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Posted: 18 years ago
#61
omg that was such a good part and it was sssssooooooo H-O-T that was so good...if i was KRipa i would scream from my life lol but then again i am a scardy cat lol i went to see the movie the ring in the theather and I was sitting in the back row and all my friends how love horor movies sat in the very front and i was so scared i never saw another horor moive after that....lol i only saw ten min of the ring the rest of the moive i sat out side waiting for my friends to come out....if some one was in my bedroom, you dont even want to know what i would do....btw that was a great part and continue soon i really want to know what will happen...it think it would be funny if angad and kripa start living together and then kripa's parents come back from there vaction and get all shocked that there is a guy in KRipa's bed room 😆 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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omg STALKER!! LOL!! I would start screaming and kick his a**!! Dangg!! lol!! but hey it was HOTTT!! :P Continue Soon!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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damn! if i was in her place i would be sooooooooooo freaked n out n i would never ever watch grudge 2 when i would be home alone. no way. but this is funny. cant wait 2 c how kripa reacts.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 5


She struggled to reach for the lamp as she felt him moving up, when to her luck she reached it. She quickly on it and look to see you it was when she found a smirking angad , oh boy was she angry as hell

K- what the **** are you doing here pool boy, how dare you

A- girl chilax I was just playing around, its called a joke and I have a name snob

K- what a sick joke

A- be quiet miss bratty universe

K- don't call me that and get out before I call the cops

A- what if I don't, "miss bratty universe"

K – you don't want to try me

A- (grinning) - moving closer to her, actually

K- just stop … your so disgusting and btw I don't date pool boys

A- (laughing) – please do you think I would date you, psshht your friend is way hotter than you, y would I waste my time on you

Kripa after hearing this was dead mad, she felt like killing him, who did he think he was judging her, nothing but a pool boy. She is about to say something when angad just rolls his eyes at her and leaves.

She drops on her bed thinking about what he said, coming up with ways to make him change his previous statement….And with that she had had drifted of into deep sleep.



BEEEP! Kripa's alarm rang off; it was 10 am, and the first day of summer. Boy was she excited. She got up, went into the bathroom brushed, had a shower and came out wearing a short min black cotton skirt with white flowers on it, with a white halter top, she blow dried her hair straight and went down to have breakfast.


JENIFER!, JENIFER WHERE ARE YOU I WANT MY BREAKFAST. But still know answer, boy was she pissed, she hated when her servants would come late, she decided to call her parents to complain.


K- Hello mom

Kr- hi darling how are you

K- Mom Jennifer not here yet and I'm hungry

Kr- oh sorry sweetheart I forgot to tell you, your dad told everyone to take leave until we come back

K- WHAT

K- Come on kripa it's not that bad, oh and did you meet the new pool boy

Kr- umm yes, his so weird

K- kripa don't say things like that , anyways when he comes over next tell him, he will get his pay by next week okz… I have to go hunny, bye love you take care

Kr- bye mom, luv ya to, take care

And she hangs up, that's when the door bell rings

Kripa walks over to open the door, looking up to a very sexy angad in a white tank top with a logo that said, "Simon's pool service" with a pair of faded jeans. "Hmmmm boy does he look god ", she said to herself.

Angad on the other hand started to grin, he knew she was checking him out, that's when he started looking at her up and down, "she sure had a good figure", he said to himself grinning even more. They both got out of their trances and kripa spoke first.

K- What do you want pool boy

A- Hey miss bratty universe I have a name, angad

K- Whatever go do your work and with that she walked off

Angad just rolled his eye, boy was she such a snob, he just wanted to tell her who the heck he was, but controlled himself and grinned thinking of her face expressions when shed would find out who he was, boy would she be in for a shock. With that he heads out towards the pool.

Kripa was getting bored inside watching TV; she wanted to have fun, when an idea came into her mind smiling cheekily. She had remembered what angad had said yesterday" please do you think I would date you, psshht your friend is way hotter than you, y would I waste my time on you". She decided to go change into her bikini and go outside pretending to get a tan but really showing off how hot she was to angad.


She went upstairs and entered her room; she went up to her closet and took her black bikini out. She went into her bathroom and came out wearing her bikini; she took out her short "ROXY" shorts and put them over. She grabbed her towel and headed down stairs.


She went outside when she stopped with awe, she saw angad working with a cap on backwards, his shirt wet that became transparent a bit show his well built abs through his shirt. she came out of her little trance and made her way out towards the pool. To her surprise he didn't look up of recognize her presence.

K- *cough* *cough*

Angad turns around grinning, he knew what she was trying to do but he could also play that game, he decided to have a little fun. He gets up and starts walking up to her slowly, kripa just grins with pride she knew he thought she looked damn fine; well that's what she thought.

Angad's comes up to her and grabs her towel off her and wipes his face and throws it back at her and walks off but before leaving he turns around and says,

A- "You shouldn't wear a bikini it only suits girls with a good figure", and then he looks her up and down and continues, "Which seems you don't have" ending with a smirk and just walks back to continue his work; leaving a fuming kripa behind who was giving the dirtiest dirty a person possible could give to angad.




here is the next part..hope you enjoy it!!!...PLEASE comment!!! 😊
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Posted: 18 years ago
#65
haha angad is soo funny and hott!
kripa's anger is hilarious!!
godd!! both of them are mad stubborn! lol
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Awesome Part Continue Soon 👏 [=D
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Posted: 18 years ago
#67
lol this is funny. im liking there lil fights.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#68
post the next part. this is great.
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Posted: 18 years ago
#69
omg that was a really good part continue soon i am really liking this part but i hope that kripa starts to like angad before she find out that he is rich because if she starts to like angad after she finds out he is rich then kripa will seem so bad and messed up and i dont want that to happen....continue soon i really want to know what will happen you are a great writer 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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u know, it is TOTALLY illegal to kill people!!! i am saying this coz, u
TOTALLY killed me with this prt!!! it was unexplainably excellent!!! 👏
👏 i luved
it sooo much, i have no words, lol... AK's fights r sooo cute!!! both Angad
& Kripa r sooo concieted, it is ridiculously amazing, lol... idk abt Kripa,
but i think Angad is TOTALLY f-ing hot, i mean the way u explained how
he looked & dressed, i visualized him, & fainted!!! lol... i CANNOT wait to
read more.. i am completely in love with this FF, lol... continue soon!!! 😛

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