripa mann hi mann kehti hai ki yeh rishta sirf mom ke sacrifice ki wajah se bacha hua hai aur mom ne to iss rishtey ko mazboot karne ke liye apne baccho ka sacrifice kiya hai to rishta to mazboot hoga hi na huh.

everyone clapsssss and nandini calls abhay and kusum to say something abt each other

after their bhashan sabb phir se gossip etc etc mein lagg jate haiiii.
abhay aur kusum nandini ko thanks kehte hai.

to be continued soon 😛........