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Posted: 20 years ago
yup continue yaar y make us wait too much 😡
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Posted: 20 years ago
OMG u have to continue..its been sooooooooo long..i can't wait any longer..this is the best fan-fic..plzzzzzz hurry..
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Posted: 20 years ago

Originally posted by: eshika

hey guyzzzz i am really really really really sorry................ i don think i will B able 2 continue the fan fic.......... i am sooo damn bg wid my semester this time.......... i am just goin crazzy.... if any 1 wana continue they can...... i will try 2 continue wenever i can..... once again really very sorrie..... 😭



awwwwwwwwww its ok eshu, even i just started college. i can understand wat ur going thru. dont worry babe. take care 😛
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Posted: 20 years ago
guyzzzzzzzzzzzzzzz happe is gone continueeeee 4 meh.... choooooooooo chweet of her.............. love u loads happe 😃
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Posted: 20 years ago
awwwwww thanx eshika for leting me continue.

Guys, I will post the next two parts tomorrow. Some work came up and I have to go now. I was writing some but it's not long enough to be posted. I will post in the morning as I'll be writing at night.
forgive me. 😳

take care everyone
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Posted: 20 years ago
take your time but not too much
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Posted: 20 years ago
hey,

i just read the whole fanfic today and it is really one of the best i hv ever read. it is really well writen and the story line really rockz!!! 👏 👏 👏

Kayla~
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Posted: 20 years ago
continue soon!!! i cant wait for the next part!
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Posted: 20 years ago

Part 29

Angad carries Kripa back to the cottage. He places her on the sofa and sits by her. Both are looking at each other yet not willing to speak up. One of them had to break the silence but both didn't knew what to say.

Angad (in his thoughts): Kripa, main kaise tume yakeen diloon ke main badhal gaya hoon. Tume kaise bataoon ke tum mere liye kya mayine rakhti ho.

Kripa (in her thoughts): Angad main jaanti hoon ke tum mujhse pyaar karne lage ho, na chahate hue bhi mujhe tum se pyaar ho gaya . Haan Angad, main bhi tum se pyaar karti hoon. Mujhe tume batana hoga ke main tumare bina ek pal bhi nahin guzaar sakti.

After a long staring session, Kripa finally breaks the silence.

Kripa: Angad main tum se kuch kehna chahati hoon

Angad: Kripa main jaanta hoon ke tum muje yahi kaho gi na ke ke tum ne mujhe maaf nahin kia sur tum mujhe pyaar nahin karti

Kripa: Angad main tumse je kehna chahati hoon ke ……..pause…….main bhi tum se pyaar karti hoon.

Angad couldn't believe his ears. He felt sudden rush of happiness. He didn't knew how to react. He wanted to hold Kripa tight and not let go off her even for a sec.

Angad: Kripa, kya kaha tumne?

Kripa: jo tum ne abhi sunaa

Angad: tum bhi mujh se pyaar karti ho?

Kripa gets up from the sofa yet continues speaking.

Kripa: Angad, mujhe nahin pata je sab kaise hua. Jab mujhe tumare plan ke baare main pata chala toh tum nahin jaante mujhe kitni takleef hui thi. Mujhe tum par gussa aa raha tha ke tum itna ghir sakte ho, sirf mujhe takleef dene ke liye, tum mera dil toodna chahate the

Angad feels guilty and tears form the eyes of both Angad and Kripa. Angad gets up from sofa as well. He turns Kripa around and wipes her tears. Kripa wipes his tears as well. Angad holds Kripa's hand and kisses it. Kripa continues talking.

Kripa: Mujhe tum par aur bhi gussa aaya, main bhi tume es baat ki sajaa dena chahati thil, main chahati thi ke tum apne hi plan mein phas jao, main tumare saath tumara hi khel khel rahi thi. Je jante hue bhi ke tum sirf mujhe jeetna chahate ho, main phir bhi tumare kareeb aane lagi thi, mujhe tum se jaada apne aap par gussa aata tha, kyonki main apne kadam rok nahin pa rahi thi

Angad listens to Kripa as she pours her heart out to him. All he wants to do right now is stop Kripa from speaking and hug her immensely.

Kripa was about to speak when Angad puts his finger on her lips.

Angad: Kripa, kab tak tum apne aap ko sajaa deti raho gi, meri wajah se kab tak Kripa.

Kripa: Angad main pehle aapne aap par gussa thi kyonki main apne dil ko nahin roka, main apne aap ko nahin roka, maine apne dil ko uski mann-mani karne di, maine upse dil ko tumse pyaar karne dia

Kripa places her hand on Angad's cheek.

Kripa: Ajj mujhe apne aap par es liye gussa aa raha hai ke maine tume kitna kuch nahin kaha. Mujhe takleef hui kyonki main tumara dil dukhaya, je jaante hue bhi ke tum mujhse pyaar karne lage ho, maine tume wahan se jaane dia

Angad couldn't take it anymore. He grabs Kripa from her shoulders and hugs her tightly. Kripa cries in Angad's arms and for a while both stood in each other's arms. Angad withdraws from Kripa yet holding her face in his hands.

Angad: Kripa, mujhe apni galti ka ehsaas hai, main tumse bohat pyaar karta hoon. Main aab tumare bina reh nahin sakta.

Background music plays. One of my favorite songs as well as eshika's.

Baahon ke darmiyaan do pyaar mil rahe hain Baahon ke darmiyaan do pyaar mil rahe hain Jaane kya bole mann dole sunke badan Dhadkan bani zubaan

Kripa runs into Angad and they hug again. Angad kisses Kripa's forehead. Kripa kisses Angad's forehead. Angad kisses Kripa's cheeks. She kisses his cheeks. Angad brings Kripa close to him to kiss her lips, Kripa gets shy and she turns away. She tries to run away but Angad catches her hand.

Khulte badn hote labhon ki ye ankahi Khulte badn hote labhon ki ye ankahi Mujhse keh rahi hai ki badhne de bekhudi

Mil yoon ki daud jaayein nas nas mein bijliyaan

He comes closer to her, kissing her hand and makes his way up to her shoulder, kissing her arm. Kripa's heart is beating fast. She gets restless. Angad is so close to Kripa now and his presence can be felt by Kripa's body. Angad puts his arm around her waist, holding her tight. Angad kisses side of Kripa's neck, then back of her neck, her shoulders.

Kripa quickly turns to Angad and hugs him tightly.

Kripa: I love you Angad, I love you.

Angad: I love you too Kripa, I love you jaan.


Aasmaan ko bhi ye haseen raaz hai pasand Aasmaan ko bhi ye haseen raaz hai pasand Uljhi uljhi saanson ki aawaaz hai pasand Moti luta rahi hai saawan ki badliyaan

Angad slowly moves Kripa away. He looks at her passionately. Kripa's bents her head down due to shyness, Angad lifts Kripa's chin up and now both are looking at each other with love filled eyes. Angad slowly brings his face to Kripa as he bring her closer to him as well. Now they are so close to each other that they can feel each others' breath in this cold weather. Both are close to each other that only one has to move his/her face and their lips will be touching. Angad makes his way and now both of their lips meet and they share a soft kiss. Kripa puts her hands around Angad's neck and his arms are around her waist. Now both are sharing an extremely passionate kiss.

Baahon ke darmiyaan do pyaar mil rahe hain Baahon ke darmiyaan do pyaar mil rahe hain Jaane kya bole mann dole sunke badan Dhadkan bani zubaan

Baahon ke darmiyaan

I will continue very soon. I'll post the next part in few hours.

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Posted: 20 years ago
eshika, I think you should continue cuz no one read the part I wrote.

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