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Posted: 18 years ago
#91

Originally posted by: Rejected

wow that was a great part...continue soon, wow i missed out a lot just in afew days that i was busy....i like your fan fic of the fact that you continue really soon and we dont have to wait for ever...your a great writer continue soon 😃

awww thanks!!!!!!!😳😃😛.....

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Posted: 18 years ago
#92

Originally posted by: berkeleygirl818

GRT prt!!! 👏 Angad
was like, TOTALLY flirting with Kripa, lol... cute!!! i am loving this FF, just
like ur other FF's... i CANNOT wait to read more... i think the person who
Angad was talking to is sum1 evil or sumthing... 😕 anywazzz... i
CANNOT wait to read more... continue sooon!!! 😛

awwwww thanks!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!!😃....hmmm lets just see lol actually i can't remember who he was talking to lol

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Posted: 18 years ago
#93

Originally posted by: tru_capricorn

that was a fab part...continue soon 😊

thanksssssssss!!!!!!!!!!!😃😊😃

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Posted: 18 years ago
#94

Originally posted by: desiqt8806

i wonder who angad was talking to 😕
okk this is too crazy!! now kripa is living with the dude!!!!! oh well i don't mind 😉 😆 😆

thanks!!!!😊...hmmm lets seee😉...totally agrre with you i mean his hot right lols😆

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 6

she couldn't stop herself falling for him even more, after all he did for her, and she had to admit he sure was hot, but what if he didn't think of her the same, this caused a frown to her face, she just shrugged her shoulders, and went to the stereo and on the music on full blast, and she just started to dance around the whole flat , she went into the kitchen to get a glass of orange juice, she came back skipping into the room doing a little turn when she stopped in fright to see two faces.

It was angad and a girl with him, she just had no words to say, could this get any embarrassing, she said inside her head, angad on the other hand just kept looking at kripa, he had to admit she did look hot, she had a perfect figure, she looked so beautiful, he gets out of his trance.

A- umm kripa meet my friend and he puts his hand around the girl Aaliya (first one in kyph) , kripa feels an instant pang of jealousy when he put his arm around her , K- hi nice to meet you, A- you to, she said in a cheerful voice. It became awkward until kripa left to get changed.

She came back out later, A- hey kripa me and Aaliya are going to go shopping and then maybe catch a movie, do you want to come, sure she wanted to, but she didn't want her to come, whoa wait a minute when did she become so jealous, she thought to herself, boy was she falling fast for him, maybe she could call this love but even it was it was only a one sided love for now.


K- um sure when are you going, right now?, A- yeah, K- umm okay let me get ready , A- sure. After 15 minutes everyone was ready, Aaliya came in looking beautiful, which angad commented on, it surprised kripa, more like angered her he didn't even compliment her. And they all left.

They reached the mall, kripa didn't shop much she still hadn't found a job, Aaliya on the other hand brought a few things, angad just helped her choose stuff totally ignoring kripa for most of the time, which she hated.

It was around 4pm, they had been shopping for hours, angad and Aaliya were having fun but kripa was not, she was mad, it wasn't her fault she was falling for him, A- kripa what's the matter not having fun, K (lying) – no not at all, just was thinking about something... Before kripa could finish Aaliya had dragged angad to another store. This just angered kripa, she followed behind them.

Around 5pm, they were finally done with shopping, the all planned to watch a movie around six, so they headed back to the apartment to freshen up. around 6they had reached the theaters, they were late due to Aaliya , she was too busy getting ready, it bugged kripa, she didn't know but she didn't like her one bit, maybe this was on of the effects of this so called feeling "love", she thought but she still wasn't sure if it was attraction or love.


okay here's the next part!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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oh gr8 part...........do continue soon......wonder what's next
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Posted: 18 years ago
#97
Last part!!

They all decided to watch "pirates 3(lol) ", they got their tickets kripa was glad Angad was sitting in the middle, they went into the cinema, as they were about to sit Aaliya changed seats with angad, boy did kripa want to strangle her, wait what, she thought to herself, boy had she changed she had to admit, she wasn't that scared kripa anymore, she knew she was safe as long as she was with angad, strange it did sound she had to admit.

And with that the movie started, kripa wasn't really interested in the movie, I mean every time she try to pay attention she could see Aaliya cuddling up to angad , or feeding him popcorn, was she really his friend , she thought to herself .

And it continued through out the movie, after a few hours the movie ended and they were home in no time. Kripa just went straight into her room without saying a word. Angad wonder what was wrong with her, he'd ask her tomorrow. And they all went to sleep.

And days like his passed by turning into weeks, where kripa would constantly get jealous of the two spending time together. Tonight they had made a plan to go out to a club, kripa wasn't to sure last time they went to a club was that night she had seen the guy, but then she didn't want Aaliya and angad to go alone while she stayed home alone, she was in dilemma, she decided to go but before she would pray to god to keep her safe.

At 6, they all were ready, Aaliya was wearing a black halter dress, kripa was wearing a emerald halter dress, angad on the other hand wore dark faded jeans, with a black stripped shirt he left opened wearing a black tank inside. Kripa had to admit he did looked good tonight, and so did Aaliya.

And they left reaching the club 15 minutes later, it was crowded, kripa looked around hoping not to see the guy which she did not, the music was loud, people were dancing , some were drunk others on their way.

All three headed for the bar, A- so what would you like Aaliya?, Aa- umm vodka , what about kripa you didn't ask her, A- Aaliya she doesn't drink alcohol right kripa, kripa just gave a smile fake, what about if she was willing to try it once, I mean what harm could it do. Angad ordered the drinks and they drank.

A- hey Aaliya want to dance?, Aa- umm sure , but kripa is going to be alone here, before angad could say something else, kripa just said, K- no go ahead I'll find someone to dance with, A- yeh let's go. And with that angad dragged Aaliya to the dance floor and they danced. Kripa just watched them swaying their hips, she was sure now, he didn't like her but liked Aaliya, and how stupid she was to think maybe he liked her.

Kripa was sitting there bored, when she saw a hand in front of her, she looked up to find a handsome guy, V- hi I'm Rohan (eijaz khan), what is a beautiful lady like sitting down here, may I have the pleasure of dancing with you, kripa didn't know then she glanced over to angad he was happily dancing with Aaliya, K- yes sure, why not.

They both made their way to the dance floor, and they began to dance , angad who was to busy dancing suddenly looks up to see this, he gets mad, A- "what the heck is he doing here, he said to himself" , he stops dancing with Aaliya and walks over to kripa, A- hi may I cut in and he gives a fierce glance to Rohan, Rohan was about to say yes when kripa spoke, K- oh but we just got on the dance floor , and with that they continued to dance leaving a mad angad walking off to the bar.

Aaliya who notices his anger, Aa- what's the matter, A- nothing you can see for your self, Aa- chill he's only dancing with her , A- so , Aa- don't tell me you like this girl or something, Angad just stays quiet.

The night is over angad and Aaliya were ready to go home, they all left and reached home in no time. They all went straight to be without saying anything to each other.


Weeks passed like this where kripa would meet up with Rohan, she thought it would work to make angad jealous, where angad was getting angry, he couldn't tell her the truth but she needed to stay away from him.


It was Tuesday night , and kripa and Angad came back from the airport, Aaliya had just left. Angad was about to ask something, when the phone rang, kripa picked it up it was Rohan.

K- hey Rohan
K- sure I'd love to come
K- your so funny,
K- umm no he won't mind, I can come myself
K- okay bye
Kripa puts the phone down , angad was mad, he had changed over these past weeks, he didn't like her meeting with Rohan, and he knew why, but he couldn't tell her or she would go away from him, yes he loved her, he had discovered his feelings for her over the past weeks but he didn't want her to find out the truth. Where kripa had fallen in love with Angad ages ago but she wasn't sure what he felt so she used Rohan to make him jealous.

A- where you going?
K- oh somewhere with Rohan, hoping he would get jealous
A- don't go
K- why
A- because I said, his not a good guy
K- yes he is
A- no his not, trust me I know what type of guy he is
K- but trust me Angad his good
A- dammit why don't you just listen , his not good
K- WHY
A- BECAUSE HE WANTS TO KILL YOU
K- what, how do you know, no your lying, his so nice to me
A- okay kripa I've been lying to you a lot, but before I tell you the truth, please just listen to me carefully.



That night when I saw you for the first time…..i umm knew who you were…and I knew everything about you, kripa please listen to me carefully, that night when your boss was killed, when you saw that guy in the car you didn't were not able to see…. Kripa that was me.

Kripa's eyes begin to tear up, she slowly moves away from Angad, where angad moved closer to her, A- kripa please just listen, K(crying) – no go away, I can't believe I've been betrayed, I hate you, go away, you wanted to kill me right go ahead kill me, A- no kripa I haven't finished though, k- go away, leave me alone, she was about to go to her room when angad grabs her, kripa starts hitting him his chest, K- leave me you murder, you're the one that wants to kill me not Rohan, A- kripa just listen to me, K- why should , your probably going to lie to me, and to think I started to but now I hate you, and she keeps on hitting him calling him a murderer, a criminal, a betrayer, angad had enough, he slapped her across her face, A- dammit why would I want to kill you, I love you dammit, kripa just looked at him.
K- if you really love me than prove it
A- anything just tell me and I'll do it
K- go down to the road and lay down
A- fine if I have to risk my life for you than I will,
Angad goes down to the road and lays down, the road was clear, kripa was still in the apartment, K (thinking) – what if he really does love me, oh no his life is in danger, she runs to the balcony , where she can see angad from above, she sees a car coming straight towards him, her eyes dilate with tears coming out of them,

K( screaming on top of her lungs?)- ANGAD I LOVE YOU, PLEASE GET OFF THE ROAD

Angad heard her he saw the car coming he rolled over the car missed, then another car turned in driving in fast speed he rolled over , kripa who saw this screamed she couldn't loose him , she ran downstairs to the road, where she saw angad on the other side on the side walk , she ran to him.

K- I love you don't ever do that
A- I'm sorry but I had to prove my love for you
K- I love you
Angad carried her back into the apartment and to her to his bed he put her down and cupped her face, A- kripa I love you, okay I'll tell you the whole story, so I admit at first I was trapping you but then I realized it wasn't your fault you were just at the wrong place at the wrong time, kripa I love you so much, now you want to know why Rohan would want to kill you, well he is one of my man but he's greedy he wants my position, he wants to take the valuable from you, then kill you and then give it to the bigger boss the one who has the power all of us, kripa I'm just trying to save you, now your wondering what is the whole deal with this valuable, and whose this bigger boss, well this valuable is a ring, now your probably wondering what's so important about this ring, well first of all it's worth millions, but most importantly it belonged to my boss, it was his ring to his beloved who was killed by your boss's dad, they were a happy couple , and she had just given birth to a girl, when she was killed, apparently your boss's dad had his eye on my boss's wife and my boss's wealth for a long time, and one day when they had a party for the celebration of their daughter coming home, your boss's dad had come, they party was going all well when my boss' wife went up to put heir daughter to sleep, when that **** saw her going up stairs and some how sneaked into the their room where the wife was, and he raped her , how did my boos find out, well their was a camera in the room, which captured that sick *******, he had killed her when she threatened to scream and tell, that's when he got the lamp and smashed it over her head and she just laid their unconscious , she took the hit so bad that she was fighting with her life, if someone had noticed her missing then maybe she would be alive, but no that sick ******* killed her , stole her ring, left and locked the door, leaving her to die, luckily he hadn't done anything to the baby. When my boss found out he was shattered, he left his whole life moved to a new city, all his relatives didn't know where to find him, luckily for him the press or reporters were banned from publishing this. That's when I met him, he wanted to get revenge , he wanted the ring back , that was the only memory he had of her, he never showed his face once in public, now I how I got into this, well when I was small my parents died, I was raised by my uncle who died a few years back ue to cancer, I needed a job, one night I was driving when my car stopped in front of his house, and then the rest was history, he told me about his story, and I told him I needed a job, we didn't want to kill your boss, but that worker for me killed him, we just wanted the ring. Now I'm going to tell you something you will promise never to tell anyone, that guy , my boss well his name is Raj Singh, kripa pushed angad away, and kept walking back saying, K ( crying)- no it can't be, no it can't. she stopped and slid down the wall crying, angad came over to her, A- kripa what's the matter, K- angad my dad…


A- what kripa?, K- ( crying) – angad his my dad , A ( shocked as ever) WHAT, but I thought you lived alone, K- well I do now, but when I was a baby I was given to my aunt and uncle to raise, whose last name is Sharma, I was told my parents died in a car crash when I was small, they never told me the truth angad , they kept me away from it, they told me my dad's name angad….Raj Singh, A- kripa are you sure I mean the name can be correct but you could have the wrong guy- he was interrupted by kripa.. K- no angad my dad's name was Raj Singh, and my mums ( she began to cry) , was simran Singh, angad just hugged her tightly she was right he was her dad, A- kripa I'm so sorry love, kripa just hugged on to him tightly. A- please don't cry , I promise I'll take you to you dad, K- no Angad I can't face him yet, I'm upset he just left me, I mean I know it was hard for him losing his wife, but I lost my mum and dad, how do you think I felt growing up without my parents. A- ok love as you wish, but please stop crying , K- I love you, please don't leave me , please don't ever lie to me again or betray me, A- kripa I promise I'll never betray you.

Angad kissed her forehead, and then her cheeks, he moved to her neck , causing kripa to lay flat on the bed , he then kiss her lips passionately, losing himself into her, kripa on the other hand loved his touch, A- I love you, K- I love you to, A- kripa let me love you, kripa nodded , this is what she needed to night to be loved by her love, to make all the pain and heart ache go away, and they spent their night when they become one, promising each other to never leave each other, to be each other's half to become one.

Weeks had passed, Angad and kripa were even more in love with each other, they would spend their days together enjoying what normal couples did, and they spent their nights together loving each other. They were engaged now Kripa stayed away from Rohan, even though he tried to contact her.

One morning

A- Kripa honey where you? he went into his room to find the bathroom door closed, he went and knocked , but no reply, he was about to leave when he heard the door opened and kripa walked out blushing.

A- Kripa I was calling for you, and you didn't reply I was getting worried.

K- sshh angad, and she took him to the bed, she made him sit down and she stood in front of him

A- what's the matter , your scaring me

Kripa didn't say anything, she took his hand and placed it on her stomach, it took a few seconds for Angad to process, when he jumped up and hugged and swung her around carefully.

K- Angad stop, I'm pregnant remember

A- oh sorry jaan, omgshh I'm going to be a dad, kripa I love you, I'm so glad you came into my life

K- I love you to

A- now you sit down and rest, and from today , no more crying, no stress, I want my baby to be healthy

A- oh wait now I can't love you for 9 months, damn, and he grins

Kripa just blushed and hit him

A- I'm joking my sweetie, I'm so excited , wait here I'm going to make food, kripa just smiled.

The next day kripa was home alone, she was waiting for angad to come and pick her up to see how far she was in her pregnancy, when the door bells ring, thinking it was angad kripa opened the door to find Rohan

Before kripa could say something Rohan had made her faint by putting a cloth which had some kind of poison on her mouth, and he took her.

Angad came home to find the apartment door open, he got scared he instantly ran in, screaming kripa's name , but no response, this made him more scared when the thought of rohan taking her, this made him mad as ever, the thought of him killing his and kripa's child made his blood rush, he called up raj to meet him at their hideout, he knew rohan took her their, raj agreed after ten minutes. Angad left.

Kripa woke up to find herself, on a chair tied up, she tried untangling herself

V- it won't work sweetheart

Kripa turned around to find rohan, she was scared what if she got hurt, worst of all what if her child got hurt.

K- rohan , what are you doing please leave me, look Angad will explain everything

R- oh shut up, tell me where is the ring

K- what are you talking about

R- plz don't act so innocent

K- plzz Rohan I beg you leave me , your committing a mistake

R- kripa just give me the ring or else I'll have to get it out from you the hard way

K- plzz and she starts crying

Rohan had enough , he went close up to her and was about to slap her hard across the face with the gun , that was in his pocket , when Angad entered in time

A- rohan you ******* don't you dare touch her

R- oh so lover boy came and saved his life

A- rohan your committing a very big mistake
R- what do you mean

Angad tells him the whole story , and then he unties kripa

R- omgshh I'm so sorry

A- it's okay you didn't know

And angad and kripa turn around to walk out when rohan takes his gun and is about to shoot Angad in the head when BANG

A shocked kripa and angad turn around to find rohan with a bullet in his head they look up to find raj

R- kripa beti, ( he had heard Angad telling Rohan the whole story)

Kripa just ran towards him, and hugged him

K- dad where did you go, why did you leave , I was so lonely

R- I'm sorry ,I couldn't take it when your mother died

Kripa started crying when she remembered what had happened to her mother, she just hugs her father ever so tightly, not letting him go .

A- boss but why did you kill rohan

R- he was going to shoot you, he was a greedy man could do anything for power

A year has passes, kripa, angad, and raj now moved to India, Angad and kripa had gotten married, and she had given birth to a sweet baby girl who they named simran after her mother, Kripa's dad was touched by this.

Angad had set up his own business with the help of Raj where kripa stayed home looking after simran.



okay guys so i ended this ff, i had planned it to be a short ff, also i'm going on vacation and won't come back until july 12th and so there was no point to make you wait when i can just post it as a really long part, and i know the twist isn't so big and wow lol but this is not what i had in mind i was actually gonna make angad really bad lol but then i felt bad, cause i know you guys didn't want him to be mean and then i felt bad for kripa lolz, i hope you guys understand why i eneded it so quickly, and BIG THANKYOU to everyone who read and commented on the FF, seriously i really appreciate all your comments 😃 😊 🤗 and i'm sorry once again!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow!! great ending!!
(i wouldn't have minded if angad was really evil...the more evil he is the hotter he sounds 😳 😆 )
awesome fan fic!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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It was a good ending even though it wasn't what u expected. You are a great writer.
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Posted: 18 years ago
wow great ending its verry nice dear please dear dont say sorry you give us to read a lot of great storys 👏

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