DECEPTION - A SINISTER BETRAYAL - Page 3

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Deception - A Sinister Betrayal ...... Do Not Believe What You See....!



Chapter 3 Part 1



Andy struggled a lot trying to free him self from the clutches of the security guards. He just wanted to get back at Sean. He didn't care if anyone was watching. First he got slapped by Akbal and now he got punched by Sean.
"Let me go!" shouted Andy.
But the struggling was of no use, as he was out numbered by the guards. The police arrived instantly and arrested Andy and took him away.
Rebecca turned around and looked at Sean again. Her eyes were full of tears, but they weren't tears of sadness, these were tears of happiness. She just couldn't believe that Sean was in front of her. Tears were starting to form in Akbal's eyes as well. It had been over a whole year since she last saw Sean.
"Thank god you're here" said Rebecca, as Sean wiped her tears away.
"Well I always like to make an entrance" joked Sean, as tears started to form in his eyes.
Sean looked towards Akbal, but before he could say anything to her, she just walked back inside the hospital, without saying anything. In a way it puzzled Sean, as to why Akbal left without saying anything to him, but deep down he knew why she did it.
"How's Amanda?" asked Sean.
It then hit Rebecca, about what happened to Amanda. In all the commotion that happened here in the car park, she had forgotten. She ran back inside, with Sean following behind her. Sean was confused as he didn't know what had actually happened between Rebecca and Andy. She didn't even tell him why Andy did what he did.

Akbal was standing outside Amanda's room, still waiting for Judy to come out. Eventually she did come out of the room, just as Rebecca and Sean arrived.
"How's Amanda?" asked Rebecca.
"I think you better come with me" said Judy, as she sighed and led them into an empty room nearby.
"Is everything okay…why don't you just tell us what's happened?"
Judy walked into the room and switched the lights on. She then asked them to sit down.
"I'm fine as I am…please tell us what's happened". Rebecca could sense that something was wrong deep within herself, but at the same time she was hoping that, everything was going to be fine.
"I don't know how to say this… but Amanda has gone into a coma"
The news just hit all three of them like a tonne of bricks. It just stunned them, especially Sean, as even now he didn't know what had actually happened before he arrived at the hospital. All he knew was what Samantha had told him. Samantha had told him the truth about why Amanda did what she did and about how their uncle had tricked Amanda into signing everything over to his name, which in a way led to Amanda ending up in the hospital. He didn't even know about the miscarriage.
"Is someone going to tell me what the hell has happened?" yelled Sean, as he wanted some answers as to what had happened. Rebecca turned and looked at Sean. She could tell from the pain in his eyes and from his voice that he knew why Amanda said those things to him, a year ago, which led him to leave. At first Rebecca didn't know where or how to begin, so much had happened. She was worried at how Sean would react, but still she knew that he would find out one way or another. He had every right to know what had happened. So she told him everything. Sean just stood there while he listened. His eyes were just fuming with anger and he was clinching his fist wishing that just for once Andy would come in front of him. He just stormed out of the room and stopped outside Amanda's room and just saw her lying there in her bed, motionless and her eyes closed. He opened the door and went up to her bedside.


........To Be Continued

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I thought I'd do something different for a change... make this more exciting. Now and again, like dramas, I'm going to like do a trailer type thing, but in writing. Incase you are confused, I'm going to post the first trailer below. Let me know if this is a good idea or not...!!! I would like to point out that this is officially the first trailer, this will happen soon...!!!!

TRAILER 1

"Andy is released, because the guy he punched has taken the case back. Andy thanks him, but the guy turns and tells him that he's agreed to take the case back because of this guy. The guy turns around and smiles at him...IT'S SEAN !!!"

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Deception - A Sinister Betrayal ...... Do Not Believe What You See....!



Chapter 3 Part 2




"It's all my fault" said Sean, as he just stared at her. He felt as though he was responsible for the state that Amanda was in now. If only he had listened to her, the night she came to see him. This wouldn't have happened. She needed him and he turned her away. Sean now hated himself for not being there for Amanda.
"It's not your fault…none of this is your fault" said Rebecca, as she put her hand on his shoulder to comfort him.
"It is - if only I had listened to her"
"Look listen to me, this isn't your fault… none of this is your fault" Rebecca sighed. "The main thing is you are here for her now, at a time like this, a time when she really needs you"
Sean turned and stared at Rebecca, feeling really helpless. He didn't know what to do. All he could think of was the time when Amanda begged him to come back with her. But he turned her away. Just by seeing her lying there in the bed, motionless and her eyes closed, it just made him hate himself even more. He just stood there wishing that she would just wake up, so he could tell her how sorry he was.
"She read your diary", said Rebecca, as she sat down on the side of her bed and held Amanda's hand.
"What?" asked Sean
"I guess she couldn't stand you, because mum and dad started to care about you more than her…well that's what she thought"
Tears started to form again, as both Sean and Rebecca remembered the times whenever their parents were there for them. But yet again Sean couldn't remember a time whenever Amanda was there for him. Rebecca looked up at Sean, and could see him just staring at Amanda. He just stood there frozen to the ground.
"Before what happened between you and Sarah, she accidentally read your diary…I remember telling her not to, but she said she wanted to because she wanted to know what you had written about her." Rebecca just sighed as she wiped her tears away, with her sleeve. "She thought you'd probably had written lots of bad things about her, especially after the way she was treating you, but I remember the look on her face. You didn't write one bad thing about her, but instead all you wrote was how much you cared about her" Rebecca remembered the look on Amanda's face, it was like as if it was yesterday. She wished it was. Because at the time, Amanda was feeling just as guilty as Sean was at this very moment. She remembered Amanda saying that how wrong she'd been about Sean and how she was going to make up for her mistake.
"She realised her mistake and was going to apologise for the way she'd been treating you, but then that incident happened between you and Sarah, and it destroyed everything…everyone started hating you and you even ended up in hospital"
Sean got down on his knee and stroked Amanda's forehead, pushing her hair aside. Inside himself he was shouting at Amanda, telling her she had to wake up and to look that he's here beside her. If not for her, she had to wake up for him. As he now needed her more than ever, he needed her love and her support.
"She heard Nisha talking about taking you with her, far away from here, but she knew you wouldn't leave because of how much you cared about us. That is why to save your life she said those things to you, so you'd leave and start a new life far away from here."
After hearing all this, Sean got up and was about to walk out of the room, when Akbal stopped him. Rebecca also got up and walked up to him.
"Where are you going?" asked Akbal.
"I have to leave" replied Sean, as he stared at Amanda. Knowing inside him self of what he had to do now. Then he turned towards Rebecca.
"Where are you staying tonight?"
"I'm staying here" replied Rebecca.
"Fine - Don't worry about Samantha…she's staying with me…you just take care of Amanda"
"But where are you going…you need to be here with us?" asked Rebecca, as she held his hand and refused to let him go, as she was afraid of losing him again. After all she had seen him with her own eyes after a whole year.
Sean lifted her face towards him and looked into her eyes.
"I swear to you…before Amanda opens her eyes, all the happiness in the world will be at her feet"
After saying this Sean stormed off down the corridor and down towards to the car park. As he made his way towards his car, all he could think about was everything that had happened to Amanda. Not just now, but before as well. All this time she loved and cared about him and yet he still couldn't understand her. She needed him and he turned her away, like as if she didn't mean anything to him. He punched the back of his car in frustration. If only he came back with her, when she came to him, none of this would have happened. He really hated himself for letting Amanda down. Right now the only thing that came into his mind was getting back Amanda's happiness and he knew where to start from. He got into his car and drove out of the car park.
"Someone help me!" a female scream, came from out of nowhere, it sounded like as if it came from around the corner. Sean got out of the car and ran around the corner. He saw that two guys had pinned a female against the wall. He couldn't make out who the female was, but the face was familiar. The two guys were mugging her. The female was refusing to let go of her handbag.
"Hey let go of her!" shouted Sean. The two guys refused to do so and started pushing Sean around and even threatened him. Sean didn't need this, especially not now. He already had enough on his mind. He tried to control himself, but the two guys just kept on pushing him. Eventually Sean couldn't control himself and he retaliated against the two guys. He started to fight them, taking out all his frustration and anger out on the pair of them. The fight didn't last long as both the guys found Sean to be a handful and they eventually ran away. Sean chased after them, but then gave up. He went up to the female to assure her that she's fine and that the two guys had ran away.
"Hey they've gone, you're safe now"
The female turned around to thank him and was shocked to see Sean in front of her. Sean was also shocked as well. The female was Rachel, Nicola's elder sister.



........To Be Continued

Characters involved in chapter

Some characters are made up by me some are from either dramas and movies.

Sean - Me
Amanda - Shweta Tiwari
Rebecca - Made Up
Judy - Made Up
Akbal - Well she's based on one of my best friends at Uni.
Rachel - Kajol

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