Dilwale Dulhaniya Le Jayenge LK pt1 2 pg2

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Posted: 18 years ago
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hey guys,

I am really new to this forum. I just joined at 1 january 2007. so I will write a fanfiction on laksh and kt. Well laksh and kt are the main roles but the people in my story are:-

Mouni Roy - Krishna Tulsi[KT] a cute, charming, and intelligent police officer.

Pulkit Samrat - Laksh Virani a handsome, intelligent and brave police officer.

Amit Tandon - Manthan Virani a man who always uses his dad's money, and keeps on hurting people for no reason.

Urvashi Dholakia - Piya Mehta a girl who loves money, and can do anything for money, and officially a drug dealer.

Ronit Roy - Mihir Virani a person who never falls behind in truth, and loves his wife tulsi.

Smriti Irani - Tulsi Virani a person who believe in thakurji[bhagavan], and loves her husband and family a lot.

Dolly Sohi - Tripti Virani A person who always wants money and makes secret plans with someone.

so here is my introduction friends! I will write my first part tomorrow, first thing in the morning!

do leave comments, and any critisizing allowed.

Love,

Uru😃

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Posted: 18 years ago
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Great intro continue soon
👏 👏 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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I will write one up at night.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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Oh guys i just forgot to give you the location of the story.
it's going to start at haridwar then maumbai and as i write more i will add more interesting locations spots.
It's a happy and a sad love story about kt and laksh. they are the main roles in this story.
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Posted: 18 years ago
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sounds gr8
start soon 😛
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Posted: 18 years ago
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wow love it put up the first part 😃
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Posted: 18 years ago
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good job intronducing the story to uss 👏
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Posted: 18 years ago
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cool cant wait for the first part!
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Posted: 18 years ago
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part1.

Kt was in the college and she was working on the art project with laksh. Kt didn't know laksh that well, neither did laksh. They were strangers to each other. Laksh went up to kt and raised his hand and said Mujse dosti karogi?
K: umm.. Sochna padega. Tum jaise ladke se dosti karneke baad ladkiyaan bohot pachtati hai. HMPH!!!
kt stoms off to another class. She was sitting alone thinking about the project and how is she going to get a good grade on it. Laksh comes upto her and sits beside her. Kt took a deep breath. L: kya hua?
K: kuch nahi.
L: toh phir do you ant to come over to my house so that we can work together?
K: sure. [she had no other option to get a good grade except work with him.] L: YES! [he whispered]
K: kya hua? maine sirf haan kaha hai, naa bhi keh sakti hoon. You can never believe me.
L: kuch nahi tum bas mere saath work karna hai. isse zyada aur kuch nahi karna hoga.
K: ok I will be at your house at 7:00
L: itna late!
K: kyun kya hua?
L: after college nahi aa sakti?
K: woh.. woh mai.. laksh mujhe duty pe jaana hai.
L: kisski duty? kaunsi duty? kaise duty?
K: tum sawaal kitne puchte ho. I am a police officer and I have duty anytime sir wants.
L: WOW! Even i am a police officer. But i don't have duty today. I never saw you before.
K: mai toh tumhe roz dekhti hoon. Ladkiyon ke saath.
L: achcha woh sab chodo. 7:00 will be fine for me.
They both went back to whatever they were doing.
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Kt went to laksh's house. She rang the doorbell. Tulsi opens it and kt says namaste etc etc.
K:umm.. mai laksh se milne uhh..
T: achhcha samaj gayi. LAKSH! TUMSE MILNE KOI AAYA HAI!
L: aaya dadi.
Laksh takes kt to his room.
K: nice room. By the way I got you this present.
L: thanks for the compliment, and what present?
Kt gives him a file of important papers that he forgot in the police station yesterday.
L: you call this a present?
K: pata hai agar kissie aur ke haath lag jaate toh samjo tum to mar gaye.
L: ohhh.. haan. yaad aaya. all those documets and things
K: yah yah I find this a present, what about you?
L: thanks kt.
K: you are welcome.
They both started working on their project.
L: vaise kt tumne mujhe nahin bataaya ki tumhare mom and dad kaun hai?
L: maine tumhe apni baare sab bataa diya hai.
Kt takes a deep breath. K: dekho laksh mujhe iss topic pe baat nahi karni and all my friends know that
I don't like talking about them. Tumne mujhse poocha hi hai toh bataa deti hoon. They are not in this world anymore. and from now on i dont want to talk about them.
After saying that last sentence kt couldn't control her tears. She hated to cry in front of anyone. She went away after saying that last sentence.
Laksh felt a bit bad too. He thought that he shouldn't have asked that question to kt.
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How was it? Do comment. I know it's been a long time but i was like having exams so was really distracted from this ff.
Love,
Uru
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Posted: 18 years ago
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part-2
recap:-After saying that last sentence kt couldn't control her tears. She hated to cry in front of anyone. She went away after saying that last sentence.
Laksh felt a bit bad too. He thought that he shouldn't have asked that question to kt.
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next day at the college.
Laksh was looking for kt. Kt thought to herself that she shouldn't have left laksh like this last night. Dhe was ashamed of her behaviour. When she gets to the college, she sees laksh standing there all alone. She maybe said to herself that she should apologise to him.
She goes near laksh.
K: laksh i am really sorry about last night. I knowi shouldn't have reacted like this. and anyways that was my past. we have to live in present.
L: NO NO NO KT! It was my faut that i asked you that stupid quesion. Chalo jo hua usse bhula deke achche dost ki tarah baat karte hai. Mukjse dosti karogi.
Laksh raises his hand to kt.
Kt gives her hand to him and says sure.
L: toh joh past me hua usse bhool kar aaj kya hum project pe work kar sakte hai?
Kt gives him a little smile. Laksh took that as a yes.
L: i hope hamara stupid boss aaj humme police station nahi bulaye ga. I don't think you have duty to cover today. do you?
K: actually tumhari soch bohot hi gandi hai. nahi woh stupid hai aur nahi...
Laksh interupts: ok baba. tum ladkiyaan bhi na.
After they both had a class to go to. They can't sit together in that class because the teacher didn't like a girl and a guy sitting together. The teacher was collecting assignments that she gave them a week ago, and if they didn't do it they have to do it 5 times in 2 days. Laksh looks in his binder but really can't find it. He knew he did it but where did it go? Kt took hers out and was almost going to hand it in but she forgot to name her assignment she said she needs a minute. the teacher went ahead. She looked at laksh with a shock when she found out that he didn't have his work. She knew that it would take a lot of effort to do the work again 5 times in 2 days. She didn't care about herself but she gave her assignment to laksh and says that she did it twice. so that he accepts it. She knew it would be a lie but he was more than a best friend to her. The teacher collected laksh's work that kt gave it to him but when teacher found out that kt was lieing to him he said to do the assignment 6 times in 2 days.
Kt wispered to herself: OH GOD! YEH MAINE KYA KIYA? AB MUJHE 6 BAAR KARNA HOGA. WOH BHI 2 DIM ME!!! i CAN'T BELIEVE IT!
The teacher was a bit strict and she even insulted kt by saying her name in front of the whoe class. Everyone stared at kt.
KT whispered to herself: OH GOD! NOW WHAT DID I DO?
Laksh was shocked too that she lied to him. He was really angry with her. L: why would she do that? For me? For a friend? ya phir... kuch aur???
They both leave the class. The college ended.
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After school kt was in the library.[obviously doing her work] Laksh didn't need to go looking for kt because he knew where she should be. He went straight to the libray and saw kt going crazy with her work.
Lakh takes a deep breath and goes and sits with kt. Kt knew that her friendship will be dead today. because of what she did. She actually LIED! she never lied to her friends before. Why did she do this for her best friend?
Laksh stares at kt with angry eyes which made kt really scared of laksh.
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Bye bye guys. I want to continue tomorrow!
Love,
Uru

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