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Posted: 18 years ago
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gr88 part 👏 👏 👏 continue sooon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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The Sharma family reaches the airport and is searching for their rental(no one knows their coming...remember its a surprise)

Kripa spots it.
K: vo rahi, chalo josh sab luggage uthao or chalo mere picche
J: mein thume coolie dikhta hoom
K: do u really want me to answer that question??
J: shut up
P: bas karo aur chalo
Josh and the driver get everything into the car. everyone is seated.
DRIVER: kaha jana hai sir
O: aap ne sharma mansion to suna hi hoga na vaha le lijiye
D: teekh hai

Its a short drive but b/c of the traffic it takes about a half hour. Kripa is watching all the shops whiz by.
K: wow itne sare shops...mujhe pehle shopping jaana hai
J: chup kar pehle ghar to jaane de
Kripa sticks her tongue out at him.
They finally reach a quiet neighborhood with gorgeous houses. Kripa points to one....wow that house is gorgeous but it looks familiar
J is grinning.
J: thume vo ghar pasand aaya
K: yaa why??
J: kuchh nahin
The driver takes a trurn and goes through the gate
K is shocked
K: u mean ke yehi thumara aur shabbir bhaiyya ka ghar hai
J: ofcourse
J and K just run out of the car followed by Om and Parveti
They start knocking on the door and ring the doorbell about a thousand times.
B: aa rahi hoon baba
She opens the door and josh picks her up and spins her around.
B: omg josh, mujhe niche rakh
Kripa is laughing.Josh puts her down.
Bani hugs kripa.
B: meri bacchi kitni badi ho gayi hai
Josh interrupts.
J: aur moti bhi
Jai walks in.
JA: chup kar meri beti ko moti kyun bola??
J: dad!...he hugs him
Kripa goes to jai and he gives her a hug.
O+P: hume to aap bhool hi gaye
O: Jai bhaiyya(jai is older)
J: iddhar aa
P: bani bhabhi kaisi hai aap?
B: bilkul teekh
THey hug.
They all go inside and catch up on old times.
Kripa doesn't seem too happy.
JA: kya huwa beta?
K: shabbhir bhaiyya nazar nahin aa rahe
B: vo to teri hone wali bhabhi ke saath ghumne gaye hai
K: kab aayenge??
S: naam liya aur lo hazir
K runs to him and hugs him
S: kaisi hai? i missed u alot. He kisses her forehead.
K: main teekh hoon. bhabhi kya aagayi mujhe to aap bhool hi gaye
S: yeh kabhi nahin ho sakta.
They both walk to where everyone was sitting.Shabbir hugs josh and takes blessings form om and parvati.
S: accha to mama, aaj aaliya ke mommy, papa ne hume dinner pe bolaya hai
B: thats great
JA: issi bahane sab se mulakat bhi hojayengi.
O: ok perfect!

preview: ak finally meet!!

ishuu♥
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Posted: 18 years ago
#13
👏 wow yaaar masth parrt loved it ..wow 👏 yaar ek din mein 3 parts ..continue sooon 😳 😳
Edited by Honii - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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yea lot of free time today

might continue later depends on how much time i have tho 😊

ishuu<33
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great part
ohhhhhhhhhh I hope AK meet there can't wait
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Posted: 18 years ago
#16
wow gr8 start isshu

really liking ur FF cnt w8 2 see how ur FF pans out 😳 😳 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
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good story i read it today and i reallly like it and waitin for u to post another part very soon.speciall y the next where our ak meets! 😊 😊 😊😊
Edited by deeya123 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
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ooo next meeting.. AK!!!!! yayy!! great fanfic.. continue sooooooooonn
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Posted: 18 years ago
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During the day everyone is unpacking and catching up on old times. Just then something came up.
O: vaise yeh aaliya ka khandhan kaisa hai?
J: are tu nahin jaanta hamara vo purana dost tha na mihir
O: oo ha usse to meri baat hi nahin hui jab ham US chale gayen
J: haan aab tujhe yaad aaya
O: hamare bacche bi saath saath baade huwe
J: ha
K: aap kiski baat kar rahe hai
J: beta ham jab vaha chale to tum hi dekh lena ki thume kuch yaad aaya ki nahin
K: ok chacha
**************The whole day goes by joyfully
At night everyone is getting ready to go to the Khanna's house
Kripa wore a chiffon sweater with capris as she didn't go shopping and didn't have indian clothes. Josh and shabbir wore express shirts with with dress pants and everyone else dressed formally as well.They were just about to get into the car.
K: main aapna bag bhul aayi
P: kya kripa beta jaldi le aa
Sh: chachi aap jayiye main kripa ko leke aata hoon
O: teekh hai jaldi aana
Sh: ji
*****************10 minutes later
K: sry bhaiyya mil nahin raha tha
Sh: its ok, chal abb
K: yea lekin sab log kaha chale gaye
sh: maine sab ko kaha main thume leke aaunga to ab chale
K: yea
They get into the car and leave, meanwhile everyone else just reached there.
Mihir and Jai hug as do Tulsi and Bani. Mihir and Tulsi catch up with Parveti and Om.(sry don't wanna write about them that much i know ur getting very anxious)

Everyone goes inside.
Josh and Angad are talking, mishty and aaliya join them. Aaliya looks a bit upset.
J: kya huwa bhabhi, bhai aate hi honge
A: what, maine kab aisa kuch kaha?(looking clueless)
Everyone laughs.
The four of them go out side to the outhouse.
*******back to shabbir and Kripa...it starts to rain and they reach there.
K: shit i hate the rain, mere sare kapde kharab ho jayenge
Sh: chill, outhouse zyada nazdeek hai, hum vaha pe chalte hai aur vaha se umbrella leke ghar mein chale jayenge vaise bhi vaha ki light on hai to koi andar ho ga
K: ok
They both run out of the car and into the house. Kripa is running without looking ahead and bumps into someone. Shabbir runs in as well. Kripa moves away from the person.
Shabbir and kripa join everyone.
She still can't get that person out of her head.
Sh introduces kripa to everyone.
Sh: (pointing to each person)yeh hai mishty
K: hi
Mi: hey
Sh:, yeh thumari hone wali bhabhi aaliya
K: hi
Sh: aur(looks back) angad tum vaha kyun kade ho yahan aao na.
Angad smiles and comes.
Sh: aur ye hai angad aaliya ka bhai
Kripa and angad shake hands.
Sh: aur yeh hai kripa
Aa: omg to tum kripa ho thumare bare mein shabbir bohot baate karta hai ke jab kripa last time aayi thi to hum vaha gaye the aur usne ye kiya that vo kiya tha
Kripa starts to laugh at this. Aaliya and kripa hug.
Both of them feel awkward around eachother.They feel as if they know eachother.

Is this love at first sight or do they feel like they know eachother??
read TUMSE PYAAR HUA to find out more.


hope u liked it
comment(positive or negative i don't mind i just want to know how i'm doing as this is my first ff)



ishuu♥
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Posted: 18 years ago
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thank you mani, hana, deeya,shelly, and brainychild92 for your lovely comments

ishuu?
Edited by xobrown sugaox - 18 years ago

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