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PART 4:

Prithvi heard a loud noise outside his house. He came out and saw a red convertible sports car, "hmm lagta hai Angad aa gaya,"

Angad appeared from no where and surprised Prithvi, "mainey kaha tha na tujhey milney zaroor aaoonga…..dekho aa gaya…"

"Itney style mein tu hi aa sakta hai…kahan mili yeh gaadi?"

"pata hai….. tere is chote se shahar mein aisi gaadi kahan milegi?…par Angad jahan jaata hai apni zarooratein poori kar leta hai….."

"I know I know…chal ab andar chal…."Prithvi tried to drag him indoors.

"Zaroorat se yaad aaya…..yahan koyi nightclubs wagarah hain?" Angad stopped at the doorstep.

"Yeh Nainital hai…yahan log aaram karney aatey hain…..raat ko jaagney nahin aatey…."

"pata nahin kaise gaaon mein reh raha hai….accha ladkiyan tho milengi na?"

"apna saaman andar rakh…..baad mein baat karta hoon," Prithvi just shook his head and walked in with one of Angad's bag.

"Beta….kahan hai tu?" Prithvi came out as he heard Gayatri's voice

"aaiye maasi….yeh mera Mumbai ka dost, Angad hai…."

Angad folded his hands, "namaste aunty…..Prithvi aap logon ki hamesha tareef karta tha…aap mein koyi jaadu hoga jo aap logon ke paas wapas aa gaya….hum tho rok nahin paaye issey…"

"Arre aisi baat nahin hai beta…..Nainital hai hi aisi jagah…jo ek baar yahan ka ho gaya tho aur kahin mann nahin lagta…." Gayatri said affectionately.

"Dekha maasi…main bhi issey yahi kehta hoon…..Nainital jaisi koyi jagah nahin hai duniya mein…."

"Accha main chalti hoon…shaam ko tum dono hamarey yahan hi khana khana…." Gayatri left to go back to her house.

"Yaar…….ghar ka khana? Main tho kahin restaurant jaaney ki soch raha tha.." Angad complained.

"Maasi ke haath ka khana khayega na tho saare restaurants bhool jaayega…." Prithvi reassured him.

"Theek hai main shaam tak aa jaaunga…." Angad picked his car keys and turned to leave.

"Kahan ja raha hai?…abhi tho aaya hai" Prithvi asked

"Wo…dad ka kuch kaam tha…ek zameen ke silsilay mein jaana hai…."

"kaun si zameen?"

"Wo koyi Mall road par Mr Trivedi ki…wahan dad ek hotel banana chahtey hain…"

"Wo? Trivedi sahib ko aaj tak koyi nahin khareed saka…" Prithvi discouraged him

"Oh yeah? Tab tho zaroor milna padhega unsey….theek hai bet lagaa le….. aaj shaam tak uss zameen ke kagaz mere haath mein hongey…."

"Theek hai….mainey kaha tha na Nainital ke log paise se nahin biktey…..chal bet laga the hain…kitney ki?"

"wohi apni standard…100 Rs" Angad shook Prithvi's hand and left

EVENING:

Angad got back a little after sunset.

"Angad…kahan chalaa gaya tha tu? Maasi kabsey khaney ke liye bula chuki hain.."

Angad walked in and handed over some papers to Prithvi.

"yeh kya hai Angad?"

"khud hi dekh ke" Angad said

Prithvi unfolded the papers, "arre yeh tho Mall road waali zameen ke….par kaise kiya tuney?'

"Prithvi everything has a price….you just have to be willing to pay the right price…ab nikaal mere 100 Rs"

"Maan gaya tujhey…yeh le apney paise…..par kaise kiya tuney?"

"tujhey aam khaney se matlab hai ya pedh gin ney se…chal ab bhookh lag rahi hai…." Angad put his arm around Prithvi and walked out with him.

SHARMA'S HOUSE:

Gayatri and Suryabhan greeted Angad and Prithvi, "aao…aao beta….tum logon ka hi intezaar tha.."

"Maasi Kripa kahan hai?" Prithvi asked as they settled into the chairs around the dining table

"Wo zara bahar gayi hai…aati hi hogi" Gayatri answered. She knew Prithvi always asked for Kripa; she was aware that his face always lit up as soon as Kripa entered the house.

"Beta..apney baarey mein kuch batao.." Suryabhan looked at Angad and asked

"Main? Main tho bas eenth aur patthar ke saath kaam karta hoon….hamara construction ka business hai…..bas kaam chal jaata hai…." Angad said

Prithvi was surprised at Angad's modesty, "arre mausaji…bahut bada business hai…yeh aise hi bol raha hai…"

Suryabhan laughed, "wo tho main uski gaadi dekhkar hi samajh gaya tha…..very good Angad…itni choti umar mein tumney itni success dekhi hai….you must be very hard working…"

"Nahin uncle…just lucky….mere dad ney bahut mehnat ki thi….I am just enjoying his fruits of labor.." Angad laughed back

"Beta…aur khana lo…" Gayatri asked both Angad and Prithvi. Prithvi usually had a small appetite, 'bas maasi…aur nahin"

Angad turned around, "aunty…main manaa nahin karoonga….aap sach much bahut acchi cook hain….laaiye…idhar laaiye.." Angad filled his plate with all the delicious foods.

"yeh tho Kripa ney help ki thi…Kripa bahut accha khana banaati hai.." gayatri said proudly.

"Kripa?" Angad asked

"Hamari ek lauti beti…" Suryabhan said. Angad did not make anything of that comment and kept savoring the delicacies.

The door opened, "mama…yeh rahi ras malai….badi mushkil se mili hai…halwai dukaan bandh hi kar raha tha….." Kripa went straight to the kitchen.

"Ras malai?" Angad exclaimed, "aap ko kaise pata mujhey meetha pasand hai.."

"Tujhey kaun sa khana pasand nahin hai?" Prithvi remarked, "maasi…yeh khane ka bahut shaukeen hai…issey hum college mein foodie kehtey the….."

"Beta..jab tak Nainital mein ho….mujhey batana kya pasand kartey ho….main ya Kripa tumharey liye bana dengey"

"Thanks aunty" Angad smiled

Just then Kripa came out from the kitchen and hesitated as soon as she saw Angad at the table. Her smile changed into a frown within seconds, "aap yahan?"

Angad looked up and thought, "oh tho yeh khatti meethi ka ghar hai…."

Angad got up and pretended, "Hmm…hum pehley mil chukey hain?"

Kripa just gave him a cold look and thought, "tum jaise log pata nahin kitney logon ko apni gaadi se keechad uchaaltey nikal jaatey hogey…"

"Aao Kripa…yeh mera dost Angad hai…Mumbai se aaya hai.." Prithvi got up too

Kripa remembered Prithvi mentioning his friend in a previous conversation. She remembered he had mentioned that Angad was very rich and money was a big priority in his life. Everything fell into place now-he was probably a filthy rich brat!

Suryabhan said, "Kripa…tum Angad ko jaanti ho?"

Kripa did not say anything and sat in her chair.


Angad finally spoke, "hmm yaad aaya….aaj sadak par…I am sorry meri gaadi se aapkey kapdey kharab ho gaye the…..yeh leejiye….," Angad took out his wallet, "aap please apney kapdey kahin dry clean karwa leejiye…," and took out some money.

Kripa was offended, "Thanks but no thanks Mr Angad…..hum Nainital mein apney kapdey dry clean nahin…khud haath se dhotey hain…."

Prithvi smiled to himself and thought, "Angad ko ab pata chalega…hamarey Nainital ki ladkiyan kitni alag hain…."

Angad could not say anything and just put his wallet back into his pocket.

Gayatri tried to lighten up the air, "arre beta….yeh kaisi baat kar rahey ho…..hamare Nainital ki sadakein itni kharab hai….kya kar saktey hain…tumhari galti nahin hai…."

Kripa was annoyed at her mother for defending Angad's rude roadside manners.

After dinner, Angad and Prithvi took leave from the Sharma's. Angad's eyes followed Kripa everywhere the rest of the evening. He was fascinated by her, but he thought she was just acting pricey to get his attention as most women did when they were around him.

"Bye Kripa!…" Prithvi waved as Kripa preferred to stay inside rather than seeing them off at the door.

"Phir milengey!" Angad waved and winked at her.

She turned red and muttered under her breathe, "phir milengey my foot!"

Gayatri walked in, "Arre Kripa…aise mehmaan ke saath nahin kartey…kya sochega Angad Nainital ke logon ke baarey mein?"

Kripa just turned around and left for her room, "mujhey kuch farak nahin padhta mama….zyaada paise waale zaroori nahin zyaada acche bhi ho.."

"beti…abhi tho ek baar hi mili ho….ek baar mein insaan ka pata nahin chalta…"

PRITHVI's HOUSE:

Angad and Prithvi sat outside in the patio till late at night and talked about Mumbai, their college days, Mishti and other friends.

Angad suddenly changed the subject, "yaar….tu kehta tha na ki Nainital ki ladkiyan alag hoti hain…..par mujhey nahin lagta….basically they are all the same," Kripa's image was still clear in his mind.

"kya matlab?"

"ab Kripa ko hi dekho…bahar se itni touch-me-not types lagti hai…par andar se I am sure she is dying to go out with a guy like me.." Angad smiled

"Nahin yaar…Kripa aisi nahin hai.."

"Bet lagata hai? Angad extended his hand

"Nahin yaar..teri daal wahan nahin galegi…"

"kyon nahin galegi…jab daal hai tho zaroor galegi…" Angad said confidently

"Wo aisi ladki nahin hai…haar jaayega tu.." Prithvi sounded worried

"yaar…tera tho koyi chakkar wakkar nahin hai na uskey saath?" Angad would withdraw the bet if Prithvi was genuinely interested in Kripa, but a shy Prithvi could not admit to it openly.

"N..Nahin…" Prithvi hesitated and lowered his eyes.

"Tho theek hai……main jab Nainital se jaaunga…tab tak Kripa meri deewani ho chuki hogi…wohi 100 Rs ki bet..OK?"

"OK…" Prithvi agreed reluctantly, but was confident that Angad would lose this one. He knew Kripa would never fall for Angad's flashy nature or his wealth. He thought he knew Kripa better than anyone else in this world…….he was not aware how experienced Angad was with women…would Kripa be able to resist his charm?


…to be continued….
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Posted: 18 years ago
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I just read ure entire ff. its mind blowin. ab a aur k dono hi phasange. and Angad darl! " Luv. will change u!"
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Aweosme part.... im sure kripa will fall for angad but not for his money!!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow that was a gr8 part


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Posted: 18 years ago
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omgsh i just luv it continue soon 😊 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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awsome really exciting bad bad angad and prithvi 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wonderful fan-fic its really great
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Thanks everyone. I will post next part soon 😊
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[SIZE=7]PART 5:

Angad and Prithvi went to bed after deciding on the terms of their bet. Kripa tried to go to bed in her room:

ANGAD: He was looking forward to the challenge now. He knew it would not be easy, as Kripa had not shown any interest in him so far. She seemed aloof and particularly annoyed at him-was it due to the incident with the car, or was it a general disapproval of his wealth and status? He would have to test the waters before he did anything drastic with her. He was confident that he would win the bet, as he had never lost a bet before; also he had never failed with women before…….he knew how to make women go crazy for him….

PRITHVI: Lay in bed wide awake, "kya mainey bet lagaakar theek kiya? Aakhir Angad bet jeetney ke liye kuch bhi kar sakta hai….par mujhey Kripa par yakeen hai…usey Angad jaise log bilkul pasand nahin hai….wo logon ko acchi tarah pehchaanti hai….wo jaldi hi samajh jaayegi ki Angad serious nahin hai…..she will never fall for his tactics….aur jab Angad frustrate ho kar haar maan jaayega…tab main Kripa ko apne dil ki baat bataa doonga…..usey phir pataa bhi chal jaayega ki main Angad se kitna accha hoon aur kitna alag hoon….phir Kripa meri ho jaayegi…." Prithvi thought this was the best way to get Kripa on his side….she would see the difference between Angad, the brat and Prithvi, the gentleman!

KRIPA: Lay in bed and thought about her meetings with Angad that day, "aakhir main kyon uskey baarey mein soch rahi hoon? Wo tho bas Prithvi ka dost hai….par main itna naaraz kyon hoon us sey? Shayad mama theek kehti hain….ek mulaqat mein kya pata chalta hai…..par har cheez mein showoff karta hai….aise log mujhey bilkul pasand nahin….aur meri taraf ghoor ghoor ke kyon dekhta hai, jaise pehley koyi ladki dekhi na ho……aaj tak kisi aadmi ne mujhey aise nahin dekha…..main itni uncomfortable kyon hoon? Shayad wo sabhi ladkiyon ko aise hi dekhta hoga…..aakhir bade baap ka bigda beta jo hai…." She covered her face with her pillow and tried to fall asleep.

NEXT MORNING:

Prithvi left for work early. Angad got up and looked around, "lagta hai Prithvi tho chala gaya….ab naashtey ka intezaam khud karna hoga…"

He peeked outside the window and saw that the Sharma's house was a stone throw's away. Their curtains were drawn, but if they were not, he would be able to see everything inside their house. He got ready and knocked on the Sharma's door.

"namaste aunty…goodmorning!"

"Aao beta….Prithvi tho chala gaya hoga……naashta kiya tumney?"

"aapkey ghar se itni acchi khushboo aa rahi thi tho socha aap logon ko hi pareshaan kar doon….mujhey tho khana banana aata nahin hai…"

"accha kiya jo aa gaye….ab jab tak yahan ho…roz subah yahin nashta karna…Kripa ne aaj uncle ke favorite poha banaya hain…khaaogey?"

"ab tho mujhey aur zyada bhook lag rahi hai….I love poha.."

"KRIPA! Beti zara ek cup chai tho laana…aur poha bhi…"

"aayi mama…" Kripa answered from the kitchen

"uncle kahan hai?"Angad asked, as he picked the newspaper

"wo morning walk par gaye hain….aatey hi hongey….wo nashta baad mein karengey…" Gayatri said.

"arre aunty…aap ke yahan English newspaper nahin aata?"

"beta chote shaharon mein zyada tar hindi newspaper hi padtey hain…" Gayatri smiled

"OH…" Angad was disappointed and just folded the newspaper; he had not read a hindi newspaper in ages!

Kripa came out of the kitchen and paused when she saw Angad sitting at the table.

"Good morning Kripa!" Angad greeted her; he knew she did not expect to see him there.

"G..Good morning.." she said softly

She put the tea and dish with the poha on the table and said, 'mama…main school ke liye late ho rahi hoon….aaj nashta nahin karoongi….," she was trying to get away from Angad's piercing gaze as soon as possible.

"beti…jaldi se khaa lo….phir chali jaana…khaali pait nahin jaate kaam par…" Gayatri insisted and went back into the kitchen.

"Kripa….give me company…main aapko chhod doonga….tho aap late nahin hongi…" Angad said hopefully.

"nahin…main rikshaw kar loongi…." Kripa made a face, hoping she would not have to ride in his fancy car.

Kripa sat down and inhaled her breakfast. Angad was amused at that sight, "Kripa….khaney par kyon naaraz ho rahi ho….you don't have to go in my car….jao rikshaw mein jao…." Angad knew that he had to try reverse psychology with a girl like Kripa.

Kripa gave him a cold stare, "main aise hi khana khati hoon….mere paas itna faaltu time nahin hai….."

"OH….tho aap ko lagta hai mere paas baht faaltu time hai?" Angad retorted, "actually hai tho sahi….aakhir itna paisa kis kaam ka?…I really enjoy my life unlike you, jo hamesha idhar se udhar bhaag te rehtey ho…."

"Mr Angad….every one doesnot have the luxury to be born with a silver spoon in their mouth!" Kripa got up angrily.

Gayatri came back, "arre…tum dono ladai kar rahe ho kya?"

"nahin aunty…isse ladai nahin…nok jhonk kehte hain" Angad smiled and got up to leave.

"I will be happy to drop you…." Angad took his car keys and pointed outside the window.

"chali jao beti….school time se pahunch jaaogi….waise bhi der ho gayi hai aaj.." Gayatri looked at the wall clock.

Kripa just gave Angad another cold look, "theek hai….aap chhod dee jiye.."

Angad smiled and twirled his car keys on his forefinger, "after you…." He let Kripa lead the way and started whistling something, "bye aunty and thanks…."

"beta…jab marzi ho aa jaya karo….apna ghar hi samjho…." Gayatri saw them off

Angad helped Kripa settle in the passenger seat, 'seat belt zaroor laga lena…yeh sports car hai…"

Kripa fumed, "sports car hai…par sadak tho Nainital ki hai….yahan bail gaadi bhi car se tez chalti hai….seat belt ki koyi zaroorat nahin hai…."

Angad smiled and started the car. He made sure his seatbelt was snug in place and then zoomed off.

Kripa almost hit the dashboard, "ANGAD! Itni tez kyon chala rahey ho?"

"yeh Nainital ki sadak hai….tez kahan hai?" Angad teased her and kept accelerating the car.

Kripa kept falling from one end of the car to the other, "please stop!"

The car came to a screeching halt as Angad braked. Kripa almost hit the dashboard again.

"Yeh kya tareeka hai car chalaane ka? Just because you have a fancy car, show off kar rahey ho?" Kripa ssolded him

"Nahin madam….aapko seatbelt pehney par majboor kar raha hoon…"

Kripa rolled her eyes and gave in. After she had belted herself, Angad started the car and drove the car as smoothly as a sailboat.

"Tho aap school mein kis class mein hain?" Angad rolled his tongue and asked

"Main aapko student lagti hoon? Main wahan music teacher hoon…"

"OH…music teacher?…..aapki baton se lagta tha ki aap abhi ek bacchi hi hain…I am sorry, I did not realize you are an adult!" he looked at her with the corner of his eyes and waited for her reaction.

Kripa was regretting the car ride, "pata nahin kyon aapkey saath aa gayi?"

"see…that is why I thought you are a kid….hamesha ladney ko tayyar rehti ho…" Angad teased her again

"Haan…aap jaise insaan ke saath tho ladai hi kee ja sakti hai…aur kuch nahin…" she said facing him.

Angad stopped the car and turned his face towards her. He took out his dark glasses and brought his face close to hers and stared into her eyes, "aap mauka tho dee jiye…ladai tho kya, main aapko bahut kuch sikha sakta hoon," he spoke in a husky romantic tone which shocked Kripa.

Kripa backed off in the car, "y..yeh..aap kya kar rahey hain….please mujhey school chhod dee jiye…."

Angad leaned towards her door, almost resting his chest on her lap and unlocked her door, "aapka school…," he pointed outside.

Kripa looked outside the window and was relieved that she was at her destination, but realized that angad was still holding the door latch, with his body practically resting on her. He gradually withdrew himself and as she got out of the car, her hand touched his hand accidentally. She felt goose bumps on herself as their hands touched each other for a flicker of a second…..

She got off and ran inside the school gates, without even thanking him or looking back.

Angad smiled and rolled his lower lip, "lagta hai shart ka kaam shuroo ho gaya hai" He could sense that although she was all flustered by his touch, he had aroused a chord in her, which she probably was not aware of herself!


….to be continued….
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Posted: 18 years ago
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amazinggg prts...luved dem all!!!plz cont sooon

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