A new fan-fic:ek nahie kahaani -- part 21 - Page 6

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Posted: 20 years ago
#51
great part. I hope Kripa and Angad fall in love somehow. hehehe😆😆😆
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Posted: 20 years ago
#52
that was great!plz continue soon!
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Posted: 20 years ago
#53
yh it was really gud continue plz 👏
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Posted: 20 years ago
#54

part 8

sorry i didn't write sooner. anyways here u go.

RECAP:

p: kripa

k: like a kid. karo na. he closes his eyes.

k: haath aage karo. like a good boy he does it.

p: kripa yeh kaisa baachpana hai.

k: ssssshhhh!!! she takes out the other locket for him
and puts it in his palm.

k: ab ankhen kolo.
and he does.

AND NOW...

p: kripa yeh sab kis liye

k: waise hi

p: thanx

k: aise hi kare rahoge yain try be karoge?

p: oh, sorry. he takes the locket and wears it.

k: wow prithvi, it looks so nice

p: thanx and he hugs kripa for a long time.
on the other hand anged goes to (still undesided, c'mon guys plz help)

we see anged drive up and in his red beauty. and now we see him him park his
car and get out of his car playing with his car keys. he enters the shop and
sees a girl trying to choose something and goes up to her. while walking anged
stops and make a phone call to a girl.

a: hi

g: hi anged. now anged starts walking toward the same girl. and she talking to someone on her cell.

g: anged i still can't decide what u get bahi.

a: kuch bhi lay lo

g: plz anged, u know i want 2 get him something.

a: ok ok

g: anyways where the h*ll r u

a: rite behind u sweetheart. he taps the girl on the shoulder. and she turns around. and the both shut their phones at the same time. and they start laughing.
as some of u might of guessed. it is alyiah.
alyiah = aa.

aa: anged tum bhi na, ur to much

a: is that a coplement.

aa: a bit anoyed AAAAANNNNNGGGGGEEEDDDD!!!!

bye i have 2 go 2 sleep i'll post tomorrow.

bye for now, lil

Edited by **lil_playa** - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
#55
sorry guys, i've been busy. i forgot about the story. i 'll continue soon.
bye guys.
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Posted: 20 years ago
#56
will u sleep the whole day 😆

anyways please continue fast
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Posted: 20 years ago
#57
oooops!! sorry. i think i losing it. im writing the next part rite now.

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Posted: 20 years ago
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part 9

here u go.

RECAP:
g: anyways where the h*ll r u

a: rite behind u sweetheart. he taps the girl on the shoulder.

and she turns around. and the both shut their phones at the same time.
and they start laughing. as some of u might of guessed. it is alyiah.
alyiah = aa.

aa: anged tum bhi na, ur to much

a: is that a coplement.

aa: a bit anoyed AAAAANNNNNGGGGGEEEDDDD!!!!

AND NOW...

they just walk around the store looking at things trying to choose something
but aliyah just doesn't like anything. then she sees a heart shaped piece made of glass.

that has a poem on it.it goes something like this:

A special world for you and me
A special bond one cannot see
It wraps us up in its cocoon
And holds us fiercely in its womb.

Its fingers spread like fine spun gold
Gently nestling us to the fold
Like silken thread it holds us fast
Bonds like this are meant to last.

And though at times a thread may break
A new one forms in its wake
To bind us closer and keep us strong
In a special world, where we belong.


as soon as aliyah sees it she says: wow! this is perfect.she calls anged who is still wandering the store.
aa: anged come here
a: ok. he comes.

a: tumhe kuch mila

aa: haan look it so beautiful.

a: ok so lets get it packed.

aa: yeah let's go.

they get it packed and go for coffee.

AT THE CAFE

a: aliyah tumhe bhi prithvi ke liye sabse aacha gift kyun
layna tha

aa: because he's the best bro.

a: wut eva

a: ok tum kya lo ghi

aa: coffee

a: anything else

aa: no
anged calls the waiter.
a: 2 coffee

prithvi and kripa also come to the cafe. they gunna go
to another table but aliyah sees them and calls them to
their table.

aa: prithvi, kripa why don't u join us.

k+p: ok.
they take at seat.

sorry guys i have to go do chores. i write around 15-20mins later.


Edited by **lil_playa** - 20 years ago
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Posted: 20 years ago
#59
sorry guys i got guest so i can't cont.
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Posted: 20 years ago
#60
that was great, plz continue soon

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