A new fan-fic:ek nahie kahaani -- part 21

i've heard lots of great fan fics so i thought why not give it a shot. it's my fisrt try so plz bear with. in my story there are no villians.

a bit about the charaters.

THE SHARMA'S:

Kripa:age 23. as rich as anged. she loves prithvi and is engaged to him. She is a sweet, kind, fun loving girl.

Mishty:age 24. Karticks wife. she help kartick in buissness. but mostly a house wife.

Gayatri: Married to Suryabhaan. she has 2 daughter that she is very close to.

Suryabhaan: A big indrustrilist(spelling). just recently won the best buissness man of the year award. Wants the best for his family.

THE BOSE FAMILY:

Damani: same as in the show.

Prithvi: same as in the show.

Aliya: loves lifes.loves her family. believes that one should forget the past in the present and not care about the future.

THE KHANNA'S:

Naina: loves all her sons the same. doesn't choose between them. OPPOSITE of what she is as in the show.

Dilip: Own 3 music academies.2-3 studios,and has 3-4 buissness around india. A big buissness man. proud of all his sons. wants his son JOSH to join his buissness.

Kartick: loves his wife Mishty. just like in the show looks over angads career. a better person.

Josh: doing MBA in america. (will enter later on)

Angad: a famous rockstar, a hearthrob of many girls. A flirt. Believes in love. Believes that one day he will meet his miss. perfect. Kripa's best friend.

plz tell me how u like it so far. i will try to post the first part later on.

Hey!!!!!!!!!. it's very very nice.

Continue soon.

sorry guys i'll post in 30 mins.

cheerz!!!😛

continue...

Take Care

Anoli

xxx

part 1

A NEW FAN-FIC: EK NAHIE KAAHANI

We see a women doing the morning pooja, but her back is to us. then she finishes and turns around and we see the womens face, its kripas mother. she walks forward and give the aarti to a man(whoose back is towards us). he says shukria.

Kripa mother = G

G: aacha kripa kidar hai.

S: sohari hogi

G: ab tak, main uske jaga kay athi hoon.

and she leaves toward kripa room. just then the guy turns around and says: rahne do (we se the guys face its subrayban).

Kripa's room.

now we see a person on the bed covered in bed sheets. just then an alarm rings. ALARM: good moring, good moring😆

the person tries to shut it but it starts agian. now the person is mad so the person grabs the alarm and throughs it at the wall. just then kripa mother comes in and says: KRIPA yeh kya kia, aacha choro or uto.

k: par mama

trying to pull the bedsheets of kripa. G: kripa main kuch nahi soon na chaati hoon. chalo uto

K: time kya howa

G: kripa it's 11

k: KYA!!!

kripa pushes the bedsheets of and now we see her sweet face. she runs into the bathroom and takes shower and come out 30mins later wearing a black tank top, and blue jeans. she quickly goes down stairs trying to wear her shoes. shes about to run out of the door when her mom calls her from behind: kripa beta kuch ka to lo.

K: mama muhje prithvi se milna tha yarra baje. or already barra baj gaye hain. agar main ab nahie gaye to wo mere bara bajade ga😆

G: juice to peello

K: baad mein. saying this she leaves.

Gayatri to herself: ye ladki be na

mishty came to meet gayatri and on her way in she bumps into kripa.

K: hi di, bad me baatein karte hain. she says this and runs toward her car.

M: KKKRRRRIIIIPPPPPAAAAAAA!!!!!

K: bye di.

i know that was a bit boring. but thats all for now i'll cont. later.

plz be free to post ur comments. cuz i want to know if u guys like it or not. bye, lil

Nayee Kahani with a twist...MMMMM...Looking forward to more...Hurry up...

😊Anamika😊

sorry for guyz for making u wait

i'll write in a short while

part 2

RECAP:

K: mama muhje prithvi se milna tha yarra baje. or already barra baj gaye hain. agar main ab nahie gaye to wo mere bara bajade ga😆

G: juice to peello

K: baad mein. saying this she leaves.

Gayatri to herself: ye ladki be na

mishty came to meet gayatri and on her way in she bumps into kripa.

K: hi di, bad me baatein karte hain. she says this and runs toward her car.

M: KKKRRRRIIIIPPPPPAAAAAAA!!!!!

K: bye di.

AND NOW...

Mishty to herself as she see's kripa leave in a hurry: lagta hai phir se prithvi se jugra ro ga. O GOD HELP HER!!!😃 mishty goes inside.

misthy runs and hugs gayatri.M: MAMA, kaisi ho, aur papa kider hain.

G:itne sare suval.

M:mama😔😡

G: ma to mazak karahe thi. main teek hoon aur tumhare papa undar kam kara he hain.

M:main milke aathi hoon. she goes in to meet her father. meanwhile...

IN KRIPA'S CAR.

as kripa's is driving she hears her cell ring.cell: ring! rinG! riNG! she looks around but can't find it.she parks the car of the road and tries to find her cell. cell: RING! RING! finally she finds her cell. and discovers 2 missed calls from prithvi.

k: aaj prithvi ne muhje zaroor mardalna hai. oooooo o god. she gets back on the road.

she call prithvi back.

K: hi prithvi

p:kripa kahaan ho tum kabse intezaar kara ha hoon

K: Jaan, tumne vo kahavat nahi suni. saber ka pal meeta hota hai😆

P:kripa i'm in no mood for jokes.

K:ok sorry

P: acha bataoo tum kahaan ho.

K: i'm on the way, thodi der main athi hoon. ok c u the. bye

P:bye jaan. i love u

k: me too. and she hangs up.

kripa arrives at the mall. she goes in. she tries to find him. she knows he will be a bit mad at her for coming late.

kripa to herself: prithvi ke liye a gift le lethi hoon us se uska jo be goosa wo be shaant ho jaye ga. yes thats what i should do.

so she goes into a shop to buy him a present when someone grabs her hand from behind.she turns around to look, and when she is suprised to see.....

i know it's a bit short i'll write more next time. i will be busy tom. i will try to post the next part tom, but if i can't i surely do it on wed.

till then u will just have to wait for the suprise to be revealed...

plz be free to post ur comments. c u guys later.

bye, lil