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Posted: 18 years ago

Okay bhootnis...some scintillation for you all in this gloomy and sad times...

Sharmii stop your crying girl and get cracking with your whacky one-liners......😊

Kaj I want to see you like this 🤣 and not like this 😡😭😕

Sammy stop saying goodbye....😃

And all the other bhootnis who like me are feeling the pain and torment.....😊

Part 32 : Love is forever......................😳

Kaajjal opens her eyes to find herself alone in the room with monitors beeping and an IV attached to her wrist. She breathes in a little sharply and whispers "Dev.... Dev....." The nurse is alerted and rushes out to call the doctor who reaches there hot on the heels of Dev... The doctor examines her and is satisfied and gives an encouraging nod to dev who looks relieved. the doctor and nurses leave them alone. He looks tired and hagard but his eyes have the relief and love shining in them. He sits by her side and bends down towards her softly kissing her cheek and whispers throgh a thick voice masquerading his tears behind closed lids "Kaajjal, tumhe kuch nahin ho sakta tha...kuch nahin. Meri Kaajjal ko mujhse maut bhi nahin cheen sakti..." The vengeance in his tone makes her smile gently and she raises her hand to run it through his thick and shiny hair. She pushes that errant lock of hair behind and says "Paagal...mera paagal par pyaara sa nakchadaa raajkumaar......" He laughs gently all the tension relieved and she kisses him softly on his surprised lips and the only sounds that some from the room are that of the beeping of the monitors and sof hushed whimpers and husky and raspy tones of unspoken words.........

Scene Change : A leap of 2 months

Kaajjal declared hale and hearty and back to her normal routine life. She misses Dev as he had to travel to London to sign for the merger thing and establish his dream firm of Radicity in London. But she welcomes theit daily routine nightly chats where he never misses out on making love to her with his magical barritone voice. he has followed up with every report and kept in touch with Aditya and NB who are on everybody's encouragement started seeing each toher on a regular basis getting to know each other better than before. NB had already filed divoce papaers and Karan had ben nabbed and sentenced to life improsonment on attempt of murder..... He had given up and signed NB divorce papers. Ameesha was sent to the hospital for the mentally disturbed....... Veer was enjoying the freedom and started showing his true feathers of being an able businessman. He also shared a good healthy relationship with his now close friend - Sonia Garewal.......😉😉😆

"Kaajjal, kahan ho tum?" NB calls out to her and here she is just out from her bath. she has donned that red saree again and she looks beautiful. she answers NB"I am here bhabhi." NB goes to her and says "Hmmmm, aaj to bahut hi khoobsurat lag rahi ho. Kya baat hain... oh...main to bhool hi gayi...aaj to devarji ka janamdin jo hain..." But she looks sad as Dev is not here. They were not sur whether his flight would be on time or not for him to be here before the day got over..... But Kaajjal was sure. She was confident Dev ws upto something and didn't want to take chances.....And then she had her very own surprise planned....😳

Dev reaches the airport and is desparate to hear her voice so calls her from his cell. Just as she says "Hello..." an general announcement is made to welcome the passengers of a flight that has arrived from London.... so tongue in cheek she speaks "Dev...kya hua...are you coming today or not..."pretending to not have heard that announcement knowing that he was in Mumbai already.... Dev doesn't sense her knowledge and continues.."Kaajjal what shall i say. i am stuck her with so much rain in London and the flight being delayed.....I miss you sweetheart. I want to fly and reach there." She smiles and makes a face at the cell sticking her tongue out. She then murmurs an apt response appeasing him and promises to wait for him no matter what.

Dev comes home in a taxi and then finds its quite late and everybody is sleeping. Its pitch dark and he tiptoes silently inside when suddenly the lights go on and all the family comes out clapping hands and singing "Happy Birthday to you..." he smiles raking his hair with his hand looking sheepish. Everybody wish him and he smiles but has searching eyes only for her..."Damn he thinks kahan ho Kaajjal...mujhe patah hain, tum mujhe tadpa rahi ho..." So NB gently whispers in his ears "Tumhaari Kaajjal ka aur ek surprise hain..upar jaayiye..." She winks at him and he bites his lower lip in his trademark style and runs up two steps at a time and enters the room "Kaajjal..Kaajjal.." He looks around to find the room empty. He looks puzzled and those lines return to groove his forhead, and he looks around to find a note fluttering on the dressing table with a single stem of rose.... He looks with knowing eyes smiles and picks up the note and the rose. He reads and speaks softly.."Kaajjal..." He smells the paper as if it has her fragrance and says "Main aa raha hoon Kaajjal, i am coming.."

Here she is at the beach house wating in that red saree with a gold border and an envelope in her hand....... She is standing near the door whcih any moment will fly open and bring him to her into her waiting arms..... And he does...there he is standing there in a crisp white shirt and black trousers... shirt open at the neck...exposing that strong column of his neck.... his balck jacket hanging on his arm..... Anf his hair flying from the breeze and him standing there at the entrance looking like a Adonis..... She looks beautiful to his eyes like a seductress in that red chiffon saree.....He simply wants to walk to her and crush her to him...Two long months.....He wants to feel her skin, her breath...her scent of her........And then she shispers "Happy Birthday..." and he rushes to her collecting her in a warm embrae hugging her and burying his head in the warm curve of her neck.......

She too hugs him for eternity they stay like that both wanting to cherish this moment and wanting to stay like that for life..... She then breaks their hug and says Here is your gift Mr . Dev Pratap Singh" and so saying she looks into his passion darkened eyes with her own impish eyes and hands him the envelope. Puzzled as it looks like some report.... he opens and reads. He looks up stunned and then reads again and again.... he just sits down..... a silly smile on his face..... Pregnant.... Pregnant.... You are pregnant.....She giggles and sits on his knee and wraps her arms around his neck. He snaps out of his surprise and hugs her to him hardly. Then again he controls himself scared of physically not crushing her. 'Kaajjal...I am so happy. Me a father...Kaajjal...love you kaajjal......" but he becomes extremely cautious.........

She senses it and starts softly.....snapping her fingers to a sweet tune...

Kya gazab karte ho ji......
pyaar se darte ho ji......

He looks into her seductive eyes..... she captures his gaze holding his eyes with her passionate ones..... He is used to a headstrong Kaajjal...a persuasive Kaajjal. Persuation yes but a seducively persuasive Kaajjal he has never met before..... He looks into her eyes captivated with what he sees there... a siren.... his control losing a fast losing battle....

She licks her lips tracing its luscious outline and he follows that simple action with his own lips open wide raspingly breathing hard fighting to keep his desires under a tight rein. She slowly gets up swaying her waist gently to the rhythm but very gently... and she continues...

Kya Gazab karte ho ji..
Pyaar se darte ho ji...
Dar ke tum..... Aur haseen...
Lag te ho ji.....

And she sways with each word... snapping her fingers all the time. he stares at her waist and can't resist...He lifts his hands and brings them to her waist...gently pulls her close to touch his lips to the soft skin..... But it is more of an undoing as he gets more incensec by touching the warm smooth silk.... and he is lost..... Somehow he manages to thwart his rising desire and gets up putting some distance between them.....

She looks and knows that this duel is going on and tongue in cheek looks seductively with her darkened eyes and raises her hands above her head as if taking an angdaai....

"Hmmmmm.......... hooooo" He looks at her with slightly open lips and his nostrils flare a bit with controlling so much. His fists clench at his sides and yet he is gobbling her with his eyes.... His eyes which goad her and give her the confidence and encouragement to keep this seductive game.....

Koi nahin.. hum dono hain.....
main hoon .... meri angdaai hain....

And again she sways towards him slowly gyrating very gently......but seductively.....never breaking eye contact. He feels warm all over inspite of the cool breeze. He hair whip around her face and eyes. she smiles through them holding his now narrowed eyed gaze with her own I am yours stare.....

She walks towards him and goes down on her hunches in fron of him and walks her palms over his thigh and towards his the hard muscled wall of his chest.....slowly humming....

Koi nahin hum dono hain..
main hoon...meri angdaai hain....

She walks behind him hugs him ever so briefly and comes in fron again...slowly sliding down in front of him briefly but definitely touching his body with her...raising her arms over her head again swaying and snapping her fingers and continuing...

Chale aao meri baahon mein....
Badi pyaari tanhaain hain...
Raat milan ki...
Phir tum kyun aahein ...bharte ho ji......

She puts her arms around his neck singing the last lines in a soft whisper..... La la la la la la lah lah lahla lahla... But he pushes her and walks to the windows raking his hair with his hand...frustratedely.......... She follows him smiling and still humming the tune in La la la..... and hugs him from the back........ He holds her hands and looks up skyward still fighting..... and closing his eyes as hecan feel her body and heat through the thin material of his shirt....profusely sweating even in this cool breeze.... He pushes her and goes into the bedroom.... and sits on the bed with a gasp as he breathing hard to control his passion and desire.....

She comes in hot on his heels and smiles biting her lower lip....and then she sits at his feet and starts her singing again....

"Kadmo pe sar rakh ke...
Hum yahin so jaayenge....

She looks up into his eyes now blazing with the passion that will soon be unleashes...gritting his teeth ...tensing his jaw muscles.....

Kadmo pe sar rakh ke ..
hum yahin so jaayenge....
Hanske tum dekho to...
Hum khush ho jaayenge...

Then she gets faint tears and sings though she knows what she is about to sing is not true as Dev truly loves her and is staying and keeping himself away for her safety. It is her he puts before himself......
Jhoot hi keh do ki....
Humpe marte ho ji.....

But he pulls her roughly silencing her with his lips and kisses her brutally punsihing her for this seduction.......

"DEv....her soft plea....brings him back to earth and he pulls away again sighing frustratedly.."Kaajjal".... But she pulls him back to her on the bed and whispers in his ear....... He looks at her first in mock anger for putting him through this ordeal and then with a hand running devilsihly in his hair he eyes her with the passion and lust showing boldly in his eyes and face..... He bends down with a purpose towards her capturing her lips in an excrutiatingly sweet and slow kiss...driving her to a whimpering need to get close to him............

Scene changes......to a 20 year leap.........(A la K**** style....)😆

NB shouting and yelling for her looking everywhere.....'Kiran..Kiran... kahan ho tum... Dekho ab jaldi se bahar aa jao...Kitna kaam padaa hain...Aur phir airport bhi jaana hain.....Uski flight aati hi hogi....."

So speaking Kiran comes out from behind the curtains and hugs NB.. a beautiful young girl with sily flowing long black hair left loose..... and she comes and hugs NB "Ma.... sorry.. I couldn't resist..." NB scolds her in mock anger and then says "Ab chal, bohut bakbak karti hain..." and she gives her the pooja thaali and they together go to the pooja room where alongwith all the photo frames of the deities are the garlanded photos of NT mom, Dev-Kaajjal and Panna Chachi...... Kiran bows her head to all of them after doing their aarti. She then sweetly looks at Dev's photo and whispers "Good morning chachu..... Love you chachi..." and she she winks so saying to NB and runs...saying "I will meet you at the airport to meet bhai...... Bye..... Getting late for college..."

NB smiles and turns and just then a pair of hands go over the aarti and she smiles love in her eyes even today for this man....Aditya looks at her and returns the smile. Gayin hamari princess. i am sure she will never forget to wish her chachu come what may...She can forget her father but never her chahu or chachi....... NB smiles knowing that Adi always felt this but knew it was not true as Kiran tapped him gently from the back and kissed his cheek before running back out again and saying "Love you papa...." He smiles and shakes his head and together they look at the photo of DK with faint tears in their eyes and Aditya speaks "Dev aaj maine aapko kiya hua vaada poora kiya. Aaj Aman vaapas aa rahaa hain.... Tum dono ka Aman.... tumhaara sapnaa... tumhaara betaa......... Aaj ke baad, mujhe mukti milegi...Radiocity ab aaj ke baad Aman ki zimmedaari hogi......Bas aise hi tumhaara aashirwaad us ke sir pe rakhna...."

Epilogue : Dev and Kaajjal die in a car crash leaving their 2 year old Aman in the loving care of NB and Aditya. Dev gives Aditya the responsibility of his entire business............


Edited by autumnleaf - 18 years ago
jyoti06 thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago
Aww DK died in a car crash 😭 😭 ..Autumn once again a brilliant ending to an awesome epic 😳 😳 😳 ...Not bad Adi doing double shifts in the form of bringing up DK's son as well as looking after the business 😉 😃 ...But before the twenty year leap,Just loved each and every DK scenes especially when dev returns back from london 😛 and his birthday is celebrated in such a pleasing manner 😳 unlike the serial where some axe-murderer is roaming around on Dev's birthday 😡 ...

Autumn so r u planning to continue it with some Swarglok DK tabela scenes 😆 😛 😛

But finally u hv proved that u r truely a LOVE GURU 👏
Patjhar thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: jyoti06

Aww DK died in a car crash 😭 😭 ..Autumn once again a brilliant ending to an awesome epic 😳 😳 😳 ...Not bad Adi doing double shifts in the form of bringing up DK's son as well as looking after the business 😉 😃 ...But before the twenty year leap,Just loved each and every DK scenes especially when dev returns back from london 😛 and his birthday is celebrated in such a pleasing manner 😳 unlike the serial where some axe-murderer is roaming around on Dev's birthday 😡 ...

Autumn so r u planning to continue it with some Swarglok DK tabela scenes 😆 😛 😛

But finally u hv proved that u r truely a LOVE GURU 👏

This matters the most to me...your reply. Thanks again Mishti. I had planned anyways before logging today to close two of my FF's. Well Buttercup sure halped me speed up the ending. Weel I hope to continue my first FF till Apu exits. Then it will be I am afraid good bye for me too at least in the kaajjal forum. Till then I hope to be in touch with you.😃

Thanks again.😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
And love never dies....... So too DK they will always remain forever.....

Stay tuned for more in this FF.... 😳

This is for you Mishti...for the brilliant inspiration.... 😃 😳
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Posted: 18 years ago
Wonderful part, autumnji! 👏 👏 Very sad 😭 , but written very gracefully. 😳
Patjhar thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: rwishka17

Wonderful part, autumnji! 👏 👏 Very sad 😭 , but written very gracefully. 😳

Awww Ritika thanks for aprreciating. Feels good in this strange place to hear from familiar friends.

Touched by your words. Thanks😳 But it doesn't end here.....😛😳

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Posted: 18 years ago

Beautiful autumn .... 👏 i am tooo astound to say anything ... BRILLIANT 👏

ahhhh Adi and NB, are Aman's caretakers. love this.

Patjhar thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago

Originally posted by: thesaint148

Beautiful autumn .... 👏 i am tooo astound to say anything ... BRILLIANT 👏

ahhhh Adi and NB, are Aman's caretakers. love this.

Hmmm In a bit of a soup with a slight dead end...But I am working on this one. Thanks though for everything....😳

Patjhar thumbnail
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Posted: 18 years ago

Okay bhootnis this is something that I have never done but DK are immortal so this is my feeble try to let them live on....

Part 34.................. Aman comes back home....😳

A pait of shoes touch the ground at the airport after alighting from the aircraft. for some reason the air-bridge is out of order and they use the traditional ladder for the passengers to alight and Aman feels proud to step on homeland...... Not that this is his first time, but after coming back after it sure feels great. He looks up at a smiling Dev and Kaajjal. "I am home Mom, Dad......" and he winks at them up in the sky...........and raises a thumbs up sign to his dad.....

Aman Dev Pratap Singh though not a spitting image of his dad, has those dimples on both his cheeks and his mother's sparkling hazel eyes, jet black hair that would remind one of Dev and Dev only.......😳 His swaggering walk suggesting the majestic stride of none other than DPS himslef. A lion, has left behind his cub...... who shall bring justice...A promise.....

As soon he gets out of security through the green channel, he hears the familiar squeal of that voice "Bhaiyya...... here....we are here......" And he turns smiling looking at the familiar voice and all the love shines in his eyes...Kiran.... Kiran my sweet little Kiran..... and he strides eyeing her and banging into almost falling onto her. But he grabs her waist just like his father did his mother's.....at a cliff.....

But here he comes back with a bang to the present when he looks into her eyes...and among all the people jostling around them bidding their hellos and hi's he looks into a pair of dark brown eyes, so deep that he could drown in them, so warm that could set fire to ice........ and those flying wisps of jet black hair.......He curbed an urge to raise his hand and run his fu=ingers through them.......

Suddenly he is aware that here they are standing so close to each other breathing in each other's frangrances. she smelled of roses...sweet roses....and her hands felt like a soft butterfly would flit from a flower to another. So soft on his shoulders that he hardly felt them.....

Here she was standing there stunned by his strong strength lying under that muscled sleeve. She was literally hanging on to his shoulder and ar, and his hand around her midriff...... She could feel the warmth of his hand but was too stunned to say anything. suddenly Kiran's voice breaks their tance and he mumbles a "Sorry, didn't watch where i was going..." and she too mumbles an "Its okay and soon hurries on and disappears in the swimming crowd..."

"Damn" he mutters under his breath. I didn't even get her name.... But then Kiran reaches his side and looks on to where his eyes are following..."Bhai...whats up? Who was she?" and he looks quickly hiding whatever was in his eyes just like DPS would and rakes his hand through his hair......"Na na na na na only banged into her. Don't know who she was.... " winking at her takes her by her shoulders and gives a big brotherly bearhug..... and they both have moist eyes and head for the car.........

Dev and Kaajjal look at each other with all the love and feeling proud that their son has come home...and met her..... just like they were destined to meet there at Mussourie at that cliff......😳

Preview : Aman and his family.... A sweet re-union.......😳

Okay bhootnis a very feeble attempt at keeping DK alive. But even if they are in Heaven they shall be always present to grace and bless Aman's life........😳

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Posted: 18 years ago
Aww Autumn thats a real cute story 😳 ...I think Aman is a shadow of Dev only 😳 and when Aman's love story will start ,I m sure it will b similar to DK love story only 😳 ...Just loved the Interaction of Aman and Kiran 😊 ...beautiful character sketches Autumn 👏 👏 👏 ..now any chance of seeing DK doing coochie-cooing in the swarglok tabela 😉 😆 😛

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