A new fan-fic:ek nahie kahaani -- part 21 - Page 5

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Posted: 20 years ago
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sorry guys. i have the next part i post later on today. promise. (this time i won't break it.)

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Posted: 20 years ago
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part 5

sorry for making u guys wait so long.

RECAP:

she leaves. the guy goes to his closet and picks out a pair of jeans, and a t-shirt. he changes. after he changes he goes in front of the mirror and we c he face its anged. he give him self a complement.

a:looking good, as usaul.

he goes donstairs to have breakfast, and everyone is waiting for him.

naina: c'mon anged have some breakfast.

a: ok mom.

they all have breakfast.

AND NOW...

after breakfast anged goes to the studio for rehersals(spelling). after rehersals he gets a call from kripa telling him 2 meet her at the coffee shop in 1h.

at the coffee shop.

a: tumne muhje yahaan kyun bul aya

k:angad u want coffee

a: sure. now tell me

k: waiter 2 coffee's

a: KRIPA!(in an annoyed tone.)

k: ok. angad i..i..i

angad gets worried, a: kripa wut happened, by now the waiter has brought their coffee.

a: c'mpn kripa tell me

k: angad i...i love...i..i...love this coffee. kripa starts laughing. angad on the other hand has an annoyed look.

a: OMG!!! kripa. i hate u

k: thanx.

a: kripa im serious😡

k: aacha baba.

k: kya tum wo laye?

a: yeah its in the car.

k: can i see it.

a:lets finish the coffee.

they finish their coffee, and pay. then they go to anged car. angad open the door of his car and reeaches in to get a little wrapped box and gives it to kripa. kripa quickly opens it. in side the box were 2 lockets( ome for men and one for women) saying I LOVE YOU. kripa asked angad to bring them for herself and prithvi. she wanted to give it to prithvi for his birthday in a few days.

a: ab kush

k: buhat. kripa gives him a big hug.

that's it for now. guys i know its a bit boring. plz tell me wut u honestly think. i won't be able to write tom. cuz i going to america to visit my relatives. s ou guys will have to wait till wednesday. sorry guys.

bye, lil

Edited by **lil_playa** - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
#43
awesome part.
Happe: I..I... I.. love you Angad. 😳😳
Angad: I...I... I... I love you too Happe.

Have fun. And continue when you come back.
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Posted: 20 years ago
#44
thanx. i 'll try to cont. when i return.
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Posted: 20 years ago
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time for an update. just wait a while longer.
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Posted: 20 years ago
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part 6

RECAP:

they finish their coffee, and pay. then they go to anged car. angad open the door of his car and reeaches in to get a little wrapped box and gives it to kripa. kripa quickly opens it. in side the box were 2 lockets( ome for men and one for women) saying I LOVE YOU. kripa asked angad to bring them for herself and prithvi. she wanted to give it to prithvi for his birthday in a few days.

a: ab kush

k: buhat. kripa gives him a big hug

AND NOW...

kripa can't wait to try it on. she hand anged the necklace for prithvi. and tries to put on hers. she having a bit of difficulty doing it so she asks anged for help.

k: anged thodi si mudath kar doo na.

a: kripa do it ur self.

k: anged please.

a:fine. he takes the necklace andputs it around her neck then he locks it from the back.

a: ye lo

k: thanx.

anged looks at his watch to c the time.

a: kripa i have to go.(in a worried tone.)

k: kider?? 😕

a: baad mein butaunga

he rushes to his car and drives off. while kripa on the other hand goes to meet prithvi.



i know this really short. i continue in a while cuz i've got guest over. bye for now, lil

Edited by **lil_playa** - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
#47
hey awesome job! as usual! plz continue when U CAN! 👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
#48
yeah i'm just reading the other fan-fics. so i update when im done. bye for now.

lil
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Posted: 20 years ago
#49
my brother has to do something on the computer, so i have 2 go. but i write the next part when he gets off.
bye,lil
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Posted: 20 years ago
#50

part 7

RECAP:

anged looks at his watch to c the time.
a: kripa i have to go.(in a worried tone.)
k: kider??
a: baad mein butaunga
he rushes to his car and drives off. while kripa on the other hand goes to meet prithvi.

AND NOW...

ANGAD'S CAR

anged phones someone.

a: hi

s: muhje tumse baath nahi karni

a: meri baath tho sunno

s: acha bathao

a: im sorry

s: anged yeh tum humsha kehtay ho

a: aur tum hamesha maaf kardet thi ho, rite

s: defeated tone. rite

s: tum hoo kahan, tum jaante ho na ke kal bahi ki birthday hai aur tumne
muhje gift choose karne mein madaath karni hai.

a: hain mein janta hoon.

s: ab jaldi se ajao

a: ok, lekin kider

s: sort of embaressed. oh hain,im at(place u will tell cuz i don't know.)

a: ok

kripa on the other hand went to meet prithvi at his house. kripa eneter the house and bumps into damini
(who was leaving for a meeting)

k: hi aunty

d: hello beta

k: aunty vo..vo..

d: prithvi apne kamre mein hai. go and meet him

k: a bit shy. thanx aunty. and damini leaves.

kripa runs into prithvi's rooms. prithvi is near the window. she goes and hugs him from the back.

k: hi. prithvi turns around and hugs kripa.

p: hi

k: kya kar rahe the

p: kuch nahi

k: zaroor muhje miss kar rahe hoge

p: nahi

kripa let's go of him now.

k: WHAT!!

p: mazaak kar raha tha

p: acha tum yahaan kaise

k: waise tum kuch dena ha

p: kya

k: pehle ankhen band karo

p: kripa

k: like a kid. karo na. he closes his eyes.

k: haath aage karo. like a good boy he does it.

p: kripa yeh kaisa baachpana hai.

k: ssssshhhh!!! she takes out the other locket for him
and puts it in his palm.

k: ab ankhen kolo.
and he does.


its getting late and im sleepy. i write the next part tomorrow after i wake up.
bye for now. lil


plz feel free to post ur comments.

Edited by **lil_playa** - 20 years ago

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