Love At First Sight - PART 13 - PAGE 14** - Page 10

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Posted: 18 years ago
#91
OMG!! Happy Birthday Uru. May all your wishes come true.
And, Zinu, Congractulations on being the MOTW. And, please continue soon 😉
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Posted: 18 years ago
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PART 13
Laksh sat on his bed wiping off his wet face.
Kt went in the washroom, and washed off her hands..and came out..
K: Laksh..is it fun to celebrate your birthday like this..hahaha..
L: no..
K: hahaha...i'll get some more icing..hehehe..
She starts to leave but laksh gets up, and holds kt's hands..
He pulls her near himself..
L: more icing huh?? try to go..
K: Laksh..please..let go naa..please laksh..
L: nope..
Kt struggles, but can't get out of laksh's grip..
L: omg..can't you be a little more stronger..i'll get tired of holding you like this..
K: ok..here's an idea..LET GO..Pleaseeeee....
L: that i can't do..
Kt tries to leave but laksh dosen't let her..and pulls her even more closer..
They both look into each other's eyes..
The time passes by...and everyone wonders where the birthday boy is..[skipping the party😆]
Meanwhile pari and archita come looking for laksh..
P: (enters laksh's room) oohh!! so here you are..
L: (comes out of his day dreaming position) huh??
K: (also comes out of her day dreaming position)..huh??
Pari and Archita giggle..
A: so what were you guys doing in here alone?? we were all waiting..
Laksh lets go of Kt's hands..
L: (shyly) umm..you ask kt..
He leaves in embarassement..
P: (whispers to archita)..lagta hai ki..inke beech mein kuch kuch hota hai..
They both giggle, and leave..
Kt stands there in embarassement..and then leaves..
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AFTER THE PARTY..
Laksh was seen in his room, opening his presents..
Kt and Eklavya were with him..
E: open mine..
L: okay..
He opens it and finds a shirt..
L: thanks eklavya..its nice!!
E: yeah!! i know..anyways..im going to get some sleep..bye!!
L: bye.
E: happy birthday once again..
L: thanks..good night..
Eklavya leaves..
Now its only Laksh and Kt left..
AFTER 20 MINUTES..
Laksh opened all the presents..but is still searching for more..looking confuzed..
K: what's wrong laksh?? you look so confuzed..
L: i can't find your present..i had it right here..
Kt had hidden it, since she thought it was too little, and bad..
Laksh got up, and looked around..
L: ah!! here it is..
He picks it up, from behind kt..
L: here!!
Laksh starts unwrapping the gift paper..
Laksh's eyes widen, and he has a big smile on his face!!
L: OMG!! thanks so much kt..its great!!
He hugs her..
K: really?? i thought you wouldn't like it!!
L: are you kidding?? this is the best gift ever..i mean not one, but two wonderful things..thanks..
K: you're welcome..
Laksh goes up to his bed side table, and keeps both his gifts on it..
Kt had given him, the watch he was looking at in the mall, and a sweet little, Lord RadhaKrishna Idol😊
K: Laksh..
L: hmm...
K: did you have fun today??
L: i guess..
K: i guess?? you didn't have fun??
L: no..i mean yes..i mean..i don't know..it was fine..
K: fine?? but eklavya put a lot of effort organizing the party for you.. you're hiding something..
L: its nothing..
K: there is something..
L: no..its nothing..i enjoyed a lot!!
K: tell me the truth laksh. please..i know you're lying..
L: well..since all these years, all of this family, has given me so much love, but i feel....
K: feel what??
Tears drop down from Laksh's eyes..
K: feel what laksh?? please tell me..
L: i feel that..im a burden on them..as if they HAVE to take care of me..they HAD to take care of me..i just..i just can't tolerate it..i can't see myself having all the love, from them..and all i can do is smile back at them..and take their blessings, i feel..as if..i'm lost..i'm alone..all this love had to be given to me..just becuase my parents died, when i was born..(he starts to cry a little)..
K: Laksh..(she keeps her hand on his shoulders)..i understand how you feel..but..please don't cry..it's your birthday..come on..cheer up!!..please..look laksh..i understand that you miss your parents..but i agree that i haven't missed my parents that much..
L: what do you mean??
K: i mean that..i had the support of my parents, until i was 5..they were with me for 5 years..but you..you only saw them through a picture..but Laksh..there is also one thing..when your parents died, no one knew that that was going to happen, your parents never told this family to take care of you..when they found out that your parents aren't in the world anymore..they had two choices..they could have abandoned you..or they could have kept you..and they did keep you..your parents were nice hearted person's laksh..that's why they had a close realationship in this family..and all the love this family has towards you..is true love..not that they have to show it to you on purpose..if they did..they would never love you so much..to surprize you on your birthday's and stuff like that..so please laksh..not for me..but for your parents, and this family..please cheer up..pplleeaasseeeee..
L: thanks kt..the way you explained this to me..was really incredible. you are a true friend. thanks.
K: no thanks or sorry's in friendship..as you said..
Laksh sweetly hugged kt, and kt hugged him back..
They both were crying..they pulled out, and wiped off each other's tears..and smiled at eachother sweetly..
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SO guys..here's my next part..sorry i took a month to update..really sorry..please forgive me..sorry for the long delay..hope you like it..please reply.. 😆
Thanks!! 😊
Love,
Zinu
😳
Edited by Zinu29 - 18 years ago
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Posted: 18 years ago
#93
awww dont worry
we all understand that everyone has commitments with other things
great part as usual
thanks for updating
continue whenever you get the time...i know you have a lot of other fanfics a school to deal with so no pressure

-Nisha❤️
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Posted: 18 years ago
#94
^^ aww thanks for understanding, and being so sweet Nisha<3 😳 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
#95

Originally posted by: Zinu29

^^ aww thanks for understanding, and being so sweet Nisha<3 😳 👏

aww don't worry about it😊

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Posted: 18 years ago
#96

Originally posted by: Zinu29

Hi Everyone!! Before I Continue My Part. I want to share a very special occasion today.👏

It's our very own Uru_Hershey/Uru's Birthday Today. YAYYYYYYY!!!!👏

So Everyone Please Wish Her A Happy Birthday!!😳

She Will Love It!!😛

~~HAPPY BIRTHDAY URU~~

🥳

Love You Always<3

Zinu😳

Thank you soo much. I love you.... Muah! Muah! Loves and Kisses from your Girl Friend.😆

Originally posted by: nisha921

awwww....HAPPY BIRTHDAY URVASHI!!🥳🥳🥳
wish you many many happy wishes of the day...🥳🥳
HOPE YOU HAVE A GREAT ONE!!🥳🥳🥳

-Nisha❤️

Originally posted by: hIra_89

Happy Birthday Uru 🥳
Many Many Happy Rateurns Of The Day 😛

Originally posted by: ktandlakshyalov

HAPPY BIRTHDAY URUVASHI 🥳 🥳 🥳 .hope u have a gr8 day.
many many more happy returns of the day 😳 .n keep writting ur awesome ff 😊 😉 .
-abhi

Originally posted by: saira_1

hav a happy bday!🥳n congratz to zinu!

Originally posted by: live_life

happpppppppppy birthday uru
may this be the happiest day of ur life
n keep rockin the ffs
-simi

Originally posted by: Zinu29

thanks saira. HAPPY B'DAY URU MY SWEET SIS😳👏

Originally posted by: **@liy@**

haPPy BdAy URU!! 😳 🥳
MAY U HAV MANY MANY MORE!! 😳 🥳
love,aliya 😳

Originally posted by: LakshFan#1

OMG!! Happy Birthday Uru. May all your wishes come true.
And, Zinu, Congractulations on being the MOTW. And, please continue soon 😉

CONGRATULATIONS AND CELEBRATIONS AND NA NA NNNAAA!!![I forgot the rest againg, sorry] he he. You are soo special.👏

Thank you soo much guys. I love you and I love you more and I just forgot the grammar to write that I love you guys the best.😆

Well to tell you the truth, to quote all you guys took me forever to do it.😆

I love you and I love myself. I was never felt so special before in my life.😳 You guys are the best "peeps" on earth.😆

Love,

Uru

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Posted: 18 years ago
#97
Ohh.. I just forgot to comment. I loved your part as usual. And it's okay because you you updated afetr a long time, life is all about ups and downs, and love and war, and lots more. 😆 Awesome part. Your kt's explanation was really touchy. So emotional,[not in a cartoonish way] 😆
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Posted: 18 years ago
#98
Thanks Uru, and everyone else for your comments. But i need an updated for this week, to continue my ff..
I've already got one. Simi [ live_life ] is geing to be updating this ff for this week. But, she needs one more person to help her. So please if anyone could, it would be really greatful, to her and me..thanks 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
#99
amazing part zinu!! 👏 👏 continue sooN!!plss!! 😛
zinny.xo thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
thanks for ur sweet comments guys..ill continue as soon as possible 😊

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