Love At First Sight - PART 13 - PAGE 14** - Page 6

bechara laksh soo much of work at this age. i hope laksh gets better soon 😛
continue soon

nice update! cn't w8 4 the nxt 1!

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PART 10
Laksh was seen in his room un packing..with tears in his eyes..when tulsi walked in..
Laksh was facing his back towards tulsi, and couldn't see her come in..
Tulsi: naaraaz hai mujhse laksh??
Laksh quickly wiped off his tears..and turned around..
Laksh: nahi daadi..main aapse kabhi naaraaz nahi ho sakta..aapne mujhe sab kuch diya..aap hi ne meri zindagi shuroo ki thi..jab mere--
It was hard for him to continue..he broke down into tears..
Laksh: (crying) daadi..im sorry..mujhe aapko neeche aisa nahi kehna chahiye tha..(he bends down and takes her blessings)..
Tulsi: (pus a hand on his cheek) isme teri koi galti nahi hai laksh..tune galat bhi to kuch nahi bola..tune to bas yeh bola..ki tu apne baap jaisa hona chahta hai..iske allawa tunekuch nahi bola..isme galat kya bola?? bata mujhe?? aur ab rona band kar..neeche eklavya aur kt tera intzaar kar rahe hai..kahi leke jaana hai tujhe..chal..(still has her hand on his cheek)..
Laksh: (holds her hand) (crying) nahi daadi..mujhe kahi jaane ka mann nahi hai..
Tulsi: arre laksh..kahi ghoome ga to acha lage ga..apni daadi ke liye jaayega??..
Laksh: sirf aapke liye daadi..(gives a little smile, and wipes off his tears)..
Tulsi and Laksh hug..Laksh takes tulsi's blessing, and leaves with eklavya and kt..
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IN THE CAR..
Laksh is sitting with eklavya in the front..Eklavya is driving..And Kt is siting in thr back..
Eklavya is talking to laksh about where he wants to go..But Laksh dosen't reply..as he is lost in thoughts..
Eklavya stops at the signal..and shakes laksh a little bit..
Ekalvya: Laksh!! where are you lost??..(shakes him)..
Laksh: huh?? what?! um..nothing..so what were you saying..??
Eklavya: i said..where do you want to go??
Laksh: um..i don't know..you guys decide..(he once again goes to his lost position)..
Eklavya and Kt reach a resturant..Eklavya gets out of the car and so does kt..
Eklavya knocks on the window..but Laksh dosen't respond..
Eklavya opens the door..and laksh falls out..
Laksh: Oww!! Geesh!! That hurt..
Eklavya: oops!! well sorry..but you wont respond when i knocked on the window..
Laksh gets up..wiping off his jeans..
Laksh: ok..so where are we going??
Eklavya: (makes a annoyed face) Right There..(he turns laksh's face..and points in the other direction)..
Laksh: ohh..Okay..the resturant right??
Eklavya: (slaps his head)..yes laksh..now can we go..please...
Laksh: yeah..when did i say "no..don't go.."..(laughs)..
All three of them walk in the resturant..
Eklavya orders some pasta..kt orders the same as eklavya..Laksh orders some salad..
Eklavya: whats this laksh?? just salad is not going to do any good..have something else too..
Laksh: no..not that hungry right now..you guys can have as much as you want..im fine with a salad..
After they had some breakfast laksh insisted to leave for home..
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AT HOME..
Laksh straight away went to his room..and shuts his door..
Everyone watches..
Tulsi: (to eklavya) what happened to laksh??
Eklavya: i don't know..we went for breakfast, and he insisted to come back..he was lost somewhere..he didn't even respond to me or kt..i don't know what's bothering him..but im sure its very huge..
Meanwhile Bhoomi and Manthan come..
Manthan: hey eklavya, he kt..whats up??
Eklavya: nothing..
Kt: same..
Bhoomi: why do you guys have long faces?? and..where's laksh?? is he still sleeping??
Kt: no..something bothering him..something very huge..he won't even talk to us..
Manthan: how come??
Kt, Tulsi and Eklavya explain everything to Bhoomi and Manthan..
Manthan: That's strange..i've never seen him like this before..
Everyone agrees..
Manthan: I think im gonna go talk to him..(he starts walking towards laksh's room)..
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IN LAKSH'S ROOM..
Manthan: (opens the door)..Laksh?!..
Laksh is seen laying on the bed..
Manthan: (walks to laksh) Laksh?! what happened??
Laksh sits up..
Laksh: nothing..why?!
Manthan: don't lie..i know everything..common now..tell me what the problem is??
Laksh: i have no problem..
Laksh gets up and walks to the window..
Laksh: (in a pissed off voice)..why do you guys always think..there's something wrong..
Manthan: (walks to laksh, and puts his hand on his shoulder)..Because we know when you are hiding something from us..
Laksh: well there isn't anything..i just want to..i just want to stay alone for a little while..please manthan..
Manthan: that i can't do..sorry..but i won't leave until you tell me what the problem is..
Laksh: fine..well here it goes..you are so stubborn at times..
Manthan: Thats Me!! (smiles)..now tell me..
Laksh: well..the deal i was going for to Dubai..was really important..and now its ruined..
Manthan: well..what was so special about that deal anyways??
Laksh: nothing really..i was going to get a raise..so i can pay for college..since the fess for college is increasing..now i won't be able to pay it..
Manthan: That's your problem?! seriously?!
Laksh: what?! yeah..thats it!!
Manthan: Laksh?! thats so little..that could be solved like that..(he snaps)..
Laksh: how?!
Manthan: Just ask someone for money..
Laksh: No Manthan!! You know i don't like asking people for money..
Manthan: (sighs)..i know..i know..well..there is one way..
Laksh: What?!
Manthan: You could ask for money..as a loan..and then return it..that would work..
Laksh: Hey..you're right..thanks Manthan..but who??
Manthan: anyone..me..bhoomi..eklavya..your daadi..anyone in the house..even kt..
Laksh: yeah..but i can't ask kt for money..long story..dont ask..
Manthan: ok!! so you happy now..lets go..we're going to..hey! where are we going?? i don't really know..hmm..well..lets go ask bhoomi..she makde the plan..
Laksh: (laughs)..ahahahha manthan..you don't even know where we're going..and--
Manthan: o whatever laksh..are you coming or not..because im gonna leave you here..
Laksh: im coming..im coming..(laughs)..
They both exit the room..
Eklavya: What?! he talked to you?? and not us?? how rood..hmph..
Everyone laughs..and so does eklavya..
Bhoomi: now common guys..lets go..
Laksh, Eklavya, Kt, Manthan: (at the same time)..but where are we going bhoomi?!
Bhoomi: omg you guys..you just junxed each other..hahaha..anyways..you'll see..lets go..
Everyone follows Bhoomi out the door..
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READ..IMPORTANT:
HI GUYS..I KNOW THIS IS VERY VERY VERY SHORT..BUT SORRY..I DIDN'T UPDATE FOR SO LONG..SO YEAH!! BUT THERE'S A BAD NEWS!! I WON'T BE ABLE TO UPDATE UNTIL JUNE 3, 2007..AS IM REALLY BUSY!! SORRY GUYS!! HOPE YOU UNDERSTAND!! PLEASE REPLY.. 😳
THANKS!! 😉
LEAVING LOVE,
ZINU
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ohhhhh this was amazing and it's ok we nunderstand...

❤️Love Ya❤️

👏 Do continue soon. Laksh talked to manthan, but not me. How Rude! Me no like laksh. He's meanie.

nice update 👏 👏 👏
cont soon 😊

hey no matter what.....how long or short it is.....I don't care...but it was an awesome part do ocntinue soon...it was a sweet part!!

as usual i'am not going to comment some thing new 😆 😆 😆 --gr8 fanfic......continue soon. 😳

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PART 11
Bhoomi and everyone else is in the car. Bhoomi is driving.
IN THE CAR..
Laksh was sitting in the back with Manthan and Kt..and Eklavya was in the front.
Laksh: Bhoomi..where are we going??
Bhoomi: i told you..its a surprize..forgot??
Laksh: fine..don't tell..um so..atleast tell how long it will take us to get there..
Bhoomi: i dont know like 5 hours..
Everyone: (at the same time) (yells) WHAT?!!?!!?!!?!!
Laksh: you've got to be kidding..i dont wanna sit in a car for these long 5 hours..what are we going to?? some anothercity or sumthing??
Bhoomi: relax guys..dont worry..
Everyone Moans..and Whines..
After 2 and a half hours..
Laksh was feeling sleepy..everyone was bored..
Laksh: (in a tired voice) Bhoomi..like did you have to tell us its that long..first of all..why are we going there anyways..and where are we going??
Bhoomi: chill laksh..you'll see..
Laksh moans..and whines..
Laksh falls asleep after 1 hour, and kt falls asleep on laksh's shoulder..Laksh dosen't notice..
Manthan meanwhile falls asleep on the seat..Eklavya is still up..but is tired..
Eklavya: (looks back) o great!! everyone's a sleep..now what will you do..Bhoomi!!
Bhoomi: wake them up when we get there..duh!!
Eklavya: whatever! im sleeping too..
Everyone goes to sleep..and bhoomi is still driving..
After 3 hours..they reach there..Bhoomi stops the car, and sees everyone sleeping..
Bhoomi: (to eklavya) (shakes him) Eklavya..wake up..(shakes him)..
Eklavya: huh? what?! were here??
Bhoomi: yeah..now help me wake those three up..
Eklavya: fine..
Eklavya goes to manthan..and Bhoomi goes to laksh and kt..
Eklavya: Manthan..wake up..were here..(shakes him really hard)..
Manthan: mmm...let me sleep..gawd!1 wake me up when were there..
Eklavya: we are there now wake up..(shakes him)..
Manthan opens his eyes..
Manthan: oh! finally!!
Bhoomi: Laksh..Laksh..Kt..wake up you two..gawd..you sleep so much..
Bhoomi starts shaking them really hard, and kt wakes up in a gasp..she notices herself sleeping on laksh, and quickly gets up..and gets out of the car..
Meanwhile laksh starts smiling..
Bhoomi notices that..
Bhoomi: (to kt) why is he smiling?? is he up?? if hes acting to sleep..ill kill him..
Bhoomi starts shaking laksh so hard..he smiles even more..
Bhoomi: (slaps him) laksh wake up..righr now!!
Laksh: (opens his eyes) (touches his cheek) owww!!!! ok..that hurt..i was having such a nice dream..gawd..oooowwwww
Bhoomi: well sorry..you wouldn't get up..so i had no other way..anyways..were here..
Laksh: were here..oh finally!!..(he jumps out of the car)..
Everyone turns around, and looks st the view..
Bhoomi: so guys?? suprized??
Laksh: no..
Bhomi: (shocked) what?!
Laksh: seriously..where are we?? you took 5 hours..5 HOURS..to come to a--
Eklavya: BEACH!!!
Bhoomi: yeah..why?? any problem..
Manthan, Laksh: DUH!!!!
Laksh: its startin to sunset..what are we going to do now?? look at the moonlight..in like what..about 1 hour..
Manthan: bhoomi..laksh is right..we should start heading back..look at the sinset..its going to be night soon..
Bhoomi: nope..i booked it for 1 whole day..so we can stay here..
Laksh: (mummers) another problem..
Bhoomi: what other problem..
Laksh: we dont have clothes..im not sleeping in my jeans..and if were here to swim..where are our swim suits..
Bhoomi: (slaps her head) oh shoot!! forgot about that..
Everyone moans and whines..
Kt: well the whole plan is ruined..lets head back home..
Eklavya: ill drive..
Everyone sits back in the car..Bhoomi hands the keys to Eklavya..
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Everyone reaches home at 9:00 p.m. at night..
Manthan and Bhoomi go to their homes..and Eklavya, Laksh, and Kt come to SN..
They all enter the living room..
Laksh: Oh god!! im so tired..
Eklavya: me too..
Kt: yah..same here..
Tulsi: so where did you guys go..
Laksh looks at eklavya(means he wants eklavya to answer😆)
Eklavya looks at Kt..
Kt looks confuzed..
Kt: uh..well..um..bhoomi took us to a far away beach..it took 5 hours to get there..and then she said were going to stay till tomorrow morning..and then laksh said that..he dosent have swim suits, and neither did any of us..so we came back..
Tulsi: oh i see..well..come eat dinner..
Laksh: yes..im starving..
Eklavya: me too..
Kt nods and says "me too.."
Everyone has dinner, and laksh rushes up to his room..since he was very happy..
Everyone else when into their rooms..and went to sleep..
Laksh was sleeping with a big smile on his face..
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NEXT MORNING..
Laksh woke up earlier than Eklavya and Kt..he went down and has his breakfast..
Later..he went to baa's room..
IN BAA'S ROOM..
Laksh: (from the door) Baa..??
Baa: arre mera kisna aa gaya..
Laksh walks in and takes blessings from her..
He sits beside her on the bed..
Baa: kya baat hai..tu itna khush nazar aa raha hai aaj..koi ladki mil gayi kya??
Laksh: (frowns) aap ko yaad nahi??
Baa: kya yaad nahi..
Laksh: im joking my sweet baa..haan koi mili to hai..(smiles)..
Baa: sach..kaun..
Laksh: hmm..woh main aapko baad mein bataonga..
Baa: achaa theek hai laksh beta..tune breakfast kar liya??
Laksh: yes baa..ok..baa..main chalta hoon..mujhe kahin jaana hai..
Baa: kahan??
Laksh: Baa..
Baa: (laughs) acha acha..chal jaa..
Laksh sweetly smiles and leaves..
Baa: Kisna ki radha kaun hogi?? pata karna padega..(smiles)..
Meanwhile Kt comes in..
Kt: baa..aapne laksh ko kahi..
Baa: haan..abhi abhi to yaha tha..tujhe mila nahi?? abhi to bahar gaya..
Kt: nahi mujhe to nahi mila..shukriya baa[thanks baa]..main chalti hoon..
She takes her blessings, and leaves..
Baa: hmm..kahi mere kisna ki radha yeh to nahi..bahut pyaari ladki hai..Kt..bahut pyaara naam hai..
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IN THE EVENING..
Laksh was seen in his room..sitting on his chair near the window..sad..his face frowned..and tears in his eyes..
Kt walks in..happily..smiling..
Kt: Laksh..(she walks to him)..Laksh..why are you crying..
Laksh quickly wipes off his tears, and shows a fake smile..
Laksh: nothing..there was something in my eye..anyways..you needed anything??
Kt: um..no..but..everyone wants to meet you..they're downstairs..
Laksh: ok..come..lets go..
They both walk downstairs..
DOWNSTAIRS..
He sees everyone smiling at him..
Laksh: uh...is everyone ok?? why are you smiling??
Baa walks to him..and gives him a present..He bends down to her..
Baa: (happily) Happy Birthday Kisna!!..(smiles)..
Laksh: (his face filled with happiness)..thank-you baa..you remembered..(smiles)..
Tulsi steps forward..
Tulsi: Happy Birthday Laksh!! May you have every happiness in the world!..(she hands him a present)..
Laksh: Thanks you daadi..(he takes her blessings)..
Eklavya: Happy Birthday Laksh!!..(he gives him his present, and higs him)..
Like that everyone else in the house give him presents, and wish him..
But kt is left..Everyone Leaves..
Kt: Happy Birthday Laksh!! Hope all of your wishes come true!!..(smiles)..
Laksh: Thanks Kt..(smiles)..
Kt hugs laksh..laksh hugs her back..
Kt: um..here..your present..its little..sorry!!
Laksh: kt..a present dosen't need to be little..i dont need this..because my present is our friendship..
They both smile..
Laksh: ok..omg..kt..
Kt: yeah??
Laksh: can you help me take these big presents to my room..
Kt: sure..
Laksh: thanks..
They both take the presents to laksh's room..while eklavya comes in..
Eklavya: laksh..kt..you both get ready..i organized a party..come lets go..hurry up..
Laksh: but there was no need for that though..
Eklavya: yes there was..now dont argue..its your birthday..common get ready..(smiles)..
Laksh: ok..
Kt: ill go now..
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So Guys, Tell me how it was..huh?? Please Reply. 😆 Thanks!! 😊
Love,
Zinu
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I can't wait to know if laksh was sad because of everyone forgot his birthday or it was something else. 👏 👏 👏 For some reason all your FFs are addictive to me.
What kind of formulas do you use in your FF anyways?? 😕
It was awesome as usual.