~UnpredictablE-a❤️ story~AK last partpg40 - Page 4

noooo!!!! i LOVED it... i woke up, nd jumped on my computer to see if u
had updated, nd u did!!!! YAY!!! 😳 tht was sooooo f-ing cool, Angad nd
Dev talking all gangsta language, lmao... TOTALLY WICKED!!! 👏
👏 the way u
described Kajjal, Kripa, Dev, & Angad, i cud totally visualize them in my
head, Kaajjal nd Kripa were ok, but Dev & Angad, wow, hot!!! lol!!! u have
an amazing talent!!! i CANNOT wait to find out wht will happen between
AK nd DK, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE cotninue soon!!! 😛

Awesome part... kool dats y hes a poolboy loll thats funny

hey really awesome part.....wat is going 2 happen next can't wait 2 read continue soon...... 😊 plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon............. 😉

omg. totally awesome part~!!!!!!!!!! i cant wait 4 da next part. cont soon.

awesomeful partss!!! haha kripa shell-shockeddd!! love angad and dev's relationship, they are such cool bros!! wonder waht angad will do.. prolly some close dancing with ehr.. nd kripa'd be all enjoying cept go, what are u doing u poolboy.. lol.. .girlss i tell uuu!! *shakes her head* Continue Soon!!

that was so good lol i would love to see angads expression at that moment...god that would have been so good to see Kripa all shocked when looking at angad at a club and stuff....you have to continue soon that was a great part, i love all your fan fic and your are really putting this fan fic to a very good start....keep up the great work, cant not wait for the next part 😛

Originally posted by: zeenat_786

nooo i loved ittt. i cant wait..i wanna see wat angad doess....i love this ff!! k, continue soon.

aww thanks glad you like it😃😊...continue later on today!!

Originally posted by: berkeleygirl818

noooo!!!! i LOVED it... i woke up, nd jumped on my computer to see if u
had updated, nd u did!!!! YAY!!! 😳 tht was sooooo f-ing cool, Angad nd
Dev talking all gangsta language, lmao... TOTALLY WICKED!!! 👏
👏 the way u
described Kajjal, Kripa, Dev, & Angad, i cud totally visualize them in my
head, Kaajjal nd Kripa were ok, but Dev & Angad, wow, hot!!! lol!!! u have
an amazing talent!!! i CANNOT wait to find out wht will happen between
AK nd DK, PLEASE PLEASE PLEASE cotninue soon!!! 😛

AWWWW THANKS!!!😃 heheh yeh i think it hotter if they tlk like that lolz😆.. aw thnx 😳i love writing parts describing what they where😆

Originally posted by: nehagupta_9

Awesome part... kool dats y hes a poolboy loll thats funny

lolz yeh😆 thanks!!!😃

Originally posted by: pal89711

hey really awesome part.....wat is going 2 happen next can't wait 2 read continue soon...... 😊 plzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz continue soon............. 😉

aww thanks, glad you liked it....i'll continue later on today😊