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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: ~~~~

its okkkk payal i made this jobi coz i cannot see sujal with kashish (i hate kashishhhhhhhhhhhhh)

hey dear,i dn't care abt sujal or kashish,

but i love Nandini&Karan,so i can't see Nandini with anyone except Karan😭😭😭

Edited by payel4u - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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good FF pls cont waitng for the next part. Sujal and nandini sounds interesting.
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sorry payel if my story hurt u 😭

thanks golu 😊
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Episode 2 😛

party is still going on.

mihir and abhay r discussing abt a new project .

Abhay - Mihir yeh project hamari company ke liye bahot important hai. Hamare sare competitors is project ke liye apply karr rahe hai. Waise hamari company ke chances 90% hai parr mein risk nahi lena chahta. sabb kuch secretly hona chahiye. Hum kissi par bhi bharosa nahi karr sakte.Aur haan har bar ki tarah iss bar bhi mein chahta hoon ki quotation tum decide karo. (😆)

Mihir - dont worry abhay yeh project hamme hi milega.

while kusum and tulsi are chatting with each other abt their children and blah blah. just then tulsi ka mobile bajta haii lekin awaz clear nahi ati hai isliye woh bahar chali jati hai.

nandini is busy with her cell i think she is talking with somebody. then she goes outside.

Tulsi - hellooooo hellooooooo .

voice - hi tulsi ji kaisi hai aap??

tulsi - areyyyyyyyy suyashhhhhhhhhh tummmmmm ohhhh my goddd i am sooooooo happyyyyyyyy. aaj itne din baad apni iss dost ki yaad kaise ayi tumhe ha bolo. america shift hone ke baad ek bar phone nahi kiya tumne.

suyash - haan lekin india ate hi sabse pehle tumhe hi phone kiya hai . janti hoooo mein india mein settle hone ki soch raha hoon .

tulsi - arey wah yeh to bahot achi baat hai suyash.

nandini here this sentence but she ignores and goes inside.

after talking with suyash tulsi also comes inside.

now nandini is dancing with saumya and sujal is dancing with kripa. (nandini and saumya are like best frnds. nandini had rarely talked with sujal.
saumya - nandini i have to go to airport to receive my frnds hope u dont mind.

nandini - its okk go.

kripa - wait saumya ,will u drop me to mandir meine mom dad ke liye mannat mangi thi plsssssss(mandir nahi pub jana hai kripa ji kooo😡)

Saumya - lets go.

saumya and kripa leaves.

sujal - nandini lets dance

nandini - okkk . sujal ek baat puchu tumse ?

sujal - ofcourse

nandini - bachpan mein hamm charo (sujal, nandini, kripa, saumya)kitna khela karte the din bhar ek dusre ke saath bitate the kabhi isse pareshan kiya to kabhi usse. lekin ab sabb kuch kitna badal gaya hai na khaskar hamari dosti.

both r seeing in each others eyes

sujal - haan nandini tumhare boarding school jane ke baat sabb kuch badal gaya. ab hum dono ek dusre se baat karne mein bhi hichkichate hai .

Mihir , tulsi , abhay and kusum are watching them .

Abhay - mihir tumhe nahi lagta hamme hamari dosti ko rishtedari mein badal dena chahiye.

Mihir - haan lekin hame ek bar sujal aur nandini se puch lena chahiye. aur ye jimmedari tulsi aur kusum bhabhi ki hai.

Abhay - thik hai. agle hafte tak project ke result aa jayega aur ussi din ek badi party organise karke inn dono ki shadi announce karr denge

Mihir - done. bhabhi abhi se taiyari shuru karr dijiye hum ladke wale hai koi kami nahi rehne chahiye .

Kusum - bilkul bhai sahab.

party is over now sabb apne ghar chale jate hai (srry yaar i wanted to end this party but kaise end karu samajh nahi aa raha tha isliye bas aise hi end karr diya 😆 )

next day kusum tries to talk to nandini but she is not in her room. Kusum usse phone karti hai.

Kusum - hello nandini beta itni subah subah tum kaha chali gayi ??

Nandini - Maa mein mandir ayi thi aur yaha par tulsi aunty mil gayi aur mujhe apne saath apne ghar le ja rahi hai . mein thodi der mein ati hoon

In the car :-

Nandini - tulsi aunty kall raat ko aap kinse baat karr rahi thi koi suyash.. aap bahot khush lag rahi thi isliye puch rahi hoon.

Tulsi - suyash mera bachpan ka dost hai . hum haridwar mein saath saath khele , bade hua.

then they reach Grewal House.

after 1 hour nandini reach malhotra house then kusum tries to talk to her but nandini went to her room saying mom sameer bhaiya has sent some files and i have to study them i will talk to u later .same happens with tulsi also.

after dinner everybody wents to their room

Abhay - kusum tumne nandini se baat ki ??

KUsum - nahi abhay tumhari beti bilkul tumari tarah busy hai mujhe mauka hi nahi mila baat karne ka.

Abhay - kyon na hum kal hi apne farm house chale waha baccho ko ek dusre ko samajhne ka aur waqt mil jayega.

Kusum - great idea. aap mihir bhai sahab se baat kar lijiye.meien iss rishte ke bare mein Maa (surekha)se baat kar li hai woh bahot khush hai aur keh rahi thi ki sujal aur nandini ki taraf se to haan hi samjho😛

sab log farm house pahuch jate hai kripa and saumya are not their. MIhir ne saumya ko banglore bheja hai aur kripa dosto ke saath gumne gayi haiiii.

finally projects result gonna come today everyone is tensed.

Mihir ko manager ka phone ata hai.

Mihir - haan gupta ji project hamme hi mila na mein janta tha. kyaaaaaaaaaaaaaa lekin yeh kaise hua , kaun hai woh ??????

Abhay - kya hua mihir ?? yeh project hamein nahi mila ?????

Mihir - yeh project hame mila hai lekin hamme kissi ke saath milkar yeh project complete karna hoga.

Abhay - kyaaaaa kaun hai woh ????

Mihir - suyash mittal. uski aur hamari quotations same thiiii.

Tulsi is not their she went to mandir to pray and is unaware of the result aur mihir bhi nahi janta ki suyash tulsi ka dost hai.

tulsi returns frm the mandir and is shocked to see the tensed faces. she asks wat happened and kusum tells her they got the project but they have complete it with someone else.

Nandini in her room (to herself)- suyash mittal ye to tulsi aunty ke bachpan ke dost hai. (and she remebers the conversation between them)kahin aisa to nahi ki tulsi aunty ne hi unki madad ki hooo , nahi nahi aisa nahi ho sakta mujhe tulsi aunty se hi baat karni hogi.

in tulsi's room

Tulsi - arey nandini beta aao . kuch kaam hai ??

Nandini - aap se kuch puchna hai. suyash uncle ko quotations aapne bataye ????

Tulsi - kyaaaaaaaa yeh tum kya keh rahi hoooo.

Nandini - haan aunty yeh praoject hamare saath saath suyash uncle ko bhi mila hai aur unhone same wahi quote kiya jo hamari company ne kiya tha.

Tulsi - nandini beta tu aisa soch bhi kaise sakti hai mein aisa kyon karungi .

nandini - chinta mat kijiye aunty mujhe aap par pura bharosa hai. lekin suyash uncle tak jisne bhi quotations pahuchaye hai hamme usse dhundna hoga.

Amrita ye sabb batte sunti hai aur apne room mein chali jati hai

Amrita - (to herself) Tulsi bhabhi aansu bahane ke liye taiyaar ho jaiye iss bar aisa jal buna hai meine ki aap bach nahi payengi.
woh kisiko phone karke ghar ane ko kehti hai.aur khud sabko hall mein bulati hai.

Mihir - kya baat hai amrita hamein yaha kyon bulaya hai.

Amrita - aap ki sari pareshaniyon ki jad kaun hai yeh batane ke liye .

Mihir - kaun hai woh

Amrita - woh woh hai apki dharm patni tulsi bhabhiii . kyon tulsi bhabhi aise bholi kyon bann rahi hai kahiye na bataiye sabko kaun hai suyash mittal aapka kya rishta hai usse aur aapne hi usse quotes bataye haiiiiii.

everyone is shocked . especially tulsi and nandini. tulsi ki aankho mein aansu aa jate hai. aur sujal gusse se lal ho jata hai .

Mihir - yeh kya bakwas karr rahi ho tum . tulsi suna tumne ye kya keh rahi hai isse kaho ki tum nahi janti kissi suyash mittal ko aur tumne yeh sabb nahi kiya hai warna mein aaj na jane iske saath kya kar bethunga.

Tulsi - mein janti hoon suyash ko mere bachpan ka dost hai woh lekin meine usse quotations nahi bataye mihir. arey mujhe to pata bhi nahi tha ki usne bhi is project ke liye apply kiya hai. mein sach keh rahi hu mihir.

Mihir - tum janti ho usse . tumne hii.....

Amrita - haan bhaiya inhone hi bataya hai apne uss..... dost ko. aur iss bar to mere paas sabut bhi hai.

Sujal - mujhe meri maa par vishwas karne ke liye sabut ki jarurat nahi hai.

tulsi stops him

Amrita - suniye andar aa jaiye

ek admi andar ata hai aur khud ko suyash ki company ka manager bata hai aur kehta hai ki tulsi grewal ne hi uske boss ko quotation batayi thi.

Amrita - agar iss ki baat par bhi aap logo ko yakin nahi hai to yaha ek aisa insaan maujud hai jiski baat par na yakin karne ki kissi ke paas koi wajah hi nahi hogi haina nadini beta batao tumhe bhi to yeh pata hai na . batao sabko

nandini chup khadi rehti hai kuch nahi kehti. woh janti hai ki tulsi ko fasaya ja raha hai lekin woh kuch kar nahi pati.

mihir gusse mein bahar chala jata hai abhay bhi uske piche piche jata hai.

Kusum - tulsi kyon kiya tumne aisa sab log kitne khush the . hamare bachho ki ane wali khushiyon ke bare mein to soch leti....
kusum bhi apne room mein chali jati hai.

Nandini - mujhe maaf karr dijiye aunty meri wajah se...

lekin tulsi nandini ke sir par haath pher kar apne thakur ji (shri kirshna bhagwan) ke mandir chali jati hai.

sujal nandini ka haath pakad kar usse kehta hai-

Sujal - kyon kiya tumne meri maa ke saath aisa kyonnnnnnnn uss manager ki baat par koi vishwas nahi karta magar tumhari wajah se sabne meri maa ko gunehgar bana diya hai .
sujal is abt to slap har but then stops his hand and leaves.

nandini is crying and feeling guilty.

Mihir - sabb kuch khatm ho gaya tulsi ne mere saath aisa kyon kiya abhay kyonnnn meine usse itna pyaar kiya aur usne.... mana ki mere pariwar ki wajah se usne bahot dukh dekhe hai lekin .......

Abhay - bas kar mihir jo ho gaya so ho gaya chal ghar chal .

at night -

Tulsi - mihir meine sach mein kuch nahi kiya mera vishwas karoooo.......

mihir bina sune so jata haiiiiiiii

subah koi bhi tulsi se baat nahi karta.aur tulsi waha se chali jati hai nandini se yeh sabb dekha nahi jata aur woh kissi ko phone karti hai.

tulsi suyash se milne jati hai aur usse apni pareshani batati hai.

sab log bahot dukhi hai aur hall mein bethe hai.aur tabhi waha suyash aa jata hai

suyash - mein aap sabb se kuch kehne aya hoon

Mihir - kya kehna chahte ho tum hamme tumse koi baat nahi karni chale jao yaha se.

Pratham - mein yeh project chod raha hoon .

everyone is shocked and abhay is happy

suyash - ji haan mein sab kuch janta hoon . tulsi sirf meri dost nahi hai mere liye bhagwan hai tulsi. aj mein jindagi mein jo kuch bhi hoon sirf tulsi ki wajah se . aap logo ne mere aur iske pavitra rishte par sawal uthaye lekin kya aap log hamare rishte ki sacchai jante hai ???? tulsi mere liye badi behan ke saman hai .

yeh keh karr suyash waha se jane lagta hai lekin tabhi nandini suyash ke manager ko waha lekar ati hai .

Nandini - mihir uncle is admi ko amrita bua ne tulsi aunty ko fasane ke liye paise diye the. suyash uncle ne hamari company ke quotations se kahin jyada kamm amount quote kiya thaaaa lekin iss admi ne amrita bua ke kehne par en waqt par figures change karr diyee.

manager aur suyash waha se chale jate hai aur sabb log tulsi se mafi mangte hai aur mihir amrita ko ghar se jane ko keh deta hai lekin tulsi usse rok leti hai 😕

sabb log apne kamre mein chale jate hai .
nandini bahar garden mein chali jati hai aur sujal ki baato ke bare mein sochti hai tabhi koi uska haath pakad leta hai woh mud kar dekhti hai aur woh sujal hi hota hai 😳

Sujal - mujhe maaf kar do kal meine tumse....

Nandini - kuch kehne ki jarurat nahi hai sujal mein samajh sakti hoon .

dono ek dusre ki aankho mein kho jate hai tabhi barish aa jati hai nandini andar jane lagti hai lekin sujal uska haath nahi chodta

Nandini - sujal chodo na hum bimar ho jayege chalo andar cholooooooo

Sujal - yaad hai nandini bachpan mein bhi hum issi tarah bhiga karte theeee

Nandini - haan lekin ab hum bacche nahi rahe chodo na mujhe koi aa jayega plssssssssss

Sujal nandini ko apne paas khich leta hai lekin nandini bhag hi jati hai 😆

dono apne apne room mein hote hai ek dusre se alag lekin phir bhi ek dusre ke saath 😳

in the morning during breakfast -

Mihir - aj partyy hai project shuru hone ki khushi mein. mein chahta tha ki yeh project hum suyash ke saath hi kare lekin woh aj raat ko hi america laut raha hai.

mihir aur abhay party ke intazam karne chale jate hai.

Tulsi - kusum nandini aur sujal hum tino ghar beth kar kya karey chalo shopping chalte hai

Kusum - haan mein abhi taiyaar ho kar ati hoon

Tulsi aur kusum alag jate hai aur nandini aur sujal alag

Sujal aur nandini dono chup hote hai ek dusre se kuch kehte nahi mall aa jata hai

Nandini - sujal mujhe samajh nahi aa raha mein kya lu tum help karo na plsssssssss

Sujal - thik hai tum mere kapde select karo aur mein tumhare aur haan jo bhi hum dono select karenge woh sham ko hi ek dusre ko batayege aur jo bhi ho wahi pehanna padega.

nandini - okkkk

sujal nandini ke liye yeh saree select karta hai

aur nandini sujal ke liye yeh select karti hai
Edited by ~~~~ - 18 years ago
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C'mon guyz accept Nandini with Sujal....Think this as a new serial.....then u willbe comfortable
Good story line.Continue soon. 😊
Edited by prishee - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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nice fanfic n i love the charecters i just love demm.....
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Originally posted by: mou4ght

haye rabba,Nandini with sujal 😕 😕 😕
isn't Nandini taller than sujal???????????



😲 shushmita sen is also taller than shahrukh 😒

thanks prishee(for ur support😊) and nice girl 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey love ur whole story............... 👏
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yo dude where is angad khanna and kashish sinna.
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👏 nice part............i luv the lead pair.........very interesting combo 👏 👏 👏

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