L.O.V.E. ak❤️ other 1/2 of theprt.pg. 23

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hey i'm starting a fanfic but this is just a promo type thing if you guyz like it then i will continue in the summer or whenever i have free time because exams are coming up.

This fanfic will be based on my story kind of and the main characters will be AK. I will not describe angad or kripa yet because i want to do that when they meet.
khanna family
angad khanna- best firends with shabbir, and josh..sweet and searching for his dream girl
tulsi-angads mom
mihir- angads dad
aaliya- angads older sister marrying shabbir(love marriage)
mishty khanna- angad's younger sister-in love with josh

Sharma family
kripa sharma- sanskari but dresses modern, believes in love
parveti sharma- kripa's mom
om sharma- kripa's dad


bani sharma- shabbir's mom-
jai sharma-shabbirs father- brother of om
shabbir sharma- kripa's cousin; shabbir doesn't have a sister(kripa is the closest person to him as a sister) but he has a brother, marrying aaliya (love marriage), best friends with angad
josh sharma- shabbir's bro- has feelings for mishty, best friends with angad

khanna's live in India and so does shabbirs family. kripa's family lives in NY and couldn't make it to shabbir's and aaliya's engagement because kripa is just finishing college but they are definitely coming for the wedding which is a month after the engagement. They haven't been to india in 5 years. Kripa's family has only seen a pic of aaliya but doesn't know anything about her family.Josh is in New York doing extra classes on computer science, unlike kripa's family he knows aaliya's family because they were family friends. Since josh has been in NY he has not mentioned aaliya's family and kripa's family also doesn't know that josh knows so much about aaliya's family.Kripa has never heard of angad or angad of kripa.
Every family has a great status and are loaded with money.


At sharma house in India
Everyone in the house is either trying to get ready or is working on the preparations for aaliya and shabbir's engagement.
B: Shabbir jaldi karo, samdhi ji aabhi aate hi hoge aur itne sare kam aabhi bhi baakhi hai
Sh: yes mom
Jai walks in: kya bani bache ko tayyar hone do aur tum relax karo, sab preparations ho chuki hai
*******************************************
Everything is ready and the sharma family is waiting for the Khanna's to arrive. All the guests are already there
A very loving family walks in. Tulsi and Mihir followed by
Angad, mishty, and aaliya.
B: wow aaliya beta ure looking gorgeous
Shabbirs just staring at aaliya.
Aaliya walks up to him and they are sitting in the bride and groom's chairs.
Mihir: sab log a chuke hai to aab inki saagai kar de?
Jai: ji anghutiya (can't speak or spell hindi for my life)la do aur ek doosre ko pehna do

The engagement takes place. Everyone is celebrating and before you know it everyone is gone, only the sharma's and khanna's remain.

Bani brings out a family album to show aaliya who everyone is.
One by one bani tells aaliya who everyone is. They get to a picture of a girl and and shabbir tells aaliya who it is.
S: aur ye hai meri pyaari si chotti behen, kripa. pata nahin aabhi vo kya kar rahi hogi.
The scene shifts to New York

NY:
A girl dressed in cute pajama pants and a a hollister top wakes up and takes off her gucci eye patch. She stratches her arms and yawns.She gets up goes to get ready. She comes out of the bathroom and puts on a hollister baby tee and a miny skirt and does her make up and heads downstairs.

Parveti: chalo jaldi kar aur josh ko bhi utta (josh came to do extra courses in NY and will go back to india with kripa's family)

K: ji mama
She goes to wake up josh.
K: josh bhaiyya chaliye uthiye, aap ka niche intezaar ho raha hai.
J: tu mujhe sone de aaj college ka aakhri din hai tere liye lekin mujhe to sone de
K: if u don't get up i'll pour water on you and this time it won't be warm it will be ice cold
J: fine, mujhe pata hai tu jo kehti hai karke dikha ti hai
K: thats like my good brother

Josh gets up gets ready and the sharma family are having breakfast downstairs.
Om: to kripa bete aaj tumhara aakri din hai college to main aur josh ke bhi classes khatam ho gaye hai soch raha tha ki kyun na hum next week hi india chale jaye aur sab ko surprise de
P: thats a good idea, kripa, josh tum log kya kehte ho??
K: oo i can't wait
J: me either

sry b/c i keep saying shabbir's family, aaliya's family, kripa's family...if anything is confusing let me know

if u like it let me know so i can try to continue soon
Promo: india in a week, will kripa and angad ever meet??

ishuu?


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Posted: 18 years ago
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17 views and no comment

😭 😭

if u don't like it let me know so i won't continue
but be honest

ishuu<33
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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey sounds gr88
continue soooon 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: Honii

hey sounds gr88
continue soooon 👏 👏



thx i'll try to continue soon
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great part
I'm soooooooooo happy that you started a ff 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: IndianCutie13

great part
I'm soooooooooo happy that you started a ff 👏



thx hopefully its as great as urs

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Originally posted by: IndianCutie13

great part
I'm soooooooooo happy that you started a ff 👏


hopefully its as great as urs

i'll try to continue today
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Kripa goes to college and comes home after a long day. She is so excited that she is going to India in a week.
************************************a week passes by and everyone is running around sharma house making sure they packed everything that they needed.
Kripa on the other hand is just watching everyone go crazy.
O: parvati tum jaldi karo na, hamari flight miss ho jayegi
P: ha ha om main sab check kar rahi hoon, kahi hum kuch bhool na jaye.
J: chachi aap chinta mat kariye aur is kamchor(pointing to kripa) ko kuch kam sopiye
K: mai kamchor, maine sab kuch check karliya hain, aur main thume aabhi dikhati hoon thume
She ran after josh. They were running around om.
O: aabhi tak bacche hi hai, bachpan main aisse hi jagadte the
P: KRIPA JOSH STOP ACTING CHILDISH AND HURRY UP!!
everyone comes to a halt.

Kripa stares at her watch.
K: omg mama hume sirf aadhe gante main plane board karna hai, chaliye. In all the chaos kripa forgets what josh said and they get in their car and head off to the airport.They board their planes.
Om and parvati are sitting together, while josh and kripa are a couple of rows ahead of them

It's a relaxing ride, except josh keeps bugging kripa every five seconds.

K: josh shut up, ure so annoying
J: mujhe neend nahi aa rahi hai, aur tum so rahi ho
K: kahi likha hai ki josh ko entertain kerke rakho, i don't think so. now chup chap so jao.

It was a long ride there, but finally josh fell asleep.

Air Hostess: please fasten ur seat belts, we are shortly going to land.

Kripa and josh shot up and put their seat belts on.
Kripa was admiring the beauty form the window.

The plane finally lands and the sharma's get their luggage and are off to sharma mansion.


now u guyz don't have to worry b/c since both the sharma families are together, it won't be as confusing 😊 😊


i know this part was boring but i'll make up for it

promo: family reunion and maybe AK meet 😃


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ishuu?
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Posted: 18 years ago
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great part and can't wait until AK meet
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Posted: 18 years ago
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AweSomE StoRYYy 👏
Do ConTInUE SoOn
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