With Love from DK to AA P53 Part - 2 Pg70 - Page 44

oh my, this is fantastic piece of work. just great, filled with emotion and love. aww, this is just great autumnleaf di. great work. cont soon 👏

Autumnji!!! 🤗 You're too good!

Its soooo good to be back and to be reading your beautiful narrations again!

I can't wait for the continuation...but of course, will wait ever so patiently (ok...thodi besabri se... 😃).

Love,
~Payal

Autumn you are damnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnnn gooooooooood!!!!!!!!! Humse ab aur intezaar nahi hota, so continue. 😃

Zareen.

For you Mishti, sharna, Payal, Kashish, Maria, Zareen...... and every bhootni whose name I don't mention, but who keep coming back and encourage me to keep going.... Here is it is dedicateed to you all......

Part 31......................

Dev stops by her bedside and crouches low till his face reaches hers and lightly kisses her cheek. Gently.... He touches her cheek and reassures himself by feeling her warm skin and closes his eyes tightly and finally a drop escapes from his eyes...... It falls on her cheek and she feels it even in her unconscious state..... A slight flicker of her eyes a mere flutter and then same quiet.....

Dev wipes his tears and sits at her bedside holding her hand gently in his and brings them close to his lips and prays to her Gannubhaiya. Desparately prays asking him once again to grant him his life.... his Kaajjal..... He closes his eyes when suddenly the monitor starts beeping furiously and his eyes fly open startled to stare at the shrieking machine. Kaajjal starts shivering and that brings his breath to a standstill. He rushes outside and yells "Doctor..." and in a flash a whole team comes inside while he waits at the foot of the bed his jaw muscle beating furiously and those line marring his handsome features.... His teeth gritting and grinding, wishing it were Karan's bones.... that he was grinding. He promises himself, he will break every bone in that demon's body....... He then asks the doctor "Please is everything okay? Answer me dammit..." The doctor calms him and takes him outside. "please Mr. Dev Pratap Singh, she has been operated, there is injury to the head, now it does take time to heal and then you must not forget the heavy sedation..the trauma... Physically I can assure you she is fine, but recuperation takes time. you have to be patient...." He then recollects himself and thanks the doctor, asking for permission if he could stay with her at all times. The doctor grants him and leaves. NB and Adi walk up to Dev and both try to dissuade him from staying saying that he requires rest. but Dev is adamant. He shakes his head and without a word goes into the room where she lies like a china doll, full of life but simply breathing and not speaking...

"Utho Kaajjal, tumhe aaj meri khaatir uthna hoga... Aaj tumhe mere liye ye karna hoga...." She is panting andf breathing hard, while Dev is taking her in his arms and yelling "Kaajjal, na na , tum myjhe chod ke nahin jaa sakti...Kaajjal.. breathe dammit, say something...." She weakly speaks, "Dev, dekho, mom aa gayi. woh kitni khush hain, lekin aankhon mein aansoon bhi hain, kyun ki mein tumhe chod unki seva karne jaa rahi hoon......" Dev yells "Kaajjal dammit, listen to me. I need you. do you hear me. I can't live without you. suna tumne.. You know my anger... I shall be very angry kaajjal..." She softly smiles and says "Mere..nakhrewaale...raajkumaar....itnaa..gussaa........acc. .ccchhha nahin hain...." she is speaking with great difficulty while the doctors are all trying their best, but she breathes one last time and screams "Dev take me in your arms.. Dev.. I have to go... Dev......" He is earnestly crying now "Kaajjal please, please kaajjal mujhe mat chodo, please Kaajjal... Kaajjal...KAAJJAL...." He screams as she goes limp with her eyes open and a soft smile on her face... As she had dreamed once during his mahadashaa times... she will die in his arms suhaagan.......

Suddenly he wakes up to find the same monitor constantly beeping and he is lying there with his head next to her waist and he quickly reaches and touches her still warm skin....... and heaves a sigh clsing his eyes shut for the awful nightmare that he just saw...... He wipes his forehead and kisses her cheek again and silently prays "Please jaldi theek ho jao kaajjal...please.......I love you Kaajjal ......"

Preview : Kaajjal calls out to Dev.......😳

Sorry bhootnis to scare you all yet again. But I thought kuch to spice honi chahiye na? 😃 Sholly..... But then always remember, DK in my FF are immortal.....😳

Autumn today u hv decided to scare all your little bhootnis kyaa 😡 😭 😳 ...haii I was about to get a minor heart attack when I reached that part where u wrote kaajjal told dev to take her in his arms as she wants to die in his arms 😭 😭 ..but thank god u hv not ended it there and continued further giving us the all important information that it was just a nightmare of dev which will never come true because our very own LOVE GURU is writing this superb Script 😃 ..truely amazing piece of narration Autumn 👏

Autumn, you just scared me in the beginning, but thank God, Kaajjal is sehi salaamat!!!!By the way, it was simply awesome and incredible!!!! Continue soon. 😃

Zareen. 😊

Originally posted by: jyoti06

Autumn today u hv decided to scare all your little bhootnis kyaa 😡 😭 😳 ...haii I was about to get a minor heart attack when I reached that part where u wrote kaajjal told dev to take her in his arms as she wants to die in his arms 😭 😭 ..but thank god u hv not ended it there and continued further giving us the all important information that it was just a nightmare of dev which will never come true because our very own LOVE GURU is writing this superb Script 😃 ..truely amazing piece of narration Autumn 👏

Sholly to pehle se hi bol diya. Hamka maafi de do....😆

But somehow I was in that teaser mood to make everyone sit up straight with fright and then ease the tension... Sorrrrrrryyyy dear mishti... 😛😉😃

Peace and here I go to complete my third FF....... Ahem...some scintillation there, promise no more scares....😳

Originally posted by: autumnleaf

Sholly to pehle se hi bol diya. Hamka maafi de do....😆

But somehow I was in that teaser mood to make everyone sit up straight with fright and then ease the tension... Sorrrrrrryyyy dear mishti... 😛😉😃

Peace and here I go to complete my third FF....... Ahem...some scintillation there, promise no more scares....😳

Autumn sometimes a bit of scare is good,to get the bhootnis pumped up for some real action😉😛...otherwise during weekend all we do is fainting and drooling😆😳