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Posted: 18 years ago
#51

Originally posted by: Rejected

omg that was such a good part....i wonder what angad would do once he follows Kripa back to the house....will he just be all like hi, hello, good bye or will he be like your hot, hard to get, makeing out type...god you have to continue really fast your fan fic just started and it is already so adictive lol....continue soon, cant wait for the next part 😃

aww thank ya😃......lol glad you like lol just wait and see😉..oh and continue your prince rider...seriously i think it such a hot ff😃😳..you got really good talent

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Posted: 18 years ago
#52

Originally posted by: Kaj!

interesting. wonder wat happens nxt 😊

THANKS!!😃😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
#53

Originally posted by: angullgrl91

omg. awesoem part. cant wait 2 c wat angad does now. cont soon.

THANK YOU!!😃 hmms lets see😉

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: iamsmart

fab part

THANKSS!!😊


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Posted: 18 years ago
#55

Originally posted by: hello64

i love it ahhhhhhhhh! 😃
continue soon 😆

kanwer 😳

😆 Thanks!!😳😃

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Posted: 18 years ago
#56

Originally posted by: armaghan0

really interesting fic

thanxsssss!!!😃

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey it's a nice ff....do continue soon...and well I kinda guessed that ANgad was rich...I eman is still rich......yah but i thought you'd keep that hidden for a few parts at least........anyway it's unique and do contineu soon.......love it!!



Hey don't mind but.......i love the other ff more.......I love this one as well.....but I love the other one more!!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
#58

Originally posted by: Shazia_haya

hey it's a nice ff....do continue soon...and well I kinda guessed that ANgad was rich...I eman is still rich......yah but i thought you'd keep that hidden for a few parts at least........anyway it's unique and do contineu soon.......love it!!



Hey don't mind but.......i love the other ff more.......I love this one as well.....but I love the other one more!!!

Thankss!!😊.....😆😆 kripa won't find till part 9!!! aww glad you love my other fanfic 😃

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Part 4!!!

Kripa reached her house, she went in, the maids and servants had left, she went to her room and dumped her Gucci bag and her Dior shoes, she wasn't really tiered. She decided to go down stairs and watch something on TV.

She went down stairs and flipped on the TV, nothing really good was on until she came across the movie "grudge 2", and she decided to watch it since there was nothing on. She wasn't like those girls who were scared to watch a scary movie, she was brave, well that's what she would tell people.


During the movie she started hearing noises outside around the pool , being the brave girl she was she decided to check the area incase it wasn't someone trying to break in. she went to the back door that lead her to the pool, she opened it and went outside forgetting to close the door behind her when she came around.


She looked around her backyard but found nobody. "It's probably the neighbor's cat", she said to herself. She went back inside and locked the door, she walked back into the living room, she was still kind of freaked out so she decided to go to bed, she made sure every door and window was locked in the house, she off the TV and headed for up stairs.


Kripa made her way into her room, what she didn't know was angad was standing behind the door. It was him who she heard in the backyard near the pool, he had keys to the gate since he was the pool boy. When he saw kripa come out and leaving the door open he decided to have a little fun with her.

As he made his way inside he had seen the TV on and saw that she was watching grudge two, he grinned at this fact, and he decided to scare her and he made his way up to her room before she came in.


Kripa entered in her room, she didn't bother to on the lights. She got her pink short shorts and her black tank top which was on her bed. She put the shorts on from underneath her dress and she as she was half way pulling off her dress when she felt hands around her bare waist.


She was just too scared and shocked to respond, her heart was beating, this was probably the first time she was so scared. She felt herself being pushed slightly on to her bed. She tried to reach out for her lamp, to see who the heck it was, but the person's grip was just to damn strong that's when she felt his fingers going up and down on her stomach causing her to butterflies in her stomach, soon she felt something warm on her stomach, her eyes dilated "omg it was his lips", she said to herself


Ok so here is the next part hope you guys like it!!! 😊 ...please comment!!!
Edited by Chocolate_luver - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#60
nice part
keep it up

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